X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?p=project-aon.git;a=blobdiff_plain;f=en%2Fxml%2F05sots.xml;h=065cb3de4bfed8c5c621174dbf39b357a44211cd;hp=8161d4619d0166b7fb4cb6acc71733874fddc1dd;hb=1fa564f7013bb4571ac1912e478cc8b0ac5fbd77;hpb=123f678913283f1a13edf875d1ed5eda45a09713 diff --git a/en/xml/05sots.xml b/en/xml/05sots.xml index 8161d46..065cb3d 100644 --- a/en/xml/05sots.xml +++ b/en/xml/05sots.xml @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ &inclusion.gary.chalk.bio.lw; Project Aon - 20121028 + 2018215

You are Lone Wolflast of the Kai Lords. A voyage to Vassagonia promises an end to the shadow of war. But hopes are soon shattered upon your arrival at Barrakeesha city full of treachery and death.

In Shadow on the Sand, you are the quarry of a sinister foe, determined to kill you at all costs. Choose your skills and your weapons carefully. They can help you survive and aid you in the quest for a lost Sommlending treasurea treasure that contains the secret of your destiny.

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Coordination
Jonathan Blake
Special Thanks
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Michael Eshleman, Benjamin Krefetz, Ryan Marshall, Dewi Morgan, Neil McGrory
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Ricardo Amaro, Michael Eshleman, Benjamin Krefetz, Ryan Marshall, Dewi Morgan, Neil McGrory
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A search of the baskets crowding the little boat uncovers a beautifully hand-tooled leather case. You flick open the brass catch and discover that the case contains a Jakana hunting bow used by the coastal fishermen of Vassagonia. (You may record the Jakan Bow as a Weapon on your Action Chart. You must possess an Arrow in order to use this Weapon.) You are elated by your find but disappointed to discover that the case contains only one Arrow.

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Across the harbour square, close to Maouks carriage, you notice a small, white-walled shop where a row of green glass flagons line a balcony on the first floor. You draw the bowstring to your lips and take careful aim; it is a difficult shot, and you have only one chance.

Pick a number from the Random Number Table. If you possess the Kai Discipline of Weaponskill (any weapon), add 2 to the number you have picked.

If your total is now 03, turn to 7. @@ -4620,7 +4611,7 @@

As you peer at the pages of Tipasas diary, suddenly you realize that they are written in code. What Banedon had assumed to be positions of stars is a code to three numbers that give the precise location of the Tomb.

Consult the map to help you discover the location of the Tomb of the Majhan.

The first of the three numbers is equal to the number of oases on the trail between Ikaresh and Bir Rabalou. The second number is equal to the number of cities in Vassagonia. The third number is equal to the number of islands off the coast of Cape Kabar.

- When you have broken the code, write the numbers in order and turn to the entry numberturn to the entry number that they indicate. + When you have broken the code, write the numbers in order and turn to the entry numberturn to the entry number that they indicate.
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As you break cover, another burst of energy leaps from the Darklords fist. It explodes into the base of the pillar, severing it from the floor, and the roof above caves in with a tremendous roar. The shock wave throws you to the floor, flattening you against the cold marble flagstones. You lose 3 ENDURANCE points. Erase the Sommerswerd from your Action Chart.

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Haakons laugh can still be heard above the crash of falling stone. In rises in pitch until it fills your head with agonizing pain.

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Haakons laugh can still be heard above the crash of falling stone. It rises in pitch until it fills your head with agonizing pain.

If you have the Kai Discipline of Mindshield, turn to 253. If you do not possess this Kai Discipline, turn to 369.
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(233) Replaced lit but with lit, but.

(234) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position. Replaced on to with onto. Replaced head or feet first with head- or feet-first.

(235) Replaced explore, and with explore and. Replaced face and with face, and. Replaced catch of lavacrabs lie with catch of lavacrabs lies.

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(236) Deleted the second sentence When you strike, the guard is still on his knees, picking up his scattered gold. (See the erratum for section 295.) Replaced pen, and with pen and.

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(236) Removed the second sentence When you strike, the guard is still on his knees, picking up his scattered gold. (See the erratum for section 295.) Replaced pen, and with pen and.

(237) Replaced smells, and after with smells and, after. Replaced Jala with jala.

(238) Replaced crack and with crack, and. Replaced hand, and with hand and.

(239) Replaced Tracking and with Tracking, and. Replaced Guardian with Guardian or higher. Replaced Drakkar sentry with Drakkarim sentry to reflect standard usage.

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(337) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

(339) Replaced on to with onto.

(342) Replaced half-way with halfway. Replaced Jala with jala.

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(343) Replaced behind you but with behind you, but. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption. Replaced Dahir mountains with Dahir Mountains. Deleted at the front of this book . Replaced Dahir pass with Dahir Pass. Replaced Drakkar warrior with Drakkarim warrior to reflect standard usage.

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(343) Replaced behind you but with behind you, but. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption. Replaced Dahir mountains with Dahir Mountains. Removed at the front of this book . Replaced Dahir pass with Dahir Pass. Replaced Drakkar warrior with Drakkarim warrior to reflect standard usage.

(344) Replaced yellow and with yellow, and. Replaced herb, and with herb and.

(345) Replaced hand, and with hand and. Replaced is another arch and a staircase with are another arch and a staircase.

(347) Replaced below but with below, but. Replaced on to with onto.

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(353) Replaced Cryptspawn with Crypt Spawn. Replaced fire but with fire, but. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(354) Replaced deck but with deck, but. Replaced bang with bang.

(355) Replaced If the fight lasts longer with If you win and the fight lasts longer.

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(357) Deleted the words forgets about his scattered gold and from the third sentence. (See the erratum for section 295.) Replaced combat, and with combat and.

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(357) Removed the words forgets about his scattered gold and from the third sentence. (See the erratum for section 295.) Replaced combat, and with combat and.

(361) Replaced boomsail with boom-sail. Replaced on to with onto.

(362) Replaced both occurrences of Jala with jala. Replaced Jala, or with jala or.

(366) Replaced drawbolt with bolt. Replaced death blow with death-blow.

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(384) Replaced on to with onto.

(385) Replaced seering with searing.

(386) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.

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(389) Deleted the words forgets about his gold and from the second sentence. (See the erratum for section 295.) Replaced pen, combat with pen; combat. Replaced on to with onto.

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(389) Removed the words forgets about his gold and from the second sentence. (See the erratum for section 295.) Replaced pen, combat with pen; combat. Replaced on to with onto.

(388) Replaced Armourers Quarter with Armourers Quarter.

(389) Replaced combat, and with combat and.

(390) Replaced flame, is with flame is.