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        <p>Once you are a safe distance from the wooded rise, you glance back over your shoulder to check that Kronar and his bandit gang are not in pursuit of the caravan. Your senses detect that the road behind is clear and you tell Chan of this. He is greatly relieved that the Imperial Caravan has been spared Kronar<ch.apos/>s attack. The bandit leader has a notorious reputation for murdering anyone who witnesses his acts of highway robbery.</p>
-       <p>After the drama of the confrontation with Captain Kronar, you are thankful that the rest of the day passes uneventfully. It is early evening when the caravan arrives at Javai, a fortified Chai trading town positioned on the rim of a fertile plateau. Chan negotiates with the guards at the town<ch.apos/>s west gate and the caravan is allowed to enter. You pass along a bustling street, bordered by wooden two-storey dwellings, which leads to the walled chateau of Javai<ch.apos/>s mayoress, Madame Omaki. Here the caravan draws to a halt in the middle of a flagstoned courtyard, ringed by plum trees. A plump woman with gleaming coiffured hair emerges from the chateau and greets Captain Chan. You can tell by their jovial exchange that they are old friends. Chan swears her to secrecy about the presence of the Khea-khan, and she dutifully instructs her servants to secure all the entrances and exits to her estate.</p>
+       <p>After the drama of the confrontation with Captain Kronar, you are thankful that the rest of the day passes uneventfully. It is early evening when the caravan arrives at Javai, a fortified Chai trading town positioned on the rim of a fertile plateau. Chan negotiates with the guards at the town<ch.apos/>s west gate and the caravan is allowed to enter. You pass along a bustling street, bordered by two-storey wooden dwellings, which leads to the walled chateau of Javai<ch.apos/>s mayoress, Madame Omaki. Here the caravan draws to a halt in the middle of a flagstoned courtyard, ringed by plum trees. A plump woman with gleaming coiffured hair emerges from the chateau and greets Captain Chan. You can tell by their jovial exchange that they are old friends. Chan swears her to secrecy about the presence of the Khea-khan, and she dutifully instructs her servants to secure all the entrances and exits to her estate.</p>
 
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-       <p>Your mastery of the Kai Herbcrafts enables you to recognize this vile gas. It is Vozga, and it makes you cough and retch violently (lose 1 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point).</p>
+       <p>Your mastery of Kai herbcraft enables you to recognize this vile gas. It is Vozga, and it makes you cough and retch violently (lose 1 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point).</p>
        <p>As your Magnakai Discipline of Nexus begins to neutralize the toxins that have entered your lungs, you order Princess Mitzu to help her father to safety. You fear that the Vozga will swiftly be fatal to the aged Khea-khan if he should inhale its poisonous vapours. The brave Princess obeys your command. As she helps her father to reach the far end of the burial crypt, you run through the poisonous cloud and set off in determined pursuit of the tyrant and his young hostage.</p>
        <choice idref="sect6"><link-text>Turn to 6</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -5481,12 +5481,13 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect37">37</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>steam cannon</quote> with <quote>steam-cannon</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-surge, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-surge and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Assimilance, and</quote> with <quote>Assimilance and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Replaced <quote>flagtower</quote> with <quote>flag-tower</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Replaced <quote>Okami<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Omaki<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Replaced <quote>Okami<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Omaki<ch.apos/>s</quote>. Replaced <quote>wooden two-storey dwellings</quote> with <quote>two-storey wooden dwellings</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect41">41</a>) Replaced <quote>power word</quote> with <quote>power-word</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect42">42</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>grammes</quote> with <quote>grams</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect43">43</a>) Replaced <quote>densely packed</quote> with <quote>densely-packed</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect44">44</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect45">45</a>) Replaced <quote>carriage, then</quote> with <quote>carriage, and then</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect46">46</a>) Replaced <quote>the Kai Herbcrafts</quote> with <quote>Kai herbcraft</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect47">47</a>) Replaced <quote>replies, <ch.lsquot/>But</quote> with <quote>replies. <ch.lsquot/>But</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect49">49</a>) Added a period after <quote>turn to 30</quote>. Replaced <quote>western rim</quote> with <quote>eastern rim</quote> as <a idref="sect2">Sections 2</a> and <a idref="sect130">130</a> indicate a speedy exit from the vale early the following morning.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect50">50</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>.</p>