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diff --git a/en/xml/03tcok.xml b/en/xml/03tcok.xml
index 34c68dd..4d92a8f 100644
--- a/en/xml/03tcok.xml
+++ b/en/xml/03tcok.xml
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
    &inclusion.gary.chalk.bio.lw;
   </creator>
   <publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
-  <date class="publication"><year>2012</year><month>10</month><day>28</day></date>
+  <date class="publication"><year>2018</year><month>2</month><day>15</day></date>
   <description class="blurb">
   <p>You are Lone Wolf<ch.emdash/>last of the Kai Lords. Shocking news has just reached your homeland that Vonotar the Traitor still lives and now rules over the Ice Barbarians of Kalte.</p>
   <p>The King has vowed to your people that Vonotar will be brought to justice for his crimes. But it is a promise that only you can fulfil.</p>
@@ -35,15 +35,12 @@
    <p>Internet Edition published by <a href="&link.project.website;">Project Aon</a>. This edition is intended to reflect the complete text of the original version. Where we have made minor corrections, they will be noted in the <a idref="errata">Errata</a>.</p>
   </description>
   <rights class="copyrights">
-   <line>Text copyright <ch.copy/> 1984 Joe Dever.</line>
-   <line>Illustrations copyright <ch.copy/> 1984 Gary Chalk.</line>
+   <line>Text <ch.copy/> 1984 Joe Dever.</line>
+   <line>Illustrations <ch.copy/> 1984 Gary Chalk.</line>
   </rights>
   <rights class="license-notification">
-   <p>
-    <line>Text copyright <ch.copy/> 1984 Joe Dever.</line>
-    <line>Illustrations copyright <ch.copy/> 1984 Gary Chalk.</line>
-    <line>Distribution of this Internet Edition is restricted under the terms of the <a idref="license">Project Aon License</a>.</line>
-   </p>
+   <p>Text <ch.copy/> 1984 Joe Dever. Illustrations <ch.copy/> 1984 Gary Chalk.</p>
+   <p>Distribution of this Internet Edition is restricted under the terms of the <a idref="license">Project Aon License</a>.</p>
   </rights>
  </meta>
 
@@ -1582,7 +1579,7 @@
       <meta><title>82</title></meta>
 
       <data>
-       <p>The cave is cold and slopes very steeply away into the darkness. You have covered sixty yards before you notice a light in the distance. As you get nearer, you hear noises.<ch.nbsp/>.<ch.nbsp/>. animal noises.</p>
+       <p>The cave is cold and slopes very steeply away into the darkness. You have covered sixty yards before you notice a light in the distance. As you get nearer, you hear noises.<ch.ellips/> animal noises.</p>
        <choice idref="sect329">If you have the Kai Discipline of Animal Kinship, <link-text>turn to 329</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect138">If you wish to draw your weapon and charge, <link-text>turn to 138</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect107">If you want to try to creep closer and spy on whatever is there, <link-text>turn to 107</link-text>.</choice>
@@ -3359,10 +3356,10 @@
       <meta><title>227</title></meta>
 
       <data>
-       <p>The stone buttons rise less than an inch above the smooth altar surface. You notice that they are each surrounded by strange, barely perceptible, hieroglyphs, eroded by the passage of time. You now have to decide in which sequence you will press the buttons. If you possess the Kai Discipline of Mind Over Matter, you can depress the buttons without actually touching them.</p>
+       <p>The stone buttons rise less than an inch above the smooth altar surface. You notice that they are each surrounded by strange, barely perceptible hieroglyphs, eroded by the passage of time. You now have to decide in which sequence you will press the buttons. If you possess the Kai Discipline of Mind Over Matter, you can depress the buttons without actually touching them.</p>
        <choice idref="sect102">If you decide to press the left button and then the right, <link-text>turn to 102</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect334">If you decide to press the right button and then the left, <link-text>turn to 334</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect299">If you decided to press them both together, <link-text>turn to 299</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect299">If you decide to press them both together, <link-text>turn to 299</link-text>.</choice>
       </data>
      </section>
 
@@ -5500,7 +5497,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect221">221</a>) Replaced <quote>shards and</quote> with <quote>shards, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>) Replaced <quote>1 Item</quote> with <quote>1 item</quote>. Replaced <quote>them, and</quote> with <quote>them and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect226">226</a>) Replaced <quote>sledge and</quote> with <quote>sledge, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Meal</quote> with <quote>meal</quote> since this is not referring to a Meal noted on the <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect227">227</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>button then</quote> with <quote>button and then</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect227">227</a>) Replaced <quote>If you decided to press them both together</quote> with <quote>If you decide to press them both together</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>button then</quote> with <quote>button and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Replaced <quote>much-deserved</quote> with <quote>much deserved</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Replaced <quote>pack ice</quote> with <quote>pack-ice</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>locks or</quote> with <quote>locks, or</quote>.</p>