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diff --git a/en/xml/05sots.xml b/en/xml/05sots.xml
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@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
   &inclusion.gary.chalk.bio.lw;
  </creator>
  <publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
- <date class="publication"><year>2012</year><month>10</month><day>28</day></date>
+ <date class="publication"><year>2018</year><month>2</month><day>15</day></date>
  <description class="blurb">
  <p>You are Lone Wolf<ch.emdash/>last of the Kai Lords. A voyage to Vassagonia promises an end to the shadow of war. But hopes are soon shattered upon your arrival at Barrakeesh<ch.emdash/>a city full of treachery and death.</p>
  <p>In <strong><cite>Shadow on the Sand</cite></strong>, you are the quarry of a sinister foe, determined to kill you at all costs. Choose your skills and your weapons carefully. They can help you survive and aid you in the quest for a lost Sommlending treasure<ch.emdash/>a treasure that contains the secret of your destiny.</p>
@@ -34,15 +34,12 @@
   <p>Internet Edition published by <a href="&link.project.website;">Project Aon</a>. This edition is intended to reflect the complete text of the original version. Where we have made minor corrections, they will be noted in the <a idref="errata">Errata</a>.</p>
  </description>
  <rights class="copyrights">
-  <line>Text copyright <ch.copy/> 1985 Joe Dever.</line>
-  <line>Illustrations copyright <ch.copy/> 1985 Gary Chalk.</line>
+  <line>Text <ch.copy/> 1985 Joe Dever.</line>
+  <line>Illustrations <ch.copy/> 1985 Gary Chalk.</line>
  </rights>
  <rights class="license-notification">
-  <p>
-   <line>Text copyright <ch.copy/> 1985 Joe Dever.</line>
-   <line>Illustrations copyright <ch.copy/> 1985 Gary Chalk.</line>
-   <line>Distribution of this Internet Edition is restricted under the terms of the <a idref="license">Project Aon License</a>.</line>
-  </p>
+  <p>Text <ch.copy/> 1985 Joe Dever. Illustrations <ch.copy/> 1985 Gary Chalk.</p>
+  <p>Distribution of this Internet Edition is restricted under the terms of the <a idref="license">Project Aon License</a>.</p>
  </rights>
 </meta>
 
@@ -1268,15 +1265,6 @@
      <data>
       <p>A search of the baskets crowding the little boat uncovers a beautifully hand-tooled leather case. You flick open the brass catch and discover that the case contains a Jakan<ch.emdash/>a hunting bow used by the coastal fishermen of Vassagonia. (You may record the Jakan Bow as a Weapon on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. You must possess an Arrow in order to use this Weapon.) You are elated by your find but disappointed to discover that the case contains only one Arrow.</p>
 
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-       <meta>
-        <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
-       </meta>
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       <p>Across the harbour square, close to Maouk<ch.apos/>s carriage, you notice a small, white-walled shop where a row of green glass flagons line a balcony on the first floor. You draw the bowstring to your lips and take careful aim; it is a difficult shot, and you have only one chance.</p>
       <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you possess the Kai Discipline of Weaponskill (any weapon), add 2 to the number you have picked.</p>
       <choice idref="sect7">If your total is now 0<ch.endash/>3, <link-text>turn to 7</link-text>.</choice>