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<p>You draw on your psychic defences to keep you hidden from this creature. You cannot see it in the dense fog but you can hear it swooping down, and you are nearly flattened by the draught of its mighty wings as it roars past close overhead.</p>
- <p>As first it seems to be going away into the distance, but then you sense it turn about and come gliding back for a second pass. Suddenly you realize that your psychic defences are not hiding you from this creature at all; it is locking on to your life-force, not your mind.</p>
+ <p>At first it seems to be going away into the distance, but then you sense it turn about and come gliding back for a second pass. Suddenly you realize that your psychic defences are not hiding you from this creature at all; it is locking on to your life-force, not your mind.</p>
<choice idref="sect254">If you have a Bow and wish to use it, <link-text>turn to 254</link-text>.</choice>
<choice idref="sect152">If you do not possess this Weapon or do not wish to use it, <link-text>turn to 152</link-text>.</choice>
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<p>(<a idref="sect103">103</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>. Replaced <quote>add 5 to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score</quote> with <quote>restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect104">104</a>) Replaced <quote>gulley</quote> with <quote>gully</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect105">105</a>) Replaced <quote>Citystate</quote> with <quote>City-state</quote>. Replaced <quote>destoyed</quote> with <quote>destroyed</quote>. Replaced <quote>Casiorn, then</quote> with <quote>Casiorn, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>give rise for</quote> with <quote>give cause for</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect106">106</a>) Replaced <quote>life force</quote> with <quote>life-force</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon, or</quote> with <quote>Weapon or</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect106">106</a>) Replaced <quote>life force</quote> with <quote>life-force</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon, or</quote> with <quote>Weapon or</quote>. Replaced <quote>As first</quote> with <quote>At first</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect107">107</a>) Removed the quotation marks from <quote>Invisible Fist</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle spell</quote> with <quote>battle-spell</quote>. Replaced <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote> as per Joe Dever<ch.apos/>s original manuscript.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect108">108</a>) Replaced <quote>hesitation he</quote> with <quote>hesitation, he</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect109">109</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and draw an arrow</quote> with <quote>Bow and draw an Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow and the arrow</quote> with <quote>Bow and the Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>says, sneeringly</quote> with <quote>says, sneering</quote>.</p>
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