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    &inclusion.brian.williams.bio.lw;
   </creator>
   <publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
-  <date class="publication"><year>2013</year><month>2</month><day>22</day></date>
+  <date class="publication"><year>2018</year><month>2</month><day>15</day></date>
   <description class="blurb">
    <p>For centuries the Shom<ch.apos/>zaa has lain incarcerated and forgotten in a granite prison located deep below the mountains of Bor. Now this terrifying beast has accidentally been set free, and its hunger for vengeance knows no bounds. With a horde of vile minions at its command, swiftly the Shom<ch.apos/>zaa enacts its sinister plan to destroy King Ryvin and the wondrous realm of the Drodarin dwarves.</p>
    <p>In <strong><cite>The Fall of Blood Mountain</cite></strong>, you must journey to the fabulous subterranean kingdom of the dwarves and attempt to save your ancient allies from the wrath of the Shom<ch.apos/>zaa. Will you succeed in your mission or will you succumb to the terrible powers of this ancient champion of Evil?</p>
        </illustration>
 
        <combat><enemy>Antah Wasps</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">40</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">30</enemy-attribute></combat>
-       <p>These insects are immune to all psychic attacks.</p>
+       <p>These insects are immune to all psychic attacks. If you possess <quote>Raumas</quote>, you will benefit from the additional combat bonus applicable to its unique properties.</p>
        <choice idref="sect174">If you win the combat, <link-text>turn to 174</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
      <data>
        <p>With care you touch the iron plaque, making sure that your fingers do not come in contact with any residues of corrosive, and gradually two lines of runic symbols take shape in your mind<ch.apos/>s eye. The use of your improved Discipline reveals the warning that once was engraved upon this block of iron:</p>
        <signpost>
-        <line>POISONOUS GAS</line>
-        <line>DO NOT ENTER</line>
+        <line>Poisonous Gas</line>
+        <line>Do Not Enter</line>
        </signpost>
        <choice idref="sect204">If you choose to ignore this warning and attempt to enter the passage, <link-text>turn to 204</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect220">If you choose to heed the warning, you can continue along the main tunnel by <link-text>turning to 220</link-text>.</choice>
     </data>
    </section>
 
-   <!-- Backmatter -->
    <section class="backmatter" id="map">
     <meta><title>The Kingdom of Bor and Surrounding Territories</title></meta>
 
        <p>(<a idref="sect29">29</a>) Replaced <quote>You dare not wait for the advancing horde to close in for, despite your formidable fighting skills, this enemy</quote> with <quote>Despite your formidable fighting skills, you dare not wait for the advancing horde to close in, for this enemy</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect31">31</a>) Replaced <quote>the first wave of the Shom<ch.apos/>zaa horde reach</quote> with <quote>the first wave of the Shom<ch.apos/>zaa horde reaches</quote>. Replaced <quote>War-Thanes</quote> with <quote>War-thanes</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Replaced <quote>agarashi</quote> with <quote>Agarashi</quote>. Replaced <quote>Bow, <em>and</em></quote> with <quote>Bow <em>and</em></quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Elementalism, and</quote> with <quote>Elementalism and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>. Replaced <quote>encircles your basket</quote> with <quote>encircle your basket</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>. Replaced <quote>encircles your basket</quote> with <quote>encircle your basket</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Added <quote>If you possess <quote>Raumas</quote>, you will benefit from the additional combat bonus applicable to its unique properties.</quote></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Removed the dash preceding <quote><spell>Strength</spell></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect35">35</a>) Replaced <quote>irridescent</quote> with <quote>iridescent</quote>. Replaced <quote>agarashi</quote> with <quote>Agarashi</quote>. Replaced <quote>senses, and the lights of this glowing gemstone, both</quote> with <quote>senses and the lights of this glowing gemstone both</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>agarashi</quote> with <quote>Agarashi</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>clang</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>clang</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect134">134</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect135">135</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect138">138</a>) Replaced <quote>POISONOUS GAS DO NOT ENTER</quote> with <quote>Poisonous Gas Do Not Enter</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect143">143</a>) Replaced <quote>War-Thanes</quote> with <quote>War-thanes</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect144">144</a>) Replaced <quote>approriate</quote> with <quote>appropriate</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect145">145</a>) Replaced <quote>your backpack</quote> with <quote>your Backpack</quote>.</p>