<p><quote>Lone Wolf has prepared you well for your mission,</quote> he says, as he secures the buckle. <quote>I<ch.apos/>m sure I have no need to remind you to keep this bag closed at all times. You are about to venture through dangerous territory, and there are many who would give anything to possess the contents of this satchel. You would be wise to trust only yourself, Grand Master.</quote> (If you have not already done so, record the Moonstone on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as a Special Item. You carry it slung over your shoulder in its leather satchel.)</p>
<p>Rimoah escorts you to your room and tells you that he will call for you at an hour before dawn to take you to the quay. As he bids you goodnight, a doleful bell rings out in some distant part of the city. Rimoah<ch.apos/>s eyes fill with sadness.</p>
- <p><quote>What does the bell mean, my Lord?</quote> you ask.</p>
+ <p><quote>What does the bell mean, my lord?</quote> you ask.</p>
<p><quote>It signifies the passing of Lord Casis. He, too, is about to begin a journey. Alas, it will be his last. I must go now<ch.emdash/>I am being summoned to witness his departure.</quote></p>
<p>As he leaves, Rimoah pauses for a moment and then glances back over his shoulder. <quote>You are welcome to accompany me if you wish, Grand Master. The passing of an Elder is a rare and special occasion. You may learn much from what you see.</quote></p>
<choice idref="sect225">If you wish to accept Lord Rimoah<ch.apos/>s invitation, <link-text>turn to 225</link-text>.</choice>
<p><quote>Only by virtue of your possession of the Moonstone can this voyage be undertaken with any hope of success,</quote> he says. <quote>I have been in mind-contact with the Shianti, and they are ready to receive you.</quote></p>
<p>You sense that Zinair is proud of your successes and achievements during the quest so far, but you also sense that he is ill at ease and you ask him what is wrong.</p>
<p><quote>The Moonstone will facilitate your passage through the Sea of Dreams to the Isle of Lorn, Grand Master. But you should know that this journey could still prove perilous. The Shianti no longer have control over the forces that exist within this enchanted region. Until you reach the shores of Lorn, your fate will be entirely in your own hands.</quote></p>
- <p>It is a daunting message but you do not allow it to weaken your resolve. You stare Lord Zinair confidently in the eye as you reply: <quote>It need be no other way, my Lord. I am ready.</quote></p>
+ <p>It is a daunting message but you do not allow it to weaken your resolve. You stare Lord Zinair confidently in the eye as you reply: <quote>It need be no other way, my lord. I am ready.</quote></p>
<p>Zinair smiles. <quote>So be it, Grand Master. But now you must sleep, for you sail at dawn.</quote></p>
<choice idref="sect214"><link-text>Turn to 214</link-text>.</choice>
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<p>(<a idref="kaiwisdm">New Order Wisdom</a>) Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Italicised <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Added a paragraph break between <quote>you ask.</quote> and <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>It signifies</quote>. Replaced <quote>Korlinium</quote> with <quote>korlinium</quote>. Replaced <quote>well-treated</quote> with <quote>well treated</quote>. Replaced <quote>Record the Moonstone</quote> with <quote>If you have not already done so, record the Moonstone</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Added a paragraph break between <quote>you ask.</quote> and <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>It signifies</quote>. Replaced <quote>Korlinium</quote> with <quote>korlinium</quote>. Replaced <quote>well-treated</quote> with <quote>well treated</quote>. Replaced <quote>Record the Moonstone</quote> with <quote>If you have not already done so, record the Moonstone</quote>. Replaced <quote>my Lord</quote> with <quote>my lord</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect2">2</a>) Replaced <quote>by, then</quote> with <quote>by, and then</quote>. Removed quotation marks from around the thought-speech.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect3">3</a>) Removed the dash preceding <quote><spell>Gloar!</spell></quote>. Replaced <quote>barge</quote> with <quote>charge</quote>. Replaced <quote>power word</quote> with <quote>power-word</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Replaced <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect182">182</a>) Replaced <quote>Grand Mastery skills</quote> with <quote>Grand Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>drawbolt</quote> with <quote>bolt</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Replaced <quote>hustle and</quote> with <quote>hustle, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>fact it</quote> with <quote>fact, it</quote>. Replaced <quote>jade green</quote> with <quote>jade-green</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Replaced <quote>rainswept</quote> with <quote>rain-swept</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>enchantments and magical mists and winds</quote> with <quote>enchantments, magical mists, and mage winds</quote> as that is the phrase Joe originally wrote.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>enchantments and magical mists and winds</quote> with <quote>enchantments, magical mists, and mage winds</quote> as that is the phrase Joe originally wrote. Replaced <quote>my Lord</quote> with <quote>my lord</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>jailers</quote> with <quote>gaolers</quote>. Altered the links to read <quote>Turn to 314</quote> since it is impossible to arrive in this section carrying an Iron Key. They originally read:</p>
<p>If you possess an Iron Key, turn to 125.</p>
<p>If you do not possess this item, turn to 314.</p>
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