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--- a/en/xml/16tlov.xml
+++ b/en/xml/16tlov.xml
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
    &inclusion.brian.williams.bio.lw;
   </creator>
   <publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
-  <date class="publication"><year>2018</year><month>2</month><day>15</day></date>
+  <date class="publication"><year>2018</year><month>4</month><day>14</day></date>
   <description class="blurb">
    <p>You are Lone Wolf<ch.emdash/>Kai Grand Master of Sommerlund. The spirit of Vashna, greatest of all the Darklords, is imprisoned deep within the fathomless reaches of the Maakengorge. For centuries, servants of darkness have tried to summon him to do their bidding but always they have failed<ch.ellips/>until now!</p>
    <p>In <strong><cite>The Legacy of Vashna</cite></strong>, you must locate and defeat the Darklord<ch.apos/>s minions before they can complete the resurrection of their master<ch.emdash/>the most powerful Lord of Evil your world has ever known. Will you succeed in your quest? Or will you and your fragile world perish in the wrath of Vashna?</p>
@@ -34,15 +34,12 @@
    <p>Internet Edition published by <a href="&link.project.website;">Project Aon</a>. This edition is intended to reflect the complete text of the original version. Where we have made minor corrections, they will be noted in the <a idref="errata">Errata</a>.</p>
   </description>
   <rights class="copyrights">
-   <line>Text copyright <ch.copy/> 1991 Joe Dever.</line>
-   <line>Illustrations copyright <ch.copy/> 1991 Brian Williams.</line>
+   <line>Text <ch.copy/> 1991 Joe Dever.</line>
+   <line>Illustrations <ch.copy/> 1991 Brian Williams.</line>
   </rights>
   <rights class="license-notification">
-   <p>
-    <line>Text copyright <ch.copy/> 1991 Joe Dever.</line>
-    <line>Illustrations copyright <ch.copy/> 1991 Brian Williams.</line>
-    <line>Distribution of this Internet Edition is restricted under the terms of the <a idref="license">Project Aon License</a>.</line>
-   </p>
+   <p>Text <ch.copy/> 1991 Joe Dever. Illustrations <ch.copy/> 1991 Brian Williams.</p>
+   <p>Distribution of this Internet Edition is restricted under the terms of the <a idref="license">Project Aon License</a>.</p>
   </rights>
  </meta>
 
@@ -204,8 +201,8 @@
 
       <footnotes>
        <footnote id="discplnz-1-foot" idref="discplnz-1">
-       <p>Weaponmastery bonuses are replaced by Grand Weaponmastery bonuses, not added cumulatively (cf. <a href="http://www.projectaon.org/en/ReadersHandbook/NewsletterExcerpts#lwcn28">Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 28</a>).</p>
-       <p>If you have completed previous adventures, already possess the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, and have reached the rank of <bookref book="12tmod" section="imprvdsc">Mentora</bookref>, it seems that you should already be able to add 5 to numbers picked from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> (i.e. the basic Weaponmastery with Bow bonus of 3 added to the Mentora bonus of 2 for all missile weapons). Likely, the author intended the Weaponmastery bonus at the Mentora rank to be a <quote>hidden loyalty bonus</quote> (cf. <a href="http://www.projectaon.org/en/ReadersHandbook/NewsletterExcerpts#lwcn28">Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 28</a>). In view of this, the <ch.plus/>2 Mentora bonus is therefore <em>not</em> cumulative with Grand Weaponmastery with Bow.</p>
+       <p>Weaponmastery bonuses are replaced by Grand Weaponmastery bonuses, not added cumulatively (cf. <a href="https://www.projectaon.org/en/ReadersHandbook/NewsletterExcerpts#lwcn28">Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 28</a>).</p>
+       <p>If you have completed previous adventures, already possess the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, and have reached the rank of <bookref book="12tmod" section="imprvdsc">Mentora</bookref>, it seems that you should already be able to add 5 to numbers picked from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> (i.e. the basic Weaponmastery with Bow bonus of 3 added to the Mentora bonus of 2 for all missile weapons). Likely, the author intended the Weaponmastery bonus at the Mentora rank to be a <quote>hidden loyalty bonus</quote> (cf. <a href="https://www.projectaon.org/en/ReadersHandbook/NewsletterExcerpts#lwcn28">Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 28</a>). In view of this, the <ch.plus/>2 Mentora bonus is therefore <em>not</em> cumulative with Grand Weaponmastery with Bow.</p>
        </footnote>
       </footnotes>
 
@@ -2573,7 +2570,7 @@
 
       <data>
        <p>You unsheathe your weapon and brace yourself to receive their maniacal attack.</p>
-       <combat><enemy>Acolytes of Vashna (in battle-frenzy)</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">34</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">40</enemy-attribute></combat>
+       <combat><enemy>Acolytes of Vashna <em>(in battle-frenzy)</em></enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">34</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">40</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <choice idref="sect325">If you win this combat, <link-text>turn to 325</link-text>.</choice>
       </data>
      </section>
@@ -3572,7 +3569,7 @@
 
       <data>
        <p>The Demoness laughs with disdain at your inability to answer her riddle. She denounces you as unworthy of her presence and says that, although she will derive little pleasure from it, she is now going to have to kill you.</p>
-       <combat><enemy>Demoness Shamath (in the guise of Gnekasha the Worm-thrall)</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">55</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">42</enemy-attribute></combat>
+       <combat><enemy>Demoness Shamath <em>(in the guise of Gnekasha the Worm-thrall)</em></enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">55</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">42</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <choice idref="sect148">If you win this combat, <link-text>turn to 148</link-text>.</choice>
       </data>
      </section>
@@ -3777,7 +3774,7 @@
 
       <data>
        <p>You open the depths of your mind and summon forth a glowing ball of Kai energy which you project at the leading phantom. This fiery ball of psychic power rips into the creature<ch.apos/>s ghostly form and causes it to shriek with agony. Your devastating blast has wounded this entity, but it has not stopped its attack. It gathers itself and swoops down upon you, like a hungry vulture descending on a corpse.</p>
-       <combat><enemy>Vortexi (weakened by psychic attack)</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">40</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">22</enemy-attribute></combat>
+       <combat><enemy>Vortexi <em>(weakened by psychic attack)</em></enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">40</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">22</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <p>For every level of Kai rank you have attained above that of Kai Grand Guardian, you may add 2 to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> for the duration of this fight. If you possess the Sommerswerd, restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score.</p>
        <choice idref="sect159">If you win the combat, <link-text>turn to 159</link-text>.</choice>
       </data>