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diff --git a/en/xml/28thos.xml b/en/xml/28thos.xml
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@@ -4446,7 +4446,7 @@
      <meta><title>267</title></meta>
 
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-       <p><quote>I intend to make a gift of it to you, my Lord. It is fitting that a Kai should possess this weapon. I pray that one day you shall be able to put it to its proper purpose<ch.emdash/>to use this missile to slay the tyrant lord of Bhanar.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>I intend to make a gift of it to you, my lord. It is fitting that a Kai should possess this weapon. I pray that one day you shall be able to put it to its proper purpose<ch.emdash/>to use this missile to slay the tyrant lord of Bhanar.</quote></p>
        <p>Reverently he hands the arrow to you and you accept it gratefully.</p>
        <p>Record this Arrow of Atonement as a Special Item. You must discard another item if you already carry the maximum number permissible.</p>
        <choice idref="sect7">To continue, <link-text>turn to 7</link-text>.</choice>
@@ -5631,6 +5631,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect262">262</a>) Replaced <quote>Magnakai Disciplines of Nexus and Healing</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Disciplines of Nexus and Curing</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect265">265</a>) Replaced <quote>as a Special Item which you store in your backpack</quote> with <quote>as a Special Item</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect266">266</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>flagtower</quote> with <quote>flag-tower</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) Replaced <quote>my Lord</quote> with <quote>my lord</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect270">270</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote>. Replaced <quote>well-founded</quote> with <quote>well founded</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>. Replaced <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect271">271</a>) Replaced <quote>life and your mission ends</quote> with <quote>life and your mission end</quote>. Split the final sentence into its own paragraph for consistency.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect272">272</a>) Replaced <quote>gutteral</quote> with <quote>guttural</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>