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    &inclusion.brian.williams.bio.lw;
   </creator>
   <publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
-  <date class="publication"><year>2012</year><month>10</month><day>28</day></date>
+  <date class="publication"><year>2018</year><month>2</month><day>15</day></date>
   <description class="blurb">
    <p>You are the warrior Lone Wolf<ch.emdash/>Kai Grand Master of Sommerlund. Fresh from your victory over your evil alter-ego, Wolf<ch.apos/>s Bane, reluctantly you are forced to return to the Plane of Darkness. For there you glimpsed the fabled Moonstone and you have sworn to save this gem of mystical power from the clutches of Naar, the King of Ultimate Darkness.</p>
    <p>In <strong><cite>The Curse of Naar</cite></strong>, you must venture once more through the Shadow Gate and confront the Dark God. Only by finding and retrieving the Moonstone can you hope to save your world from invasion by Naar<ch.apos/>s armies of night. In this ultimate Grand Master challenge, your life and the future of your entire world are at stake!</p>
        <footnote id="discplnz-1-foot" idref="discplnz-1">
        <p>Weaponmastery bonuses are replaced by Grand Weaponmastery bonuses, not added cumulatively (cf. <a href="http://www.projectaon.org/en/ReadersHandbook/NewsletterExcerpts#lwcn28">Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 28</a>).</p>
        <p>If you have completed previous adventures, already possess the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, and have reached the rank of <bookref book="12tmod" section="imprvdsc">Mentora</bookref>, it seems that you should already be able to add 5 to numbers picked from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> (i.e. the basic Weaponmastery with Bow bonus of 3 added to the Mentora bonus of 2 for all missile weapons). Likely, the author intended the Weaponmastery bonus at the Mentora rank to be a <quote>hidden loyalty bonus</quote> (cf. <a href="http://www.projectaon.org/en/ReadersHandbook/NewsletterExcerpts#lwcn28">Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 28</a>). In view of this, the <ch.plus/>2 Mentora bonus is therefore <em>not</em> cumulative with Grand Weaponmastery with Bow.</p>
-       <p>Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
        </footnote>
       </footnotes>
 
       <meta><title>246</title></meta>
 
       <data>
-        <p>Drawing once again upon your knowledge of Brotherhood magic, you utter the words of the spell <spell>Teleport</spell> and will yourself to move through the air towards a place on the far side of the clearing, close to the jungle perimeter. At first the arachnids come scurrying onto the shore to follow your line of flight, but you quickly outdistance them and they lose interest and return to the muddy river. As you descend to make your landing you see that, in frustration, they have turned their attention to your grounded canoe which they rip apart with their powerful jaws.</p>
+        <p>Drawing once again upon your knowledge of Brotherhood magic, you utter the words of the spell <spell>Teleport</spell> and will yourself to move through the air towards a place on the far side of the clearing, close to the jungle perimeter (lose 1 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point). At first the arachnids come scurrying onto the shore to follow your line of flight, but you quickly outdistance them and they lose interest and return to the muddy river. As you descend to make your landing you see that, in frustration, they have turned their attention to your grounded canoe which they rip apart with their powerful jaws.</p>
         <p>The moment your feet touch the ground, you rush into the jungle and take cover in the dense undergrowth where you happen upon the remnants of a track. You follow this overgrown trail for nearly a mile until you come to the edge of another clearing. This expanse of level ground is devoid of foliage yet it is littered with strange fruits that resemble gigantic grey pineapples. Beyond these curious fruits you can see the ruins of a settlement partially overgrown with moss. Warily you leave the jungle, making your way around the fruits, and hurry across the clearing towards a statue which is crouching among the ruins. It is constructed of a smooth, lustrous black mineral and is fashioned in the likeness of some evil beast of prey. It reminds you of a hyena, but one with a massive lower jaw set with a pair of sabre-toothed fangs. Between its forelegs is a flight of rubble-strewn steps leading down to an open door. You detect waves of power emanating from somewhere beyond this darkened doorway, but you are unable to determine just how deep below the ground the source of this energy is located.</p>
         <choice idref="sect76">If you possess Telegnosis and wish to use this skill to spirit-walk through the doorway to investigate what lies beyond, <link-text>turn to 76</link-text>.</choice>
         <choice idref="sect177">If you do not possess this skill, or choose not to use it, <link-text>turn to 177</link-text>.</choice>
      <section class="numbered" id="sect260">
       <meta><title>260</title></meta>
 
-      <footnotes>
-       <footnote id="sect260-1-foot" idref="sect260-1">
-        <p>It is possible that you may be carrying more than one Quiver (cf. <bookref series="lw" book="08tjoh" section="sect168">Section 168</bookref> of <bookref series="lw" book="08tjoh"><cite>The Jungle of Horrors</cite></bookref>). Remember that <em>each</em> Quiver can hold a maximum of six Arrows.</p>
-       </footnote>
-      </footnotes>
-
       <data>
         <p>You approach the archway, and after checking that there are no hidden traps, you enter. Beyond lies a vast unlit hall which is filled with rows of weapons and armour. Racks of swords, spears, axes, and shields stretch into the distance as far as your keen eyes can see. Most are crudely forged and of alien design, yet the sheer number of weapons contained within this hall is enough to take your breath away.</p>
         <p>Of the thousands of weapons contained in the racks nearest to the archway, you discover the following that are of adequate quality:</p>
          <li>Arrows</li>
          <li>Bow</li>
         </ul>
-        <p>If you wish to take and keep any of the above weapons, remember to make the appropriate changes to your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. The number of Arrows you can take is limited by the space currently available in your Quiver.<footref id="sect260-1" idref="sect260-1-foot"/></p>
+        <p>If you wish to take and keep any of the above weapons, remember to make the appropriate changes to your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. The number of Arrows you can take is limited by the space currently available in your Quiver(s).</p>
         <choice idref="sect23">To leave this armoury and continue your exploration of the tunnel, <link-text>turn to 23</link-text>.</choice>
       </data>
      </section>
 
        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms <ch.ampersand/> toxins</quote> with <quote>venoms, and toxins</quote>. Replaced <quote>smell <ch.ampersand/> night vision</quote> with <quote>smell, and night vision</quote>. Replaced <quote>footprints <ch.ampersand/> tracks</quote> with <quote>footprints and tracks</quote>. Replaced <quote>500 yds</quote> with <quote>500 yards</quote>. Replaced <quote>Defence against: hypnosis</quote> with <quote>Defence against hypnosis</quote>. Replaced <quote>hostile telepathy, <ch.ampersand/> evil spirits</quote> with <quote>hostile telepathy, and evil spirits</quote>. Replaced <quote>gods Kai and Ishir</quote> with <quote>Gods Kai and Ishir</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed opposite and overleaf.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spell</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
 
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced <quote>map of Magnamund</quote> with <quote>map of the Planes of Existence</quote>. Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUARTERSTAFF</quote> with <quote>Quarterstaff</quote>. Replaced <quote>BROADSWORD</quote> with <quote>Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>BOW</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUIVER</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>DAGGER</quote> with <quote>Dagger</quote>. Replaced <quote>SWORD</quote> with <quote>Sword</quote>. Replaced <quote>MEALS</quote> with <quote>Meals</quote>. Replaced <quote>ROPE</quote> with <quote>Rope</quote>. Replaced <quote>POTION OF LAUMSPUR</quote> with <quote>Potion of Laumspur</quote>. Replaced <quote>AXE</quote> with <quote>Axe</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg Gold Dagger</quote> with <quote>(e.g. Gold Dagger</quote>. Added a section about Gold Crowns which reads <quote>These are always carried in the Belt Pouch. It will hold a maximum of fifty Crowns.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>effect that may have</quote> with <quote>effect they may have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced the image of the Short Sword with the correct image of the Sword. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced <quote>map of Magnamund</quote> with <quote>map of the Planes of Existence</quote>. Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUARTERSTAFF</quote> with <quote>Quarterstaff</quote>. Replaced <quote>BROADSWORD</quote> with <quote>Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>BOW</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUIVER</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>DAGGER</quote> with <quote>Dagger</quote>. Replaced <quote>SWORD</quote> with <quote>Sword</quote>. Replaced <quote>MEALS</quote> with <quote>Meals</quote>. Replaced <quote>ROPE</quote> with <quote>Rope</quote>. Replaced <quote>POTION OF LAUMSPUR</quote> with <quote>Potion of Laumspur</quote>. Replaced <quote>AXE</quote> with <quote>Axe</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg Gold Dagger</quote> with <quote>(e.g. Gold Dagger</quote>. Added a section about Gold Crowns which reads <quote>These are always carried in the Belt Pouch. It will hold a maximum of fifty Crowns.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>effect that may have</quote> with <quote>effect they may have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced the image of the Short Sword with the correct image of the Sword. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Removed <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
 
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>until <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points</quote> with <quote>until the <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points</quote>. Replaced <quote>to zero</quote> with <quote>to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the Random Number Table</quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>.</p>
 
        <p>(<a idref="sect50">50</a>) Replaced <quote>sword<ch.emdash/><ch.lsquot/>Skarn-Ska<ch.rsquot/><ch.emdash/>on</quote> with <quote>sword, Skarn-Ska, on</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect52">52</a>) Replaced <quote>force field</quote> with <quote>force-field</quote>. Replaced <quote>abyss, <ch.lsquot/>Follow</quote> with <quote>abyss. <ch.lsquot/>Follow</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect53">53</a>) Deleted <quote> which you keep in your backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>pictures or</quote> with <quote>pictures, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>platinum amulet</quote> with <quote>Platinum Amulet</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect53">53</a>) Removed <quote> which you keep in your backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>pictures or</quote> with <quote>pictures, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>platinum amulet</quote> with <quote>Platinum Amulet</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect54">54</a>) Replaced <quote>sound; it</quote> with <quote>sound: it</quote>. Replaced <quote>source of the cacophony<ch.emdash/>the chamber</quote> with <quote>source of the cacophony: the chamber</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect55">55</a>) Replaced <quote>are a long line</quote> with <quote>is a long line</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote><em>Lukha</em></quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Lukha<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote>. Replaced <quote>jet black</quote> with <quote>jet-black</quote>. Replaced <quote>silence, then</quote> with <quote>silence; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>ends here</quote> with <quote>end here</quote>. Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a id="err85" idref="sect85">85</a>) Replaced <quote>dark, jungle</quote> with <quote>dark jungle</quote>. Replaced <quote>treeline</quote> with <quote>tree-line</quote>. Added <quote>If you possess Grand Pathsmanship and have attained the Kai rank of Grand Crown or higher, turn to 115.</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you have Grand Pathsmanship, turn to 334.</quote> with <quote>If you have Grand Pathsmanship but have yet to attain this rank, turn to 334.</quote> (cf. the Errata for <a idref="err115">Section 115</a> and <a idref="sect255">Section 255 </a>).</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect86">86</a>) Replaced <quote>pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>firestorm</quote> with <quote>fire-storm</quote>. Replaced <quote>throne of power</quote> with <quote>Throne of Power</quote>. Replaced <quote>creatures who are</quote> with <quote>creatures that are</quote>. Replaced <quote>tome</quote> with <quote>Tome</quote>. Replaced <quote>acts of Evil</quote> with <quote>acts of evil</quote>. Replaced <quote>Dragonlord, and</quote> with <quote>Dragonlord and</quote>. Replaced <quote>him, and</quote> with <quote>him and</quote>. Replaced <quote>name<ch.emdash/><ch.lsquot/>Zheva<ch.rsquot/><ch.emdash/>which</quote> with <quote>name <ch.lsquot/>Zheva<ch.rsquot/> which</quote>. Replaced <quote>Zarthryn</quote> with <quote>Zarthyn</quote> in harmony with <bookref series="lw" book="16tlov"><cite>The Legacy of Vashna</cite></bookref> Sections <bookref series="lw" book="16tlov" section="sect152">152</bookref> and <bookref series="lw" book="16tlov" section="sect254">254</bookref>. Replaced <quote>item<ch.emdash/>the Scarab of the Wingless Dragon<ch.emdash/>which</quote> with <quote>item, the Scarab of the Wingless Dragon, which</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect87">87</a>) Replaced <quote>counterspell</quote> with <quote><spell>Counterspell</spell></quote>. Replaced <quote>sound<ch.emdash/>a grating squeal</quote> with <quote>sound, a grating squeal</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect89">89</a>) Deleted <quote> which you keep in your backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>pictures or</quote> with <quote>pictures, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>permissible).</quote> with <quote>permissible.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>empty<ch.emdash/>devoid</quote> with <quote>empty, devoid</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect89">89</a>) Removed <quote> which you keep in your backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>pictures or</quote> with <quote>pictures, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>permissible).</quote> with <quote>permissible.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>empty<ch.emdash/>devoid</quote> with <quote>empty, devoid</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect90">90</a>) Replaced <quote>throne of power</quote> with <quote>Throne of Power</quote>. Replaced <quote>pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>creatures who are</quote> with <quote>creatures that are</quote>. Replaced <quote>your natural balance and agility prevents</quote> with <quote>your natural balance and agility prevent</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>tome</quote> with <quote>Tome</quote>. Replaced <quote>south you</quote> with <quote>south, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>stones and, to</quote> with <quote>stones, and to</quote>. Replaced <quote>name<ch.emdash/><ch.lsquot/>Khula<ch.rsquot/><ch.emdash/>which</quote> with <quote>name <ch.lsquot/>Khula<ch.rsquot/> which</quote>. Replaced <quote>destination<ch.emdash/>the</quote> with <quote>destination, the</quote>. Replaced <quote>Nza<ch.apos/>pok<ch.emdash/>Lord of the Mire<ch.emdash/>and</quote> with <quote>Nza<ch.apos/>pok, Lord of the Mire, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Nza<ch.apos/>pok<ch.emdash/>the ruler of this domain<ch.emdash/>and</quote> with <quote>Nza<ch.apos/>pok, the ruler of this domain, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect91">91</a>) Replaced <quote>returning and</quote> with <quote>returning, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect93">93</a>) Replaced <quote>lavas</quote> with <quote>Lavas</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect175">175</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect176">176</a>) Replaced <quote>Reavers<ch.emdash/>wholly</quote> with <quote>Reavers, wholly</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect179">179</a>) Replaced <quote>lavas</quote> with <quote>Lavas</quote>. Replaced <quote>reptillians</quote> with <quote>reptilians</quote> in the text and in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>reptillian</quote> with <quote>reptilian</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Mastery, and</quote> with <quote>Mastery and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-surge, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-surge and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-screen, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-screen and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect180">180</a>) Deleted <quote> which you keep in your backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>pictures or</quote> with <quote>pictures, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>platinum amulet</quote> with <quote>Platinum Amulet</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect180">180</a>) Removed <quote> which you keep in your backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>pictures or</quote> with <quote>pictures, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>platinum amulet</quote> with <quote>Platinum Amulet</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect182">182</a>) Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom spell<ch.emdash/>Invisible Fist<ch.emdash/>and</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spell <spell>Invisible Fist</spell> and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect183">183</a>) Replaced <quote>Shamath<ch.emdash/>the</quote> with <quote>Shamath, the</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/>Invisible Shield<ch.emdash/>as</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Invisible Shield</spell> as</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Discipline</quote> with <quote>Grand Master Discipline</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect243">243</a>) Replaced <quote>Shamath, <ch.lsquot/>it</quote> with <quote>Shamath. <ch.lsquot/>It</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Avarvae<ch.emdash/>I trust</quote> with <quote>Avarvae! I trust</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect244">244</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Quiver,, but</quote> with <quote>Quiver), but</quote>. Replaced <quote>sound<ch.emdash/>a grating squeal</quote> with <quote>sound, a grating squeal</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect245">245</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/>Teleport<ch.emdash/>and</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Teleport</spell> and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect246">246</a>) Replaced <quote>spell<ch.emdash/>Teleport<ch.emdash/>and</quote> with <quote>spell <spell>Teleport</spell> and</quote>. Replaced <quote>out-distance</quote> with <quote>outdistance</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect246">246</a>) Replaced <quote>spell<ch.emdash/>Teleport<ch.emdash/>and</quote> with <quote>spell <spell>Teleport</spell> and</quote>. Replaced <quote>out-distance</quote> with <quote>outdistance</quote>. Added <quote> (lose 1 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point)</quote> since the <spell>Teleport</spell> spell is supposed to incur a penalty for use (cf. Sections <a idref="grandcrown">Improved Grand Master Disciplines</a>, <a idref="sect73">73</a>, <a idref="sect245">245</a>, and <a idref="sect298">298</a>).</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect247">247</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai blast</quote> with <quote>Kai-blast</quote>. Replaced <quote>attained, above</quote> with <quote>attained above</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect248">248</a>) Replaced <quote>Khor, in</quote> with <quote>Khor in</quote>. Replaced <quote>platinum amulet</quote> with <quote>Platinum Amulet</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect249">249</a>) Replaced <quote>semi-circular</quote> with <quote>semicircular</quote>. Replaced <quote>Cadak, and decide</quote> with <quote>Cadak and decide</quote>. Replaced <quote>counter-attack</quote> with <quote>counterattack</quote>. Replaced <quote>rib-cage</quote> with <quote>rib cage</quote>. Replaced <quote>attack and, moments</quote> with <quote>attack, and moments</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect250">250</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>lavas</quote> with <quote>Lavas</quote>. Replaced <quote>reptillians</quote> with <quote>reptilians</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>orange and</quote> with <quote>orange, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>armour and</quote> with <quote>armour, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>an apex</quote> with <quote>the apex</quote>. Replaced <quote>Dragonlord<ch.emdash/>the ruler of this realm of fire<ch.emdash/>and</quote> with <quote>Dragonlord, the ruler of this realm of fire, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect251">251</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/>Levitation<ch.emdash/>and</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Levitation</spell> and</quote>. Replaced <quote>rockface, then</quote> with <quote>rock-face. Then</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>leap on</quote> with <quote>leap onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect253">253</a>) Replaced <quote>Darkness<ch.emdash/>an</quote> with <quote>Darkness, an</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect254">254</a>) Deleted <quote>(Sommerswerd = <ch.plus/>8; Skarn-Ska = <ch.plus/>5)</quote> in view of the footnote added to <a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a> regarding the <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus conveyed by the Sommerswerd on the Plane of Darkness.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect254">254</a>) Removed <quote>(Sommerswerd = <ch.plus/>8; Skarn-Ska = <ch.plus/>5)</quote> in view of the footnote added to <a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a> regarding the <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus conveyed by the Sommerswerd on the Plane of Darkness.</p>
        <p>(<a id="err255" idref="sect255">255</a>) Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Removed <quote>If you possess Grand Huntmastery, and have attained the Kai rank of Grand Crown, turn to 115.</quote>. According to the <a idref="imprvdsc">Improved Grand Master Disciplines</a> section, <a idref="grandcrown">Grand Crowns</a> with Grand <em>Pathsmanship</em> <quote>are able to create a clear passageway through dense undergrowth, forest, or jungle<ch.ellips/>This skill can also be employed by a Kai Grand Crown against magical foliage.</quote> A player could not arrive at this section if they possessed Grand Pathsmanship (cf. <a idref="sect85">Section 85</a>). We have therefore moved the link to <a idref="sect115">Section 115</a> from here to <a idref="sect85">Section 85</a> instead (cf. Errata for <a idref="err85">Section 85</a> and <a idref="err115">Section 115</a>). Replaced <quote>edged weapon</quote> with <quote>edged Weapon</quote>. Replaced <quote>sword or axe), and</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe) and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect256">256</a>) Replaced <quote>potion</quote> with <quote>Potion</quote>. Added <quote>(Remember to delete Shamath<ch.apos/>s Potion from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect258">258</a>) Replaced <quote>With respect</quote> with <quote>But with respect</quote>. Replaced <quote>but the scabbard</quote> with <quote>the scabbard</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect259">259</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>lavas</quote> with <quote>Lavas</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Crown</quote> with <quote>Crown or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Thane</quote> with <quote>Thane or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Mastery, and</quote> with <quote>Mastery and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-surge, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-surge and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect260">260</a>) Replaced <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>axes and</quote> with <quote>axes, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>archway and</quote> with <quote>archway, and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect260">260</a>) Replaced <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>axes and</quote> with <quote>axes, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver(s)</quote>. Replaced <quote>archway and</quote> with <quote>archway, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect261">261</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>edged weapon</quote> with <quote>edged Weapon</quote>. Replaced <quote>sword or axe</quote> with <quote>Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>quarterstaff or mace</quote> with <quote>Quarterstaff or a Mace</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect262">262</a>) Replaced <quote>slayed</quote> with <quote>slain</quote>. Split the final sentence into its own paragraph for consistency.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect263">263</a>) Replaced <quote>to try and</quote> with <quote>to try to</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect291">291</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>levitation spell</quote> with <quote><spell>Levitation</spell> spell</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect293">293</a>) Replaced <quote>tips, then</quote> with <quote>tips; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect294">294</a>) Replaced <quote><ch.emdash/>Gloar!<ch.emdash/></quote> with <quote><spell>Gloar!</spell></quote>. Replaced <quote>Sommerswerd, or</quote> with <quote>Sommerswerd or</quote>. Replaced <quote>power word</quote> with <quote>power-word</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect296">296</a>) Deleted <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>pictures or</quote> with <quote>pictures, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>empty<ch.emdash/>devoid</quote> with <quote>empty, devoid</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect296">296</a>) Removed <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>pictures or</quote> with <quote>pictures, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>empty<ch.emdash/>devoid</quote> with <quote>empty, devoid</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect297">297</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>special items</quote> with <quote>Special Items</quote>. Replaced <quote>mask successfully</quote> with <quote>successfully mask</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect298">298</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/>Teleport<ch.emdash/>as</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Teleport</spell> as</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>leap on</quote> with <quote>leap onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>) Replaced <quote>crowd are</quote> with <quote>crowd is</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect306">306</a>) Removed quote marks from thought-speech.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect307">307</a>) Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>) Replaced <quote>lavas</quote> with <quote>Lavas</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect310">310</a>) Deleted <quote>(Sommerswerd = <ch.plus/>8; Skarn-Ska = <ch.plus/>5)</quote> in view of the footnote added to <a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a> regarding the <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus conveyed by the Sommerswerd on the Plane of Darkness.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect310">310</a>) Removed <quote>(Sommerswerd = <ch.plus/>8; Skarn-Ska = <ch.plus/>5)</quote> in view of the footnote added to <a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a> regarding the <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus conveyed by the Sommerswerd on the Plane of Darkness.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect311">311</a>) Replaced <quote>Suddenly a</quote> with <quote>Suddenly, a</quote>. Replaced <quote><em>Rhunadan</em></quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Rhunadan<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote>. Replaced <quote>rib-cage</quote> with <quote>rib cage</quote>. Replaced <quote>Dregants<ch.emdash/>a</quote> with <quote>Dregants, a</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect313">313</a>) Replaced <quote>take Avarvae</quote> with <quote>takes Avarvae</quote>. Replaced <quote>late; you</quote> with <quote>late: you</quote>. Replaced <quote>Damned<ch.emdash/>the</quote> with <quote>Damned, the</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Replaced <quote>undergrowth and when</quote> with <quote>undergrowth, and when</quote>.</p>