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diff --git a/en/xml/05sots.xml b/en/xml/05sots.xml
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@@ -134,6 +134,7 @@
          <line>Simon Osborne</line>
          <line>Timothy Pederick</line>
          <line>Matthew Reynolds</line>
+         <line>Johan Ronn</line>
          <line>Jonathan Stark</line>
          <line>Thomas Wolmer</line>
         </dd>
@@ -461,7 +462,7 @@
          <dt>Food</dt>
           <dd><p>You will need to eat regularly during your adventure. If you do not have any food when you are instructed to eat a Meal, you will lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. If you have chosen the Kai Discipline of Hunting as one of your five skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat (unless you are in an area of desert where the opportunity for hunting is limited).</p></dd>
          <dt>Potion of Laumspur</dt>
-          <dd><p>This is a healing potion that can restore 4 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points to your total when swallowed after combat. There is enough for one dose only. If you discover any other potions during the adventure, you will be informed of its effect. All potions are Backpack Items.</p></dd>
+          <dd><p>This is a healing potion that can restore 4 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points to your total when swallowed after combat. It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat. There is enough for one dose only. If you discover any other potions during the adventure, you will be informed of its effect. All potions are Backpack Items.</p></dd>
         </dl>
        </data>
       </section>
@@ -1264,14 +1265,8 @@
     <section class="numbered" id="sect56">
      <meta><title>56</title></meta>
 
-     <footnotes>
-      <footnote id="sect56-1-foot" idref="sect56-1">
-       <p>You may record the Jakan on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as a Weapon. Although you may not use it in this adventure, it may be of use to you in the future.</p>
-      </footnote>
-     </footnotes>
-
      <data>
-      <p>A search of the baskets crowding the little boat uncovers a beautifully hand-tooled leather case. You flick open the brass catch and discover that the case contains a Jakan<ch.emdash/>a hunting bow used by the coastal fishermen of Vassagonia.<footref id="sect56-1" idref="sect56-1-foot" /> You are elated by your find but disappointed to discover that the case contains only one arrow.</p>
+      <p>A search of the baskets crowding the little boat uncovers a beautifully hand-tooled leather case. You flick open the brass catch and discover that the case contains a Jakan<ch.emdash/>a hunting bow used by the coastal fishermen of Vassagonia. (You may record the Jakan Bow as a Weapon on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. You must possess an Arrow in order to use this Weapon.) You are elated by your find but disappointed to discover that the case contains only one Arrow.</p>
 
 <!--      <illustration class="inline">
        <meta>
@@ -1306,14 +1301,15 @@
 
      <footnotes>
       <footnote id="sect58-1-foot" idref="sect58-1">
-       <p>The section corresponding to the correct answer will have a footnote confirming that it is indeed correct. If you choose the wrong section, then turn to <a idref="sect98">Section 98</a>. You do not get a second guess.</p>
+       <p>The section corresponding to the correct answer will have a footnote confirming that it is indeed correct.</p>
       </footnote>
      </footnotes>
 
      <data>
       <p>You follow a straight passage of pale, rose-coloured stone, which soon ends at an empty vestibule. In its north wall is set a great wooden door, covered with engraved bronze plaques and studded with bronze nails. There is a curious lock set into the middle of this door, encircled by a beautiful carving of a long-tailed scorpion. A closer look at the lock reveals a series of Vassagonian numerals, numbered 1 to 200, engraved in the lock. You recognize the design: it is a Cloeasian combination lock.</p>
       <puzzle idref="sect67">If you know the correct number that will open the bronze door, <choose test="has-numbered-section-list"><when value="true"><a idref="part1">turn to that section number</a></when><otherwise>turn to that section number</otherwise></choose>.<footref id="sect58-1" idref="sect58-1-foot" /></puzzle>
-      <choice idref="sect156">If you do not know the number that will open the door, <link-text>turn to 156</link-text>.</choice>
+      <choice idref="sect98">If you choose the wrong combination, you do not get a second guess. <link-text>Turn immediately to 98</link-text>.</choice>
+      <choice idref="sect156">If you do not know the number and do not attempt to open the door, <link-text>turn to 156</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
 
@@ -2244,12 +2240,6 @@
     <section class="numbered" id="sect135">
      <meta><title>135</title></meta>
 
-     <footnotes>
-      <footnote id="sect135-1-foot" idref="sect135-1">
-       <p>Restore half of any <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points that you lose (fractions rounded down) during this combat if you win (note what happens if you lose).</p>
-      </footnote>
-     </footnotes>
-
      <data>
       <p>The air of the new tunnel is hot and humid, and as you press on, the putrid gas makes you increasingly nauseous. You are forced to stop<ch.emdash/>the vapour is burning your throat and causing painful stomach cramps. Suddenly a noise makes you forget your discomfort; you turn to see that one of Maouk<ch.apos/>s men has caught up with you. He looms out of the darkness, his face covered by a pad of herbs.</p>
       <combat><enemy>Sharnazim Warrior</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">17</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">22</enemy-attribute></combat>
@@ -2266,7 +2256,7 @@
       </illustration>
 
       <choice idref="sect161">If you lose this combat, <link-text>turn to 161</link-text>.</choice>
-      <choice idref="sect130">If you win the combat, <link-text>turn to 130</link-text>.<footref id="sect135-1" idref="sect135-1-foot" /></choice>
+      <choice idref="sect130">If you win this combat, restore half of any <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points you lost (rounding fractions down) and <link-text>turn to 130</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
 
@@ -6046,7 +6036,7 @@
 
       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Kai Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai Discipline section</quote> with <quote>Kai Disciplines section</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>discipline(s)</quote> with <quote>Discipline(s)</quote>. Set the Weapons list in initial capital letters instead of all capitals. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote> (see the front of this book)</quote>. Capitalized the items in the list rather than setting them in all capitals. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Safe Keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>also they cannot</quote> with <quote>neither can they</quote>. Replaced <quote>slung over shoulder</quote> with <quote>slung over the shoulder</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote> (see the front of this book)</quote>. Capitalized the items in the list rather than setting them in all capitals. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Safe Keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>also they cannot</quote> with <quote>neither can they</quote>. Replaced <quote>slung over shoulder</quote> with <quote>slung over the shoulder</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Placed <quote>or below</quote> after <quote>reduced to zero</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced</quote> with <quote>possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
 
@@ -6086,8 +6076,9 @@
       <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Replaced <quote>pain but</quote> with <quote>pain, but</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Baga-darooz</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-vassagonian">Baga-darooz</foreign></quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect52">52</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Jailer<ch.apos/> Keys</quote> with <quote>Gaoler<ch.apos/>s Keys</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect54">54</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>traitors and</quote> with <quote>traitors, and</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>shot and</quote> with <quote>shot, and</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>shot and</quote> with <quote>shot, and</quote>. Added <quote>(You may record the Jakan Bow as a Weapon on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. You must possess an Arrow in order to use this Weapon.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>one arrow</quote> with <quote>one Arrow</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect57">57</a>) Replaced <quote>unlocked and</quote> with <quote>unlocked, and</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect58">58</a>) Added <quote>If you choose the wrong combination, you do not get a second guess. <!--link-text-->Turn immediately to 98<!--/link-text-->.</quote>. Replaced <quote>number that will open the door</quote> with <quote>number and do not attempt to open the door</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect61">61</a>) Replaced <quote>open and</quote> with <quote>open, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect63">63</a>) Replaced <quote>total, for</quote> with <quote>total for</quote>. Replaced <quote>discover the healing</quote> with <quote>discover a healing</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect64">64</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
@@ -6142,7 +6133,7 @@
       <p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>) Replaced <quote>may, or</quote> with <quote>may or</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>corridor, and</quote> with <quote>corridor and</quote>. Replaced <quote>distance and</quote> with <quote>distance, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>clang</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>clang</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect133">133</a>) Replaced <quote>turn round</quote> with <quote>turn around</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect135">135</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect135">135</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>If you win the combat, <!--link-text-->turn</quote> with <quote>If you win this combat, restore half of any <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points you lost (rounding fractions down) and <!--link-text-->turn</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect137">137</a>) Replaced <quote>strange luxuriant purple</quote> with <quote>strange, luxuriant, purple</quote>. Moved the Tracking/Sixth Sense choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>grass, and</quote> with <quote>grass and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect138">138</a>) Replaced <quote>door and</quote> with <quote>door, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect139">139</a>) Replaced <quote>skin, that</quote> with <quote>skin that</quote>.</p>