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The Doomwolf gnaws at your right foot and desperately you kick free from its fang-filled jaws. It yelps with frustration and launches itself at your back as your terrified horse starts to pull ahead. Its sharp claws, now fully extended, rip through your oilskin cape and slice through the side of your backpack. You lose two Backpack Items (the second and third items recorded on your list). Steadily, your horse pulls away from this howling creature, leaving it trailing in your wake.
There is no chance the gruff driver will allow you to board his wagon unless you pay him and so you step away and release your mental hold over the horse team. He whips the reins once more and this time the horse team respond and the wagon sets off along the highway without you.
Frequent bolts of lightning illuminate the muddy highway as you trudge along the rutted highway to Dwala
Frequent bolts of lightning illuminate the muddy highway as you trudge the final mile to Dwala
Frequent bolts of lightning illuminate the muddy highway as you travel the short distance to Dwala
As you walk towards the gate in the pouring rain, you observe a guard step out of his sentry post and talk briefly with the driver before allowing his wagon to enter. When you reach the gate shortly after the wagon has passed through, the guard steps forward and demands that you pay the night entry toll. Passage in and out of the city is free during the hours of daylight, but after dark a toll of 20 Ren (2 Gold Crowns) is imposed on all non-residents wishing to enter, and 10 Ren (1 Gold Crown) on all those wanting to leave.
Lord Honos excuses himself and leaves the chamber to fetch his Speaking Stone. While you wait for him to return, Zautro and Song Tao offer to help you to recover from the rigours of your perilous journey to Dwala.
The Doomwolf gnaws at your right foot and desperately you kick free from its fang-filled jaws. It yelps with frustration and launches itself at your back as your terrified horse starts to pull ahead. Its sharp claws, now fully extended, rip through your oilskin cape and slice through the side of your backpack. You lose two Backpack Items (the first and the last items recorded on your list). Steadily, your horse pulls away from this howling creature, leaving it trailing in your wake.
-You wave farewell to the old man, then you set out across the marshy grassland and soon reach the highway beyond. This road connects Dwala with the coastal port of Czantai to the south. Its surface is deeply rutted, a consequence of the heavy wagons that travel this trade road every day. Frequent bolts of lightning illuminate the muddy highway as you trudge the final mile to Dwala
Upon arriving at the gate, a guard steps from his sentry post and demands you pay the night toll. Passage in and out of the city is free during the hours of daylight, but after dark a toll of 20 Ren (2 Gold Crowns) is imposed on all non-residents seeking to enter, and 10 Ren (1 Gold Crown) on those wishing to leave.
(29) Replaced Magnakai discipline
with Magnakai Discipline
.
(30) Replaced woodman
with woodsman
. Replaced pole arm
with polearm
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(31) Replaced gulley
with gully
. Replaced discipline
with Discipline
.
(32) Replaced Turn 181
with Turn to 181
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(33) Changed 1/6th
to
and multiple occurrences of 5/6ths
to
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(35) Replaced Magnakai discipline
with Magnakai Discipline
.
(39) Replaced turn 94
with turn to 94
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(45) Replaced 50ft
with 50 ft.
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(46) Replaced it is has been
with it has been
. Replaced Magnakai discipline
with Magnakai Discipline
.
(47) Replaced Magnakai discipline
with Magnakai Discipline
. Replaced Grand Master disciplines
with Grand Master Disciplines
.
(181) Replaced treeline
with tree-line
. Replaced gulley
with gully
. Replaced all instances of Grand Master discipline
with Grand Master Discipline
.
(188) Replaced discipline of Mind over Matter
with Discipline of Mind Over Matter
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(189) Replaced discipline
with Discipline
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(191) Replaced turn 94
with turn to 94
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(192) Replaced Grand Master discipline
with Grand Master Discipline
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(194) Replaced ENDRANCE
with
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(196) Replaced discipline
with Discipline
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(207) Replaced discipline
with Discipline
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(208) Changed Weaponshop
to Weapon Shop
(cf. Section 221).
(210) Replaced discipline
with Discipline
.
(215) Replaced turn 94
with turn to 94
.
(220) Replaced treeline
with tree-line
.
(222) Replaced both instances of Grand Master discipline
with Grand Master Discipline
.
(223) Replaced Magnakai discipline
with Magnakai Discipline
.
(303) Replaced both instances of discipline
with Discipline
.
(304) Replaced Youi
with You
. Replaced discipline
with Discipline
. Replaced discipline
with Discipline
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(307) Replaced Chagarashi Scouts (x2)
with 2 Chagarashi Scouts
.
(309) Replaced turn 338
with turn to 338
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(310) Replaced both instances of discipline
with Discipline
.
(313) Replaced Angseng
with Anseng
. Replaced both instances of discipline
with Discipline
.
(314) Added a quotation mark at the end of the paragraph starting with When he was a young boy,
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(315) Replaced Turn 264
with Turn to 264
.
(316) Replaced Magnakai discipline
with Magnakai Discipline
.
(317) Replaced Zhou-Yin
with Zhou-yin
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(318) Replaced Lone Wolf
with Lone Wolf
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(333) Replaced Grand Master discipline
with Grand Master Discipline
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(334) Replaced Grand Master discipline
with Grand Master Discipline
.
(337) Replaced worshipers
with worshippers
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(345) Replaced turn 94
with turn to 94
.
(347) Replaced Kai hunting discipline
with Kai Hunting Discipline
. Replaced Grand Master discipline
with Grand Master Discipline
.
(348) Replaced Magnakai discipline
with Magnakai Discipline
.