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<p>Gradually the pain in your lungs becomes unbearable and you exhale the last of your breath. As they fill with water, you slip into a state of unconsciousness from which you will never be revived.</p>
- <p>Sadly, your life and your quest end here.</p>
+ <deadend>Sadly, your life and your quest end here.</deadend>
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<p>The arrow strikes you in the centre of your forehead and an explosion of white light engulfs your vision. For a few fleeting moments you feel yourself tumbling backwards into a deep, dark abyss. Then all sensation vanishes and you cease to be.</p>
- <p>Tragically, your life and your mission end here in the catacombs of Fort Vlau.</p>
+ <deadend>Tragically, your life and your mission end here in the catacombs of Fort Vlau.</deadend>
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- <p>The searing flames engulf your vision, and suddenly you feel yourself tumbling backwards into a deep, dark abyss. An enemy shell has exploded in front of your position and you have caught the full force of the blast. Mercifully, your death is painless and instantaneous, but your life and your mission end here in Fort Vlau.</p>
+ <p>The searing flames engulf your vision, and suddenly you feel yourself tumbling backwards into a deep, dark abyss. An enemy shell has exploded in front of your position and you have caught the full force of the blast.</p>
+ <deadend>Mercifully, your death is painless and instantaneous, but your life and your mission end here in Fort Vlau.</deadend>
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- <p>The instant you hit the ground, a flash of white light engulfs your vision and you feel yourself tumbling backwards into a deep, dark abyss. The fall has rendered you unconscious and, sadly, you will never regain your senses. The ghastly ice creatures bear down on you and ruthlessly they tear you limb from limb. Mercifully, your death is painless and instantaneous, but your life and your mission end here.</p>
+ <p>The instant you hit the ground, a flash of white light engulfs your vision and you feel yourself tumbling backwards into a deep, dark abyss. The fall has rendered you unconscious and, sadly, you will never regain your senses. The ghastly ice creatures bear down on you and ruthlessly they tear you limb from limb.</p>
+ <deadend>Mercifully, your death is painless and instantaneous, but your life and your mission end here.</deadend>
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<p>(<a idref="sect220">220</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Replaced <quote>you look at each of the people who are gathered here</quote> with <quote>you look at each of the persons gathered here</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect222">222</a>) Replaced <quote>Between these</quote> with <quote>From between their</quote>. Replaced <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>add +1 to</quote> with <quote>add 1 to</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect226">226</a>) Split the final sentence into its own paragraph for consistency.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect228">228</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect229">229</a>) Replaced <quote>dwarves and</quote> with <quote>dwarves, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>. Replaced <quote>Astrology, and</quote> with <quote>Astrology and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect233">233</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kirusami</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-chaian">Kirusami</foreign></quote>. Replaced <quote>Spear), and</quote> with <quote>Spear) and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect265">265</a>) Replaced <quote>as a Special Item which you store in your backpack</quote> with <quote>as a Special Item</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect266">266</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>flagtower</quote> with <quote>flag-tower</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect270">270</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote>. Replaced <quote>well-founded</quote> with <quote>well founded</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>. Replaced <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect271">271</a>) Replaced <quote>life and your mission ends</quote> with <quote>life and your mission end</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect271">271</a>) Replaced <quote>life and your mission ends</quote> with <quote>life and your mission end</quote>. Split the final sentence into its own paragraph for consistency.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect272">272</a>) Replaced <quote>gutteral</quote> with <quote>guttural</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect275">275</a>) Replaced <quote>ribcage</quote> with <quote>rib cage</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect276">276</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>flagtower</quote> with <quote>flag-tower</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>.</p>
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