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           <dt>Potion of Laumspur</dt>
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-            <p>This is a healing potion that can restore 4 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points to your total when swallowed after combat. There is enough for one dose only. If you discover any other potion during the adventure, you will be informed of its effect. All potions are Backpack Items.</p>
+            <p>This is a healing potion that can restore 4 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points to your total when swallowed after combat. It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat. There is enough for one dose only. If you discover any other potion during the adventure, you will be informed of its effect. All potions are Backpack Items.</p>
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         <choice idref="sect162">If you possess Grand Huntmastery and have attained the rank of Kai Grand Guardian or higher, and wish to use this skill, <link-text>turn to 162</link-text>.</choice>
         <choice idref="sect240">If you possess Telegnosis and have reached the rank of Sun Lord or higher, and wish to make use of this skill, <link-text>turn to 240</link-text>.</choice>
         <choice idref="sect283">If you possess Kai-alchemy and wish to use it, <link-text>turn to 283</link-text>.</choice>
-        <choice idref="sect271">If you possess a Bow and wish to use it, <link-text>turn to 271</link-text>.</choice>
         <choice idref="sect197">If you do not possess any of these Grand Master Disciplines, nor a Bow, do not wish to use them, or if you have yet to attain the required level of Kai Mastery, <link-text>turn instead to 197</link-text>.</choice>
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         <p>You recite the words of the Brotherhood Spell <spell>Levitation</spell> and instantly you feel yourself rise up out of the mud and soar into the humid air. You bring yourself to a halt twenty feet above the muddy river shore; then you look down at the predatory arachnids that are now gathered directly below. They stare up at you in silence, their scarlet-rimmed eyes blinking rapidly as they patiently wait for you to return to the river.</p>
         <choice idref="sect246">If you have attained the Kai rank of Grand Crown or higher, <link-text>turn to 246</link-text>.</choice>
         <choice idref="sect111">If you have not yet attained this level of Kai rank but you do possess a Rope, <link-text>turn to 111</link-text>.</choice>
-        <choice idref="sect30">If you have yet to attain this level of Kai rank and you do not possess a Rope, <link-text>turn instead to 30</link-text>.</choice>
+        <choice idref="sect271">If you have not yet attained this level of Kai rank and do not possess a Rope, but you do possess a Bow, <link-text>turn to 271</link-text>.</choice>
+        <choice idref="sect30">If you have yet to attain this level of Kai rank and possess neither of these items, <link-text>turn instead to 30</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>monastery of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Monastery of the Kai</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master Disciplines, and grasp</quote> with <quote>Grand Master Disciplines and grasp</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>artifact</quote> with <quote>artefact</quote>. Replaced <quote>free-state</quote> with <quote>Freeland</quote>. Replaced <quote>if you were</quote> with <quote>if you are</quote>. Replaced <quote>most-trusted</quote> with <quote>most trusted</quote>. Replaced <quote>Shianti, whose</quote> with <quote>Shianti whose</quote>. Replaced <quote>Gate<ch.emdash/>an</quote> with <quote>Gate, an</quote>. Replaced <quote>Darkness<ch.emdash/>the</quote> with <quote>Darkness, the</quote>. Replaced <quote>Shianti<ch.emdash/>a</quote> with <quote>Shianti, a</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magnamund have</quote> with <quote>Magnamund, have</quote>.</p>
 
-       <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Removed <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote> and <quote>on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Magnakai</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Added <quote>Dagger of Vashna</quote> and <quote>Helshezag</quote> to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the <cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite> and <cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite> books in harmony with the Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Removed <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote> and <quote>on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Magnakai</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Added <quote>Dagger of Vashna</quote> and <quote>Helshezag</quote> to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the <cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite> and <cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite> books in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
 
-       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms <ch.ampersand/> toxins</quote> with <quote>venoms, and toxins</quote>. Replaced <quote>smell <ch.ampersand/> night vision</quote> with <quote>smell, and night vision</quote>. Replaced <quote>footprints <ch.ampersand/> tracks</quote> with <quote>footprints and tracks</quote>. Replaced <quote>500 yds</quote> with <quote>500 yards</quote>. Replaced <quote>Defence against: hypnosis</quote> with <quote>Defence against hypnosis</quote>. Replaced <quote>hostile telepathy, <ch.ampersand/> evil spirits</quote> with <quote>hostile telepathy, and evil spirits</quote>. Replaced <quote>gods Kai and Ishir</quote> with <quote>Gods Kai and Ishir</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed opposite and overleaf.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing editions. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spell</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms <ch.ampersand/> toxins</quote> with <quote>venoms, and toxins</quote>. Replaced <quote>smell <ch.ampersand/> night vision</quote> with <quote>smell, and night vision</quote>. Replaced <quote>footprints <ch.ampersand/> tracks</quote> with <quote>footprints and tracks</quote>. Replaced <quote>500 yds</quote> with <quote>500 yards</quote>. Replaced <quote>Defence against: hypnosis</quote> with <quote>Defence against hypnosis</quote>. Replaced <quote>hostile telepathy, <ch.ampersand/> evil spirits</quote> with <quote>hostile telepathy, and evil spirits</quote>. Replaced <quote>gods Kai and Ishir</quote> with <quote>Gods Kai and Ishir</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed opposite and overleaf.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spell</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
 
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced <quote>map of Magnamund</quote> with <quote>map of the Planes of Existence</quote>. Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUARTERSTAFF</quote> with <quote>Quarterstaff</quote>. Replaced <quote>BROADSWORD</quote> with <quote>Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>BOW</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUIVER</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>DAGGER</quote> with <quote>Dagger</quote>. Replaced <quote>SWORD</quote> with <quote>Sword</quote>. Replaced <quote>MEALS</quote> with <quote>Meals</quote>. Replaced <quote>ROPE</quote> with <quote>Rope</quote>. Replaced <quote>POTION OF LAUMSPUR</quote> with <quote>Potion of Laumspur</quote>. Replaced <quote>AXE</quote> with <quote>Axe</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg Gold Dagger</quote> with <quote>(e.g. Gold Dagger</quote>. Added a section about Gold Crowns which reads <quote>These are always carried in the Belt Pouch. It will hold a maximum of fifty Crowns.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>effect that may have</quote> with <quote>effect they may have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced the image of the Short Sword with the correct image of the Sword. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced <quote>map of Magnamund</quote> with <quote>map of the Planes of Existence</quote>. Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUARTERSTAFF</quote> with <quote>Quarterstaff</quote>. Replaced <quote>BROADSWORD</quote> with <quote>Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>BOW</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUIVER</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>DAGGER</quote> with <quote>Dagger</quote>. Replaced <quote>SWORD</quote> with <quote>Sword</quote>. Replaced <quote>MEALS</quote> with <quote>Meals</quote>. Replaced <quote>ROPE</quote> with <quote>Rope</quote>. Replaced <quote>POTION OF LAUMSPUR</quote> with <quote>Potion of Laumspur</quote>. Replaced <quote>AXE</quote> with <quote>Axe</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg Gold Dagger</quote> with <quote>(e.g. Gold Dagger</quote>. Added a section about Gold Crowns which reads <quote>These are always carried in the Belt Pouch. It will hold a maximum of fifty Crowns.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>effect that may have</quote> with <quote>effect they may have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced the image of the Short Sword with the correct image of the Sword. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
 
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>until <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points</quote> with <quote>until the <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points</quote>. Replaced <quote>to zero</quote> with <quote>to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the Random Number Table</quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>.</p>
 
        <p>(<a idref="sect212">212</a>) Replaced <quote>attack; double</quote> with <quote>attack: double</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect213">213</a>) Replaced <quote>lavas</quote> with <quote>Lavas</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect215">215</a>) Replaced <quote>firestorm</quote> with <quote>fire-storm</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai rank of Grand Guardian</quote> with <quote>rank of Kai Grand Guardian or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lord</quote> with <quote>Lord or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Crown</quote> with <quote>Crown or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Telegnosis, and</quote> with <quote>Telegnosis and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Huntmastery, and</quote> with <quote>Huntmastery and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect216">216</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai rank of Grand Guardian</quote> with <quote>rank of Kai Grand Guardian or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lord, and</quote> with <quote>Lord or higher, and</quote>. Added the option <quote>If you possess a Bow and wish to use it, turn to 271.</quote> to bring <a idref="sect271">Section 271</a> back into the game. Replaced <quote>Disciplines, do</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, nor a Bow, do</quote>. Replaced <quote>soft sludgy</quote> with <quote>soft, sludgy</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect216">216</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai rank of Grand Guardian</quote> with <quote>rank of Kai Grand Guardian or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lord, and</quote> with <quote>Lord or higher, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines, do</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, nor a Bow, do</quote>. Replaced <quote>soft sludgy</quote> with <quote>soft, sludgy</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect217">217</a>) Replaced <quote>ceiling, then</quote> with <quote>ceiling. Then</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>leap on</quote> with <quote>leap onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect218">218</a>) Replaced <quote>pin-points</quote> with <quote>pinpoints</quote>. Replaced <quote>closer so they</quote> with <quote>closer, they</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Yanis<ch.emdash/>the Shining City<ch.emdash/>in</quote> with <quote>Yanis, the Shining City, in</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect219">219</a>) Replaced <quote>mind-force</quote> with <quote>Mindforce</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect280">280</a>) Replaced <quote>frames and</quote> with <quote>frames, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect281">281</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/>Vigour<ch.emdash/>and</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Strength</spell> and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Amulet (remember your</quote> with <quote>Amulet. (Remember: your</quote>. Replaced <quote>adventure).</quote> with <quote>adventure.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>hot cindery</quote> with <quote>hot, cindery</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect282">282</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai!<ch.rsquot/> and</quote> with <quote>Kai!<ch.rsquot/><ch.emdash/>and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect283">283</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/>Levitation<ch.emdash/>and</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Levitation</spell> and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Crown</quote> with <quote>Crown or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>shore, then</quote> with <quote>shore; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>arachnids who</quote> with <quote>arachnids that</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect283">283</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/>Levitation<ch.emdash/>and</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Levitation</spell> and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Crown</quote> with <quote>Crown or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>shore, then</quote> with <quote>shore; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>arachnids who</quote> with <quote>arachnids that</quote>. Added the option <quote>If you have not yet attained this level of Kai rank and do not possess a Rope, but you do possess a Bow, <!--link-text-->turn to 271<!--/link-text-->.</quote> to bring <a idref="sect271">Section 271</a> back into the game. Replaced <quote>If you have yet to attain this level of Kai rank and you do not possess a Rope</quote> with <quote>If you have yet to attain this level of Kai rank and possess neither of these items</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect284">284</a>) Replaced <quote>lavas</quote> with <quote>Lavas</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect285">285</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>interior and</quote> with <quote>interior, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect286">286</a>) Replaced <quote>Darkness<ch.emdash/>an</quote> with <quote>Darkness, an</quote>.</p>