Aggregated Fixes as per JB Sep 2016

[project-aon.git] / en / xml / 16tlov.xml

diff --git a/en/xml/16tlov.xml b/en/xml/16tlov.xml
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@@ -1845,7 +1845,7 @@
       <meta><title>82</title></meta>
 
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       <meta><title>82</title></meta>
 
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-       <p>The Elder becomes angry. He scolds you for taking a <quote>forbidden</quote> weapon and he orders you to hand it over to him at once. Aware that most of the acolytes in this section of the boat are watching you, and that any resistance would be sure to lead to the revealing of your true identity, you reach inside your robe and undo the buckle of your weapon<ch.apos/>s belt. It clatters to the deck, and the Elder snatches it up and hurls it into the lake. (Erase from your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a> any hand weapons you possess. If you have a Bow, you may still keep it.)</p>
+       <p>The Elder becomes angry. He scolds you for taking a <quote>forbidden</quote> weapon and he orders you to hand it over to him at once. Aware that most of the acolytes in this section of the boat are watching you, and that any resistance would be sure to lead to the revealing of your true identity, you reach inside your robe and undo the buckle of your weapon<ch.apos/>s belt. It clatters to the deck, and the Elder snatches it up and hurls it into the lake. (Erase from your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a> any hand weapons you possess. If you have a Bow, you may still keep it.If you have a Bow or any weapon-like Special Items, you may still keep them.)</p>

        <p>Still fuming, the Elder orders you to go to the rear of the ship where a score of acolytes are kneeling in prayer, and plead to the spirit of Vashna for forgiveness.</p>
        <choice idref="sect124"><link-text>Turn to 124</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>Still fuming, the Elder orders you to go to the rear of the ship where a score of acolytes are kneeling in prayer, and plead to the spirit of Vashna for forgiveness.</p>
        <choice idref="sect124"><link-text>Turn to 124</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -5928,7 +5928,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Replaced <quote>acolyte Elders</quote> with <quote>Acolyte Elders</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect77">77</a>) Replaced <quote>furrier<ch.apos/>s shop</quote> with <quote>furriers<ch.apos/> shop</quote>. Replaced <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote> as per Joe Dever<ch.apos/>s original manuscript.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect80">80</a>) Replaced <quote>huntmastery</quote> with <quote>Huntmastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>desolate but</quote> with <quote>desolate, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>camp fires</quote> with <quote>campfires</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Replaced <quote>acolyte Elders</quote> with <quote>Acolyte Elders</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect77">77</a>) Replaced <quote>furrier<ch.apos/>s shop</quote> with <quote>furriers<ch.apos/> shop</quote>. Replaced <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote> as per Joe Dever<ch.apos/>s original manuscript.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect80">80</a>) Replaced <quote>huntmastery</quote> with <quote>Huntmastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>desolate but</quote> with <quote>desolate, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>camp fires</quote> with <quote>campfires</quote>.</p>

-       <p>(<a idref="sect82">82</a>) Replaced <quote>deck and</quote> with <quote>deck, and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect82">82</a>) Replaced <quote>deck and</quote> with <quote>deck, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you have a Bow, you may still keep it.</quote> with <quote>If you have a Bow or any weapon-like Special Items, you may still keep them.</quote>.</p>

        <p>(<a idref="sect83">83</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Guardian,</quote> with <quote>Guardian or higher,</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Assimilance, and</quote> with <quote>Assimilance and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-screen, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-screen and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect84">84</a>) Replaced <quote>Black Talisman</quote> with <quote>Black Amulet</quote>. Replaced <quote>pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>. Replaced <quote>rewrap</quote> with <quote>re-wrap</quote>. Replaced <quote>yellow streaked beard</quote> with <quote>yellow-streaked beard</quote> in both the text and the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect86">86</a>) Replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from <quote>Sense Evil</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect83">83</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Guardian,</quote> with <quote>Guardian or higher,</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Assimilance, and</quote> with <quote>Assimilance and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-screen, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-screen and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect84">84</a>) Replaced <quote>Black Talisman</quote> with <quote>Black Amulet</quote>. Replaced <quote>pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>. Replaced <quote>rewrap</quote> with <quote>re-wrap</quote>. Replaced <quote>yellow streaked beard</quote> with <quote>yellow-streaked beard</quote> in both the text and the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect86">86</a>) Replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from <quote>Sense Evil</quote>.</p>