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-       <p>This section is unreachable and superfluous since it is equivalent to <a idref="sect349">Section 349</a> and <a idref="sect185">Section 185</a>. It has been rewritten in the Mongoose Publishing edition to almost parallel Sections <a idref="sect29">29</a> and <a idref="sect287">287</a> by adding an extra option for the <a idref="random">Random Number</a> pick from <a idref="sect86">Section 86</a>.</p>
+       <p>This section is unreachable and superfluous since it is equivalent to <a idref="sect349">Section 349</a> and <a idref="sect185">Section 185</a>. It has been rewritten in the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition to almost parallel Sections <a idref="sect29">29</a> and <a idref="sect287">287</a> by adding an extra option for the <a idref="random">Random Number</a> pick from <a idref="sect86">Section 86</a>.</p>
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      <meta><title>156</title></meta>
 
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-       <p>Given the extreme situation, you should probably erase all healing and strength potions and related items from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>, even those not listed here (e.g. Oede, Larnuma, etc.).</p>
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       <p>For fifteen days you tunnel through a solid wall of earth and broken rock, using your weapons and bare hands, sustained all the while by little more than your indefatigable spirit and will to survive. You are near to giving up when, mid-way through the sixteenth day of your internment, you suddenly break through into a passageway that is free of debris. Weak but alive, you drag yourself into this empty tunnel and collapse on the damp, fungi-covered floor.</p>
 
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-      <p>Reduce your current <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score to 15 (if it is currently above this level). Also, erase any Meals you may have been carrying in your Backpack, and erase any potions of Laumspur and/or Alether.<footref id="sect156-1" idref="sect156-1-foot"/></p>
+      <p>Reduce your current <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score to 15 (if it is currently above this level). Also, erase any Meals you may have been carrying in your Backpack, and erase any potions of Laumspur and/or Alether.</p>
       <choice idref="sect239">To continue, <link-text>turn to 239</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>This section is unreachable and superfluous since it is equivalent to <a idref="sect19">Section 19</a> but less complete. It has been rewritten in the Mongoose Publishing edition to almost parallel Sections <a idref="sect269">269</a> and <a idref="sect77">77</a> by adding an extra option for the <a idref="random">Random Number</a> pick from <a idref="sect345">Section 345</a>.</p>
+       <p>This section is unreachable and superfluous since it is equivalent to <a idref="sect19">Section 19</a> but less complete. It has been rewritten in the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition to almost parallel Sections <a idref="sect269">269</a> and <a idref="sect77">77</a> by adding an extra option for the <a idref="random">Random Number</a> pick from <a idref="sect345">Section 345</a>.</p>
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       <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far<ch.ellips/></a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>feted</quote> with <quote>f<ch.ecirc/>ted</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Left-Handed</quote> with <quote>Left-handed</quote>. Replaced <quote>Right-Handed</quote> with <quote>Right-handed</quote>. Replaced <quote>freestate</quote> with <quote>Freeland</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>doomstone</quote> with <quote>Doomstone</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced <quote>monastery of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Monastery of the Kai</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Added a paragraph break after <quote>their own extinction</quote> in line with this section in other Grand Master books. Replaced <quote>north-east</quote> with <quote>northeast</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom Magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>Akagazad and</quote> with <quote>Akagazad, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Banedon, then</quote> with <quote>Banedon, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Magic</quote> with <quote>magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>comprised</quote> with <quote>were part of</quote>. Replaced <quote>he replied, <ch.lsquot/>Were the</quote> with <quote>he replied, <ch.lsquot/>were the</quote>. Replaced <quote>my Lord</quote> with <quote>my lord</quote>.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote> that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote>. Removed <quote> on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>(ie</quote> with <quote>(i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf Kai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite></quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Magnakai</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Added <quote>Silver Bracers</quote> and <quote>Korlinium Scabbard</quote> to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the <cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite> and <cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite> books in harmony with the Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote> that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote>. Removed <quote> on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>(ie</quote> with <quote>(i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf Kai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite></quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Magnakai</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Added <quote>Silver Bracers</quote> and <quote>Korlinium Scabbard</quote> to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the <cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite> and <cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite> books in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed overleaf.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing editions. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Added <quote>These skills include the basic use of Old Kingdom Spells such as <spell>Shield</spell>, <spell>Power Word</spell>, and <spell>Invisible Fist</spell>.</quote> as found in the Magi-magic section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote>These spells include <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, <spell>Levitation</spell>, and <spell>Mind Charm</spell>.</quote> as found in the Kai-alchemy section in Books 19 and 20. Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Kai and Magnakai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Kai <ch.ampersand/> Magnakai Disciplines</quote> for consistency with later books. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>the next Grand Master adventure</quote> with <quote>the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed overleaf.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Added <quote>These skills include the basic use of Old Kingdom Spells such as <spell>Shield</spell>, <spell>Power Word</spell>, and <spell>Invisible Fist</spell>.</quote> as found in the Magi-magic section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote>These spells include <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, <spell>Levitation</spell>, and <spell>Mind Charm</spell>.</quote> as found in the Kai-alchemy section in Books 19 and 20. Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Kai and Magnakai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Kai <ch.ampersand/> Magnakai Disciplines</quote> for consistency with later books. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>the next Grand Master adventure</quote> with <quote>the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg,</quote> with <quote>(e.g.</quote>. Replaced five occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced two occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced eight occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Inserted the explanation of how to use Gold Crowns. Removed <quote> (see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Amended the text to correctly reflect the +5 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus for Grand Weaponmastery. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg,</quote> with <quote>(e.g.</quote>. Replaced five occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced two occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced eight occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Inserted the explanation of how to use Gold Crowns. Removed <quote> (see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Amended the text to correctly reflect the +5 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus for Grand Weaponmastery. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. In the example combat, changed Lone Wolf<ch.apos/>s initial <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> to 27 and corrected the Kai Surge bonus to +8 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="levels">Levels of Grand Mastership</a>) Replaced <quote>rank and titles</quote> with <quote>ranks and titles</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="imprvdsc">Improved Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>(e.g. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, Spear etc)</quote> with <quote>(i.e. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, and Spear)</quote>. Replaced <quote>(i.e. arrows, axes, crossbow bolts etc)</quote> with <quote>(e.g. arrows, axes, crossbow bolts)</quote> in the <spell>Halt Missile</spell> section. Added the description of the improvements for Grand Guardian. Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Improved Grand Master Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spells</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spells</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>range and numbers of insects so affected increases</quote> with <quote>range and number of insects so affected increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>whilst fighting an enemy in unarmed combat</quote> with <quote>whilst fighting an enemy</quote> in line with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="imprvdsc">Improved Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>(e.g. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, Spear etc)</quote> with <quote>(i.e. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, and Spear)</quote>. Replaced <quote>(i.e. arrows, axes, crossbow bolts etc)</quote> with <quote>(e.g. arrows, axes, crossbow bolts)</quote> in the <spell>Halt Missile</spell> section. Added the description of the improvements for Grand Guardian. Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Improved Grand Master Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spells</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spells</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>range and numbers of insects so affected increases</quote> with <quote>range and number of insects so affected increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>whilst fighting an enemy in unarmed combat</quote> with <quote>whilst fighting an enemy</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="kaiwisdm">Grand Master<ch.apos/>s Wisdom</a>) Replaced <quote>Pick your four Grand</quote> with <quote>Pick your Grand</quote>. Replaced <quote>helotry of Nyras</quote> with <quote>Helotry of Nyras</quote>.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="sect30">30</a>) Replaced <quote>breath, then</quote> with <quote>breath; then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect31">31</a>) Replaced <quote>aimed ready</quote> with <quote>aimed, ready</quote>. Replaced <quote>It is near</quote> with <quote>He is near</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai rank of Grand Guardian</quote> with <quote>rank of Kai Grand Guardian</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Replaced <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>floroa</quote> with <quote>Floroa</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you wish to take some of this fungi with you, record it on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> with <quote>If you wish to take some of this fungi with you, record a single dose on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>floroa</quote> with <quote>Floroa</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you wish to take some of this fungi with you, record it on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> with <quote>If you wish to take some of this fungi with you, record a single dose on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Replaced <quote>the Captain<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>the captain<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect35">35</a>) Replaced <quote>weapon, then</quote> with <quote>weapon, and then</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar lancer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim lancer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>steps and, as</quote> with <quote>steps, and as</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Replaced <quote>breath, then</quote> with <quote>breath, and then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Replaced <quote>icy-cold</quote> with <quote>icy cold</quote>. Replaced <quote>t<ch.apos/>is</quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.apos/>tis</quote>. Replaced <quote>much-needed</quote> with <quote>much needed</quote>. Replaced <quote>side, then</quote> with <quote>side, and then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>air, then</quote> with <quote>air, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>sense immediately that the coin is showing heads</quote> with <quote>sense immediately what the coin is showing</quote> to avoid inconsistencies with Sections <a idref="sect117">117</a> and <a idref="sect298">298</a>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect57">57</a>) Replaced <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Gazim!<ch.rsquot/> shouts</quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><foreign xml:lang="x-giak"><ch.lsquot/>Gazim!<ch.rsquot/></foreign> shouts</quote>. Replaced <quote>Tukodaks</quote> with <quote>Tukodak Guards</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect59">59</a>) Removed <quote> (or higher)</quote>. Added a comma before <quote>add 2</quote>. Replaced <quote>try and</quote> with <quote>try to</quote>. Added <quote> These bonuses are not cumulative (i.e. if you hold the rank of Sun Knight, you add just 2 <em>not</em> 3).</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect59">59</a>) Removed <quote> (or higher)</quote>. Added a comma before <quote>add 2</quote>. Replaced <quote>try and</quote> with <quote>try to</quote>. Added <quote> These bonuses are not cumulative (i.e. if you hold the rank of Sun Knight, you add just 2 <em>not</em> 3).</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect61">61</a>) Replaced <quote>men, then</quote> with <quote>men; then</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect63">63</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>breastplace</quote> with <quote>breastplate</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect65">65</a>) Replaced <quote>argument, then</quote> with <quote>argument. Then</quote>. Replaced <quote>open and</quote> with <quote>open, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>recently-cleared</quote> with <quote>recently cleared</quote>. Replaced <quote>voices and</quote> with <quote>voices, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect115">115</a>) Replaced <quote>animal control</quote> with <quote>Animal Control</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect117">117</a>) Replaced <quote>timberline</quote> with <quote>timber-line</quote>. Replaced <quote>breaths</quote> with <quote>breathes</quote>. Added <quote><ch.lsquot/>Heads!<ch.rsquot/> says Prarg.</quote> to parallel <a idref="sect298">Section 298</a>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>or do</quote> with <quote>or if you do</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Drakkar officer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim officer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote> in both the text and the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Removed <quote> (or higher)</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>wintery</quote> with <quote>wintry</quote>. Added <quote>At the end of combat, reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score by 5  unless it causes your score to fall to zero or below, in which case you should reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> total to 1 point.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Removed <quote> (or higher)</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>wintery</quote> with <quote>wintry</quote>. Added <quote>At the end of combat, reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score by 5  unless it causes your score to fall to zero or below, in which case you should reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> total to 1 point.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect122">122</a>) Replaced <quote>distented</quote> with <quote>distended</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote>footsteps, then</quote> with <quote>footsteps; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Replaced <quote>loudly, then</quote> with <quote>loudly, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>his Captain<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>his captain<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect152">152</a>) Removed the quotation marks and dashes around <quote>Lightning Hand</quote>. Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect154">154</a>) Replaced <quote>barnlike</quote> with <quote>barn-like</quote>. Replaced <quote>to zero</quote> with <quote>to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>anvil and</quote> with <quote>anvil, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect155">155</a>) Replaced <quote>hard-worn</quote> with <quote>hard-won</quote>. Replaced <quote>t<ch.apos/>is</quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.apos/>tis</quote>. Replaced <quote>much-needed</quote> with <quote>much needed</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect156">156</a>) Added <quote>(if it is currently above this level)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect156">156</a>) Added <quote>(if it is currently above this level)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect158">158</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Kai Alchemy</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy</quote>. Changed the choice that requires the rank of Sun Knight to lead to <a idref="sect17">Section 17</a> instead of <a idref="sect86">Section 86</a>, and changed the other choice to lead to <a idref="sect86">Section 86</a> instead of <a idref="sect17">Section 17</a>. <a idref="sect17">Section 17</a> assumes that you<ch.apos/>ve reached the rank of Sun Knight. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>ca, then</quote> with <quote>can; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect159">159</a>) Replaced <quote>Prarg, <ch.lsquot/>If</quote> with <quote>Prarg. <ch.lsquot/>If</quote>. Replaced <quote>or you</quote> with <quote>or if you</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect160">160</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon, then</quote> with <quote>weapon, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar lancer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim lancer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect233">233</a>) Replaced <quote>breath, then</quote> with <quote>breath; then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect234">234</a>) Replaced <quote>crusader<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>crusaders<ch.apos/></quote>. Replaced <quote>en route</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="fr">en route</foreign></quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect238">238</a>) Added <quote>The weapon bonuses are cumulative (e.g. the Dagger of Vashna, which is a Dagger and a Special Item, will confer a bonus of <ch.plus/>1: 2 <ch.minus/> 1).</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect238">238</a>) Added <quote>The weapon bonuses are cumulative (e.g. the Dagger of Vashna, which is a Dagger and a Special Item, will confer a bonus of <ch.plus/>1: 2 <ch.minus/> 1).</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>louder, then</quote> with <quote>louder; then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect241">241</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow, then</quote> with <quote>Arrow, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>or choose</quote> with <quote>or if you choose</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect291">291</a>) Replaced <quote>or have</quote> with <quote>or if you have</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect294">294</a>) Replaced <quote>length and, upon</quote> with <quote>length, and upon</quote>. Replaced <quote>suggestion and, after</quote> with <quote>suggestion, and after</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect295">295</a>) Replaced <quote>his Captain<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>his captain<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect297">297</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Removed <quote> (or higher)</quote>. Replaced <quote>wintery</quote> with <quote>wintry</quote>. Added <quote>At the end of combat, reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score by 5  unless it causes your score to fall to zero or below, in which case you should reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> total to 1 point.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect297">297</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Removed <quote> (or higher)</quote>. Replaced <quote>wintery</quote> with <quote>wintry</quote>. Added <quote>At the end of combat, reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score by 5  unless it causes your score to fall to zero or below, in which case you should reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> total to 1 point.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect299">299</a>) Replaced <quote>Action Charts</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect304">304</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>click, then</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia>; then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced <quote>inate</quote> with <quote>innate</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Replaced <quote>Mastery, and</quote> with <quote>Mastery and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>or have</quote> with <quote>or if you have</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect321">321</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect322">322</a>) Replaced <quote>oars, then</quote> with <quote>oars; then</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Replaced <quote>momentoes</quote> with <quote>mementoes</quote>. Replaced <quote>jadin amulet</quote> with <quote>Jadin Amulet</quote>. Replaced <quote>less-noble</quote> with <quote>less noble</quote>. Replaced <quote>etc</quote> with <quote>etc.</quote>. Replaced <quote>pass, then</quote> with <quote>pass; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>jewellery and</quote> with <quote>jewellery, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>neckchain</quote> with <quote>neck-chain</quote>. Replaced <quote>to check against normal missiles (arrows, bolts, darts, etc.)</quote> with <quote>when trying to avoid normal missiles (e.g. arrows, bolts, darts, etc.) aimed at you</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Replaced <quote>momentoes</quote> with <quote>mementoes</quote>. Replaced <quote>jadin amulet</quote> with <quote>Jadin Amulet</quote>. Replaced <quote>less-noble</quote> with <quote>less noble</quote>. Replaced <quote>etc</quote> with <quote>etc.</quote>. Replaced <quote>pass, then</quote> with <quote>pass; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>jewellery and</quote> with <quote>jewellery, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>neckchain</quote> with <quote>neck-chain</quote>. Replaced <quote>to check against normal missiles (arrows, bolts, darts, etc.)</quote> with <quote>when trying to avoid normal missiles (e.g. arrows, bolts, darts, etc.) aimed at you</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect325">325</a>) Replaced <quote>urgently. <ch.lsquot/>we</quote> with <quote>urgently. <ch.lsquot/>We</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect327">327</a>) Replaced <quote>inate</quote> with <quote>innate</quote>. Replaced <quote>ale and</quote> with <quote>ale, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect328">328</a>) Replaced <quote>north-west</quote> with <quote>northwest</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>.</p>