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@@ -676,6 +676,10 @@
       </meta>
 
       <footnotes>
+       <footnote id="equipmnt-4-foot" idref="equipmnt-4">
+        <p>During the adventure, the story will assume that you possess a Bow when you may not. If it is important to you to avoid this story continuity problem, you should ensure that you obtain a Bow.</p>
+       </footnote>
+
        <footnote id="equipmnt-1-foot" idref="equipmnt-1">
         <p>If you have completed any of the previous <cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> adventures (Books 21+), you already possess a Kai Weapon.</p>
        </footnote>
@@ -691,7 +695,7 @@
 
       <data>
        <p>Before you leave the Kai Monastery to accompany the Khea-khan of Chai, you equip yourself with a <a idref="map">map of the Great Lissan Plain and its surrounding territories</a> and a pouch of gold. To find out how much gold is in the pouch, pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> and add 20 to the number you have picked. The total equals the number of Gold Crowns inside the pouch, and you should now enter this number in the <quote>Gold Crowns</quote> section of your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
-       <p>If you have successfully completed previous <cite>New Order</cite> adventures (Books 21<ch.endash/>27), you may add this sum to the number of Crowns you already possess. Fifty is the maximum number of Gold Crowns you can carry in your pouch at any time. You may also select five items from the list below, only two of which may be Weapons.</p>
+       <p>If you have successfully completed previous <cite>New Order</cite> adventures (Books 21<ch.endash/>27), you may add this sum to the number of Crowns you already possess. Fifty is the maximum number of Gold Crowns you can carry in your pouch at any time. You may also select five items from the list below, only two of which may be Weapons.<footref id="equipmnt-4" idref="equipmnt-4-foot"/></p>
        <ul class="paragraphed">
         <li><p>Broadsword (Weapons)</p>
          <illustration class="inline">
@@ -1335,8 +1339,14 @@
     <section class="numbered" id="sect6">
      <meta><title>6</title></meta>
 
+     <footnotes>
+       <footnote id="sect6-1-foot" idref="sect6-1">
+        <p>If you do not possess a Bow, it seems unlikely that you will be able to make effective use of the Arrow of Atonement against the Autarch. You may decide that you have had a chance after acquiring the Arrow of Atonement to also find a Bow (mark the Bow on your Action Chart, discarding another Weapon if necessary), that you are still able to use the Arrow of Atonement without a Bow, or that not having a Bow leads to a failure to accomplish your mission. Use your best judgement.</p>
+       </footnote>
+     </footnotes>
+
      <data>
-       <p>You catch up with the Autarch in a chamber heaped with rubble and earth. He is ascending the mound towards a hole in the ceiling that was made by the shells from his steam-cannon. You quickly draw the Arrow of Atonement to your Bow and command the tyrant to free the young Prince. The sound of your voice makes him spin around and curse you vilely through the visor of his tiger helm. Prince Kamada wriggles like a snake and suddenly he escapes from the Autarch<ch.apos/>s grasp. Before the evil Sejanoz can snatch him back, you release your Arrow of Atonement and send it whistling towards his foul heart.</p>
+       <p>You catch up with the Autarch in a chamber heaped with rubble and earth. He is ascending the mound towards a hole in the ceiling that was made by the shells from his steam-cannon. You quickly draw the Arrow of Atonement to your Bow<footref id="sect6-1" idref="sect6-1-foot"/> and command the tyrant to free the young Prince. The sound of your voice makes him spin around and curse you vilely through the visor of his tiger helm. Prince Kamada wriggles like a snake and suddenly he escapes from the Autarch<ch.apos/>s grasp. Before the evil Sejanoz can snatch him back, you release your Arrow of Atonement and send it whistling towards his foul heart.</p>
        <choice idref="sect113"><link-text>Turn to 113</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
@@ -1357,8 +1367,8 @@
      <meta><title>8</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-       <p>Splashes of the creature<ch.apos/>s caustic blood and saliva draw wisps of smoke from the sleeves of your tunic. Quickly you run to a geyser pool and wash this vile fluid away before it eats through to your skin. As you are cleaning you clothes, you notice to your dismay that the caustic fluid has eaten a hole in your Belt Pouch and you have lost half of your gold coins.</p>
-       <p>You must reduce your current total of Gold Coins by half. Remember to make the necessary adjustment in the Belt Pouch section of your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> before continuing.</p>
+       <p>Splashes of the creature<ch.apos/>s caustic blood and saliva draw wisps of smoke from the sleeves of your tunic. Quickly you run to a geyser pool and wash this vile fluid away before it eats through to your skin. As you are cleaning your clothes, you notice to your dismay that the caustic fluid has eaten a hole in your Belt Pouch and you have lost half of your coins.</p>
+       <p>You must reduce your current total of coins by half. Remember to make the necessary adjustment in the Belt Pouch section of your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> before continuing.</p>
        <choice idref="sect2"><link-text>Turn to 2</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
@@ -1367,7 +1377,7 @@
      <meta><title>9</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-       <p>The fight comes to an abrupt end when you deal the last living creature a mighty blow to the base of its deformed head. As it falls lifelessly to the ground, Sergeant Yeng rushes to check that his men have also survived intact. Cautiously you inspect the bodies of the slain beasts and quickly determine that all three are of Agarashi descent. They have probably come down from the Hyunsei Foothills in a desperate search for prey, for the corpses are emaciated by hunger. Sergeant Yeng confirms your suspicions. He tells you that long ago, during the Age of Eternal Night, this land was stalked by Agarashi<ch.emdash/>the hellish creations of Agarash the Damned. When Agarash was destroyed by the Elder Magi, his creations were scattered across the wilderness and plains of Chai. The descendants of these beasts are still alive today, hiding in hills, burrows, and caves. They do not usually attack travellers unless driven by disease or famine.</p>
+       <p>The fight comes to an abrupt end when you deal the last living creature a mighty blow to the base of its deformed head. As it falls lifelessly to the ground, Sergeant Yeng rushes to check that his men have also survived intact. Cautiously you inspect the bodies of the slain beasts and quickly determine that all three are of Agarashi descent. They have probably come down from the Hyunsei foothills in a desperate search for prey, for the corpses are emaciated by hunger. Sergeant Yeng confirms your suspicions. He tells you that long ago, during the Age of Eternal Night, this land was stalked by Agarashi<ch.emdash/>the hellish creations of Agarash the Damned. When Agarash was destroyed by the Elder Magi, his creations were scattered across the wilderness and plains of Chai. The descendants of these beasts are still alive today, hiding in hills, burrows, and caves. They do not usually attack travellers unless driven by disease or famine.</p>
        <p>Using your tracking skills, you quickly determine that there are no other creatures like these in this vicinity. Only then do you and the troopers remount your horses and continue along the highway towards the Javai Forest. A few miles short of the forest you discover a freshwater spring which is forded by the highway. It is an ideal site for a night camp, and so you send one of Yeng<ch.apos/>s men back to the caravan to tell them that you shall await their arrival here.</p>
        <p>During your wait for the caravan, unless you possess the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery, you must now eat a Meal or lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
        <choice idref="sect45">To continue, <link-text>turn to 45</link-text>.</choice>
@@ -1467,7 +1477,7 @@
      <meta><title>18</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-       <p>As the carriage draws level with your horse, you leap from the saddle and scramble onto the roof. You are drawing your Kai Weapon from its sheath when one of the two remaining monsters lashes out at you with its razor-sharp talons. You shield your face with your free arm, but its cruel claws slash your unarmoured limb: lose 4 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. You must now fight them.</p>
+       <p>As the carriage draws level with your horse, you leap from the saddle and scramble onto the roof. You are drawing your Kai Weapon from its sheath when one of the monsters lashes out at you with its razor-sharp talons. You shield your face with your free arm, but its cruel claws slash your unarmoured limb: lose 4 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. You must now fight them.</p>
 
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        <meta>
@@ -1532,7 +1542,7 @@
      <meta><title>22</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-       <p>Hurriedly, you recite the words of the Brotherhood Spell <spell>Halt Missile</spell>, and sweep your hand before your face with a circular motion. Kronar<ch.apos/>s arrow strikes the invisible shield created by your spell, and shatters harmlessly into a hundred pieces. Chan flattens himself to the neck of his horse to avoid the other arrow, and its barbed tip grazes his shoulder.</p>
+       <p>Hurriedly, you recite the words of the Brotherhood Spell <spell>Invisible Shield</spell>, and sweep your hand before your face with a circular motion. Kronar<ch.apos/>s arrow strikes the invisible shield created by your spell, and shatters harmlessly into a hundred pieces. Chan flattens himself to the neck of his horse to avoid the other arrow, and its barbed tip grazes his shoulder.</p>
        <choice idref="sect112"><link-text>Turn to 112</link-text>.</choice>
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     </section>
@@ -1714,7 +1724,7 @@
 
      <data>
        <p>Once you are a safe distance from the wooded rise, you glance back over your shoulder to check that Kronar and his bandit gang are not in pursuit of the caravan. Your senses detect that the road behind is clear and you tell Chan of this. He is greatly relieved that the Imperial Caravan has been spared Kronar<ch.apos/>s attack. The bandit leader has a notorious reputation for murdering anyone who witnesses his acts of highway robbery.</p>
-       <p>After the drama of the confrontation with Captain Kronar, you are thankful that the rest of the day passes uneventfully. It is early evening when the caravan arrives at Javai, a fortified Chai trading town positioned on the rim of a fertile plateau. Chan negotiates with the guards at the town<ch.apos/>s west gate and the caravan is allowed to enter. You pass along a bustling street, bordered by wooden two-storey dwellings, which leads to the walled chateau of Javai<ch.apos/>s mayoress, Madame Omaki. Here the caravan draws to a halt in the middle of a flagstoned courtyard, ringed by plum trees. A plump woman with gleaming coiffured hair emerges from the chateau and greets Captain Chan. You can tell by their jovial exchange that they are old friends. Chan swears her to secrecy about the presence of the Khea-khan, and she dutifully instructs her servants to secure all the entrances and exits to her estate.</p>
+       <p>After the drama of the confrontation with Captain Kronar, you are thankful that the rest of the day passes uneventfully. It is early evening when the caravan arrives at Javai, a fortified Chai trading town positioned on the rim of a fertile plateau. Chan negotiates with the guards at the town<ch.apos/>s west gate and the caravan is allowed to enter. You pass along a bustling street, bordered by two-storey wooden dwellings, which leads to the walled chateau of Javai<ch.apos/>s mayoress, Madame Omaki. Here the caravan draws to a halt in the middle of a flagstoned courtyard, ringed by plum trees. A plump woman with gleaming coiffured hair emerges from the chateau and greets Captain Chan. You can tell by their jovial exchange that they are old friends. Chan swears her to secrecy about the presence of the Khea-khan, and she dutifully instructs her servants to secure all the entrances and exits to her estate.</p>
 
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        <meta>
@@ -1800,7 +1810,7 @@
      <meta><title>46</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-       <p>Your mastery of the Kai Herbcrafts enables you to recognize this vile gas. It is Vozga, and it makes you cough and retch violently (lose 1 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point).</p>
+       <p>Your mastery of Kai herbcraft enables you to recognize this vile gas. It is Vozga, and it makes you cough and retch violently (lose 1 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point).</p>
        <p>As your Magnakai Discipline of Nexus begins to neutralize the toxins that have entered your lungs, you order Princess Mitzu to help her father to safety. You fear that the Vozga will swiftly be fatal to the aged Khea-khan if he should inhale its poisonous vapours. The brave Princess obeys your command. As she helps her father to reach the far end of the burial crypt, you run through the poisonous cloud and set off in determined pursuit of the tyrant and his young hostage.</p>
        <choice idref="sect6"><link-text>Turn to 6</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
@@ -2355,9 +2365,9 @@
      <data>
        <p><quote>Captain Chan, let the prisoner go<ch.ellips/></quote> you whisper, <quote>and be ready to signal to the caravan.</quote></p>
        <p>Reluctantly, Chan obeys your command. He unwinds the trailing rope from his saddle and Xango digs his heels into his horse<ch.apos/>s flanks, making the animal lurch away at the gallop. As soon as his brother is out of the field of fire, Kronar utters a coarse laugh. Then, simultaneously, he and his companion let loose their straining bowstrings.</p>
-       <choice idref="sect22">If you possess Kai-alchemy and have attained the rank of Sun Knight, <link-text>turn to 22</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect22">If you possess Kai-alchemy and wish to use it, <link-text>turn to 22</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect215">If you possess Magi-magic and wish to use it, <link-text>turn to 215</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect170">If you do not possess either of these skills, or if you have yet to attain the required level of Kai Mastery, <link-text>turn instead to 170</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect170">If you do not possess either of these skills, <link-text>turn instead to 170</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -2406,7 +2416,7 @@
 
      <data>
        <p>The fight ends abruptly when you deal your enemy a mighty blow to the base of its deformed neck. As it crumples lifelessly to the ground, you join with Sergeant Yeng and rush to aid the trooper who is caught in the strands of your sticky net. One well-aimed blow puts paid to the creature that is ensnared in the net with him, and then you quickly recite the words to counter the spell and the thankful trooper is soon released.</p>
-       <p>Cautiously you inspect the bodies of the slain enemy and determine that they are of Agarashi descent. They have probably come down from the Hyunsei Foothills in a desperate search for prey, for all three corpses show signs of starvation. Sergeant Yeng confirms your suspicions. He tells you that long ago, during the Age of Eternal Night, this land was stalked by the Agarashi<ch.emdash/>the hellish creations of Agarash the Damned. When Agarash was destroyed by the Elder Magi, his creations were scattered across the wilderness and plains of Chai. The descendants of those beasts are still alive today, hiding in hills, burrows, and caves. They rarely attack travellers on the trade road, unless driven by disease or extreme hunger.</p>
+       <p>Cautiously you inspect the bodies of the slain enemy and determine that they are of Agarashi descent. They have probably come down from the Hyunsei foothills in a desperate search for prey, for all three corpses show signs of starvation. Sergeant Yeng confirms your suspicions. He tells you that long ago, during the Age of Eternal Night, this land was stalked by the Agarashi<ch.emdash/>the hellish creations of Agarash the Damned. When Agarash was destroyed by the Elder Magi, his creations were scattered across the wilderness and plains of Chai. The descendants of those beasts are still alive today, hiding in hills, burrows, and caves. They rarely attack travellers on the trade road, unless driven by disease or extreme hunger.</p>
        <p>Using your tracking skills, you quickly determine that there are no other creatures like these in this vicinity. Only then do you and the troopers remount your horses and continue along the highway towards the Javai Forest. A few miles short of the forest you discover a freshwater spring which is forded by the highway. It is an ideal site for a night camp, and so you send one of Yeng<ch.apos/>s men back to the caravan to tell them that you shall await their arrival here.</p>
        <p>During your wait for the caravan, unless you possess the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery, you must now eat a Meal or lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
        <choice idref="sect45">To continue, <link-text>turn to 45</link-text>.</choice>
@@ -3832,7 +3842,7 @@
      <meta><title>215</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-       <p>Quickly, you speak the words of the Old Kingdom Spell <spell>Invisible Shield</spell>, and move your open hand before your face with a circular motion. Kronar<ch.apos/>s arrow strikes the shimmering barrier created by your spell and is deflected harmlessly away. Captain Chan flattens himself to the neck of his horse to avoid the other arrow. His swift reflexes save his life, and he escapes the missile<ch.apos/>s barbed tip with nothing more than a grazed shoulder.</p>
+       <p>Quickly, you speak the words of the Old Kingdom Spell <spell>Shield</spell>, and move your open hand before your face with a circular motion. Kronar<ch.apos/>s arrow strikes the shimmering barrier created by your spell and is deflected harmlessly away. Captain Chan flattens himself to the neck of his horse to avoid the other arrow. His swift reflexes save his life, and he escapes the missile<ch.apos/>s barbed tip with nothing more than a grazed shoulder.</p>
        <choice idref="sect112"><link-text>Turn to 112</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -4609,7 +4619,7 @@
 
      <data>
        <p>The threat to the caravan ends abruptly when you deal the last monster a mighty blow to the base of its deformed head. As it falls from the carriage, you grab the reins and bring the wagon smoothly to a halt. Captain Chan tries to calm the alarmed members of the Khea-khan<ch.apos/>s entourage by telling them that the threat has now passed. As their panic subsides, he and his men report to the Khea-khan<ch.apos/>s carriage and tell Kau-Doshin that order has been restored. He is greatly reassured to hear that his Imperial Majesty is no longer in any immediate danger.</p>
-       <p>You walk back cautiously along the highway and inspect the bodies of the slain enemy. You are quickly able to determine that all three are of Agarashi descent. They have probably come down from the Hyunsei Foothills in a desperate search for prey, for their corpses are badly emaciated by hunger. Sergeant Yeng rides up and confirms your belief. He tells you that long ago, during the Age of Eternal Night, this land was stalked by Agarashi<ch.emdash/>the hellish creations of Agarash the Damned. When Agarash was destroyed by the Elder Magi, his creations were scattered across the wilderness and plains of Chai. The descendants of these beasts are still alive today, hiding in hills, burrows, forests, and caves.</p>
+       <p>You walk back cautiously along the highway and inspect the bodies of the slain enemy. You are quickly able to determine that all three are of Agarashi descent. They have probably come down from the Hyunsei foothills in a desperate search for prey, for their corpses are badly emaciated by hunger. Sergeant Yeng rides up and confirms your belief. He tells you that long ago, during the Age of Eternal Night, this land was stalked by Agarashi<ch.emdash/>the hellish creations of Agarash the Damned. When Agarash was destroyed by the Elder Magi, his creations were scattered across the wilderness and plains of Chai. The descendants of these beasts are still alive today, hiding in hills, burrows, forests, and caves.</p>
        <p><quote>They do not usually attack travellers,</quote> says Chan, <quote>unless driven to do so by disease<ch.ellips/>or hunger.</quote></p>
        <p>Using your tracking skills, you quickly determine that there are no other Agarashi like these in this vicinity. Only then do you remount your horse and ride with Chan to the head of the column. As you pass by the Khea-khan<ch.apos/>s carriage, Kau-Doshin calls you to halt. With a respectful bow of his greying head, he praises you for the skill and bravery you displayed while countering the unexpected attack.</p>
        <p><quote>The Khea-khan and I will not forget your act of courage, my lord,</quote> he says. <quote>We shall ensure that you are duly rewarded upon our safe arrival in Tazhan.</quote></p>
@@ -4777,7 +4787,7 @@
      <meta><title>295</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-       <p>The fight ends abruptly when you deal the last living creature a mighty blow to the base of its deformed head. As it falls lifelessly to the ground, Sergeant Yeng rushes to check that his men have survived intact. Cautiously you inspect the bodies of the slain enemy and quickly determine that they are of Agarashi descent. They have probably come down from the Hyunsei Foothills in a desperate search for prey, for all three corpses are emaciated by hunger. Sergeant Yeng confirms your suspicions. He tells you that long ago, during the Age of Eternal Night, this land was stalked by Agarashi<ch.emdash/>the hellish creations of Agarash the Damned. When Agarash was destroyed by the Elder Magi, his creations were scattered across the wilderness and plains of Chai. The descendants of these beasts are still alive today, hiding in hills, burrows, and caves. They do not usually attack travellers unless driven by disease or famine.</p>
+       <p>The fight ends abruptly when you deal the last living creature a mighty blow to the base of its deformed head. As it falls lifelessly to the ground, Sergeant Yeng rushes to check that his men have survived intact. Cautiously you inspect the bodies of the slain enemy and quickly determine that they are of Agarashi descent. They have probably come down from the Hyunsei foothills in a desperate search for prey, for all three corpses are emaciated by hunger. Sergeant Yeng confirms your suspicions. He tells you that long ago, during the Age of Eternal Night, this land was stalked by Agarashi<ch.emdash/>the hellish creations of Agarash the Damned. When Agarash was destroyed by the Elder Magi, his creations were scattered across the wilderness and plains of Chai. The descendants of these beasts are still alive today, hiding in hills, burrows, and caves. They do not usually attack travellers unless driven by disease or famine.</p>
        <p>Using your tracking skills, you quickly determine that there are no other creatures like these in this vicinity. Only then do you and the troopers remount your horses and continue along the highway towards the Javai Forest. A few miles short of the forest you discover a freshwater spring which is forded by the highway. It is an ideal site for a night camp, and so you send one of Yeng<ch.apos/>s men back to the caravan to tell them you shall await their arrival here.</p>
        <p>During your wait for the caravan, unless you possess the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery, you must now eat a Meal or lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
        <choice idref="sect45">To continue, <link-text>turn to 45</link-text>.</choice>
@@ -5449,17 +5459,17 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Replaced <quote>date and</quote> with <quote>date, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow of Atonement</quote>. Replaced <quote>steam cannon</quote> with <quote>steam-cannon</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect7">7</a>) Replaced <quote>everyone except the sentries are asleep</quote> with <quote>everyone is asleep except the sentries</quote>. Replaced <quote>rest, and unless</quote> with <quote>rest, unless</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect8">8</a>) Replaced <quote>belt pouch</quote> with <quote>Belt Pouch</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect9">9</a>) Replaced <quote>burrows and</quote> with <quote>burrows, and</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>agarashi</quote> with <quote>Agarashi</quote>. Replaced <quote>fresh water spring</quote> with <quote>freshwater spring</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect8">8</a>) Replaced <quote>belt pouch</quote> with <quote>Belt Pouch</quote>. Replaced <quote>half of your coins</quote> with <quote>half of your coins</quote>. Replaced <quote>total of Gold Coins by half</quote> with <quote>total of coins by half</quote> because not all currency units are made of gold, and the loss is due to the Belt Pouch being eaten through rather than the gold coins being damaged.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect9">9</a>) Replaced <quote>burrows and</quote> with <quote>burrows, and</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>agarashi</quote> with <quote>Agarashi</quote>. Replaced <quote>fresh water spring</quote> with <quote>freshwater spring</quote>. Replaced <quote>Hyunsei Foothills</quote> with <quote>Hyunsei foothills</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Replaced <quote>to Khea-khan<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>to the Khea-khan<ch.apos/>s</quote>. Replaced <quote>agarashi</quote> with <quote>Agarashi</quote>. Replaced <quote>western rim</quote> with <quote>eastern rim</quote> as <a idref="sect2">Sections 2</a> and <a idref="sect130">130</a> indicate a speedy exit from the vale early the following morning. Replaced <quote>Some descend</quote> with <quote>Some of the fissures descend</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect12">12</a>) Replaced <quote>Special Items list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">list of Special Items</a></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect14">14</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>you look at each of the people in turn who have gathered</quote> with <quote>you look in turn at each person who is gathered</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect16">16</a>) Replaced <quote>They lead</quote> with <quote>It leads</quote> respecting the robbers<ch.apos/> trail.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect17">17</a>) Replaced <quote>Magnakai Disciplines of Nexus and Healing</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Disciplines of Nexus and Curing</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect18">18</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect18">18</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>one of the two remaining monsters</quote> with <quote>one of the monsters</quote> as there are still three of them.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect19">19</a>) Replaced <quote>densely packed</quote> with <quote>densely-packed</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect22">22</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a id="err22" idref="sect22">22</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Replaced <quote><spell>Halt Missile</spell></quote> with <quote><spell>Invisible Shield</spell></quote> as the spell described in the section is <spell>Invisible Shield</spell>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect24">24</a>) Replaced <quote>steam cannon</quote> with <quote>steam-cannon</quote>. Replaced <quote>the enemy have a</quote> with <quote>the enemy has a</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect25">25</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-surge, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-surge and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect26">26</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
@@ -5471,12 +5481,13 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect37">37</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>steam cannon</quote> with <quote>steam-cannon</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-surge, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-surge and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Assimilance, and</quote> with <quote>Assimilance and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Replaced <quote>flagtower</quote> with <quote>flag-tower</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Replaced <quote>Okami<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Omaki<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Replaced <quote>Okami<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Omaki<ch.apos/>s</quote>. Replaced <quote>wooden two-storey dwellings</quote> with <quote>two-storey wooden dwellings</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect41">41</a>) Replaced <quote>power word</quote> with <quote>power-word</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect42">42</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>grammes</quote> with <quote>grams</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect43">43</a>) Replaced <quote>densely packed</quote> with <quote>densely-packed</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect44">44</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect45">45</a>) Replaced <quote>carriage, then</quote> with <quote>carriage, and then</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect46">46</a>) Replaced <quote>the Kai Herbcrafts</quote> with <quote>Kai herbcraft</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect47">47</a>) Replaced <quote>replies, <ch.lsquot/>But</quote> with <quote>replies. <ch.lsquot/>But</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect49">49</a>) Added a period after <quote>turn to 30</quote>. Replaced <quote>western rim</quote> with <quote>eastern rim</quote> as <a idref="sect2">Sections 2</a> and <a idref="sect130">130</a> indicate a speedy exit from the vale early the following morning.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect50">50</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>.</p>
@@ -5504,11 +5515,11 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect87">87</a>) Replaced <quote>A healing fungi</quote> with <quote>A healing fungus</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Replaced <quote>mid-summer</quote> with <quote>midsummer</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect90">90</a>) Replaced <quote>Shavane, <ch.lsquot/>he<ch.apos/>ll</quote> with <quote>Shavane. <ch.lsquot/>He<ch.apos/>ll</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect92">92</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai rank of</quote> with <quote>rank of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect92">92</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai rank of</quote> with <quote>rank of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and have attained the rank of Sun Knight,</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and wish to use it</quote> (cf. <a idref="err22">erratum for Section 22</a>). Deleted <quote>or if you have yet to attain the required level of Kai Mastery,</quote> in view of the previous change, as an Improved Discipline is no longer required here. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect94">94</a>) Replaced <quote>gases and</quote> with <quote>gases, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect95">95</a>) Replaced <quote><onomatopoeia>Crack</onomatopoeia>!; the</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>Crack</onomatopoeia>! The</quote>. Replaced <quote>ribcage</quote> with <quote>rib cage</quote>. Replaced <quote>Knight, or</quote> with <quote>Knight or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect96">96</a>) Replaced <quote>throght</quote> with <quote>throughout</quote>. Replaced <quote>distant corridor</quote> with <quote>distant corridors</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect97">97</a>) Replaced <quote>him, then</quote> with <quote>him, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>burrows and</quote> with <quote>burrows, and</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>agarashi</quote> with <quote>Agarashi</quote>. Replaced <quote>fresh water spring</quote> with <quote>freshwater spring</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect97">97</a>) Replaced <quote>him, then</quote> with <quote>him, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>burrows and</quote> with <quote>burrows, and</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>agarashi</quote> with <quote>Agarashi</quote>. Replaced <quote>fresh water spring</quote> with <quote>freshwater spring</quote>. Replaced <quote>Hyunsei Foothills</quote> with <quote>Hyunsei foothills</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect99">99</a>) Replaced <quote>icy-fiends</quote> with <quote>ice-fiends</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Replaced <quote>imperial family</quote> with <quote>Imperial Family</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect101">101</a>) Replaced <quote>interpretation of the signs indicate</quote> with <quote>interpretation of the signs indicates</quote>. Replaced <quote>advise that</quote> with <quote>advise her that</quote>. Replaced <quote>imperial family</quote> with <quote>Imperial Family</quote>.</p>
@@ -5601,7 +5612,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect212">212</a>) Replaced <quote>power word</quote> with <quote>power-word</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect213">213</a>) Replaced <quote>Kirusami</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-chaian">Kirusami</foreign></quote>. Replaced <quote>to <ch.minus/>1</quote> with <quote>by 1</quote>. Replaced <quote>point).</quote> with <quote>point.)</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect214">214</a>) Replaced <quote>platform, then</quote> with <quote>platform; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Replaced <quote>flagtower</quote> with <quote>flag-tower</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect215">215</a>) Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom spell</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spell</quote>. Replaced <quote>reflex saves</quote> with <quote>reflexes save</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect215">215</a>) Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom spell</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spell</quote>. Replaced <quote>reflex saves</quote> with <quote>reflexes save</quote>. Replaced <quote><spell>Invisible Shield</spell></quote> with <quote><spell>Shield</spell></quote> as <spell>Invisible Shield</spell> is a Brotherhood Spell, not an Old Kingdom Spell as here stated.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect217">217</a>) Replaced <quote>out of Rakholi</quote> with <quote>out from Rakholi</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect218">218</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>ie,</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>7 or 9</quote> with <quote>7, or 9</quote>. Replaced <quote>0, 2, 4, 6 or 8</quote> with <quote>2, 4, 6, 8, or 0</quote>. Replaced <quote>survived your wounds</quote> with <quote>survived your wounding</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect219">219</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
@@ -5643,7 +5654,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect277">277</a>) Replaced <quote>hesitates, then</quote> with <quote>hesitates, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>counter threat</quote> with <quote>counter-threat</quote>. Swapped the destination of the links, so that now a score of 5 or lower now leads to <a idref="sect201">Section 201</a> which has the larger <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> penalty, whereas a score of 6 or more now leads to <a idref="sect29">Section 29</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect278">278</a>) Replaced <quote> your surprise you</quote> with <quote>your surprise, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>steam cannon</quote> with <quote>steam-cannon</quote>. Replaced <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote>. Replaced <quote>steam cannon</quote> with <quote>steam-cannon</quote> and <quote>50 metres</quote> with <quote>50 yards</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect279">279</a>) Added a paragraph break between <quote>the touch.</quote> and <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>What killed</quote>. Added a paragraph break between <quote>asks Chan.</quote> and <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>You won<ch.apos/>t</quote>. Replaced <quote>icy cold</quote> with <quote>ice cold</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect280">280</a>) Replaced <quote>forests and</quote> with <quote>forests, and</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>agarashi</quote> with <quote>Agarashi</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Kau Doshin</quote> with <quote>Kau-Doshin</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect280">280</a>) Replaced <quote>forests and</quote> with <quote>forests, and</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>agarashi</quote> with <quote>Agarashi</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Kau Doshin</quote> with <quote>Kau-Doshin</quote>. Replaced <quote>Hyunsei Foothills</quote> with <quote>Hyunsei foothills</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect282">282</a>) Replaced <quote>densely packed</quote> with <quote>densely-packed</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect284">284</a>) Replaced <quote>cavalry, then</quote> with <quote>cavalry, and then</quote>. Added a paragraph break between <quote>says Chan.</quote> and <quote>Kasarian nods</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect286">286</a>) Replaced <quote>imperial family</quote> with <quote>Imperial Family</quote>.</p>
@@ -5653,7 +5664,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect290">290</a>) Replaced <quote>gases and</quote> with <quote>gases, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect292">292</a>) Replaced <quote>treeline</quote> with <quote>tree-line</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle cry</quote> with <quote>battle-cry</quote>. Replaced <quote>southern Magnamund</quote> with <quote>Southern Magnamund</quote>. Replaced <quote>Between their</quote> with <quote>From between their</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect293">293</a>) Replaced <quote>picks and</quote> with <quote>picks, and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect295">295</a>) Replaced <quote>burrows and</quote> with <quote>burrows, and</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>agarashi</quote> with <quote>Agarashi</quote>. Replaced <quote>fresh water spring</quote> with <quote>freshwater spring</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect295">295</a>) Replaced <quote>burrows and</quote> with <quote>burrows, and</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>agarashi</quote> with <quote>Agarashi</quote>. Replaced <quote>fresh water spring</quote> with <quote>freshwater spring</quote>. Replaced <quote>Hyunsei Foothills</quote> with <quote>Hyunsei foothills</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect296">296</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Added a paragraph break between <quote>innocence.</quote> and <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>What</quote>. Added a paragraph break between <quote>you ask.</quote> and <quote>Chan explains</quote>. Added a paragraph break between <quote>his cot.</quote> and <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>He is</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-surge, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-surge and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect297">297</a>) Replaced <quote>Shavane, <ch.lsquot/>he<ch.apos/>ll</quote> with <quote>Shavane. <ch.lsquot/>He<ch.apos/>ll</quote>. Replaced <quote>your backpack</quote> with <quote>your Backpack</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect298">298</a>) Replaced <quote>sunbreak</quote> with <quote>daybreak</quote>.</p>