Book 28 sect 18 erratum

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-       <p>As the carriage draws level with your horse, you leap from the saddle and scramble onto the roof. You are drawing your Kai Weapon from its sheath when one of the two remaining monsters lashes out at you with its razor-sharp talons. You shield your face with your free arm, but its cruel claws slash your unarmoured limb: lose 4 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. You must now fight them.</p>
+       <p>As the carriage draws level with your horse, you leap from the saddle and scramble onto the roof. You are drawing your Kai Weapon from its sheath when one of the remaining monsters lashes out at you with its razor-sharp talons. You shield your face with your free arm, but its cruel claws slash your unarmoured limb: lose 4 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. You must now fight them.</p>
 
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        <p>(<a idref="sect14">14</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>you look at each of the people in turn who have gathered</quote> with <quote>you look in turn at each person who is gathered</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect16">16</a>) Replaced <quote>They lead</quote> with <quote>It leads</quote> respecting the robbers<ch.apos/> trail.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect17">17</a>) Replaced <quote>Magnakai Disciplines of Nexus and Healing</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Disciplines of Nexus and Curing</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect18">18</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect18">18</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>one of the two remaining</quote> with <quote>one of the remaining</quote> as there are still three of them.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect19">19</a>) Replaced <quote>densely packed</quote> with <quote>densely-packed</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect22">22</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect24">24</a>) Replaced <quote>steam cannon</quote> with <quote>steam-cannon</quote>. Replaced <quote>the enemy have a</quote> with <quote>the enemy has a</quote>.</p>