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@@ -34,15 +34,12 @@
    <p>Internet Edition published by <a href="&link.project.website;">Project Aon</a>. This edition is intended to reflect the complete text of the original version. Where we have made minor corrections, they will be noted in the <a idref="errata">Errata</a>.</p>
   </description>
   <rights class="copyrights">
-   <line>Text copyright <ch.copy/> 1993 Joe Dever.</line>
-   <line>Illustrations copyright <ch.copy/> 1993 Brian Williams.</line>
+   <line>Text <ch.copy/> 1993 Joe Dever.</line>
+   <line>Illustrations <ch.copy/> 1993 Brian Williams.</line>
   </rights>
   <rights class="license-notification">
-   <p>
-    <line>Text copyright <ch.copy/> 1993 Joe Dever.</line>
-    <line>Illustrations copyright <ch.copy/> 1993 Brian Williams.</line>
-    <line>Distribution of this Internet Edition is restricted under the terms of the <a idref="license">Project Aon License</a>.</line>
-   </p>
+   <p>Text <ch.copy/> 1993 Joe Dever. Illustrations <ch.copy/> 1993 Brian Williams.</p>
+   <p>Distribution of this Internet Edition is restricted under the terms of the <a idref="license">Project Aon License</a>.</p>
   </rights>
  </meta>
 
@@ -219,8 +216,8 @@
 
       <footnotes>
        <footnote id="discplnz-1-foot" idref="discplnz-1">
-       <p>Weaponmastery bonuses are replaced by Grand Weaponmastery bonuses, not added cumulatively (cf. <a href="http://www.projectaon.org/en/ReadersHandbook/NewsletterExcerpts#lwcn28">Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 28</a>).</p>
-       <p>If you have completed previous adventures, already possess the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, and have reached the rank of <bookref book="12tmod" section="imprvdsc">Mentora</bookref>, it seems that you should already be able to add 5 to numbers picked from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> (i.e. the basic Weaponmastery with Bow bonus of 3 added to the Mentora bonus of 2 for all missile weapons). Likely, the author intended the Weaponmastery bonus at the Mentora rank to be a <quote>hidden loyalty bonus</quote> (cf. <a href="http://www.projectaon.org/en/ReadersHandbook/NewsletterExcerpts#lwcn28">Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 28</a>). In view of this, the <ch.plus/>2 Mentora bonus is therefore <em>not</em> cumulative with Grand Weaponmastery with Bow.</p>
+       <p>Weaponmastery bonuses are replaced by Grand Weaponmastery bonuses, not added cumulatively (cf. <a href="https://www.projectaon.org/en/ReadersHandbook/NewsletterExcerpts#lwcn28">Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 28</a>).</p>
+       <p>If you have completed previous adventures, already possess the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, and have reached the rank of <bookref book="12tmod" section="imprvdsc">Mentora</bookref>, it seems that you should already be able to add 5 to numbers picked from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> (i.e. the basic Weaponmastery with Bow bonus of 3 added to the Mentora bonus of 2 for all missile weapons). Likely, the author intended the Weaponmastery bonus at the Mentora rank to be a <quote>hidden loyalty bonus</quote> (cf. <a href="https://www.projectaon.org/en/ReadersHandbook/NewsletterExcerpts#lwcn28">Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 28</a>). In view of this, the <ch.plus/>2 Mentora bonus is therefore <em>not</em> cumulative with Grand Weaponmastery with Bow.</p>
        </footnote>
       </footnotes>
 
@@ -931,7 +928,7 @@
      <data>
       <p>You hit the stinking water and dive beneath the surface. But moments later you are struck forcefully in the side by the tip of the creature<ch.apos/>s tail, lifted into the air, and dashed against the rough earth wall of the cavern: lose 4 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
       <p>Coughing and gasping for breath, you find your feet and claw the muck from your eyes just in time to see the serpent<ch.apos/>s tail swishing back towards your chest. Instinctively you throw yourself against the wall and the deadly barbed tail misses you by inches. As it sweeps past, you draw your weapon in readiness to strike out at it the moment it comes within range.</p>
-      <combat><enemy>Ukara (chained)</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">44</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">45</enemy-attribute></combat>
+      <combat><enemy>Ukara <em>(chained)</em></enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">44</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">45</enemy-attribute></combat>
       <p>This serpent is immune to all forms of psychic attack, except Kai-surge and Kai-blast.</p>
       <choice idref="sect348">If you win the combat, <link-text>turn to 348</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
@@ -3024,7 +3021,7 @@
      <data>
       <p>You hit the stinking water and dive beneath the surface. Your swift reactions save you from being hit and wounded, but when you rise from the stinking mire and claw the muck from your eyes, you are horrified to see the serpent<ch.apos/>s tail swishing back towards your chest.</p>
       <p>Instinctively you throw yourself flat against the wall and its deadly barbed tail misses you by inches. As it sweeps past, you draw your weapon in readiness to strike out at it the moment it comes within range.</p>
-      <combat><enemy>Ukara (chained)</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">44</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">45</enemy-attribute></combat>
+      <combat><enemy>Ukara <em>(chained)</em></enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">44</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">45</enemy-attribute></combat>
       <p>This serpent is immune to all forms of psychic attack, except Kai-surge and Kai-blast.</p>
       <choice idref="sect348">If you win the combat, <link-text>turn to 348</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
@@ -4371,7 +4368,7 @@
        <instance class="pdf" src="ill15.pdf" width="386" height="575"/>
       </illustration>
 
-      <combat><enemy>Manoyd (with power gloves)</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">40</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">40</enemy-attribute></combat>
+      <combat><enemy>Manoyd <em>(with power gloves)</em></enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">40</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">40</enemy-attribute></combat>
       <p>Unless you possess Grand Weaponmastery and have attained the rank of Grand Crown, you must reduce your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> by 4 for the duration of this fight.<footref id="sect276-1" idref="sect276-1-foot"/></p>
       <choice idref="sect289">If you win the combat, <link-text>turn to 289</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>