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+The Game Rules #1: On pages 6 and 7 you will find an Action Chart
re-word
+The Game Rules #2: For ease of use during play it is recommended that you photocopy these pages.
remove
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+The Game Rules #5: in the Random Number Table -> on the Random Number Table
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+Equipment #3: The maximum . . . two
italicise "two"
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+Equipment #6: three missile weapons
italicise "three"
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+Rules for Combat #5: A summary of the close combat rules appears on the page after the Random Number Table.
remove? reword?
+Rules for Combat #6:
maybe clarify that you can evade before a combat without actually losing any EP?
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+2 #1: machine pistol -> Machine Pistol
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+7 #1: Bottle of Bourbon
bold
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+16 #2:
finish the combat before moving on
20 #1:
requires a footnote: 'This is the correct answer to the keypad puzzle in Section 152.'
+20 #2: click
onomatopoeia?
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+22 #1: map -> Map
and link to map
+23 #1: C'mon you two -> C'mon, you two
+23 #2: front line . . . open -> front line . . . opens
+23 #3: Kate, and takes -> Kate and she takes
26 #1:
choice 2 should lead to section 111 (link broken)
+26 #2: shotgun -> Shotgun
+26 #3: turn to Ill -> turn to 111
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+29 #1: mark the Salt
Salt is in bold
+30 #1: indian -> Indian
also in Caption, er
+31 #1: File & Flexible Saw
bold
+32 #1:
complete the combat before moving on
+34 #1: alsatian hounds -> Alsatian hounds
+36 #1: under way -> underway
+38 #1: head-dress -> headdress
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+48 #2: dislodgng -> dislodging
+50 #1: sleep (if . . . ). -> sleep. (If . . . .)
+55 #1: thunderbird -> Thunderbird
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+59 #1: extinguisher -> Extinguisher
60 #1:
option 1 should link to Section 331 (link broken)
+60 #2: Current Stealth -> current Stealth
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+64 #1:
complete the combat before moving on
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+66 #1: Fire Extinguisher
bold
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+68 #1: 100 miles -> one hundred miles
+72 #1: 200 yards -> two hundred yards
+72 #2: 1/16
as one character
+72 #3: shooting skill -> Shooting skill
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+73 #2:
Move the stuff about the Action Chart from paratheses to a new paragraph at the bottom?
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+75 #1: sting -> stings
maybe?
+77 #1: motor cycle -> motorcycle
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+81 #1: scar- faced -> scar-faced
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+87 #1: shotgun -> Shotgun
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+89 #1: and make a note of your total in the margin of your Action Chart.
remove
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+94 #3: sick a' washin' -> sick o' washin'
as it's "sick of washing"?
+94 #4: shouting :'Help -> shouting: 'Help
98 #1:
requires a footnote: 'This is the correct answer to the keypad puzzle in Section 255.'
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+101 #2: 200 yards -> two hundred yards
+101 #3: 1/16
as one character
+105 #1: course," -> course,'
+107 #1: will seal -> could seal
maybe?
+111 #1: shotgun -> Shotgun
+113 #1: If, during your close combat with the rabid dog, you lost 4 or more ENDURANCE points, -> If you lost 4 or more ENDURANCE points during your close combat with the rabid dog
+115 #1: convoy you -> convoy, you
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+119 #1: Binoculars & Rope & Fire Extinguisher
ne - bold; er - put in CAPS
+120 #1: CARSWELL AIR FORCE BASE
Small CAPS
+122 #1: gutteral -> guttural
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+128 #1: alsatians -> Alsatians
+131 #1: 200 yards -> two hundred yards
+131 #2: 1/16
as one character
+135 #1: 100 -> one hundred
+138 #1: front line . . . open -> front line . . . opens
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+139 #1: both . . . and . . . not be -> neither . . . nor . . . be
+143 #1: Rifle ( with -> Rifle (with
+143 #2: Binoculars & Rope & Fire Extinguisher
ne - bold; er - put in CAPS
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+155 #1: indians -> Indians
+156 #1: 110
followed by the small o indicating degrees
+156 #2: its toll of -> its toll on
+156 #3: tub of Salt
Salt in bold
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+158 #2:
Move the stuff about the Action Chart from paratheses to a new paragraph at the bottom?
+159 #1: shotgun -> Shotgun
+162 #1: once sophisticated -> once-sophisticated
maybe?
+162 #2: Ammo pouch -> Ammo Pouch
+163 #1:
Both parenthical statements in the equipment list should be in Italics
+163 #2:
put Backpack Items in CAPS
+165 #1: bus's -> bus'
cf. Uncle Jonas'
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+169 #3: dust-storm -> duststorm
as in 100
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+175 #1: Cigarette Lighter & H.E. Grenade & Compass & Gold Nugget
bold
+175 #2:
Put bold items in ALL CAPS
+176 #1:
Add the Shotgun to your Action Chart?
+176 #2: shotgun -> Shotgun
+178 #1: 100 -> one hundred
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+182 #1: Erath country -> Erath County
maybe?
+182 #2: hours sleep -> hours' sleep
+186 #1: flexible wire saw -> Flexible Wire Saw
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+189 #2: womped -> whomped
not sure about this
I agree with Ingo.
+195 #1: hellava -> helluva
as in 96
+196 #1: Telescope & Binoculars
bold
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+208 #1: shotgun -> Shotgun
+208 #2: Here Cal -> Here, Cal
+209 #1: kind all -> kind, all
+209 #2: hunting knife -> Hunting Knife
+209 #3: indian -> Indian
2x
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+214 #1: shotgun -> Shotgun
+216 #1: Mirror & Telescope & File
bold
+219 #1: mixture, are -> mixture are
+219 #2: Fire Extinguisher
bold
+220 #1: and 'll -> and'll
+220 #2: and 'll -> and'll
not sure about this
+221 #1: and injury and -> and injury, and
+222 #1: hours sleep -> hours' sleep
+223 #1: goggles -> Goggles
+227 #1: tanker and you -> tanker, and you
+227 #2: v-shaped -> V-shaped
+227 #3: wheels an' -> wheels, an'
+228 #1: death cry -> death-cry
+228 #2: (3) ->
3
Maybe? Check the QUESTIONS section.
+229 #1: thud
encode as onomatepoeia?
+229 #2: motor cycles -> motorcycles
+229 #3: C'mon you -> C'mon, you
+229 #4: breathlessly:'Set -> breathlessly: 'Set
+229 #5: front line . . . open -> front line . . . opens
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+232 #1: alsatians -> Alsatians
+233 #1:
1/16 as one character
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+239 #1: Flexible Saw & Signal Flare
bold
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+247 #1: posi- tions -> positions
occurs on a line-break.
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+251 #2: 'Taint -> 'Tain't
+253 #1:
Split the conversation into a new paragraph for each speaker?
+255 #1:
standard puzzle footnote req'd
+257 #2: Mrnmm -> Mmmm
just a wild guess
+258 #1: in the body -> in the torso
maybe? "in the body" seems an odd phrase
+259 #2:
You must finish the combat before turning to the next section.
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+260 #1: later a column -> later, a column
+260 #2: front line . . . open -> front line . . . opens
i.e. there is no "font line" typo
+260 #3: Kate, and takes -> Kate and she takes
+260 #4: stealth skill -> Stealth skill
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+265 #1: a weapon -> a missile weapon
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+270 #2: Comanche county -> Comanche County
I think?
+273 #1:
Split the conversation into a new paragraph for each speaker?
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+276 #1: grenade -> Grenade
+276 #2:
Erase the Granade from your Action Chart.
+279 #1: leave your -> leave, your
+280 #1:
Split the conversation into a new paragraph for each speaker?
+286 #1:
You must finish the combat before turning to the next section.
+288 #1: 100 -> one hundred
+288 #2: auto-wreck -> auto wreck
as in 102, 135, 243, 308, and even in 288 itself
+289 #1: a weapon -> a missile weapon
+294 #1: you boy? -> you, boy?
+295 #1: headin' but -> headin', but
+297 #1: on to the freeway -> onto the freeway
+298 #1: indians -> Indians
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+300 #1: indian -> Indian
2x
+303 #1: Vipers judging -> Vipers, judging
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+303 #3: Mirror & Telescope
bold
+303 #4:
Put bold items in ALL CAPS
+305 #1: you' boy -> you, boy
+305 #2: fininshed -> finished
+306 #1: close combat skill -> CLOSE COMBAT SKILL
Small CAPS
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+309 #1: alsatians -> Alsatians
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+321 #1: emerge on to -> emerge onto
+321 #2: Rope & Goggles & Solar Torch
bold
+321 #3:
Put bold items in ALL CAPS
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+334 #1: leave your -> leave, your
+336 #1: letters, -> letters:
+336 #2: hunting knife -> Hunting Knife
+337 #1: crowd grow -> crowd grows
+338 #1: Rickenbaker -> Rickenbacker
as in 68, 119, 143
+338 #2: bushwacked -> bushwhacked
+342 #1: fusilage -> fuselage
347 #1:
choice 1 should lead to Section 11 (link broken)
+347 #2: Binoculars & Telescope
bold
+347 #3: turn to ll -> turn to 11
+350 #1: anger you -> anger, you
+350 #2: abducted: -> abducted;
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Questions
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+The errata in 122 and 305 are already mentioned in the xml file.
+Moreover, the xml file mentions '"gasolene" should be "gasoline"'. I
+disagree. "gasolene" is also a correct spelling.
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+Capitalize "alsatian(s)"?
+Capitalize "indian(s)"?
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+ammunition vs. Ammunition
+Backpack item(s) vs. Backpack Item(s)
+close combat weapon(s) vs. Close Combat Weapon(s)
+missile weapon vs. Missile Weapon
+rear view vs. rear-view
+() vs. [] for close combat weapon stats
+RNT+skill options; should they give options of 0-x or 3-x (or 6-x when two
+skills are added together)?
+Should we footnote each time you fire a round of ammunition to adjust your
+Action Chart accordingly (a lot of footnotes)? Section 180 actually contains
+text to erase a round of ammo, so the text from there could be adapted
+accprdingly for the footnote.
+de-activate vs. deactivate
+pain killers vs. painkillers
+G-12 vs. G12 [so: I'm afraid I don't know much about guns!]
+V-8 vs. V8 [so: I'm afraid I don't really know much about cars either!]
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