Remaining Book 17 errata; capitalise Mindshield in Books 8 and 12
authorSimon Osborne <simon.osborne@projectaon.org>
Wed, 28 Aug 2013 08:58:05 +0000 (08:58 +0000)
committerSimon Osborne <simon.osborne@projectaon.org>
Wed, 28 Aug 2013 08:58:05 +0000 (08:58 +0000)
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      <meta><title>230</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-      <p>You fight to erect a mindshield to counter the searing pain of this psychic attack, but your defence is too weak to withstand the onslaught. You scream in agony as the assault cuts deep into the fabric of your mind: lose 8 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
+      <p>You fight to erect a Mindshield to counter the searing pain of this psychic attack, but your defence is too weak to withstand the onslaught. You scream in agony as the assault cuts deep into the fabric of your mind: lose 8 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
       <choice idref="sect60">If you are still alive, <link-text>turn to 60</link-text>.</choice>
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     </section>
       <p>(<a idref="sect220">220</a>) Replaced <quote>symmetry confront</quote> with <quote>symmetry, confront</quote>. Replaced <quote>stratas</quote> with <quote>strata</quote>. Replaced <quote>sapphire and</quote> with <quote>sapphire, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect222">222</a>) Replaced <quote>subsides but</quote> with <quote>subsides, but</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect229">229</a>) Replaced <quote>north-western</quote> with <quote>northwestern</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect230">230</a>) Replaced <quote>mindshield</quote> with <quote>Mindshield</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Replaced <quote>dwarf. They<ch.apos/>re</quote> with <quote>dwarf. <ch.lsquot/>They<ch.apos/>re</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect233">233</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect234">234</a>) Replaced <quote>dexterity and</quote> with <quote>dexterity, and</quote>.</p>
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       </meta>
 
       <data>
-       <p>Your mastery of mental power enables you to shield your mind from the psychic probe emanating from the box-like device that the guard is using to check your identity. Because of your effective mindshield, he is unable to detect any hostile psychic signals. Satisfied that it is safe to allow you to pass, he orders his fellow guard to open the steel door and let you into the subterranean levels of the Imperial Sector.</p>
+       <p>Your mastery of mental power enables you to shield your mind from the psychic probe emanating from the box-like device that the guard is using to check your identity. Because of your effective Mindshield, he is unable to detect any hostile psychic signals. Satisfied that it is safe to allow you to pass, he orders his fellow guard to open the steel door and let you into the subterranean levels of the Imperial Sector.</p>
        <p>Beyond the door is a vast hall filled with row upon row of fearsome weapons. It is the Imperial Armoury of Helgedad.</p>
        <choice idref="sect40">If you possess a Black Cube, <link-text>turn to 40</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect320">If you do not possess this item, <link-text>turn to 320</link-text>.</choice>
        <p>(<a idref="sect135">135</a>) Replaced <quote>bow skill</quote> with <quote>bow-skill</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect138">138</a>) Replaced <quote>youself</quote> with <quote>yourself</quote>. Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>face, then</quote> with <quote>face, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>service, and</quote> with <quote>service and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect140">140</a>) Replaced <quote>leave, then</quote> with <quote>leave, and then</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect141">141</a>) Replaced <quote>mindshield</quote> with <quote>Mindshield</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Replaced <quote>gold braided</quote> with <quote>gold-braided</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect143">143</a>) Replaced <quote>semi-circular</quote> with <quote>semicircular</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect144">144</a>) Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>. Replaced <quote>Animal Control, and</quote> with <quote>Animal Control and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
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       <footnotes>
        <footnote id="sect45-1-foot" idref="sect45-1">
-        <p>If you lack one or more of these items, substitute other items which seem to be of equal value.</p>
+        <p>If you lack one or more of these items, substitute other items of equal value.</p>
        </footnote>
       </footnotes>
 
      <meta><title>131</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-       <p>The tavern-keeper<ch.apos/>s blast of buckshot peppers your side (lose 2 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points) and damages your Quiver. You must now erase half of all the Arrows you carry, rounding the figure up to the nearest whole number where appropriate.</p>
+       <p>The tavern-keeper<ch.apos/>s blast of buckshot peppers your side (lose 2 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points) and damages your Quiver. You must now erase half of all the Arrows you carry, rounding the number of Arrows lost up to the nearest whole number where appropriate.</p>
        <choice idref="sect287">To continue, <link-text>turn to 287</link-text>.</choice>
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     </section>
      <meta><title>235</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-       <p>You launch a mindblast at the angry sergeant and he reels back, clutching his head in pain. Your sudden psychic attack soon renders him unconscious, but you catch him before his limp body crumples to the ground.</p>
+       <p>You launch a Mindblast at the angry sergeant and he reels back, clutching his head in pain. Your sudden psychic attack soon renders him unconscious, but you catch him before his limp body crumples to the ground.</p>
        <p>You call out to the gate guards to come and help you. You say their sergeant has been taken ill, and quickly they respond. As they lift him out of your arms, you motion to your companions to follow as you slip away into the barracks.</p>
        <p>Beyond the main gate is a courtyard where several wagons, filled with provisions, are being unloaded. You and your companions each take a box from the rear of the nearest wagon and join a line of men who are delivering their goods to a kitchen store room located near the middle of the barracks complex. You leave your boxes here and then return to the courtyard to collect some more. As you are making your way back, you pass a door that your Kai senses tell you is unlocked. You quickly step inside and then signal to the rangers to follow. When all of you are safely in, you shut the door and draw its bolt.</p>
        <choice idref="sect298"><link-text>Turn to 298</link-text>.</choice>
      <meta><title>281</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-       <p>You draw deeply upon your psychic powers and construct a glowing ball of mental energy which you launch at the sorcerous woman. You see her shiver uncontrollably as the power of your mindblast penetrates her defences and, for a short while, the rangers are spared the effect of her hypnotic voice. But the use of this attack leaves you vulnerable to a sudden psychic assault. Sensing this, the woman quickly seizes her chance to retaliate.</p>
+       <p>You draw deeply upon your psychic powers and construct a glowing ball of mental energy which you launch at the sorcerous woman. You see her shiver uncontrollably as the power of your Mindblast penetrates her defences and, for a short while, the rangers are spared the effect of her hypnotic voice. But the use of this attack leaves you vulnerable to a sudden psychic assault. Sensing this, the woman quickly seizes her chance to retaliate.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you possess Kai-screen, add 3 to the number you have picked. If your current <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score is 15 or lower, deduct 2.</p>
        <choice idref="sect337">If your total score is now 4 or less, <link-text>turn to 337</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect101">If it is 5 or higher, <link-text>turn to 101</link-text>.</choice>
        <p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-surge, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-surge and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect128">128</a>) Replaced <quote>claim back</quote> with <quote>reclaim</quote>. Added a paragraph break between <quote>asks, reproachfully.</quote> and <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>No, Captain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect130">130</a>) Replaced <quote>woodsmoke</quote> with <quote>wood smoke</quote>. Replaced <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>) Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>) Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>the figure</quote> with <quote>the number of Arrows lost</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect133">133</a>) Replaced <quote>Crowns, to</quote> with <quote>Crowns to</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect134">134</a>) Replaced <quote>queuing</quote> with <quote>queueing</quote>. Replaced <quote>storerooms</quote> with <quote>store rooms</quote>. Replaced <quote>hidden, then</quote> with <quote>hidden, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect135">135</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect228">228</a>) Deleted <quote>which you carry in your pack</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect230">230</a>) Deleted <quote>If you possess the Kai Weapon <ch.ldquot/>Magnara<ch.rdquot/>, add 3.</quote> as it is impossible to arrive in this section if you possess this particular Kai Weapon (cf. <a idref="sect106">Section 106</a> and subsequent sections).</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect233">233</a>) Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom spell</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spell</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Replaced <quote>storeroom</quote> with <quote>store room</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Replaced <quote>storeroom</quote> with <quote>store room</quote>. Replaced <quote>mindblast</quote> with <quote>Mindblast</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect237">237</a>) Replaced <quote>lookout, then</quote> with <quote>lookout; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect239">239</a>) Replaced <quote>Bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Elementalism, and</quote> with <quote>Elementalism and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>. Replaced <quote>a corridor of weather-worn pillars line</quote> with <quote>a corridor of weather-worn pillars lines</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sentinel, or higher</quote> with <quote>Sentinel or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Elementalism, and</quote> with <quote>Elementalism and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect277">277</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect279">279</a>) Replaced <quote>bang</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>bang</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect280">280</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect281">281</a>) Replaced <quote>mindblast</quote> with <quote>Mindblast</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect282">282</a>) Replaced <quote>battle cry</quote> with <quote>battle-cry</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect283">283</a>) Replaced <quote>become irate</quote> with <quote>becomes irate</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect284">284</a>) Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom spell</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spell</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>