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-       <p>This section is unreachable and superfluous since it is equivalent to <a idref="sect349">Section 349</a> and <a idref="sect185">Section 185</a>. It has been rewritten in the Mongoose Publishing edition to almost parallel Sections <a idref="sect29">29</a> and <a idref="sect287">287</a> by adding an extra option for the <a idref="random">Random Number</a> pick from <a idref="sect86">Section 86</a>.</p>
+       <p>This section is unreachable and superfluous since it is equivalent to <a idref="sect349">Section 349</a> and <a idref="sect185">Section 185</a>. It has been rewritten in the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition to almost parallel Sections <a idref="sect29">29</a> and <a idref="sect287">287</a> by adding an extra option for the <a idref="random">Random Number</a> pick from <a idref="sect86">Section 86</a>.</p>
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-       <p>This section is unreachable and superfluous since it is equivalent to <a idref="sect19">Section 19</a> but less complete. It has been rewritten in the Mongoose Publishing edition to almost parallel Sections <a idref="sect269">269</a> and <a idref="sect77">77</a> by adding an extra option for the <a idref="random">Random Number</a> pick from <a idref="sect345">Section 345</a>.</p>
+       <p>This section is unreachable and superfluous since it is equivalent to <a idref="sect19">Section 19</a> but less complete. It has been rewritten in the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition to almost parallel Sections <a idref="sect269">269</a> and <a idref="sect77">77</a> by adding an extra option for the <a idref="random">Random Number</a> pick from <a idref="sect345">Section 345</a>.</p>
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       <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far<ch.ellips/></a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>feted</quote> with <quote>f<ch.ecirc/>ted</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Left-Handed</quote> with <quote>Left-handed</quote>. Replaced <quote>Right-Handed</quote> with <quote>Right-handed</quote>. Replaced <quote>freestate</quote> with <quote>Freeland</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>doomstone</quote> with <quote>Doomstone</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced <quote>monastery of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Monastery of the Kai</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Added a paragraph break after <quote>their own extinction</quote> in line with this section in other Grand Master books. Replaced <quote>north-east</quote> with <quote>northeast</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom Magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>Akagazad and</quote> with <quote>Akagazad, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Banedon, then</quote> with <quote>Banedon, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Magic</quote> with <quote>magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>comprised</quote> with <quote>were part of</quote>. Replaced <quote>he replied, <ch.lsquot/>Were the</quote> with <quote>he replied, <ch.lsquot/>were the</quote>. Replaced <quote>my Lord</quote> with <quote>my lord</quote>.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote> that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote>. Removed <quote> on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>(ie</quote> with <quote>(i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf Kai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite></quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Magnakai</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Added <quote>Silver Bracers</quote> and <quote>Korlinium Scabbard</quote> to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the <cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite> and <cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite> books in harmony with the Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote> that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote>. Removed <quote> on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>(ie</quote> with <quote>(i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf Kai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite></quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Magnakai</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Added <quote>Silver Bracers</quote> and <quote>Korlinium Scabbard</quote> to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the <cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite> and <cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite> books in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed overleaf.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing editions. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Added <quote>These skills include the basic use of Old Kingdom Spells such as <spell>Shield</spell>, <spell>Power Word</spell>, and <spell>Invisible Fist</spell>.</quote> as found in the Magi-magic section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote>These spells include <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, <spell>Levitation</spell>, and <spell>Mind Charm</spell>.</quote> as found in the Kai-alchemy section in Books 19 and 20. Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Kai and Magnakai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Kai <ch.ampersand/> Magnakai Disciplines</quote> for consistency with later books. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>the next Grand Master adventure</quote> with <quote>the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed overleaf.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Added <quote>These skills include the basic use of Old Kingdom Spells such as <spell>Shield</spell>, <spell>Power Word</spell>, and <spell>Invisible Fist</spell>.</quote> as found in the Magi-magic section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote>These spells include <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, <spell>Levitation</spell>, and <spell>Mind Charm</spell>.</quote> as found in the Kai-alchemy section in Books 19 and 20. Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Kai and Magnakai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Kai <ch.ampersand/> Magnakai Disciplines</quote> for consistency with later books. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>the next Grand Master adventure</quote> with <quote>the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg,</quote> with <quote>(e.g.</quote>. Replaced five occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced two occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced eight occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Inserted the explanation of how to use Gold Crowns. Removed <quote> (see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Amended the text to correctly reflect the +5 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus for Grand Weaponmastery. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg,</quote> with <quote>(e.g.</quote>. Replaced five occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced two occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced eight occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Inserted the explanation of how to use Gold Crowns. Removed <quote> (see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Amended the text to correctly reflect the +5 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus for Grand Weaponmastery. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. In the example combat, changed Lone Wolf<ch.apos/>s initial <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> to 27 and corrected the Kai Surge bonus to +8 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="levels">Levels of Grand Mastership</a>) Replaced <quote>rank and titles</quote> with <quote>ranks and titles</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="imprvdsc">Improved Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>(e.g. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, Spear etc)</quote> with <quote>(i.e. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, and Spear)</quote>. Replaced <quote>(i.e. arrows, axes, crossbow bolts etc)</quote> with <quote>(e.g. arrows, axes, crossbow bolts)</quote> in the <spell>Halt Missile</spell> section. Added the description of the improvements for Grand Guardian. Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Improved Grand Master Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spells</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spells</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>range and numbers of insects so affected increases</quote> with <quote>range and number of insects so affected increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>whilst fighting an enemy in unarmed combat</quote> with <quote>whilst fighting an enemy</quote> in line with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="imprvdsc">Improved Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>(e.g. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, Spear etc)</quote> with <quote>(i.e. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, and Spear)</quote>. Replaced <quote>(i.e. arrows, axes, crossbow bolts etc)</quote> with <quote>(e.g. arrows, axes, crossbow bolts)</quote> in the <spell>Halt Missile</spell> section. Added the description of the improvements for Grand Guardian. Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Improved Grand Master Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spells</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spells</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>range and numbers of insects so affected increases</quote> with <quote>range and number of insects so affected increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>whilst fighting an enemy in unarmed combat</quote> with <quote>whilst fighting an enemy</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="kaiwisdm">Grand Master<ch.apos/>s Wisdom</a>) Replaced <quote>Pick your four Grand</quote> with <quote>Pick your Grand</quote>. Replaced <quote>helotry of Nyras</quote> with <quote>Helotry of Nyras</quote>.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="sect30">30</a>) Replaced <quote>breath, then</quote> with <quote>breath; then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect31">31</a>) Replaced <quote>aimed ready</quote> with <quote>aimed, ready</quote>. Replaced <quote>It is near</quote> with <quote>He is near</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai rank of Grand Guardian</quote> with <quote>rank of Kai Grand Guardian</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Replaced <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>floroa</quote> with <quote>Floroa</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you wish to take some of this fungi with you, record it on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> with <quote>If you wish to take some of this fungi with you, record a single dose on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>floroa</quote> with <quote>Floroa</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you wish to take some of this fungi with you, record it on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> with <quote>If you wish to take some of this fungi with you, record a single dose on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Replaced <quote>the Captain<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>the captain<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect35">35</a>) Replaced <quote>weapon, then</quote> with <quote>weapon, and then</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar lancer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim lancer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>steps and, as</quote> with <quote>steps, and as</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Replaced <quote>breath, then</quote> with <quote>breath, and then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Replaced <quote>icy-cold</quote> with <quote>icy cold</quote>. Replaced <quote>t<ch.apos/>is</quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.apos/>tis</quote>. Replaced <quote>much-needed</quote> with <quote>much needed</quote>. Replaced <quote>side, then</quote> with <quote>side, and then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>air, then</quote> with <quote>air, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>sense immediately that the coin is showing heads</quote> with <quote>sense immediately what the coin is showing</quote> to avoid inconsistencies with Sections <a idref="sect117">117</a> and <a idref="sect298">298</a>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect57">57</a>) Replaced <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Gazim!<ch.rsquot/> shouts</quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><foreign xml:lang="x-giak"><ch.lsquot/>Gazim!<ch.rsquot/></foreign> shouts</quote>. Replaced <quote>Tukodaks</quote> with <quote>Tukodak Guards</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect59">59</a>) Removed <quote> (or higher)</quote>. Added a comma before <quote>add 2</quote>. Replaced <quote>try and</quote> with <quote>try to</quote>. Added <quote> These bonuses are not cumulative (i.e. if you hold the rank of Sun Knight, you add just 2 <em>not</em> 3).</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect59">59</a>) Removed <quote> (or higher)</quote>. Added a comma before <quote>add 2</quote>. Replaced <quote>try and</quote> with <quote>try to</quote>. Added <quote> These bonuses are not cumulative (i.e. if you hold the rank of Sun Knight, you add just 2 <em>not</em> 3).</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect61">61</a>) Replaced <quote>men, then</quote> with <quote>men; then</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect63">63</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>breastplace</quote> with <quote>breastplate</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect65">65</a>) Replaced <quote>argument, then</quote> with <quote>argument. Then</quote>. Replaced <quote>open and</quote> with <quote>open, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>recently-cleared</quote> with <quote>recently cleared</quote>. Replaced <quote>voices and</quote> with <quote>voices, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect115">115</a>) Replaced <quote>animal control</quote> with <quote>Animal Control</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect117">117</a>) Replaced <quote>timberline</quote> with <quote>timber-line</quote>. Replaced <quote>breaths</quote> with <quote>breathes</quote>. Added <quote><ch.lsquot/>Heads!<ch.rsquot/> says Prarg.</quote> to parallel <a idref="sect298">Section 298</a>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>or do</quote> with <quote>or if you do</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Drakkar officer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim officer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote> in both the text and the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Removed <quote> (or higher)</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>wintery</quote> with <quote>wintry</quote>. Added <quote>At the end of combat, reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score by 5  unless it causes your score to fall to zero or below, in which case you should reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> total to 1 point.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Removed <quote> (or higher)</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>wintery</quote> with <quote>wintry</quote>. Added <quote>At the end of combat, reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score by 5  unless it causes your score to fall to zero or below, in which case you should reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> total to 1 point.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect122">122</a>) Replaced <quote>distented</quote> with <quote>distended</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote>footsteps, then</quote> with <quote>footsteps; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Replaced <quote>loudly, then</quote> with <quote>loudly, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>his Captain<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>his captain<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect152">152</a>) Removed the quotation marks and dashes around <quote>Lightning Hand</quote>. Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect154">154</a>) Replaced <quote>barnlike</quote> with <quote>barn-like</quote>. Replaced <quote>to zero</quote> with <quote>to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>anvil and</quote> with <quote>anvil, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect155">155</a>) Replaced <quote>hard-worn</quote> with <quote>hard-won</quote>. Replaced <quote>t<ch.apos/>is</quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.apos/>tis</quote>. Replaced <quote>much-needed</quote> with <quote>much needed</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect156">156</a>) Added <quote>(if it is currently above this level)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect156">156</a>) Added <quote>(if it is currently above this level)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect158">158</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Kai Alchemy</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy</quote>. Changed the choice that requires the rank of Sun Knight to lead to <a idref="sect17">Section 17</a> instead of <a idref="sect86">Section 86</a>, and changed the other choice to lead to <a idref="sect86">Section 86</a> instead of <a idref="sect17">Section 17</a>. <a idref="sect17">Section 17</a> assumes that you<ch.apos/>ve reached the rank of Sun Knight. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>ca, then</quote> with <quote>can; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect159">159</a>) Replaced <quote>Prarg, <ch.lsquot/>If</quote> with <quote>Prarg. <ch.lsquot/>If</quote>. Replaced <quote>or you</quote> with <quote>or if you</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect160">160</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon, then</quote> with <quote>weapon, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar lancer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim lancer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect233">233</a>) Replaced <quote>breath, then</quote> with <quote>breath; then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect234">234</a>) Replaced <quote>crusader<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>crusaders<ch.apos/></quote>. Replaced <quote>en route</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="fr">en route</foreign></quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect238">238</a>) Added <quote>The weapon bonuses are cumulative (e.g. the Dagger of Vashna, which is a Dagger and a Special Item, will confer a bonus of <ch.plus/>1: 2 <ch.minus/> 1).</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect238">238</a>) Added <quote>The weapon bonuses are cumulative (e.g. the Dagger of Vashna, which is a Dagger and a Special Item, will confer a bonus of <ch.plus/>1: 2 <ch.minus/> 1).</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>louder, then</quote> with <quote>louder; then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect241">241</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow, then</quote> with <quote>Arrow, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>or choose</quote> with <quote>or if you choose</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect291">291</a>) Replaced <quote>or have</quote> with <quote>or if you have</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect294">294</a>) Replaced <quote>length and, upon</quote> with <quote>length, and upon</quote>. Replaced <quote>suggestion and, after</quote> with <quote>suggestion, and after</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect295">295</a>) Replaced <quote>his Captain<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>his captain<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect297">297</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Removed <quote> (or higher)</quote>. Replaced <quote>wintery</quote> with <quote>wintry</quote>. Added <quote>At the end of combat, reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score by 5  unless it causes your score to fall to zero or below, in which case you should reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> total to 1 point.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect297">297</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Removed <quote> (or higher)</quote>. Replaced <quote>wintery</quote> with <quote>wintry</quote>. Added <quote>At the end of combat, reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score by 5  unless it causes your score to fall to zero or below, in which case you should reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> total to 1 point.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect299">299</a>) Replaced <quote>Action Charts</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect304">304</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>click, then</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia>; then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced <quote>inate</quote> with <quote>innate</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Replaced <quote>Mastery, and</quote> with <quote>Mastery and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>or have</quote> with <quote>or if you have</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect321">321</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect322">322</a>) Replaced <quote>oars, then</quote> with <quote>oars; then</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Replaced <quote>momentoes</quote> with <quote>mementoes</quote>. Replaced <quote>jadin amulet</quote> with <quote>Jadin Amulet</quote>. Replaced <quote>less-noble</quote> with <quote>less noble</quote>. Replaced <quote>etc</quote> with <quote>etc.</quote>. Replaced <quote>pass, then</quote> with <quote>pass; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>jewellery and</quote> with <quote>jewellery, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>neckchain</quote> with <quote>neck-chain</quote>. Replaced <quote>to check against normal missiles (arrows, bolts, darts, etc.)</quote> with <quote>when trying to avoid normal missiles (e.g. arrows, bolts, darts, etc.) aimed at you</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Replaced <quote>momentoes</quote> with <quote>mementoes</quote>. Replaced <quote>jadin amulet</quote> with <quote>Jadin Amulet</quote>. Replaced <quote>less-noble</quote> with <quote>less noble</quote>. Replaced <quote>etc</quote> with <quote>etc.</quote>. Replaced <quote>pass, then</quote> with <quote>pass; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>jewellery and</quote> with <quote>jewellery, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>neckchain</quote> with <quote>neck-chain</quote>. Replaced <quote>to check against normal missiles (arrows, bolts, darts, etc.)</quote> with <quote>when trying to avoid normal missiles (e.g. arrows, bolts, darts, etc.) aimed at you</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect325">325</a>) Replaced <quote>urgently. <ch.lsquot/>we</quote> with <quote>urgently. <ch.lsquot/>We</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect327">327</a>) Replaced <quote>inate</quote> with <quote>innate</quote>. Replaced <quote>ale and</quote> with <quote>ale, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect328">328</a>) Replaced <quote>north-west</quote> with <quote>northwest</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>.</p>