Footnote Removal (Book 22); Checkerrata issue (Book 24)
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      <meta><title>86</title></meta>
 
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-        <p>As the Kholo is <quote>especially susceptible to <em>all</em> forms of psychic attack</quote>, it seems reasonable that you may double all bonuses conferred by the use of Mindblast as well.</p>
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        <p>Suddenly the growling stops and you sense that the creatures are preparing to attack. Hurriedly you draw a weapon as two wolf-like animals come bounding towards you from the rear of the cave.</p>
        <combat><enemy>Kholo</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">40</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">28</enemy-attribute></combat>
-       <p>These creatures are especially susceptible to all forms of psychic attack: double all bonuses if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it.<footref id="sect86-1" idref="sect86-1-foot"/></p>
+       <p>These creatures are especially susceptible to all forms of psychic attack: double all bonuses to Kai-surge (or Mindblast) if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it.</p>
        <choice idref="sect101">If you win this combat, <link-text>turn to 101</link-text>.</choice>
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     <section class="numbered" id="sect269">
      <meta><title>269</title></meta>
 
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-        <p>As the Kholo is <quote>especially susceptible to <em>all</em> forms of psychic attack</quote>, it seems reasonable that you may double all bonuses conferred by the use of Mindblast as well.</p>
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        <p>You take up your instrument and begin a soothing ballad that you hope will calm these hungry creatures. Unfortunately, the sound of your playing has an adverse effect upon them; they react in anger and immediately attack. Hurriedly you drop your instrument and draw a weapon as two wolf-like animals come bounding towards you from the rear of the cave.</p>
        <combat><enemy>Kholo</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">40</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">28</enemy-attribute></combat>
-       <p>These creatures are especially susceptible to all forms of psychic attack: double all bonuses if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it.<footref id="sect269-1" idref="sect269-1-foot"/></p>
+       <p>These creatures are especially susceptible to all forms of psychic attack: double all bonuses to Kai-surge (or Mindblast) if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it.</p>
        <choice idref="sect101">If you win this combat, <link-text>turn to 101</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>(<a idref="sect83">83</a>) Replaced <quote>timber and leather</quote> with <quote>timber, and leather</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Nobels</quote> with <quote>Nobles</quote>. Replaced <quote>Nobel</quote> with <quote>Noble</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect84">84</a>) Replaced <quote>Lourdanian</quote> with <quote>Lourdenian</quote>. Replaced <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect85">85</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>first volley of arrows come</quote> with <quote>first volley of arrows comes</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect86">86</a>) Replaced <quote>double all bonuses if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it</quote> with <quote>double all bonuses to Kai-surge (or Mindblast) if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect87">87</a>) Replaced <quote>broad-leafed</quote> with <quote>broad-leaved</quote>. Replaced <quote>Bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Replaced <quote>or choose</quote> with <quote>or if you choose</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect90">90</a>) Replaced <quote>consciousness, then</quote> with <quote>consciousness; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>disorientated</quote> with <quote>disoriented</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-surge, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-surge and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect92">92</a>) Added a paragraph break between <quote>you retort.</quote> and <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>But<ch.ellips/></quote>. Added a paragraph break between <quote>the Captain.</quote> and <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>I<ch.apos/>ve no</quote>. Replaced <quote>kilometre</quote> with <quote>mile</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect266">266</a>) Replaced <quote>the creatures</quote> with <quote>the creature</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) Replaced <quote>Bow nor</quote> with <quote>Bow, nor</quote>. Replaced <quote>Bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Elementalism, and</quote> with <quote>Elementalism and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect268">268</a>) Replaced <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect269">269</a>) Replaced <quote>double all bonuses if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it</quote> with <quote>double all bonuses to Kai-surge (or Mindblast) if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect270">270</a>) Replaced <quote>to be indulged</quote> with <quote>to be indulged in</quote>. Added <quote>If the Kai Weapon you wield is <quote>Valiance</quote>, you may apply the bonus gained due to its unique properties.</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect271">271</a>) Replaced <quote>Item.</quote> with <quote>Item.)</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect272">272</a>) Replaced <quote>the Derby</quote> with <quote>the derby</quote>. Replaced <quote>he warns, <ch.lsquot/>he<ch.apos/>s ruthless</quote> with <quote>he warns. <ch.lsquot/>He<ch.apos/>s ruthless</quote>.</p>