Clarify second option in 16tlov Section 47

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diff --git a/en/xml/16tlov.xml b/en/xml/16tlov.xml
index b3757ee..ee72bad 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/16tlov.xml
+++ b/en/xml/16tlov.xml
@@ -1406,7 +1406,7 @@
       <data>
        <p>In the far corner of this hovel are a man and a woman. They are huddled close together, wide-eyed and shivering with fear. Their once-fine clothes are tattered and caked with mud, and in their midst you see that they are cradling an infant who is clearly sick with fever. You lower your weapon and offer them an assurance that you mean them no harm but, even though you can tell that they understand your words, they still look at you with terror in their eyes.</p>
        <choice idref="sect122">If you possess some food and wish to offer it to them, <link-text>turn to 122</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect217">If you do not have any food, <link-text>turn to 217</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect217">If you do not have any food or do not wish to offer it, <link-text>turn to 217</link-text>.</choice>
       </data>
      </section>
 
@@ -5903,6 +5903,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect44">44</a>) Replaced <quote>dim blue</quote> with <quote>dim, blue</quote>. Replaced <quote>streches</quote> with <quote>stretches</quote>. Replaced <quote>light and in its dim glow you</quote> with <quote>light, and in its dim glow, you</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect45">45</a>) Removed the superfluous semicolon in <quote>region; has</quote><ch.emdash/>the original print has a suspicious looking smudge that makes no sense in this context. Replaced <quote>says, as</quote> with <quote>says as</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect46">46</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect47">47</a>) Added <quote>or do not wish to offer it</quote> to the second option to clarify that it is not compulsory to give them food.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect48">48</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Black corvayl</quote> with <quote>Black Corvayl</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect50">50</a>) Replaced <quote>them they</quote> with <quote>them, they</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>.</p>