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@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
    &inclusion.paul.bonner.bio.gs;
   </creator>
   <publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
-  <date class="publication"><year>2012</year><month>10</month><day>28</day></date>
+  <date class="publication"><year>2018</year><month>2</month><day>15</day></date>
   <description class="blurb">
    <p>You are the Wizard Grey Star. You now face the tumultuous climax of your epic struggle to overthrow the evil Wytch-king Shasarak. His cruel empire is torn by war as the Freedom Fighters rebel against his corrupt dominion. Can you reach them in time to free mankind? Can you overcome the Wytch-king<ch.apos/>s ferocious soldiers and the supernatural hordes that are his to command? Your only hope lies in your Wizard<ch.apos/>s Staff. Guard it well<ch.emdash/>for it contains the might of the mystic Moonstone, the very essence of your Magical Powers.</p>
    <p><cite>The World of Lone Wolf</cite> is an exciting adventure series in which you are the hero, you make the decisions, and you fight the combats using the unique systems included in the book.</p>
@@ -122,11 +122,6 @@
           <line>Simon Osborne</line>
           <line>Timothy Pederick</line>
          </dd>
-<!--        <dt>PDF Layout</dt>
-         <dd>
-          <line>Jonathan Blake</line>
-          <line>Ingo Kl<ch.ouml/>cker</line>
-         </dd>-->
         <dt>Coordination</dt>
          <dd>
           <line>Jonathan Blake</line>
@@ -1189,7 +1184,7 @@
        </illustration>
        <p>The room fills with the sound of savage laughter, but it is not Shasarak who laughs. A familiar, slithering, deathly voice emanates from the wall of fire, and within the fire you see two slanted eyes: pools of absolute darkness. It is the Demonlord Agarash!</p>
        <p><quote>See, Shasarak. He has come, as I told you he would. He has come to slay you. Won<ch.apos/>t you accept my bargain?</quote></p>
-       <p><quote>NEVER!</quote> Shasarak hisses, his voice like the rush of broken stone scattering on the floor. <quote>He does not have the power to master me<ch.ellips/>as you have not, Demon.</quote></p>
+       <p><em><quote>Never!</quote></em> Shasarak hisses, his voice like the rush of broken stone scattering on the floor. <quote>He does not have the power to master me<ch.ellips/>as you have not, Demon.</quote></p>
        <p>Shasarak glares at you malevolently and raises a damaged hand. He is about to strike.</p>
        <choice idref="sect21">If you have 1 <typ class="attribute">WILLPOWER</typ> point and wish to raise the Moonstone against Shasarak, <link-text>turn to 21</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect92">If you wish to defend yourself with the Moonstone, <link-text>turn to 92</link-text>.</choice>
@@ -2743,7 +2738,7 @@
        <illustration class="float">
         <meta>
          <creator>Paul Bonner</creator>
-         <description>Unsuspecting the Shadakine warrior rides towards you.</description>
+         <description>Unsuspecting, the Shadakine warrior rides towards you.</description>
         </meta>
         <instance class="html" src="ill10.png" width="386" height="683"  mime-type="image/png"/>
         <instance class="html-compatible" src="ill10.gif" width="386" height="683"  mime-type="image/gif"/>
@@ -4724,8 +4719,6 @@
     </data>
    </section>
 
-   <!-- Backmatter -->
-
    <section class="backmatter" id="passing">
     <meta><title>The Passing of the Shianti</title></meta>
 
@@ -5282,7 +5275,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Replaced <quote>you. they</quote> with <quote>you. They</quote>. Replaced <quote>a pestle and mortar</quote> with <quote>a Pestle and Mortar</quote>. Replaced <quote>empty vial</quote> with <quote>empty Vial</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>saltpetre</quote> with <quote>Saltpetre</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>sulphur</quote> with <quote>Sulphur</quote>. Replaced <quote>The empty vials</quote> with <quote>The empty Vials</quote>. Replaced <quote>Zakutsk flower</quote> with <quote>Zakutsk Flower</quote>. Replaced <quote>Demeril root</quote> with <quote>Demeril Root</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pestle and Mortar are Backpack Items</quote> with <quote>Pestle and Mortar and the Tinderbox are Backpack Items,</quote>. Replaced <quote>the vials</quote> with <quote>the Vials</quote>. Replaced <quote>wil</quote> with <quote>will</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 Pestle and Mortar</quote> with <quote>Pestle and Mortar</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 Tinderbox</quote> with <quote>Tinderbox</quote>. Replaced <quote>together, then</quote> with <quote>together, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>neither you nor Tanith have</quote> with <quote>neither you nor Tanith has</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Replaced <quote>feet away. The home</quote> with <quote>feet away. <ch.lsquot/>The home</quote>. Replaced <quote>persectuion</quote> with <quote>persecution</quote>. Replaced <quote>dematerilize</quote> with <quote>dematerialize</quote>. Replaced <quote>warior</quote> with <quote>warrior</quote>. Replaced <quote>mightly</quote> with <quote>mighty</quote>. Replaced <quote>Ho there Dioka!</quote> with <quote>Ho there, Dioka!</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Replaced <quote>Demon Lord, Agarash</quote> with <quote>Demonlord Agarash</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you wish</quote> with <quote>If you have 1 <typ class="attribute">WILLPOWER</typ> point and wish</quote>. Replaced <quote>sightless and</quote> with <quote>sightless, and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Replaced <quote>Demon Lord, Agarash</quote> with <quote>Demonlord Agarash</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you wish</quote> with <quote>If you have 1 <typ class="attribute">WILLPOWER</typ> point and wish</quote>. Replaced <quote>sightless and</quote> with <quote>sightless, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>NEVER!</quote> with <quote><em>Never!</em></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Replaced <quote>Phinomel pods</quote> with <quote>Phinomel Pods</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect41">41</a>) Replaced <quote>the speed of your reactions and the fierceness of your gaze paralyses</quote> with <quote>the speed of your reactions and the fierceness of your gaze paralyse</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect42">42</a>) Replaced <quote>ceatures</quote> with <quote>creatures</quote>. Replaced <quote>despatching</quote> with <quote>dispatching</quote>.</p>
@@ -5350,6 +5343,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect181">181</a>) Replaced <quote>power of Physiurgy</quote> with <quote>Power of Physiurgy</quote>. Replaced <quote>higher magick</quote> with <quote>Higher Magick</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect182">182</a>) Replaced <quote>hills of Tilos</quote> with <quote>Hills of Tilos</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Replaced <quote>higher magick</quote> with <quote>Higher Magick</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>Unsuspecting the</quote> with <quote>Unsuspecting, the</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Replaced <quote>blows and</quote> with <quote>blows, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect190">190</a>) Replaced <quote>pain, then</quote> with <quote>pain, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect191">191</a>) Replaced <quote>for, indeed, I hate you</quote> with <quote>for indeed I hate you</quote>. Replaced <quote>breathes, <ch.lsquot/>I</quote> with <quote>breathes. <ch.lsquot/>I</quote>. Replaced <quote>represent; the</quote> with <quote>represent: the</quote>. Replaced <quote>eyes; colourless</quote> with <quote>eyes, colourless</quote>. Replaced <quote>feeling; like</quote> with <quote>feeling, like</quote>. Replaced <quote>powerful, I am</quote> with <quote>powerful; I am</quote>.</p>