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<p>Weaponmastery bonuses are replaced by Grand Weaponmastery bonuses, not added cumulatively (cf. <a href="http://www.projectaon.org/en/ReadersHandbook/NewsletterExcerpts#lwcn28">Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 28</a>).</p>
<p>If you have completed previous adventures, already possess the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, and have reached the rank of <bookref book="12tmod" section="imprvdsc">Mentora</bookref>, it seems that you should already be able to add 5 to numbers picked from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> (i.e. the basic Weaponmastery with Bow bonus of 3 added to the Mentora bonus of 2 for all missile weapons). Likely, the author intended the Weaponmastery bonus at the Mentora rank to be a <quote>hidden loyalty bonus</quote> (cf. <a href="http://www.projectaon.org/en/ReadersHandbook/NewsletterExcerpts#lwcn28">Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 28</a>). In view of this, the <ch.plus/>2 Mentora bonus is therefore <em>not</em> cumulative with Grand Weaponmastery with Bow.</p>
- <p>Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
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<p>The fight for control of Konozod is swift and bloody. Within the hour the town is under Lencian control, its Drakkarim garrison having been put mercilessly to the sword. However, not all of the enemy perish in the battle. To Captain Schera<ch.apos/>s dismay, several manage to escape across the river and flee to the west on horseback. He is anxious that they may return with reinforcements to retake the town.</p>
- <p>A food store is discovered and, whilst the starving Lencians satiate their hunger, you talk with Captain Schera about the events of the last few weeks which have led to this meeting. Your learn from him that after you were interred in the Temple of Antah, Warlord Magnaarn waged a major offensive against the Lencian army. Having reunited the Doomstone with the Nyras Sceptre, he has, as King Sarnac feared, forced the Nadziranim sorcerers of Kagorst and Akagazad to help him. Their combined skills have wrought great destruction. They attacked and drove through the Lencian lines like demons in an offensive which was swift and deadly. A week ago, Captain Schera and his regiment were cut off and captured in the fighting around Hokidat, after which they were marched here and imprisoned. He considers himself lucky to be alive, for the Drakkarim rarely take prisoners. Then you ask what news he has heard about the war since he came here.</p>
+ <p>A food store is discovered and, whilst the starving Lencians satiate their hunger, you talk with Captain Schera about the events of the last few weeks which have led to this meeting. You learn from him that after you were interred in the Temple of Antah, Warlord Magnaarn waged a major offensive against the Lencian army. Having reunited the Doomstone with the Nyras Sceptre, he has, as King Sarnac feared, forced the Nadziranim sorcerers of Kagorst and Akagazad to help him. Their combined skills have wrought great destruction. They attacked and drove through the Lencian lines like demons in an offensive which was swift and deadly. A week ago, Captain Schera and his regiment were cut off and captured in the fighting around Hokidat, after which they were marched here and imprisoned. He considers himself lucky to be alive, for the Drakkarim rarely take prisoners. Then you ask what news he has heard about the war since he came here.</p>
<p><quote>There<ch.apos/>s much confusion,</quote> he says, wearily. <quote>I<ch.apos/>ve heard talk that most of the mercenaries in Sarnac<ch.apos/>s pay have deserted us. Some have even joined the enemy. The Drakkarim taunted us, saying that our army had been smashed. They said the remnants had been pushed into the Tentarias, but I dismissed this as lies. One thing is sure, though: Magnaarn intends to raise the siege of Darke. It has become his battle call<ch.emdash/><quote>On to Darke!</quote> This cry was on the lips of his troops during the battle at Hokidat. I saw him during this battle. He was leading his army personally, and he was wielding his accursed sceptre, dealing death to all who tried to stand in his way. He possesses a great and terrible power, and I fear that we may now be unable to put an end to his evil ambitions.</quote></p>
<choice idref="sect97">If you wish to ask Schera if he knows anything about Captain Prarg, <link-text>turn to 97</link-text>.</choice>
<choice idref="sect236">If you do not, <link-text>turn to 236</link-text>.</choice>
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<creator>Brian Williams</creator>
- <description>The Nadziranim sorcerer, taking on the visage of a great sniffling beast, creeps towards you.</description>
+ <description>The Nadziranim sorcerer, taking on the visage of a great snuffling beast, creeps towards you.</description>
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- <p>You quickly draw an Arrow and take aim through a hole in the portcullis, but the Tukodak cower behind Prarg, using him as a human shield. Again the, cruel voice booms out: <quote>Put down your bow, Lone Wolf, or I<ch.apos/>ll have my guards kill your companion.</quote></p>
+ <p>You quickly draw an Arrow and take aim through a hole in the portcullis, but the Tukodak cower behind Prarg, using him as a human shield. Again the cruel voice booms out: <quote>Put down your bow, Lone Wolf, or I<ch.apos/>ll have my guards kill your companion.</quote></p>
<p>At once your anger subsides. You sense that this is no idle threat and, reluctantly, you obey the command.</p>
<choice idref="sect200"><link-text>Turn to 200</link-text>.</choice>
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- <p>Fearful of what may happen if your stay in this chamber any longer, you retrace your steps and make your way swiftly to the place where you first emerged from the collapsed passage. You pause here to catch your breath; then you continue along the tunnel until, once more, you find yourself standing at the edge of the chasm. You scan this vast and dismal fissure, hoping to find a means of escape from this grim subterranean prison.</p>
+ <p>Fearful of what may happen if you stay in this chamber any longer, you retrace your steps and make your way swiftly to the place where you first emerged from the collapsed passage. You pause here to catch your breath; then you continue along the tunnel until, once more, you find yourself standing at the edge of the chasm. You scan this vast and dismal fissure, hoping to find a means of escape from this grim subterranean prison.</p>
<choice idref="sect340">If you possess Kai-alchemy, <link-text>turn to 340</link-text>.</choice>
<choice idref="sect138">If you do not possess this Discipline, <link-text>turn to 138</link-text>.</choice>
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- <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, add 4 to the number you have picked.</p>
-<!-- JDOUGAN: should this be <ch.plus/>3? (Consistent with just being a reminder about the standard bonus?) -->
+ <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, add 5 to the number you have picked.</p>
<choice idref="sect183">If your total score is 5 or less, <link-text>turn to 183</link-text>.</choice>
<choice idref="sect201">If it is 6 or more, <link-text>turn to 201</link-text>.</choice>
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<p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>steps and, as</quote> with <quote>steps, and as</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Replaced <quote>breath, then</quote> with <quote>breath, and then</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect37">37</a>) Removed the quotation marks around <quote>crack</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow, then</quote> with <quote>Arrow; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>suspecting trickery, then slowly you relax; they</quote> with <quote>suspecting trickery. Then slowly you relax; they</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Replaced <quote>remnants have</quote> with <quote>remnants had</quote>. Replaced <quote>seige</quote> with <quote>siege</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Replaced <quote>remnants have</quote> with <quote>remnants had</quote>. Replaced <quote>seige</quote> with <quote>siege</quote>. Replaced <quote>Your learn from</quote> with <quote>You learn from</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Replaced <quote>click, then</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia>; then</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect41">41</a>) Replaced <quote>treeline</quote> with <quote>tree-line</quote>. Replaced <quote>psi-surge</quote> with <quote>Psi-surge</quote>. Replaced <quote>timberwolf</quote> with <quote>timber wolf</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect42">42</a>) Replaced <quote>great sniffling beast</quote> with <quote>great snuffling beast</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption to mirror the section text.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect43">43</a>) Replaced <quote>directions and, with</quote> with <quote>directions, and with</quote>. Replaced <quote>at worse</quote> with <quote>at worst</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect45">45</a>) Replaced <quote>west and</quote> with <quote>west, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Prarg and</quote> with <quote>Prarg, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Antah and</quote> with <quote>Antah, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>agreement then</quote> with <quote>agreement; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>wagons and</quote> with <quote>wagons, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect47">47</a>) Replaced <quote>silence, then</quote> with <quote>silence; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>not, or</quote> with <quote>not or</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect230">230</a>) Replaced <quote>woodsmoke</quote> with <quote>wood smoke</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect231">231</a>) Replaced <quote>ramshakle</quote> with <quote>ramshackle</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect233">233</a>) Replaced <quote>breath, then</quote> with <quote>breath; then</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect233">233</a>) Replaced <quote>breath, then</quote> with <quote>breath; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>if your stay</quote> with <quote>if you stay</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect234">234</a>) Replaced <quote>crusader<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>crusaders<ch.apos/></quote>. Replaced <quote>en route</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="fr">en route</foreign></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect238">238</a>) Added <quote>The weapon bonuses are cumulative (e.g. the Dagger of Vashna, which is a Dagger and a Special Item, will confer a bonus of <ch.plus/>1: 2 <ch.minus/> 1).</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>louder, then</quote> with <quote>louder; then</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect266">266</a>) Replaced <quote>loudly, then</quote> with <quote>loudly, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>his Captain<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>his captain<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect268">268</a>) Replaced <quote>Tukodaks</quote> with <quote>Tukodak Guards</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect269">269</a>) Replaced <quote>inate</quote> with <quote>innate</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect270">270</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>block and, at</quote> with <quote>block, and at</quote>. Replaced <quote>arching</quote> with <quote>arcing</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar officer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim officer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect270">270</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>block and, at</quote> with <quote>block, and at</quote>. Replaced <quote>arching</quote> with <quote>arcing</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar officer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim officer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced <quote>add 4</quote> with <quote>add 5</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect272">272</a>) Replaced <quote>battle frenzy</quote> with <quote>battle-frenzy</quote>. Replaced <quote>steel and</quote> with <quote>steel, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>clang</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>clang</onomatopoeia></quote>. Replaced <quote>Tukodaks</quote> with <quote>Tukodak</quote> in both the section text and the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect274">274</a>) Replaced <quote>raining, then</quote> with <quote>raining; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Nexus, and</quote> with <quote>Nexus and</quote>. Replaced <quote>or choose</quote> with <quote>or if you choose</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect275">275</a>) Replaced <quote>cabin</quote> with <quote>camp</quote>.</p>
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