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Corrections

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toc
title
dedicate
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acknwlg
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acknwldg
coming
tssf
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The Story So Far . . .: left-handed -> Left-handed
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The Story So Far . . .: right-handed -> Right-handed
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The Story So Far . . . #1: left-handed -> Left-handed
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The Story So Far . . . #2: right-handed -> Right-handed
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The Story So Far . . . #3: new-found -> newfound
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The Story So Far . . . #4: left-handed and Old Kingdom magic -> Left-handed and Old Kingdom magic
as in lw14-16
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The Story So Far . . . #5: right-handed magic -> Right-handed magic
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The Story So Far . . . #6: north-east -> northeast
gamerulz
discplnz
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. . . Disciplines #1: left-handed magic -> Left-handed magic
2x
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. . . Disciplines #2: gods -> Gods
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. . . Disciplines #3: COMBAT SKILL is reduced -> ENDURANCE is reduced
Reported by majestic@cats.ucsc.edu
powers
equipmnt
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Equipment #1: arrow -> Arrow
in many places.
cmbtrulz
lorecrcl
levels
imprvdsc
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Improved . . . Disciplines #1: levels of Kai Grand Mastery you will -> levels of Kai Grand Mastery, you will [so: in harmony with the imprvdsc pages from books 14-18)
kaiwisdm
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. . . Wisdom #1: god -> God
sage
numbered
part1
sect1
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1 #1: Fryelund forest -> Fryelund Forest
sect2
sect3
sect4
@@ -111,6 +129,7 @@
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sect40
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40 #1: god -> God
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sect42
sect43
@@ -119,6 +138,7 @@
sect46
sect47
sect48
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48 #1:
The riddles would be more user-friendly if th footnotes contained a link to the Numbered Sections page
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sect51
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sect75
sect76
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76 #1:
'map' could be made into a link as in 326
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76 #2:
You do not need to eat a meal if you possess Grand Huntmastery.
sect77
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77 #1:
It says 'discard one item' when it should be one to three items.
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77 #2: and/or Robe -> and/or Robe.
missing period.
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77 #3:
Carrying around vs. wearing the Cener Robe and Mask - logically, they shouldn't occupy space in your Backpack when you wear them. (Though 77/304 do tell you they do, even though you put them on immediately.)
I agree with you that this is nonsensical once you put them on.
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sect79
sect80
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sect85
sect86
sect87
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87 #1:
'map' could be made into a link as in 326
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87 #2:
You do not need to eat a meal if you possess Grand Huntmastery.
sect88
sect89
sect90
@@ -170,11 +197,14 @@
sect97
sect98
sect99
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99 #1: arrow -> Arrow
Maybe
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99 #2: gods -> Gods
sect100
sect101
sect102
sect103
sect104
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104 #1:
In other books, we have replaced the 'add +<whatever> if you possess <discipline>' with something general about missile bonuses.
I don't think we'd really hit a consensus on this one - because there was some question as to the particular bonus that Grand Weaponmastery with a bow should grant.
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sect106
sect107
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sect131
sect132
sect133
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133 #1:
'map' could be made into a link as in 326
sect134
sect135
sect136
sect137
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137 #1: Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell
sect138
sect139
sect140
sect141
sect142
sect143
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143 #1: gods -> Gods
sect144
sect145
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145 #1:
'map' could be made into a link as in 326
sect146
sect147
sect148
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sect156
sect157
sect158
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158 #1:
The riddles would be more user-friendly if th footnotes contained a link to the Numbered Sections page
sect159
sect160
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160 #1: north-east -> northeast
sect161
sect162
sect163
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163 #1: god -> God
sect164
sect165
sect166
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sect174
sect175
sect176
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176 #1:
In other books, we have replaced the 'add +<whatever> if you possess <discipline>' with something general about missile bonuses.
I don't think we'd really hit a consensus on this one - because there was some question as to the particular bonus that Grand Weaponmastery with a bow should grant.
sect177
sect178
sect179
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sect194
sect195
sect196
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196 #1: god -> God
sect197
sect198
sect199
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199 #1: sun-sword -> Sun-sword
part2
sect200
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200 #1: gods -> Gods
maybe?
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200 #2: baffle banners -> battle banners
ik
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200 #3: alter -> altar
tw
sect201
sect202
sect203
@@ -281,36 +324,48 @@
sect207
sect208
sect209
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209 #1:
'map' could be made into a link as in 326
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209 #2:
You do not need to eat a meal if you possess Grand Huntmastery.
sect210
sect211
sect212
sect213
sect214
sect215
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215 #1: Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell
sect216
sect217
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217 #1:
'map' could be made into a link as in 326
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217 #2:
You do not need to eat a meal if you possess Grand Huntmastery.
sect218
sect219
sect220
sect221
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221 #1: arrow -> Arrow
Maybe
sect222
sect223
sect224
sect225
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225 #1: arrow -> Arrow
Maybe
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225 #2: 'thok' -> thok
encode as onomatopoeia
sect226
sect227
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227 #1:
The riddles would be more user-friendly if th footnotes contained a link to the Numbered Sections page
sect228
sect229
sect230
sect231
sect232
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232 #1: gods -> Gods
sect233
sect234
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234 #1: potion. (e.g. ... Laumspur) -> potion (e.g. ... Laumspur).
affects footnotes 15 and 18.
sect235
sect236
sect237
sect238
sect239
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239 #1:
The sections doesn't say what kind of Item the Copper Key is. Most readers would probably record it as a Special Item (most keys are) but in 18 where you also find a Copper Key it is a Backpack Item (and they are all used for the same purpose).
I think that keys turn out to be Backpack Items more often than not, but a footnote here is probably in order.
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sect241
sect242
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sect252
sect253
sect254
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254 #1:
'map' could be made into a link as in 326
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254 #2:
You do not need to eat a meal if you possess Grand Huntmastery.
sect255
sect256
sect257
@@ -336,11 +393,14 @@
sect262
sect263
sect264
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264 #1: Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell
sect265
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265 #1: god -> God
sect266
sect267
sect268
sect269
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269 #1: god -> God
sect270
sect271
sect272
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sect283
sect284
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284 #1:
The last two choices look so ugly. Wouldn't it be better to move down the ellipsis to the beginning of the last choice?
I agree with Thomas.
sect285
sect286
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286 #1:
The sections doesn't say what kind of Item the Copper Key is. Most readers would probably record it as a Special Item (most keys are) but in 18 where you also find a Copper Key it is a Backpack Item (and they are all used for the same purpose).
I think that keys turn out to be Backpack Items more often than not, but a footnote here is probably in order.
sect287
sect288
sect289
sect290
sect291
sect292
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292 #1: puffing -> putting
Reported by Simon Williams.
sect293
sect294
sect295
sect296
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296 #1: god -> God
sect297
sect298
sect299
@@ -375,10 +439,14 @@
sect301
sect302
sect303
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303 #1:
In other books, we have replaced the 'add +<whatever> if you possess <discipline>' with something general about missile bonuses.
I don't think we'd really hit a consensus on this one - because there was some question as to the particular bonus that Grand Weaponmastery with a bow should grant.
sect304
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304 #1:
Carrying around vs. wearing the Cener Robe and Mask - logically, they shouldn't occupy space in your Backpack when you wear them. (Though 77/304 do tell you they do, even though you put them on immediately.)
I agree with you that this is nonsensical once you put them on.
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304 #2:
'one item(s)' look really ugly - it is one to three items (same as in 77).
sect305
sect306
sect307
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307 #1: Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell
sect308
sect309
sect310
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sect315
sect316
sect317
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317 #1: arrow -> Arrow
Maybe
sect318
sect319
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319 #1: Assimilance and Grand Pathsmanship
emphasize 'and'
sect320
sect321
sect322
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322 #1: goodly -> godly
Shouldn't 'goodly' here by 'godly'? 'goodly' looks silly to my eyes and the sword is supposedly forged by Kai...
Disagree, I think the original looks OK.
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322 #2: sun-sword -> Sun-sword
sect323
sect324
sect325
sect326
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326 #1: Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell
sect327
sect328
sect329
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sect339
sect340
sect341
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341 #1: potion. (e.g. ... Laumspur) -> potion (e.g. ... Laumspur).
affects footnotes 15 and 18.
sect342
sect343
sect344
sect345
sect346
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346 #1:
'map' could be made into a link as in 326
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346 #2:
You do not need to eat a meal if you possess Grand Huntmastery.
sect347
sect348
sect349
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sect400
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Illustration 12 #1: gods -> Gods
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