<dt>Coordination</dt>
<dd>Jonathan Blake</dd>
<dt>Special Thanks</dt>
- <dd>Jan Charv<ch.aacute/>t, David Davis, Laurence Leach, Timothy Pederick, Christopher Turner, Jeremy Welker</dd>
+ <dd>Jan Charv<ch.aacute/>t, David Davis, Laurence Leach, David Olsen, Timothy Pederick, Christopher Turner, Jeremy Welker</dd>
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<p>In the far corner of this hovel are a man and a woman. They are huddled close together, wide-eyed and shivering with fear. Their once-fine clothes are tattered and caked with mud, and in their midst you see that they are cradling an infant who is clearly sick with fever. You lower your weapon and offer them an assurance that you mean them no harm but, even though you can tell that they understand your words, they still look at you with terror in their eyes.</p>
<choice idref="sect122">If you possess some food and wish to offer it to them, <link-text>turn to 122</link-text>.</choice>
- <choice idref="sect217">If you do not have any food, <link-text>turn to 217</link-text>.</choice>
+ <choice idref="sect217">If you do not have any food or do not wish to offer it, <link-text>turn to 217</link-text>.</choice>
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<p>The brigands are clumsy in their eagerness to reach the copse, presenting themselves as easy targets to your Bow. Every Arrow finds its mark until their leader calls off the assault and they take cover among the boulders. Now the trees echo to the sound of steel bolts ripping through branches and ricocheting off stone; once more these brigands have begun firing at you with their crossbows.</p>
<p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> (0=10). The number you have picked is equal to the number of Arrows you have fired at the brigands (adjust your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> accordingly).</p>
- <choice idref="sect268">If the number you have picked is greater than the number of Arrows you have in your Quiver, erase them all and <link-text>turn to 268</link-text>.</choice>
+ <choice idref="sect268">If the number you have picked is greater than or equal to the number of Arrows you have in your Quiver, erase them all and <link-text>turn to 268</link-text>.</choice>
<choice idref="sect167">If after having deducted the relevant number of Arrows, you still have one or more left in your Quiver, <link-text>turn to 167</link-text>.</choice>
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<p>(<a idref="sect44">44</a>) Replaced <quote>dim blue</quote> with <quote>dim, blue</quote>. Replaced <quote>streches</quote> with <quote>stretches</quote>. Replaced <quote>light and in its dim glow you</quote> with <quote>light, and in its dim glow, you</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect45">45</a>) Removed the superfluous semicolon in <quote>region; has</quote><ch.emdash/>the original print has a suspicious looking smudge that makes no sense in this context. Replaced <quote>says, as</quote> with <quote>says as</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect46">46</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect47">47</a>) Added <quote>or do not wish to offer it</quote> to the second option to clarify that it is not compulsory to give them food.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect48">48</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Black corvayl</quote> with <quote>Black Corvayl</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect50">50</a>) Replaced <quote>them they</quote> with <quote>them, they</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect327">327</a>) Replaced <quote>stalagtites</quote> with <quote>stalactites</quote>. Replaced <quote>young teenage</quote> with <quote>young, teenage</quote>. Replaced <quote>chasm of doom</quote> with <quote>Chasm of Doom</quote>. Replaced <quote>seven metres</quote> with <quote>twenty feet</quote> as per Joe Dever<ch.apos/>s original manuscript.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect328">328</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote> as per Joe Dever<ch.apos/>s original manuscript.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect329">329</a>) Replaced <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect330">330</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>If, after</quote> with <quote>If after</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect330">330</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>If, after</quote> with <quote>If after</quote>. Replaced <quote>greater than the number</quote> with <quote>greater than or equal to the number</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect333">333</a>) Replaced <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote> as per Joe Dever<ch.apos/>s original manuscript.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect334">334</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>automatons</quote> with <quote>Automatons</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Blast</quote> with <quote>Kai-blast</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect335">335</a>) Replaced <quote>journey, then</quote> with <quote>journey; then</quote>.</p>