It would seem that the heavens have not heard your prayers. A spear whistles past your head and embeds itself in the neck of your galloping horse. With a shriek of pain, the horse topples forward and you both roll in a tangled heap on the highway.
-Dazed and pinned down by the weight of the dead body of your horse, the last thing you remember are the sharp penetrating spearheads of the Giak lances.
+Dazed and pinned down by the weight of the dead body of your horse, the last thing you remember is the sharp penetrating spearheads of the Giak lances.
You are dizzy from your wound and you stumble through the trees like a blind man.
Suddenly you fall forward as if the ground has been snatched from beneath your feet. You have fallen head-first into a hunting pit. As you look up, you can see four Drakkarim levelling their bows at you, evil sneers spreading simultaneously across their ugly faces.
-(41) Added a period to the end of the illustration
(46) Moved the last choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position.
(51) Added a period to the end of the illustration
(54) Replaced the last thing you remember are
with the last thing you remember is
.
(57) Replaced liquids and
with liquids, and
.
(58) Made the choice that led to Section 286 to lead to Section 251 instead. Many readers have realized that there was an error here but assumed that the original numbers for the choices should simply be reversed, giving Lone Wolf a chance at survival for hiding and certain death for riding on. Actually, there is no certain death possibility here. Hiding is supposed to grant you certain survival. The proof of this correction is that there is no other path to Section 251, and it works perfectly.
(61) Replaced blood-smeared and
with blood-smeared, and
.
(151) Added If you wish to remove the pin, turn to 337.
This is the only other possible choice for what is a strangely one-sided option in the original text. More flavourful language might make more sense, such as If you still wish to remove the pin with your hands,
but to best preserve the integrity of the text, we simply copied the choice from Section 23.
(152) Added a period to the end of the illustration
(153) Replaced Durncrag range
with Durncrag Range
.
(154) Replaced head first
with head-first
. Replaced last thing you feel are the black shafts
with last things you feel are the black shafts
.
(154) Replaced head first
with head-first
. Replaced last thing you feel are the black shafts
with last thing you feel is the black shafts
.
(163) Replaced nearly an half
with nearly half
.
(166) Replaced tortuous
with torturous
.
(167) Moved the last choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position.