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$Id$
$Log$
+Revision 1.11 2007/02/02 20:13:38 jonathan.blake
+Fixing a few more br elements
+
Revision 1.10 2007/02/02 20:02:19 jonathan.blake
Corrections for all pending errata, further updates to latest DTD
@@ -168,15 +171,36 @@ To do:
Transcription
Jason Gaerke
Illustration Transcription
- Jonathan Blake
Paul Haskell
Simon Osborne
+
+ Jonathan Blake
+ Paul Haskell
+ Simon Osborne
+
XML
- Jonathan Blake
Jeff Dougan
+
+ Jonathan Blake
+ Jeff Dougan
+
Alternate Illustrations
- JC Alvarez (action charts)
Jonathan Blake (extramatter charts and tables)
Michael Hahn (map)
+
+ JC Alvarez (action charts)
+ Jonathan Blake (extramatter charts and tables)
+ Michael Hahn (map)
+
Proofreading
- Simon Osborne (Sections 1210 and 246350)
Tony Wrigley (Sections 211245)
+
+ Simon Osborne (Sections 1210 and 246350)
+ Tony Wrigley (Sections 211245)
+
Editing
- Mike Feldman
Ingo Klcker
Mark Laird
LeRoy McSwain
Simon Osborne
Thomas Wolmer
+
+ Mike Feldman
+ Ingo Klcker
+ Mark Laird
+ LeRoy McSwain
+ Simon Osborne
+ Thomas Wolmer
+
Coordination
Jonathan Blake
Special Thanks
@@ -691,7 +715,10 @@ To do:
Gary Chalk
- The Kings Tower, a magnificent
structure of glass and stone
+
+ The Kings Tower, a magnificent
+ structure of glass and stone
+
@@ -906,7 +933,10 @@ To do:
Gary Chalk
- Twisted and disfigured though he is,
you recognize Captain Kelman
+
+ Twisted and disfigured though he is,
+ you recognize Captain Kelman
+
@@ -1426,7 +1456,10 @@ To do:
Gary Chalk
- One of the cloaked strangers holds aloft a black staff
and a blue flame ignites at the twisted iron tip
+
+ One of the cloaked strangers holds aloft a black staff
+ and a blue flame ignites at the twisted iron tip
+
@@ -1571,7 +1604,10 @@ To do:
Gary Chalk
- At that moment the true power of the
Sommerswerd is revealed to you
+
+ At that moment the true power of the
+ Sommerswerd is revealed to you
+
@@ -1839,7 +1875,10 @@ To do:
Gary Chalk
- Their sinister flagship swiftly sails towards you,
a huge ram protruding from its black prow
+
+ Their sinister flagship swiftly sails towards you,
+ a huge ram protruding from its black prow
+
@@ -2079,7 +2118,11 @@ To do:
Gary Chalk
- The strange creature is wearing a splendid
jacket of patched leather and carrying
what appears to be a spear
+
+ The strange creature is wearing a splendid
+ jacket of patched leather and carrying
+ what appears to be a spear
+
@@ -2268,7 +2311,10 @@ To do:
Gary Chalk
- You find yourself staring into the
glowing eyes of a Helghast
+
+ You find yourself staring into the
+ glowing eyes of a Helghast
+
@@ -2390,7 +2436,10 @@ To do:
Gary Chalk
- The large Noodnic, wearing a brightly coloured
cloak of patchwork silks, addresses you
+
+ The large Noodnic, wearing a brightly coloured
+ cloak of patchwork silks, addresses you
+
@@ -2682,7 +2731,10 @@ To do:
Gary Chalk
- Soldiers leap from the deck, their
clothes and hair in flames
+
+ Soldiers leap from the deck, their
+ clothes and hair in flames
+
@@ -2814,7 +2866,10 @@ To do:
Gary Chalk
- Lord-lieutenant Rhygar demands that they
let you pass as you bear a royal dispatch
+
+ Lord-lieutenant Rhygar demands that they
+ let you pass as you bear a royal dispatch
+
@@ -3131,7 +3186,10 @@ To do:
Gary Chalk
- The others are all seated at a large table
awaiting your appearance
+
+ The others are all seated at a large table
+ awaiting your appearance
+
@@ -3394,7 +3452,10 @@ To do:
Gary Chalk
- Captain Kelman opens the mysterious bundle and
a large charred earthenware jug drops out
+
+ Captain Kelman opens the mysterious bundle and
+ a large charred earthenware jug drops out
+
@@ -3613,7 +3674,10 @@ To do:
Gary Chalk
- An attractive young woman spins a black dish
divided into ten sections marked 09
+
+ An attractive young woman spins a black dish
+ divided into ten sections marked 09
+
@@ -3763,7 +3827,10 @@ To do:
Gary Chalk
- You chat with your fellow travellers
and learn about their backgrounds
+
+ You chat with your fellow travellers
+ and learn about their backgrounds
+
@@ -4012,7 +4079,10 @@ To do:
Gary Chalk
- You turn to see three harbour thugs
advancing towards you
+
+ You turn to see three harbour thugs
+ advancing towards you
+
@@ -4217,7 +4287,10 @@ To do:
Gary Chalk
- The knight is Lord Axim of Ryme, commander
of King Alins personal bodyguard
+
+ The knight is Lord Axim of Ryme, commander
+ of King Alins personal bodyguard
+
@@ -4606,7 +4679,10 @@ To do:
Gary Chalk
- The innkeeper, a thin old man with only
one eye, is carrying a tray of hot food
+
+ The innkeeper, a thin old man with only
+ one eye, is carrying a tray of hot food
+
@@ -4745,7 +4821,11 @@ To do:
Gary Chalk
- The black-clad shape of a Drakkarim warrior
is advancing towards you, a large
broadsword raised
+
+ The black-clad shape of a Drakkarim warrior
+ is advancing towards you, a large
+ broadsword raised
+
@@ -5056,7 +5136,10 @@ To do:
Gary Chalk
- There is a mighty roar as the power of the sun-sword
is unleashed in a searing white beam
+
+ There is a mighty roar as the power of the sun-sword
+ is unleashed in a searing white beam
+