X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?p=project-aon.git;a=blobdiff_plain;f=en%2Fxml%2F05sots.xml;h=1268fca87c920d6c3a0a5ad72d48a1dc2fdabda3;hp=d8048eace35519c9d115149bf744803dc2967fa9;hb=190b8349c008b8a1690b5a405f8100d2fdb3013c;hpb=f4bdee5083ca9a72713637e1e979aa183e06faea diff --git a/en/xml/05sots.xml b/en/xml/05sots.xml index d8048ea..1268fca 100644 --- a/en/xml/05sots.xml +++ b/en/xml/05sots.xml @@ -134,6 +134,7 @@ Simon Osborne Timothy Pederick Matthew Reynolds + Johan Ronn Jonathan Stark Thomas Wolmer @@ -461,7 +462,7 @@
Food

You will need to eat regularly during your adventure. If you do not have any food when you are instructed to eat a Meal, you will lose 3 ENDURANCE points. If you have chosen the Kai Discipline of Hunting as one of your five skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat (unless you are in an area of desert where the opportunity for hunting is limited).

Potion of Laumspur
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This is a healing potion that can restore 4 ENDURANCE points to your total when swallowed after combat. There is enough for one dose only. If you discover any other potions during the adventure, you will be informed of its effect. All potions are Backpack Items.

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This is a healing potion that can restore 4 ENDURANCE points to your total when swallowed after combat. It cannot be used to increase ENDURANCE points immediately prior to a combat. There is enough for one dose only. If you discover any other potions during the adventure, you will be informed of its effect. All potions are Backpack Items.

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You are halfway round the tower when a section of the sandstone ledge suddenly gives way beneath your feet. Desperately you claw at the masonry, but the stone is old and disintegrates in your hands. You topple backwards and fall to your doom in the palace gardens below.

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The cell door does not open again until the sun has dipped below the peaks of the Dahir Mountains. You prepare yourself to meet the Zakhan, to demand your immediate release and safe passage back to Sommerlund, but it is not only the Zakhan who awaits you in the Grand Hall. He has a guest who has travelled many miles for this special meeting. His name is Haakon. He is a Darklord of Helgedad.

Unarmed and helpless, you are forced to kneel before the Darklord. With wicked relish, Haakon squeezes the life from your body with his own hands.

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You may record the Jakan on your Action Chart as a Weapon. Although you may not use it in this adventure, it may be of use to you in the future.

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A search of the baskets crowding the little boat uncovers a beautifully hand-tooled leather case. You flick open the brass catch and discover that the case contains a Jakana hunting bow used by the coastal fishermen of Vassagonia. You are elated by your find but disappointed to discover that the case contains only one arrow.

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A search of the baskets crowding the little boat uncovers a beautifully hand-tooled leather case. You flick open the brass catch and discover that the case contains a Jakana hunting bow used by the coastal fishermen of Vassagonia. (You may record the Jakan Bow as a Weapon on your Action Chart. You must possess an Arrow in order to use this Weapon.) You are elated by your find but disappointed to discover that the case contains only one Arrow.

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(176) Replaced head first with head-first. Replaced Gold and with Gold Crowns, and. Added (Make all the necessary adjustments to your Action Chart, but note your lost possessions elsewhere in case you find them again later.) in harmony with the Collectors Edition.

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