fixing illustration dimensions

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 $Id$
 $Log$
+Revision 1.3  2005/03/26 16:22:12  jonathan.blake
+Adding Illustrator Transcription credits that went missing since
+The Masters of Darkness
+
+Revision 1.2  2005/03/10 18:21:51  jonathan.blake
+Removed link to old staff email address.
+
 Revision 1.1  2004/11/09 06:47:15  jonathan.blake
 Initial Freepository revision
 
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       <dl>
        <dt>Transcription</dt>
         <dd>Matthew Reynolds</dd>
+       <dt>Illustration Transcription</dt>
+        <dd>Jonathan Blake</dd>
        <dt>XML</dt>
         <dd>Jonathan Blake<br />Jeff Dougan</dd>
        <dt>Action Charts</dt>
@@ -3141,7 +3150,7 @@ Changes made:
      <meta><title>192</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-      <p>Using all your stealth and natural Kai agility, you inch your way up the rocky wall of the cavern towards the window-like gap. Your ascent goes undetected by the Vazhag guards until, by mischance, your foot dislodges a pebble and sends it tumbling down to land, with a hollow thok, upon the head of a snoozing war-dog. The dog erupts with a savage howl and hurls itself bodily at the rock wall.</p>
+      <p>Using all your stealth and natural Kai agility, you inch your way up the rocky wall of the cavern towards the window-like gap. Your ascent goes undetected by the Vazhag guards until, by mischance, your foot dislodges a pebble and sends it tumbling down to land, with a hollow <onomatopoeia>thok</onomatopoeia>, upon the head of a snoozing war-dog. The dog erupts with a savage howl and hurls itself bodily at the rock wall.</p>
       <p>Its frenzied reaction alerts the Vazhag guards and, to your horror, you see them produce bows which they load hastily and aim at your back. Throwing caution aside, you climb towards the distant gap as quickly as your aching fingers will allow, hoping to reach it before the rat-men can open fire.</p>
       <choice idref="sect326">If you possess Kai-alchemy, <link-text>turn to 326</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect145">If you do not possess this Discipline, <link-text>turn to 145</link-text>.</choice>
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      <meta><title>225</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-      <p>You dig your heels into the muddy shore and take aim at the leading Vazhag. It sees you and, for an instant, its red eyes widen with horror as your shaft speeds towards its snout. With a hollow <quote>thok</quote> the arrow skewers the beast&apos;s scrawny throat, lifts it bodily from the bridge and sends it toppling end-over-end into the lake.</p>
+      <p>You dig your heels into the muddy shore and take aim at the leading Vazhag. It sees you and, for an instant, its red eyes widen with horror as your shaft speeds towards its snout. With a hollow <onomatopoeia>thok</onomatopoeia> the arrow skewers the beast&apos;s scrawny throat, lifts it bodily from the bridge and sends it toppling end-over-end into the lake.</p>
       <p>Undeterred, the remaining Vazhag come thundering off the drawbridge and on to the platform. With the magic curses of their leader echoing in their ears, they leap to the muddy shore and charge straight at you, their rusty weapons glinting dully in the light of the cave.</p>
       <combat><enemy>Vazhag</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">23</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">23</enemy-attribute></combat>
       <choice idref="sect142">If you win this combat, <link-text>turn to 142</link-text>.</choice>
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      <meta><title>Introduction</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-      <p>We have taken our unique opportunity to correct errors and to enforce a standard of English usage. We list our changes here. If you see anything that needs correction, please contact the <a href="mailto:staff@projectaon.org">Project Aon Staff</a>.</p>
+      <p>We have taken our unique opportunity to correct errors and to enforce a standard of English usage. We list our changes here. If you see anything that needs correction, please <a href="&link.staff.contact;">contact</a> the Project Aon Staff.</p>
      </data>
     </section>
 
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        <li>Illustration XVIII (<a idref="sect295">Section 295</a>)</li>
        <li>Illustration XIX (<a idref="sect325">Section 325</a>)</li>
        <li>Illustration XX (<a idref="sect345">Section 345</a>)</li>
-       <li><a idref="action">Action Chart</a></li>
        <li><a idref="map">The Dark Realm of Ruel</a></li>
+       <li><a idref="action">Action Chart</a></li>
       </ul>
      </data>
     </section>