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diff --git a/en/xml/03tcok.xml b/en/xml/03tcok.xml
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+++ b/en/xml/03tcok.xml
@@ -35,15 +35,12 @@
    <p>Internet Edition published by <a href="&link.project.website;">Project Aon</a>. This edition is intended to reflect the complete text of the original version. Where we have made minor corrections, they will be noted in the <a idref="errata">Errata</a>.</p>
   </description>
   <rights class="copyrights">
-   <line>Text copyright <ch.copy/> 1984 Joe Dever.</line>
-   <line>Illustrations copyright <ch.copy/> 1984 Gary Chalk.</line>
+   <line>Text <ch.copy/> 1984 Joe Dever.</line>
+   <line>Illustrations <ch.copy/> 1984 Gary Chalk.</line>
   </rights>
   <rights class="license-notification">
-   <p>
-    <line>Text copyright <ch.copy/> 1984 Joe Dever.</line>
-    <line>Illustrations copyright <ch.copy/> 1984 Gary Chalk.</line>
-    <line>Distribution of this Internet Edition is restricted under the terms of the <a idref="license">Project Aon License</a>.</line>
-   </p>
+   <p>Text <ch.copy/> 1984 Joe Dever. Illustrations <ch.copy/> 1984 Gary Chalk.</p>
+   <p>Distribution of this Internet Edition is restricted under the terms of the <a idref="license">Project Aon License</a>.</p>
   </rights>
  </meta>
 
@@ -1582,7 +1579,7 @@
       <meta><title>82</title></meta>
 
       <data>
-       <p>The cave is cold and slopes very steeply away into the darkness. You have covered sixty yards before you notice a light in the distance. As you get nearer, you hear noises.<ch.nbsp/>.<ch.nbsp/>. animal noises.</p>
+       <p>The cave is cold and slopes very steeply away into the darkness. You have covered sixty yards before you notice a light in the distance. As you get nearer, you hear noises.<ch.ellips/> animal noises.</p>
        <choice idref="sect329">If you have the Kai Discipline of Animal Kinship, <link-text>turn to 329</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect138">If you wish to draw your weapon and charge, <link-text>turn to 138</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect107">If you want to try to creep closer and spy on whatever is there, <link-text>turn to 107</link-text>.</choice>