Footnotes Removal (21-28) and GW Bow Bonus Standardisation -> +5
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        <footnote id="discplnz-1-foot" idref="discplnz-1">
        <p>Weaponmastery bonuses are replaced by Grand Weaponmastery bonuses, not added cumulatively (cf. <a href="http://www.projectaon.org/en/ReadersHandbook/NewsletterExcerpts#lwcn28">Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 28</a>).</p>
        <p>If you have completed previous adventures, already possess the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, and have reached the rank of <bookref book="12tmod" section="imprvdsc">Mentora</bookref>, it seems that you should already be able to add 5 to numbers picked from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> (i.e. the basic Weaponmastery with Bow bonus of 3 added to the Mentora bonus of 2 for all missile weapons). Likely, the author intended the Weaponmastery bonus at the Mentora rank to be a <quote>hidden loyalty bonus</quote> (cf. <a href="http://www.projectaon.org/en/ReadersHandbook/NewsletterExcerpts#lwcn28">Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 28</a>). In view of this, the <ch.plus/>2 Mentora bonus is therefore <em>not</em> cumulative with Grand Weaponmastery with Bow.</p>
-       <p>Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
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        <p>Swiftly you unshoulder your Bow, draw an Arrow to your lips, and take hurried aim as the man in black makes his daring leap across the street.</p>
-       <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you possess the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, add 3 to the number you have picked.</p>
+       <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you possess the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, add 5 to the number you have picked.</p>
        <choice idref="sect139">If your total score is now 6 or less, <link-text>turn to 139</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect328">If it is 7 or more, <link-text>turn to 328</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>You unshoulder your Bow and draw an Arrow with one swift and fluid movement. Then, as the beast<ch.apos/>s head crosses your line of sight, you release the shaft and send it whistling towards its gaping jaws.</p>
-       <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you possess Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, add 3 to the number you have picked.</p>
+       <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you possess Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, add 5 to the number you have picked.</p>
        <choice idref="sect48">If your total score is now 4 or less, <link-text>turn to 48</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect272">If it is 5 or more, <link-text>turn to 272</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>Swiftly you unshoulder your Bow, draw an Arrow from your Quiver, and take hurried aim as the man in black leaps from the window ledge onto the balcony.</p>
-       <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you possess the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, add 3 to the number you have picked.</p>
+       <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you possess the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, add 5 to the number you have picked.</p>
        <choice idref="sect27">If your total score is now 6 or less, <link-text>turn to 27</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect251">If it is 7 or more, <link-text>turn to 251</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>(<a idref="sect112">112</a>) Replaced <quote>shore and</quote> with <quote>shore, and</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>jackals</quote> with <quote>Jackals</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Added <quote>If you are able to only eat 1 Meal, you lose only 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect113">113</a>) Replaced <quote>off-balance</quote> with <quote>off balance</quote>. Replaced <quote>them you</quote> with <quote>them, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>can and</quote> with <quote>can, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>heels, pausing</quote> with <quote>heels pausing</quote>. Replaced <quote>chase but</quote> with <quote>chase, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Replaced <quote>add 5 to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score</quote> with <quote>restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect120">120</a>) Replaced <quote>bow, draw an arrow</quote> with <quote>Bow, draw an Arrow</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect120">120</a>) Replaced <quote>bow, draw an arrow</quote> with <quote>Bow, draw an Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>add 3</quote> with <quote>add 5</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Replaced <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote> as per Joe Dever<ch.apos/>s original manuscript.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Lightning Hand</quote>. Replaced replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote>. Replaced <quote>offguard</quote> with <quote>off-guard</quote>. Added <quote>Arch Druid Cadak is immune to Mindblast and Psi-surge, but he is vulnerable to Kai-surge.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Replaced <quote>adgana</quote> with <quote>Adgana</quote>. Replaced <quote>long discordant</quote> with <quote>long, discordant</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect194">194</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>mouth, then</quote> with <quote>mouth; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>pass, then</quote> with <quote>pass; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect195">195</a>) Replaced <quote>eyes, <ch.lsquot/>let</quote> with <quote>eyes. <ch.lsquot/>Let</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect197">197</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect198">198</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and draw an arrow</quote> with <quote>Bow and draw an Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>jaw</quote> with <quote>jaws</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect198">198</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and draw an arrow</quote> with <quote>Bow and draw an Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>jaw</quote> with <quote>jaws</quote>. Replaced <quote>add 3</quote> with <quote>add 5</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Replaced <quote>counter-attack</quote> with <quote>counterattack</quote>. Replaced <quote>acolyte Elders</quote> with <quote>Acolyte Elders</quote>. Replaced <quote>face it you see, two</quote> with <quote>face it, you see two</quote>. Replaced <quote>acolytes of Vashna</quote> with <quote>Acolytes of Vashna</quote>. Replaced <quote>Bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>. Replaced <quote>these, or</quote> with <quote>these or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect202">202</a>) Replaced <quote>salute, then</quote> with <quote>salute, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect203">203</a>) Replaced <quote>kilometres</quote> with <quote>miles</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect297">297</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>out, <ch.lsquot/>my</quote> with <quote>out. <ch.lsquot/>My</quote>. Replaced <quote>Guardian, or higher</quote> with <quote>Guardian or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>kilometres</quote> with <quote>miles</quote>. Replaced <quote>Mastery, and</quote> with <quote>Mastery and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect298">298</a>) Replaced <quote>curse, then</quote> with <quote>curse; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect300">300</a>) Replaced <quote>kilometre</quote> with <quote>mile</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>) Replaced <quote>bow, draw an arrow from your quiver</quote> with <quote>Bow, draw an Arrow from your Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>) Replaced <quote>bow, draw an arrow from your quiver</quote> with <quote>Bow, draw an Arrow from your Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>add 3</quote> with <quote>add 5</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect302">302</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Pathsmanship</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect304">304</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Thok!</quote> with <quote>thok!</quote>. Replaced <quote>screams, and</quote> with <quote>screams and</quote>. Replaced <quote>lips, then</quote> with <quote>lips; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>.</p>