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        <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote>. Removed <quote>on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons and</quote> with <quote>weapons, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>.</p>
 
 
        <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote>. Removed <quote>on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons and</quote> with <quote>weapons, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>.</p>
 

-       <p>(<a idref="kainame">Your Kai Name</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Deleted <quote>You can record your personal Kai name on the book plate which appears on the inside front cover of this book.</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="kainame">Your Kai Name</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Removed <quote>You can record your personal Kai name on the book plate which appears on the inside front cover of this book.</quote>.</p>

 
        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">New Order Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>symbols and</quote> with <quote>symbols, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases and</quote> with <quote>gases, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>honour and</quote> with <quote>honour, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Four Disciplines</quote> with <quote>four Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand masters</quote> with <quote>Grand Masters</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom battle magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>Moon and</quote> with <quote>Moon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>individual (or combinations of) elements that are available,</quote> with <quote>individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof,</quote>. Replaced <quote>remove or</quote> with <quote>remove, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>multitalented</quote> with <quote>multi-talented</quote>. Replaced <quote>dialect and</quote> with <quote>dialect, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon and</quote> with <quote>Weapon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 to 3</quote> with <quote>one to three</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>guild of magicians</quote> with <quote>Guild of Magicians</quote>. Replaced <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote> with <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the <cite>New Order</cite> series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases</quote> with <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his inanimate body increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>predictions increases</quote> with <quote>predictions increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>EQUIPMENT</quote> with <quote>Equipment</quote>. Replaced <quote>undertaken then</quote> with <quote>undertaken, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (New Order) series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>any other Special Items that</quote> with <quote>any other Special Items and Backpack Items that</quote>.</p>
 
 
        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">New Order Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>symbols and</quote> with <quote>symbols, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases and</quote> with <quote>gases, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>honour and</quote> with <quote>honour, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Four Disciplines</quote> with <quote>four Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand masters</quote> with <quote>Grand Masters</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom battle magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>Moon and</quote> with <quote>Moon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>individual (or combinations of) elements that are available,</quote> with <quote>individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof,</quote>. Replaced <quote>remove or</quote> with <quote>remove, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>multitalented</quote> with <quote>multi-talented</quote>. Replaced <quote>dialect and</quote> with <quote>dialect, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon and</quote> with <quote>Weapon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 to 3</quote> with <quote>one to three</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>guild of magicians</quote> with <quote>Guild of Magicians</quote>. Replaced <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote> with <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the <cite>New Order</cite> series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases</quote> with <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his inanimate body increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>predictions increases</quote> with <quote>predictions increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>EQUIPMENT</quote> with <quote>Equipment</quote>. Replaced <quote>undertaken then</quote> with <quote>undertaken, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (New Order) series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>any other Special Items that</quote> with <quote>any other Special Items and Backpack Items that</quote>.</p>
 

-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>have to your</quote> with <quote>have on your</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added missing illustration of the Potion of Laumspur. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>the total sum of</quote> with <quote>the number of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines then</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventures</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventures</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote> in the <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</quote> section. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>have to your</quote> with <quote>have on your</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Removed <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added missing illustration of the Potion of Laumspur. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>the total sum of</quote> with <quote>the number of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines then</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventures</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventures</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote> in the <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</quote> section. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>

 
 

-       <p>(<a idref="kaiweapn">Kai Weapons</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword</quote> with <quote>magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>axe <quote>Alema</quote><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote>Axe <quote>Alema</quote><ch.thinspace/></quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="kaiweapn">Kai Weapons</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Removed <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword</quote> with <quote>magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>axe <quote>Alema</quote><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote>Axe <quote>Alema</quote><ch.thinspace/></quote>.</p>

 
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>to zero</quote> with <quote>to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead</quote>. Altered all italicised and emboldened text to standard type.</p>
 
 
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>to zero</quote> with <quote>to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead</quote>. Altered all italicised and emboldened text to standard type.</p>
 


@@ -6308,7 +6308,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect68">68</a>) Added <quote>If you possess <quote>Illuminatus</quote>, you will benefit from the additional combat bonus applicable to its unique properties.</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect69">69</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Removed the dashes around <quote><spell>Net</spell></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect70">70</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai rank of Grand</quote> with <quote>rank of Kai Grand</quote>. Replaced <quote>Mastery, and</quote> with <quote>Mastery and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect68">68</a>) Added <quote>If you possess <quote>Illuminatus</quote>, you will benefit from the additional combat bonus applicable to its unique properties.</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect69">69</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Removed the dashes around <quote><spell>Net</spell></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect70">70</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai rank of Grand</quote> with <quote>rank of Kai Grand</quote>. Replaced <quote>Mastery, and</quote> with <quote>Mastery and</quote>.</p>

-       <p>(<a idref="sect71">71</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Deleted <quote>as Backpack Items</quote> as the Mace is a Weapon.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect71">71</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Removed <quote>as Backpack Items</quote> as the Mace is a Weapon.</p>

        <p>(<a idref="sect72">72</a>) Replaced <quote>clump of Laumspur</quote> with <quote>clump of laumspur</quote>. Replaced <quote>Each potion</quote> with <quote>Each Potion of Laumspur</quote>. Replaced <quote>are now barely recognizable</quote> with <quote>is now barely recognizable</quote>. Replaced <quote>MS4417</quote> with <quote>MS<ch.nbsp/>4417</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect73">73</a>) Added <quote>If you wield the Kai Weapon <quote>Spawnsmite</quote> or <quote>Kaistar</quote>, you will benefit from the additional combat bonus applicable to its unique properties.</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect74">74</a>) Removed paragraph break from between <quote>incredulously.</quote> and <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Well</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>master songbird</quote> with <quote>Master Songbird</quote>. Replaced <quote>Mastery skills</quote> with <quote>Grand Master skills</quote>. Replaced <quote>some doin<ch.apos/> I</quote> with <quote>some doin<ch.apos/>, I</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect72">72</a>) Replaced <quote>clump of Laumspur</quote> with <quote>clump of laumspur</quote>. Replaced <quote>Each potion</quote> with <quote>Each Potion of Laumspur</quote>. Replaced <quote>are now barely recognizable</quote> with <quote>is now barely recognizable</quote>. Replaced <quote>MS4417</quote> with <quote>MS<ch.nbsp/>4417</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect73">73</a>) Added <quote>If you wield the Kai Weapon <quote>Spawnsmite</quote> or <quote>Kaistar</quote>, you will benefit from the additional combat bonus applicable to its unique properties.</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect74">74</a>) Removed paragraph break from between <quote>incredulously.</quote> and <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Well</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>master songbird</quote> with <quote>Master Songbird</quote>. Replaced <quote>Mastery skills</quote> with <quote>Grand Master skills</quote>. Replaced <quote>some doin<ch.apos/> I</quote> with <quote>some doin<ch.apos/>, I</quote>.</p>


@@ -6471,7 +6471,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect293">293</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Vorka horde alerts</quote> with <quote>Vorka horde alert</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect294">294</a>) Replaced <quote>the canopy of pine branches above have</quote> with <quote>the canopy of pine branches above has</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect296">296</a> Replaced <quote>The east road is called Knucklebone Lane and the west road is called Kettle Street.</quote> with <quote>The west road is called Knucklebone Lane and the east road is called Kettle Street.</quote> (cf. <a idref="sect257">Section 257</a>, where following Knucklebone Lane leads to the <em>west</em> wall of Duadon). Replaced <quote>Special Item</quote> with <quote>Backpack Item</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect293">293</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Vorka horde alerts</quote> with <quote>Vorka horde alert</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect294">294</a>) Replaced <quote>the canopy of pine branches above have</quote> with <quote>the canopy of pine branches above has</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect296">296</a> Replaced <quote>The east road is called Knucklebone Lane and the west road is called Kettle Street.</quote> with <quote>The west road is called Knucklebone Lane and the east road is called Kettle Street.</quote> (cf. <a idref="sect257">Section 257</a>, where following Knucklebone Lane leads to the <em>west</em> wall of Duadon). Replaced <quote>Special Item</quote> with <quote>Backpack Item</quote>.</p>

-       <p>(<a idref="sect297">297</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Deleted paragraph breaks before and after <quote><em>multiplied by</em></quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect297">297</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Removed paragraph breaks before and after <quote><em>multiplied by</em></quote>.</p>

        <p>(<a idref="sect299">299</a>) Added <quote>If you wield the Kai Weapon <quote>Spawnsmite</quote>, you will benefit from the additional combat bonus applicable to its unique properties.</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect300">300</a>) Replaced <quote>is a a great</quote> with <quote>is a great</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect302">302</a>) Replaced <quote>parallel with</quote> with <quote>parallel to</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect299">299</a>) Added <quote>If you wield the Kai Weapon <quote>Spawnsmite</quote>, you will benefit from the additional combat bonus applicable to its unique properties.</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect300">300</a>) Replaced <quote>is a a great</quote> with <quote>is a great</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect302">302</a>) Replaced <quote>parallel with</quote> with <quote>parallel to</quote>.</p>