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- <line>Text copyright <ch.copy/> Joe Dever.</line>
- <line>Illustrations copyright <ch.copy/> Brian Williams.</line>
+ <line>Text copyright <ch.copy/> 1998 Joe Dever.</line>
+ <line>Illustrations copyright <ch.copy/> 1998 Brian Williams.</line>
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- <p>It is early summer in the year MS 5084 and you are a Grand Master of the New Order of the Kai, the warrior <ch.eacute/>lite of Sommerlund.</p>
+ <p>It is early summer in the year MS<ch.nbsp/>5085 and you are a Grand Master of the New Order of the Kai, the warrior <ch.eacute/>lite of Sommerlund.</p>
<p>Thirty-five years ago, the First Order of the Kai was massacred by the Darklords of Helgedad, a host of powerful creatures sent by the evil God Naar to destroy the world of Magnamund. Lone Wolf, the supreme leader of your illustrious fighting order, was the only survivor of their attack upon the Kai. As a young initiate he stood amidst the burning wreckage of the old Kai Monastery and vowed to avenge the slaughter of his comrades. Twenty-five years later he kept his pledge when alone he infiltrated the foul domain of the Darklords and destroyed their infernal city of Helgedad, the base of their evil power.</p>
<p>With the destruction of Helgedad, chaos befell the Darkland armies who had, until then, been poised to conquer all Magnamund. Quickly their disorder escalated into a mutinous civil war, allowing the Freeland Alliance armies of Magnamund time in which to recover and launch a successful counter-offensive. Against all odds, a swift and total victory was secured over the feuding armies of evil.</p>
- <p>Following the demise of the Darklords, peace reigned in your homeland of Sommerlund. Under the direction of Lone Wolf, the ruined Monastery of the Kai was rebuilt and restored to its former glory and a New Order was established. You are one of this new generation of Kai recruits. You were born in Sommerlund in the year MS 5063, during the time of the war against the Darklords. When you were seven years old you were sent by your father to the Kai Monastery. There, under the tutelage of Lone Wolf, you developed your martial skills and honed the special Kai abilities which lay dormant within you. Your skills were nurtured and sharpened to perfection by years of study and rigorous training. Your exceptional talents helped you to master all of the Kai and Magnakai Disciplines, and you rose swiftly through the ranks of the New Order to become one of only five who now hold the high rank of Kai Grand Master. It is an achievement that has brought great honour upon you and your family.</p>
+ <p>Following the demise of the Darklords, peace reigned in your homeland of Sommerlund. Under the direction of Lone Wolf, the ruined Monastery of the Kai was rebuilt and restored to its former glory and a New Order was established. You are one of this new generation of Kai recruits. You were born in Sommerlund in the year MS<ch.nbsp/>5063, during the time of the war against the Darklords. When you were seven years old you were sent by your father to the Kai Monastery. There, under the tutelage of Lone Wolf, you developed your martial skills and honed the special Kai abilities which lay dormant within you. Your skills were nurtured and sharpened to perfection by years of study and rigorous training. Your exceptional talents helped you to master all of the Kai and Magnakai Disciplines, and you rose swiftly through the ranks of the New Order to become one of only five who now hold the high rank of Kai Grand Master. It is an achievement that has brought great honour upon you and your family.</p>
- <p>In the year MS 5077, your skill and courage were put to the test when an attack was launched upon the Kai Monastery during Lone Wolf<ch.apos/>s absence. By means of a Shadow Gate (an astral corridor between the physical world of Sommerlund and the many ethereal domains which lie beyond it), Naar sent forth a host of dragon-creatures to besiege the monastery and lay waste to all Sommerlund. He had chosen his time well, yet his evil plan was thwarted by the tenacious defence that you and your fellow warriors maintained until the siege was raised by Lone Wolf and the King<ch.apos/>s Army of Sommerlund.<footref id="tssf-1" idref="tssf-1-foot"/></p>
+ <p>In the year MS<ch.nbsp/>5077, your skill and courage were put to the test when an attack was launched upon the Kai Monastery during Lone Wolf<ch.apos/>s absence. By means of a Shadow Gate (an astral corridor between the physical world of Sommerlund and the many ethereal domains which lie beyond it), Naar sent forth a host of dragon-creatures to besiege the monastery and lay waste to all Sommerlund. He had chosen his time well, yet his evil plan was thwarted by the tenacious defence that you and your fellow warriors maintained until the siege was raised by Lone Wolf and the King<ch.apos/>s Army of Sommerlund.<footref id="tssf-1" idref="tssf-1-foot"/></p>
<p>During the seven years since the defeat of his minions, Naar has sought vengeance upon the Kai. He commands many agents of evil upon Magnamund, and they wait quietly in the shadows for the chance to serve their fell master.</p>
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<footnote id="discplnz-2-foot" idref="discplnz-2">
- <p>The rules in the Mongoose Publishing editions state that the bonus for Grand Weaponmastery with Bow is 5. Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
+ <p>The rules in the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions state that the bonus for Grand Weaponmastery with Bow is 5. Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
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<footnote id="discplnz-3-foot" idref="discplnz-3">
<p>If you are a New Order Kai who has attained the rank of Sun Knight, you will now benefit from improvements to the following Grand Master Disciplines:</p>
<dl class="paragraphed">
<dt>Grand Weaponmastery</dt>
- <dd><p>Sun Knights with this Discipline are able to wield two-handed weapons (i.e. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, and Spear) with full effect, using only one hand.</p></dd>
+ <dd><p>Sun Knights with this Discipline are able to wield two-handed weapons (i.e. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, and Spear) with full effect using only one hand.</p></dd>
<dt>Grand Pathsmanship</dt>
<dd><p>Kai Sun Knights with this skill are able to repel at will all normal-sized insects within a radius of three yards. The range and number of insects so affected increase considerably as a Grand Master rises in rank.</p></dd>
<dt>Deliverance</dt>
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<p>Gradually the pain in your lungs becomes unbearable and you exhale the last of your breath. As they fill with water, you slip into a state of unconsciousness from which you will never be revived.</p>
- <p>Sadly, your life and your quest end here.</p>
+ <deadend>Sadly, your life and your quest end here.</deadend>
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<p>The arrow strikes you in the centre of your forehead and an explosion of white light engulfs your vision. For a few fleeting moments you feel yourself tumbling backwards into a deep, dark abyss. Then all sensation vanishes and you cease to be.</p>
- <p>Tragically, your life and your mission end here in the catacombs of Fort Vlau.</p>
+ <deadend>Tragically, your life and your mission end here in the catacombs of Fort Vlau.</deadend>
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- <p>The searing flames engulf your vision, and suddenly you feel yourself tumbling backwards into a deep, dark abyss. An enemy shell has exploded in front of your position and you have caught the full force of the blast. Mercifully, your death is painless and instantaneous, but your life and your mission end here in Fort Vlau.</p>
+ <p>The searing flames engulf your vision, and suddenly you feel yourself tumbling backwards into a deep, dark abyss. An enemy shell has exploded in front of your position and you have caught the full force of the blast.</p>
+ <deadend>Mercifully, your death is painless and instantaneous, but your life and your mission end here in Fort Vlau.</deadend>
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- <p><quote>I intend to make a gift of it to you, my Lord. It is fitting that a Kai should possess this weapon. I pray that one day you shall be able to put it to its proper purpose<ch.emdash/>to use this missile to slay the tyrant lord of Bhanar.</quote></p>
+ <p><quote>I intend to make a gift of it to you, my lord. It is fitting that a Kai should possess this weapon. I pray that one day you shall be able to put it to its proper purpose<ch.emdash/>to use this missile to slay the tyrant lord of Bhanar.</quote></p>
<p>Reverently he hands the arrow to you and you accept it gratefully.</p>
<p>Record this Arrow of Atonement as a Special Item. You must discard another item if you already carry the maximum number permissible.</p>
<choice idref="sect7">To continue, <link-text>turn to 7</link-text>.</choice>
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- <p>The instant you hit the ground, a flash of white light engulfs your vision and you feel yourself tumbling backwards into a deep, dark abyss. The fall has rendered you unconscious and, sadly, you will never regain your senses. The ghastly ice creatures bear down on you and ruthlessly they tear you limb from limb. Mercifully, your death is painless and instantaneous, but your life and your mission end here.</p>
+ <p>The instant you hit the ground, a flash of white light engulfs your vision and you feel yourself tumbling backwards into a deep, dark abyss. The fall has rendered you unconscious and, sadly, you will never regain your senses. The ghastly ice creatures bear down on you and ruthlessly they tear you limb from limb.</p>
+ <deadend>Mercifully, your death is painless and instantaneous, but your life and your mission end here.</deadend>
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<p>(<a idref="title">Title Page</a>) Replaced <quote><strong>THE HUNGER OF SEJANOZ</strong></quote> with <quote><strong><cite>The Hunger of Sejanoz</cite></strong>,</quote>. Replaced <quote>Great Lissanian Plain</quote> with <quote>Great Lissan Plain</quote>. Replaced <quote>news of the invasion</quote> with <quote>news of an invasion</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story so Far<ch.ellips/></a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Free Alliance</quote> with <quote>Freeland Alliance</quote>. Replaced <quote>monastery of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Monastery of the Kai</quote>. Replaced <quote>southern Magnamund</quote> with <quote>Southern Magnamund</quote>. Replaced <quote>despatched</quote> with <quote>dispatched</quote>. Replaced <quote>autocracy of Bhanar</quote> with <quote>Autocracy of Bhanar</quote>. Replaced <quote>southern Dammerdon mountains</quote> with <quote>Southern Dammerdon Mountains</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifact</quote> with <quote>artefact</quote>. Replaced <quote>feted</quote> with <quote>f<ch.ecirc/>ted</quote>. Replaced <quote>prey to Ishir</quote> with <quote>pray to Ishir</quote>. Replaced <quote>the First Order of the Kai were</quote> with <quote>the First Order of the Kai was</quote>. Replaced <quote>Chai capital</quote> with <quote>Chaian capital</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story so Far<ch.ellips/></a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Free Alliance</quote> with <quote>Freeland Alliance</quote>. Replaced <quote>monastery of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Monastery of the Kai</quote>. Replaced <quote>southern Magnamund</quote> with <quote>Southern Magnamund</quote>. Replaced <quote>despatched</quote> with <quote>dispatched</quote>. Replaced <quote>autocracy of Bhanar</quote> with <quote>Autocracy of Bhanar</quote>. Replaced <quote>southern Dammerdon mountains</quote> with <quote>Southern Dammerdon Mountains</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifact</quote> with <quote>artefact</quote>. Replaced <quote>feted</quote> with <quote>f<ch.ecirc/>ted</quote>. Replaced <quote>prey to Ishir</quote> with <quote>pray to Ishir</quote>. Replaced <quote>the First Order of the Kai were</quote> with <quote>the First Order of the Kai was</quote>. Replaced <quote>Chai capital</quote> with <quote>Chaian capital</quote>. Replaced <quote>MS5084</quote> with <quote>MS<ch.nbsp/>5085</quote>. Replaced <quote>MS5063</quote> with <quote>MS<ch.nbsp/>5063</quote>. Replaced <quote>MS5077</quote> with <quote>MS<ch.nbsp/>5077</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote>. Removed <quote>on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons and</quote> with <quote>weapons, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Books 21<ch.endash/>26</quote> with <quote>Books 21<ch.endash/>27</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="discplnz">New Order Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>symbols and</quote> with <quote>symbols, and</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom battle magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>individual (or combinations of) elements that are available,</quote> with <quote>individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof,</quote>. Replaced <quote>remove or</quote> with <quote>remove, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>dialect and</quote> with <quote>dialect, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon and</quote> with <quote>Weapon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 to 3</quote> with <quote>one to three</quote>. Replaced <quote>guild of magicians</quote> with <quote>Guild of Magicians</quote>. Replaced <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote> with <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the <cite>New Order</cite> series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote>Fire and</quote> with <quote>Fire, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases</quote> with <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his in animate body increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>predictions increases</quote> with <quote>predictions increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>EQUIPMENT</quote> with <quote>Equipment</quote>. Replaced <quote>undertaken then</quote> with <quote>undertaken, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (New Order) series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure, which is called: <cite>The Storms of Chai</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>any other Special Items that</quote> with <quote>any other Special Items and Backpack Items that</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>the total sum of</quote> with <quote>the number of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines then</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventures</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventures</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote> in the <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</quote> section. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>the total sum of</quote> with <quote>the number of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines then</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventures</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventures</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote> in the <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</quote> section. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
<p>(<a idref="kaiweapn">Kai Weapons</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword</quote> with <quote>magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>axe <quote>Alema</quote></quote> with <quote>Axe <quote>Alema</quote></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect220">220</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Replaced <quote>you look at each of the people who are gathered here</quote> with <quote>you look at each of the persons gathered here</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect222">222</a>) Replaced <quote>Between these</quote> with <quote>From between their</quote>. Replaced <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>add +1 to</quote> with <quote>add 1 to</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect226">226</a>) Split the final sentence into its own paragraph for consistency.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect228">228</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect229">229</a>) Replaced <quote>dwarves and</quote> with <quote>dwarves, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>. Replaced <quote>Astrology, and</quote> with <quote>Astrology and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect233">233</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kirusami</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-chaian">Kirusami</foreign></quote>. Replaced <quote>Spear), and</quote> with <quote>Spear) and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect262">262</a>) Replaced <quote>Magnakai Disciplines of Nexus and Healing</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Disciplines of Nexus and Curing</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect265">265</a>) Replaced <quote>as a Special Item which you store in your backpack</quote> with <quote>as a Special Item</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect266">266</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>flagtower</quote> with <quote>flag-tower</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) Replaced <quote>my Lord</quote> with <quote>my lord</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect270">270</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote>. Replaced <quote>well-founded</quote> with <quote>well founded</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>. Replaced <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect271">271</a>) Replaced <quote>life and your mission ends</quote> with <quote>life and your mission end</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect271">271</a>) Replaced <quote>life and your mission ends</quote> with <quote>life and your mission end</quote>. Split the final sentence into its own paragraph for consistency.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect272">272</a>) Replaced <quote>gutteral</quote> with <quote>guttural</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect275">275</a>) Replaced <quote>ribcage</quote> with <quote>rib cage</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect276">276</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>flagtower</quote> with <quote>flag-tower</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>.</p>
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