Expunge all references to the "Mongoose Publishing editions" and replace with "Collec...

author Simon Osborne <simon.osborne@projectaon.org>

Fri, 12 Jul 2013 11:53:44 +0000 (11:53 +0000)

committer Simon Osborne <simon.osborne@projectaon.org>

Fri, 12 Jul 2013 11:53:44 +0000 (11:53 +0000)
author Simon Osborne <simon.osborne@projectaon.org>
Fri, 12 Jul 2013 11:53:44 +0000 (11:53 +0000)
committer Simon Osborne <simon.osborne@projectaon.org>
Fri, 12 Jul 2013 11:53:44 +0000 (11:53 +0000)
diff --git a/en/xml/01fftd.xml b/en/xml/01fftd.xml

index cd6219f..03c7293 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/01fftd.xml
+++ b/en/xml/01fftd.xml
@@ -5642,7 +5642,7 @@
  
        <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Added periods to the sentences describing the Helmet and Chainmail Waistcoat.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Added periods to the sentences describing the Helmet and Chainmail Waistcoat.</p>
  
-      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment: How to use your equipment</a>) Added a period to the second from last sentence in the Weapons subsection. Replaced <quote>food or</quote> with <quote>food, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment: How to use your equipment</a>) Added a period to the second from last sentence in the Weapons subsection. Replaced <quote>food or</quote> with <quote>food, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed a superfluous period in the second paragraph of the first example. Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed a superfluous period in the second paragraph of the first example. Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
@@ -5697,7 +5697,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect128">128</a>) Replaced <quote>border ranger</quote> with <quote>Border Ranger</quote>. Replaced <quote>Durncrag mountains</quote> with <quote>Durncrag Mountains</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>) Replaced <quote>Magicians Guild of Toran</quote> with <quote>Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild of Toran</quote>. Replaced <quote>area, and</quote> with <quote>area and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>sumptuous Meal</quote> with <quote>sumptuous meal</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect128">128</a>) Replaced <quote>border ranger</quote> with <quote>Border Ranger</quote>. Replaced <quote>Durncrag mountains</quote> with <quote>Durncrag Mountains</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>) Replaced <quote>Magicians Guild of Toran</quote> with <quote>Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild of Toran</quote>. Replaced <quote>area, and</quote> with <quote>area and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>sumptuous Meal</quote> with <quote>sumptuous meal</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect137">137</a>) Replaced <quote>20 Gems</quote> with <quote>20 Tomb Guardian Gems</quote> and <quote>mark these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> with <quote>mark these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as a single Backpack Item</quote> based on changes made to the Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect137">137</a>) Replaced <quote>20 Gems</quote> with <quote>20 Tomb Guardian Gems</quote> and <quote>mark these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> with <quote>mark these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as a single Backpack Item</quote> based on changes made to the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Replaced <quote>Durncrag range</quote> with <quote>Durncrag Range</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect144">144</a>) Added <quote> or if you have no Backpack Items</quote> to the second paragraph. Replaced <quote>one Item is stolen</quote> with <quote>one item is stolen</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Added <quote>If you wish to remove the pin, <!--link-text-->turn to 337<!--/link-text-->.</quote> This is the only other possible choice for what is a strangely one-sided option in the original text. More flavourful language might make more sense, such as <quote>If you still wish to remove the pin with your hands,</quote> but to best preserve the integrity of the text, we simply copied the choice from <a idref="sect23">Section 23</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Replaced <quote>Durncrag range</quote> with <quote>Durncrag Range</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect144">144</a>) Added <quote> or if you have no Backpack Items</quote> to the second paragraph. Replaced <quote>one Item is stolen</quote> with <quote>one item is stolen</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Added <quote>If you wish to remove the pin, <!--link-text-->turn to 337<!--/link-text-->.</quote> This is the only other possible choice for what is a strangely one-sided option in the original text. More flavourful language might make more sense, such as <quote>If you still wish to remove the pin with your hands,</quote> but to best preserve the integrity of the text, we simply copied the choice from <a idref="sect23">Section 23</a>.</p>
@@ -5717,7 +5717,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect196">196</a>) Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Reversed the order of the choices. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect201">201</a>) Changed the choice that led to <a idref="sect215">Section 215</a> to lead to <a idref="sect15">Section 15</a> instead. The original choice appears to make sense, but does not work out in a map. The indication that the correct section is really <a idref="sect15">15</a> is the fact that it is not otherwise accessible (though <a idref="sect215">Section 215</a> is) and <a idref="sect15">15</a> leads back to <a idref="sect201">Section 201</a> when taking the opposite direction.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect196">196</a>) Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Reversed the order of the choices. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect201">201</a>) Changed the choice that led to <a idref="sect215">Section 215</a> to lead to <a idref="sect15">Section 15</a> instead. The original choice appears to make sense, but does not work out in a map. The indication that the correct section is really <a idref="sect15">15</a> is the fact that it is not otherwise accessible (though <a idref="sect215">Section 215</a> is) and <a idref="sect15">15</a> leads back to <a idref="sect201">Section 201</a> when taking the opposite direction.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect205">205</a>) Added <quote>(You must now erase all Weapons and Backpack Items from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> based on the Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect205">205</a>) Added <quote>(You must now erase all Weapons and Backpack Items from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect211">211</a>) Moved the second choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect212">212</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect218">218</a>) Replaced <quote>war cries</quote> with <quote>war-cries</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect211">211</a>) Moved the second choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect212">212</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect218">218</a>) Replaced <quote>war cries</quote> with <quote>war-cries</quote>.</p>
diff --git a/en/xml/01gstw.xml b/en/xml/01gstw.xml

index 6cc4fef..4cd1070 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/01gstw.xml
+++ b/en/xml/01gstw.xml
@@ -463,7 +463,7 @@
         <footnote id="equipmnt-2-foot" idref="equipmnt-2"><p>The bonus to your <typ class="attribute">WILLPOWER</typ> score provided by the Magic Talisman is added to your <typ class="attribute">WILLPOWER</typ> score only once and does not prevent your score from falling to zero or below.</p></footnote>
         <footnote id="equipmnt-3-foot" idref="equipmnt-3"><p>If you have mastered the Lesser Magick of Alchemy and therefore have a Herb Pouch, you may choose to keep potions, vials, or ingredients in either the Herb Pouch or your Backpack. All other Backpack Items must be kept in your Backpack.</p></footnote>
        <footnote id="equipmnt-4-foot" idref="equipmnt-4">
         <footnote id="equipmnt-2-foot" idref="equipmnt-2"><p>The bonus to your <typ class="attribute">WILLPOWER</typ> score provided by the Magic Talisman is added to your <typ class="attribute">WILLPOWER</typ> score only once and does not prevent your score from falling to zero or below.</p></footnote>
         <footnote id="equipmnt-3-foot" idref="equipmnt-3"><p>If you have mastered the Lesser Magick of Alchemy and therefore have a Herb Pouch, you may choose to keep potions, vials, or ingredients in either the Herb Pouch or your Backpack. All other Backpack Items must be kept in your Backpack.</p></footnote>
        <footnote id="equipmnt-4-foot" idref="equipmnt-4">
-       <p>The new Mongoose Publishing editions of the gamebooks clarify that <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote></p>
+       <p>The Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions of the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> books clarify that <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote></p>
        </footnote>
       </footnotes>
  
        </footnote>
       </footnotes>
  
diff --git a/en/xml/02fotw.xml b/en/xml/02fotw.xml

index 9127ded..3257c04 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/02fotw.xml
+++ b/en/xml/02fotw.xml
@@ -3065,7 +3065,7 @@
  
       <footnotes>
        <footnote id="sect194-1-foot" idref="sect194-1">
  
       <footnotes>
        <footnote id="sect194-1-foot" idref="sect194-1">
-       <p>In the Mongoose Publishing edition, you lose only your Weapons and the Seal of Hammerdal here. You may choose to follow these instructions instead.</p>
+       <p>In the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition, you lose only your Weapons and the Seal of Hammerdal here. You may choose to follow these instructions instead.</p>
        </footnote>
       </footnotes>
  
        </footnote>
       </footnotes>
  
@@ -5633,7 +5633,7 @@
  
        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Kai Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai Discipline section</quote> with <quote>Kai Disciplines section</quote>. Capitalized all occurrences of <quote>discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>food or</quote> with <quote>food, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Kai Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai Discipline section</quote> with <quote>Kai Disciplines section</quote>. Capitalized all occurrences of <quote>discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>food or</quote> with <quote>food, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>.</p>
  
-      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed the <quote>1=, 2=,<ch.ellips/></quote> in the <quote>How to carry your equipment</quote> section. These were obviously carried over from <bookref series="lw" book="01fftd"><cite>Flight from the Dark</cite></bookref><ch.apos/>s random number equipment assignment, which is now obsolete. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>slung over shoulder when not in combat otherwise</quote> with <quote>slung over the shoulder when not in combat, otherwise</quote>. Replaced <quote>to your total when swallowed</quote> with <quote>to your total, when swallowed</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed the <quote>1=, 2=,<ch.ellips/></quote> in the <quote>How to carry your equipment</quote> section. These were obviously carried over from <bookref series="lw" book="01fftd"><cite>Flight from the Dark</cite></bookref><ch.apos/>s random number equipment assignment, which is now obsolete. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>slung over shoulder when not in combat otherwise</quote> with <quote>slung over the shoulder when not in combat, otherwise</quote>. Replaced <quote>to your total when swallowed</quote> with <quote>to your total, when swallowed</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Removed <quote> on the last page of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Removed <quote> on the last page of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
@@ -5670,7 +5670,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect73">73</a>) Replaced <quote>failed Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote>failed, Lone Wolf</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect75">75</a>) Replaced <quote>Sir, requires</quote> with <quote>Sir requires</quote>. Replaced <quote>white pass</quote> with <quote>White Pass</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Replaced <quote>these Items</quote> with <quote>these items</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect73">73</a>) Replaced <quote>failed Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote>failed, Lone Wolf</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect75">75</a>) Replaced <quote>Sir, requires</quote> with <quote>Sir requires</quote>. Replaced <quote>white pass</quote> with <quote>White Pass</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Replaced <quote>these Items</quote> with <quote>these items</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect78">78</a>) Replaced <quote>risk drowning</quote> with <quote>you will surely drown</quote>, the wording in the Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect78">78</a>) Replaced <quote>risk drowning</quote> with <quote>you will surely drown</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect79">79</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced <quote>enemies, eg Helghasts, in</quote> with <quote>enemies (e.g. Helghast) in</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Durenese or</quote> with <quote>Durenese, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>much preparation for</quote> with <quote>much to prepare for</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect80">80</a>) Replaced <quote>Seal, or</quote> with <quote>Seal or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect82">82</a>) Replaced <quote>angry mob have</quote> with <quote>angry mob has</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect79">79</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced <quote>enemies, eg Helghasts, in</quote> with <quote>enemies (e.g. Helghast) in</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Durenese or</quote> with <quote>Durenese, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>much preparation for</quote> with <quote>much to prepare for</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect80">80</a>) Replaced <quote>Seal, or</quote> with <quote>Seal or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect82">82</a>) Replaced <quote>angry mob have</quote> with <quote>angry mob has</quote>.</p>
@@ -5682,7 +5682,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect98">98</a>) Replaced <quote>Durenor forest</quote> with <quote>Durenor Forest</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect102">102</a>) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>Hammerdal range</quote> with <quote>Hammerdal Range</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect98">98</a>) Replaced <quote>Durenor forest</quote> with <quote>Durenor Forest</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect102">102</a>) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>Hammerdal range</quote> with <quote>Hammerdal Range</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect103">103</a>) Added <quote>if you possess a Backpack. Otherwise you must consume it now or abandon it</quote> after <quote>add this to your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> based on a similar change in the Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect103">103</a>) Added <quote>if you possess a Backpack. Otherwise you must consume it now or abandon it</quote> after <quote>add this to your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> based on a similar change in the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect106">106</a>) Added <quote>(The Magic Spear is a weapon-like Special Item. Remember that you only get a Weaponskill bonus in this fight against the Helghast if you have Weaponskill with Spear.</quote> to the end of the second paragraph.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect113">113</a>) Replaced <quote>magician<ch.apos/>s guild</quote> with <quote>Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild</quote>. Replaced <quote>overboard, and</quote> with <quote>overboard and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Moved the Animal Kinship choice into the first position. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Hammerdal range</quote> with <quote>Hammerdal Range</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect106">106</a>) Added <quote>(The Magic Spear is a weapon-like Special Item. Remember that you only get a Weaponskill bonus in this fight against the Helghast if you have Weaponskill with Spear.</quote> to the end of the second paragraph.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect113">113</a>) Replaced <quote>magician<ch.apos/>s guild</quote> with <quote>Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild</quote>. Replaced <quote>overboard, and</quote> with <quote>overboard and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Moved the Animal Kinship choice into the first position. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Hammerdal range</quote> with <quote>Hammerdal Range</quote>.</p>
@@ -5777,7 +5777,7 @@
        <p>Replaced <quote>Hammerdal mountains</quote> with <quote>Hammerdal Mountains</quote>. Replaced <quote>Hammerdal range</quote> with <quote>Hammerdal Range</quote>. Replaced <quote>Spear, so</quote> with <quote>Spear so</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect300">300</a>) Replaced <quote>Wanlo</quote> with <quote>wanlo</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>) Replaced <quote>Daggers and</quote> with <quote>Daggers, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>Replaced <quote>Hammerdal mountains</quote> with <quote>Hammerdal Mountains</quote>. Replaced <quote>Hammerdal range</quote> with <quote>Hammerdal Range</quote>. Replaced <quote>Spear, so</quote> with <quote>Spear so</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect300">300</a>) Replaced <quote>Wanlo</quote> with <quote>wanlo</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>) Replaced <quote>Daggers and</quote> with <quote>Daggers, and</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect302">302</a>) Replaced <quote>climb the watchtower stairs and quickly search the</quote> with <quote>set about a quick search of these</quote> from the Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>whatever Items</quote> with <quote>whatever items</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect302">302</a>) Replaced <quote>climb the watchtower stairs and quickly search the</quote> with <quote>set about a quick search of these</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>whatever Items</quote> with <quote>whatever items</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect306">306</a>) Replaced <quote>score reaches zero</quote> with <quote>score reaches zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points to zero</quote> with <quote>points to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>to try and</quote> with <quote>to try to</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>) Replaced <quote>Each dice</quote> with <quote>Each die</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect306">306</a>) Replaced <quote>score reaches zero</quote> with <quote>score reaches zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points to zero</quote> with <quote>points to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>to try and</quote> with <quote>to try to</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>) Replaced <quote>Each dice</quote> with <quote>Each die</quote>.</p>
@@ -5788,7 +5788,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect321">321</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Replaced <quote>to start to</quote> with <quote>and start to</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect321">321</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Replaced <quote>to start to</quote> with <quote>and start to</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect328">328</a>) Replaced <quote>If you possess a Crystal Star Pendant, turn to 113</quote> with <quote>If you have ever been given a Crystal Star Pendant, <!--link-text-->turn immediately to 113<!--/link-text--></quote> based in part on the Mongoose Publishing edition. This makes it clear that the reader should take this path in preference to the Tracking path leading to <a idref="sect204">Section 204</a>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect328">328</a>) Replaced <quote>If you possess a Crystal Star Pendant, turn to 113</quote> with <quote>If you have ever been given a Crystal Star Pendant, <!--link-text-->turn immediately to 113<!--/link-text--></quote> based in part on the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. This makes it clear that the reader should take this path in preference to the Tracking path leading to <a idref="sect204">Section 204</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect331">331</a>) Replaced <quote>Dagger and</quote> with <quote>Dagger, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>these Items</quote> with <quote>these items</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect332">332</a>) Added <quote>This creature is immune to Mindblast.</quote> to the end of the final paragraph. Replaced <quote>forest, and</quote> with <quote>forest and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect333">333</a>) Replaced <quote>blood-stained</quote> with <quote>bloodstained</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect331">331</a>) Replaced <quote>Dagger and</quote> with <quote>Dagger, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>these Items</quote> with <quote>these items</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect332">332</a>) Added <quote>This creature is immune to Mindblast.</quote> to the end of the final paragraph. Replaced <quote>forest, and</quote> with <quote>forest and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect333">333</a>) Replaced <quote>blood-stained</quote> with <quote>bloodstained</quote>.</p>
diff --git a/en/xml/02tfc.xml b/en/xml/02tfc.xml

index 51182c9..cd926a3 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/02tfc.xml
+++ b/en/xml/02tfc.xml
@@ -464,7 +464,7 @@
        <footnotes>
         <footnote id="equipmnt-1-foot" idref="equipmnt-1"><p>If you have mastered the Lesser Magick of Alchemy and therefore have a Herb Pouch, you may choose to keep potions, vials, or ingredients in either the Herb Pouch or your Backpack. All other Backpack Items must be kept in your Backpack.</p></footnote>
        <footnote id="equipmnt-2-foot" idref="equipmnt-2">
        <footnotes>
         <footnote id="equipmnt-1-foot" idref="equipmnt-1"><p>If you have mastered the Lesser Magick of Alchemy and therefore have a Herb Pouch, you may choose to keep potions, vials, or ingredients in either the Herb Pouch or your Backpack. All other Backpack Items must be kept in your Backpack.</p></footnote>
        <footnote id="equipmnt-2-foot" idref="equipmnt-2">
-       <p>The new Mongoose Publishing editions of the gamebooks clarify that <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote></p>
+       <p>The Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions of the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> books clarify that <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote></p>
        </footnote>
       </footnotes>
  
        </footnote>
       </footnotes>
  
diff --git a/en/xml/03btng.xml b/en/xml/03btng.xml

index bd3165b..4f3f42c 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/03btng.xml
+++ b/en/xml/03btng.xml
@@ -456,7 +456,7 @@
         <footnote id="equipmnt-1-foot" idref="equipmnt-1"><p>If you have completed a previous adventure, you keep all equipment you had at the end of that adventure. You do not receive any new equipment, unless you have just selected Alchemy as your sixth Magical Power, in which case you receive a Herb Pouch with contents as indicated in this section.</p></footnote>
         <footnote id="equipmnt-2-foot" idref="equipmnt-2"><p>If you have mastered the Lesser Magick of Alchemy and therefore have a Herb Pouch, you may choose to keep potions, vials, or ingredients in either the Herb Pouch or your Backpack. All other Backpack Items must be kept in your Backpack.</p></footnote>
        <footnote id="equipmnt-3-foot" idref="equipmnt-3">
         <footnote id="equipmnt-1-foot" idref="equipmnt-1"><p>If you have completed a previous adventure, you keep all equipment you had at the end of that adventure. You do not receive any new equipment, unless you have just selected Alchemy as your sixth Magical Power, in which case you receive a Herb Pouch with contents as indicated in this section.</p></footnote>
         <footnote id="equipmnt-2-foot" idref="equipmnt-2"><p>If you have mastered the Lesser Magick of Alchemy and therefore have a Herb Pouch, you may choose to keep potions, vials, or ingredients in either the Herb Pouch or your Backpack. All other Backpack Items must be kept in your Backpack.</p></footnote>
        <footnote id="equipmnt-3-foot" idref="equipmnt-3">
-       <p>The new Mongoose Publishing editions of the gamebooks clarify that <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote></p>
+       <p>The Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions of the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> books clarify that <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote></p>
        </footnote>
       </footnotes>
  
        </footnote>
       </footnotes>
  
diff --git a/en/xml/03tcok.xml b/en/xml/03tcok.xml

index 4570726..9ef0071 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/03tcok.xml
+++ b/en/xml/03tcok.xml
@@ -639,7 +639,7 @@
  
        <footnotes>
         <footnote id="sect4-1-foot" idref="sect4-1">
  
        <footnotes>
         <footnote id="sect4-1-foot" idref="sect4-1">
-        <p>All other Bone Swords in this book are recorded as normal Weapons, but the Mongoose Publishing edition notes that this is a Kalkoth rib blade which adds 1 to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> when used in Kalte.</p>
+        <p>All other Bone Swords in this book are recorded as normal Weapons, but the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition notes that this is a Kalkoth rib blade which adds 1 to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> when used in Kalte.</p>
         </footnote>
        </footnotes>
  
         </footnote>
        </footnotes>
  
@@ -2208,7 +2208,7 @@
  
        <footnotes>
         <footnote id="sect132-1-foot" idref="sect132-1">
  
        <footnotes>
         <footnote id="sect132-1-foot" idref="sect132-1">
-        <p>According to the Mongoose Publishing edition: <quote>If you currently possess enough food for 1 Meal, you may now consume it in order to avoid this <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point deduction.</quote></p>
+        <p>According to the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition: <quote>If you currently possess enough food for 1 Meal, you may now consume it in order to avoid this <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point deduction.</quote></p>
         </footnote>
        </footnotes>
  
         </footnote>
        </footnotes>
  
@@ -5399,7 +5399,7 @@
  
         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Kai Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai Discipline section</quote> with <quote>Kai Disciplines section</quote>. Capitalized all occurrences of <quote>discipline</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Kai Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai Discipline section</quote> with <quote>Kai Disciplines section</quote>. Capitalized all occurrences of <quote>discipline</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>.</p>
  
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote> (see the front of this book)</quote> and capitalized <quote>map</quote>. Replaced <quote>come in useful</quote> with <quote>be useful</quote>. Replaced <quote><a idref="discplnz">Kai Discipline</a> section</quote> with <quote><a idref="discplnz">Kai Disciplines</a> section</quote>. Replaced <quote>ice-sledge along</quote> with <quote>ice-sledge, along</quote>. Replaced <quote><quote>Food</quote> on page 22</quote> with <quote><quote>How to Use Your Equipment</quote></quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Anskavern</quote> with <quote>Anskaven</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>cloak and mittens</quote> with <quote>cloak, and mittens</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote> (see the front of this book)</quote> and capitalized <quote>map</quote>. Replaced <quote>come in useful</quote> with <quote>be useful</quote>. Replaced <quote><a idref="discplnz">Kai Discipline</a> section</quote> with <quote><a idref="discplnz">Kai Disciplines</a> section</quote>. Replaced <quote>ice-sledge along</quote> with <quote>ice-sledge, along</quote>. Replaced <quote><quote>Food</quote> on page 22</quote> with <quote><quote>How to Use Your Equipment</quote></quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Anskavern</quote> with <quote>Anskaven</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>cloak and mittens</quote> with <quote>cloak, and mittens</quote>.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>appears on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>appears on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
@@ -5417,7 +5417,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect15">15</a>) Replaced <quote>If you have a Dagger in your possession, or a Bone Sword,</quote> with <quote>If you have a Dagger or Bone Sword in your possession,</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect16">16</a>) Replaced <quote>two separate Items</quote> with <quote>two separate items</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect17">17</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>blindfold, and</quote> with <quote>blindfold and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect15">15</a>) Replaced <quote>If you have a Dagger in your possession, or a Bone Sword,</quote> with <quote>If you have a Dagger or Bone Sword in your possession,</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect16">16</a>) Replaced <quote>two separate Items</quote> with <quote>two separate items</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect17">17</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>blindfold, and</quote> with <quote>blindfold and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect18">18</a>) Added <quote>(Remember to erase this Weapon or weapon-like Special Item from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect18">18</a>) Added <quote>(Remember to erase this Weapon or weapon-like Special Item from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect19">19</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect20">20</a>) Replaced <quote>realise</quote> with <quote>realize</quote>. Replaced <quote>Holmgulf, and have</quote> with <quote>Holmgulf and have</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect21">21</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Meal</quote> with <quote>meal</quote> since this is not referring to a Meal noted on the <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect19">19</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect20">20</a>) Replaced <quote>realise</quote> with <quote>realize</quote>. Replaced <quote>Holmgulf, and have</quote> with <quote>Holmgulf and have</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect21">21</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Meal</quote> with <quote>meal</quote> since this is not referring to a Meal noted on the <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
@@ -5428,7 +5428,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Moved the Tracking or Sixth Sense choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Replaced <quote>cretaure</quote> with <quote>creature</quote>. Replaced <quote>home-coming</quote> with <quote>homecoming</quote>. Replaced <quote>it Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote>it, Lone Wolf</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>temples and</quote> with <quote>temples, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Moved the Tracking or Sixth Sense choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Replaced <quote>cretaure</quote> with <quote>creature</quote>. Replaced <quote>home-coming</quote> with <quote>homecoming</quote>. Replaced <quote>it Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote>it, Lone Wolf</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>temples and</quote> with <quote>temples, and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect41">41</a>) Added <quote>(You may still keep the Blue Stone Triangle<ch.emdash/>you need not erase it from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect41">41</a>) Added <quote>(You may still keep the Blue Stone Triangle<ch.emdash/>you need not erase it from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect42">42</a>) Replaced <quote>passage, and</quote> with <quote>passage and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect43">43</a>) Replaced <quote>sledge and</quote> with <quote>sledge, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Meal</quote> with <quote>meal</quote> since this is not referring to a Meal noted on the <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect44">44</a>) Replaced <quote>spyhole</quote> with <quote>spy-hole</quote>. Replaced <quote>mystery to me, I have</quote> with <quote>mystery to me. I have</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect42">42</a>) Replaced <quote>passage, and</quote> with <quote>passage and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect43">43</a>) Replaced <quote>sledge and</quote> with <quote>sledge, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Meal</quote> with <quote>meal</quote> since this is not referring to a Meal noted on the <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect44">44</a>) Replaced <quote>spyhole</quote> with <quote>spy-hole</quote>. Replaced <quote>mystery to me, I have</quote> with <quote>mystery to me. I have</quote>.</p>
@@ -5437,7 +5437,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect47">47</a>) Replaced <quote>chamber and</quote> with <quote>chamber, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect49">49</a>) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>dazed and</quote> with <quote>dazed, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Crowns and</quote> with <quote>Crowns, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon(s)</quote> with <quote>Weapon(s)</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect52">52</a>) Replaced <quote>ice-creature</quote> with <quote>ice creature</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect47">47</a>) Replaced <quote>chamber and</quote> with <quote>chamber, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect49">49</a>) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>dazed and</quote> with <quote>dazed, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Crowns and</quote> with <quote>Crowns, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon(s)</quote> with <quote>Weapon(s)</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect52">52</a>) Replaced <quote>ice-creature</quote> with <quote>ice creature</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect55">55</a>) Replaced <quote>hand holds</quote> with <quote>handholds</quote>. Replaced <quote>This loss</quote> with <quote>This <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> loss</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect55">55</a>) Replaced <quote>hand holds</quote> with <quote>handholds</quote>. Replaced <quote>This loss</quote> with <quote>This <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> loss</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Added a quotation mark at the end of the fourth paragraph due to technical limitations in our XML. Replaced <quote>Magician<ch.apos/>s Guild</quote> with <quote>Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild</quote>. Replaced <quote>wretch is responsible</quote> with <quote>wretch, is responsible</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect57">58</a>) Replaced <quote>potholes</quote> with <quote>pot-holes</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect58">58</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Added a quotation mark at the end of the fourth paragraph due to technical limitations in our XML. Replaced <quote>Magician<ch.apos/>s Guild</quote> with <quote>Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild</quote>. Replaced <quote>wretch is responsible</quote> with <quote>wretch, is responsible</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect57">58</a>) Replaced <quote>potholes</quote> with <quote>pot-holes</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect58">58</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
@@ -5451,10 +5451,10 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Replaced <quote>spyhole</quote> with <quote>spy-hole</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect77">77</a>) Replaced <quote>Graveweed</quote> with <quote>graveweed</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect78">78</a>) Replaced <quote>to death</quote> with <quote>to the death</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Replaced <quote>spyhole</quote> with <quote>spy-hole</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect77">77</a>) Replaced <quote>Graveweed</quote> with <quote>graveweed</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect78">78</a>) Replaced <quote>to death</quote> with <quote>to the death</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect79">79</a>) Added <quote>(Remember to erase this potion from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect84">84</a>) Added <quote>(You may record this Special Item as a Blue Stone Triangle which you wear around your neck.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect79">79</a>) Added <quote>(Remember to erase this potion from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect84">84</a>) Added <quote>(You may record this Special Item as a Blue Stone Triangle which you wear around your neck.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect85">85</a>) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>ice and</quote> with <quote>ice, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect85">85</a>) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>ice and</quote> with <quote>ice, and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Split the word <quote>anytime</quote> into <quote>any time</quote> in the fourth paragraph. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>if you pick a 9 at any time</quote> with <quote>if you pick a 9</quote> in harmony with the Mongoose Publishing edition in order to clarify that only picking a 9 for the <em>extra</em> Random Number pick described results in death.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Split the word <quote>anytime</quote> into <quote>any time</quote> in the fourth paragraph. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>if you pick a 9 at any time</quote> with <quote>if you pick a 9</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition in order to clarify that only picking a 9 for the <em>extra</em> Random Number pick described results in death.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect91">91</a>) Added <quote>(Note the fact that you have applied Baknar oil on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> although it does not take up any space and only applies for the duration of this adventure.)</quote></p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect103">103</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect105">105</a>) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>temple and</quote> with <quote>temples, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect91">91</a>) Added <quote>(Note the fact that you have applied Baknar oil on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> although it does not take up any space and only applies for the duration of this adventure.)</quote></p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect103">103</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect105">105</a>) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>temple and</quote> with <quote>temples, and</quote>.</p>
@@ -5473,7 +5473,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>Unless you have just eaten a Meal</quote> with <quote>Unless you have just eaten</quote> since the food consumed in Sections <a idref="sect295">295</a> or <a idref="sect309">309</a> was not an item carried in the Backpack.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect134">134</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect137">137</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>Unless you have just eaten a Meal</quote> with <quote>Unless you have just eaten</quote> since the food consumed in Sections <a idref="sect295">295</a> or <a idref="sect309">309</a> was not an item carried in the Backpack.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect134">134</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect137">137</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect138">138</a>) Added <quote>even when attempting to evade</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect138">138</a>) Added <quote>even when attempting to evade</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect143">143</a>) Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect145">145</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect146">146</a>) Replaced <quote>as crevasse</quote> with <quote>as the crevasse</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect143">143</a>) Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect145">145</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect146">146</a>) Replaced <quote>as crevasse</quote> with <quote>as the crevasse</quote>.</p>
@@ -5482,7 +5482,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect150">150</a>) Moved the Firesphere choice into the second position. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect155">155</a>) Replaced <quote>rock face</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>. Replaced <quote>shocked and</quote> with <quote>shocked, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect150">150</a>) Moved the Firesphere choice into the second position. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect155">155</a>) Replaced <quote>rock face</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>. Replaced <quote>shocked and</quote> with <quote>shocked, and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect157">157</a>) Added <quote>(Remember to erase this potion from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>total, and</quote> with <quote>total and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect157">157</a>) Added <quote>(Remember to erase this potion from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>total, and</quote> with <quote>total and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect160">160</a>) Moved the choice regarding leaving the tent into the last position. Replaced <quote>breed are native to Kalte and make</quote> with <quote>breed is native to Kalte, and they make</quote>. Replaced <quote>Fenor and</quote> with <quote>Fenor, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you wish to leave the tent and attack the Baknar, turn to 78</quote> with <quote>Otherwise, leave the tent and attack the Baknar by <!--link-text-->turning to 78<!--/link-text--></quote> since the previous choices are both mandatory uses of Kai Disciplines. Replaced <quote>Gallings or the smaller Ostrels</quote> with <quote>gallings or the smaller ostrels</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect162">162</a>) Replaced <quote>to try and</quote> with <quote>to try to</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect167">167</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>orange and</quote> with <quote>orange, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect160">160</a>) Moved the choice regarding leaving the tent into the last position. Replaced <quote>breed are native to Kalte and make</quote> with <quote>breed is native to Kalte, and they make</quote>. Replaced <quote>Fenor and</quote> with <quote>Fenor, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you wish to leave the tent and attack the Baknar, turn to 78</quote> with <quote>Otherwise, leave the tent and attack the Baknar by <!--link-text-->turning to 78<!--/link-text--></quote> since the previous choices are both mandatory uses of Kai Disciplines. Replaced <quote>Gallings or the smaller Ostrels</quote> with <quote>gallings or the smaller ostrels</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect162">162</a>) Replaced <quote>to try and</quote> with <quote>to try to</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect167">167</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>orange and</quote> with <quote>orange, and</quote>.</p>
@@ -5524,7 +5524,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect256">256</a>) Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>. Replaced <quote>chamber, and</quote> with <quote>chamber and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect257">257</a>) Replaced <quote>to try and</quote> with <quote>to try to</quote>. Replaced <quote>direction alerted no</quote> with <quote>direction, alerted no</quote>. Replaced <quote>Barbarians, and</quote> with <quote>Barbarians and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect262">262</a>) Split the first paragraph into two paragraphs and moved the Sixth Sense choice between the two. Replaced <quote>posses</quote> with <quote>possess</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pick</quote> with <quote>Otherwise, pick</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect256">256</a>) Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>. Replaced <quote>chamber, and</quote> with <quote>chamber and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect257">257</a>) Replaced <quote>to try and</quote> with <quote>to try to</quote>. Replaced <quote>direction alerted no</quote> with <quote>direction, alerted no</quote>. Replaced <quote>Barbarians, and</quote> with <quote>Barbarians and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect262">262</a>) Split the first paragraph into two paragraphs and moved the Sixth Sense choice between the two. Replaced <quote>posses</quote> with <quote>possess</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pick</quote> with <quote>Otherwise, pick</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect263">263</a>) Moved the choice regarding lost <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points into the first position. Added <quote>even when attempting to evade</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect263">263</a>) Moved the choice regarding lost <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points into the first position. Added <quote>even when attempting to evade</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect265">265</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>creatures who have</quote> with <quote>creatures that have</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect272">272</a>) Replaced <quote>its tip</quote> with <quote>the rod<ch.apos/>s tip</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect273">273</a>) Replaced <quote>well-suited</quote> with <quote>well suited</quote>. Replaced <quote>breed are native to Kalte and make</quote> with <quote>breed is native to Kalte, and they make</quote>. Replaced <quote>Fenor and</quote> with <quote>Fenor, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>desert, and have</quote> with <quote>desert and have</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect265">265</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>creatures who have</quote> with <quote>creatures that have</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect272">272</a>) Replaced <quote>its tip</quote> with <quote>the rod<ch.apos/>s tip</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect273">273</a>) Replaced <quote>well-suited</quote> with <quote>well suited</quote>. Replaced <quote>breed are native to Kalte and make</quote> with <quote>breed is native to Kalte, and they make</quote>. Replaced <quote>Fenor and</quote> with <quote>Fenor, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>desert, and have</quote> with <quote>desert and have</quote>.</p>
@@ -5535,9 +5535,9 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect292">292</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect298">298</a>) Replaced <quote>fingerbones</quote> with <quote>finger-bones</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect292">292</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect298">298</a>) Replaced <quote>fingerbones</quote> with <quote>finger-bones</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect303">303</a>) Replaced <quote>Silver Helmet</quote> with <quote>Silver Helm</quote>. Replaced <quote>splendid Helmet</quote> with <quote>splendid Helm</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Helmet</quote> with <quote>the Helm</quote>. Added the choice <quote>If you have the Kai Discipline of Sixth Sense, <a idref="sect127">turn to 127</a></quote>, to parallel the same situation in <a idref="sect326">Section 326</a>. Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>. Added <quote>(Remember to erase the Ornate Silver Key from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect303">303</a>) Replaced <quote>Silver Helmet</quote> with <quote>Silver Helm</quote>. Replaced <quote>splendid Helmet</quote> with <quote>splendid Helm</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Helmet</quote> with <quote>the Helm</quote>. Added the choice <quote>If you have the Kai Discipline of Sixth Sense, <a idref="sect127">turn to 127</a></quote>, to parallel the same situation in <a idref="sect326">Section 326</a>. Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>. Added <quote>(Remember to erase the Ornate Silver Key from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>) Replaced <quote>Helmet</quote> with <quote>Silver Helm</quote> and added <quote>If you are already wearing another Helmet, you must discard it if you wish to keep the Silver Helm.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>) Replaced <quote>Helmet</quote> with <quote>Silver Helm</quote> and added <quote>If you are already wearing another Helmet, you must discard it if you wish to keep the Silver Helm.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>. Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Replaced <quote>something- </quote> with <quote>something<ch.emdash/></quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Replaced <quote>Tracking or</quote> with <quote>Tracking, or</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>. Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Replaced <quote>something- </quote> with <quote>something<ch.emdash/></quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Replaced <quote>Tracking or</quote> with <quote>Tracking, or</quote>.</p>
diff --git a/en/xml/04tcod.xml b/en/xml/04tcod.xml

index 9c7b349..0941b40 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/04tcod.xml
+++ b/en/xml/04tcod.xml
@@ -5589,7 +5589,7 @@
  
        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Kai Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai Discipline section</quote> with <quote>Kai Disciplines section</quote>. Capitalized all occurrences of <quote>discipline(s)</quote>. Removed <quote> on the last page of the book</quote>. Set the Weapons list in initial capital letters instead of all capitals. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Kai Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai Discipline section</quote> with <quote>Kai Disciplines section</quote>. Capitalized all occurrences of <quote>discipline(s)</quote>. Removed <quote> on the last page of the book</quote>. Set the Weapons list in initial capital letters instead of all capitals. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>.</p>
  
-      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote> (see front of this book)</quote>. Capitalized the items in the list rather than setting them in all capitals. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>badge of rank</quote> with <quote>Badge of Rank</quote>. Replaced <quote>tunic and</quote> with <quote>tunic, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>slung over shoulder when not in combat otherwise</quote> with <quote>slung over the shoulder when not in combat, otherwise</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote> (see front of this book)</quote>. Capitalized the items in the list rather than setting them in all capitals. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>badge of rank</quote> with <quote>Badge of Rank</quote>. Replaced <quote>tunic and</quote> with <quote>tunic, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>slung over shoulder when not in combat otherwise</quote> with <quote>slung over the shoulder when not in combat, otherwise</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
@@ -5679,7 +5679,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect126">126</a>) Replaced <quote>Pike and</quote> with <quote>Pike, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect128">128</a>) Replaced <quote>trapdoor but</quote> with <quote>trapdoor, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect126">126</a>) Replaced <quote>Pike and</quote> with <quote>Pike, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect128">128</a>) Replaced <quote>trapdoor but</quote> with <quote>trapdoor, but</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect129">129</a>) Split the two sentences of the last paragraph into separate paragraphs for the sake of automatic formatting. Added <quote>(If you possess the Kai Discipline of Hunting, you are unable to use it within the Maaken Mines to hunt for food.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect129">129</a>) Split the two sentences of the last paragraph into separate paragraphs for the sake of automatic formatting. Added <quote>(If you possess the Kai Discipline of Hunting, you are unable to use it within the Maaken Mines to hunt for food.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect130">130</a>) Replaced <quote>fast flowing</quote> with <quote>fast-flowing</quote>. Replaced <quote>Maaken range</quote> with <quote>Maaken Range</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>) Replaced <quote>newly constructed</quote> with <quote>newly-constructed</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>empty but</quote> with <quote>empty, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>checkered</quote> with <quote>chequered</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you feel uneasy about the tavern</quote> with <quote>If you feel uneasy about the tavern and wish to leave town</quote> as it was not clear from the original wording that your unease would lead you to leave the tavern, remount your horse, and attempt to leave town.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect130">130</a>) Replaced <quote>fast flowing</quote> with <quote>fast-flowing</quote>. Replaced <quote>Maaken range</quote> with <quote>Maaken Range</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>) Replaced <quote>newly constructed</quote> with <quote>newly-constructed</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>empty but</quote> with <quote>empty, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>checkered</quote> with <quote>chequered</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you feel uneasy about the tavern</quote> with <quote>If you feel uneasy about the tavern and wish to leave town</quote> as it was not clear from the original wording that your unease would lead you to leave the tavern, remount your horse, and attempt to leave town.</p>
@@ -5699,7 +5699,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect161">161</a>) Replaced <quote>feet a sudden jolt</quote> with <quote>feel a sudden jolt</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>face, then</quote> with <quote>face which then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect163">163</a>) Replaced <quote>Vassagonian, but</quote> with <quote>Vassagonian but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>) Replaced <quote>here, and</quote> with <quote>here and</quote>. Replaced <quote>hard pressed</quote> with <quote>hard-pressed</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect161">161</a>) Replaced <quote>feet a sudden jolt</quote> with <quote>feel a sudden jolt</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>face, then</quote> with <quote>face which then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect163">163</a>) Replaced <quote>Vassagonian, but</quote> with <quote>Vassagonian but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>) Replaced <quote>here, and</quote> with <quote>here and</quote>. Replaced <quote>hard pressed</quote> with <quote>hard-pressed</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect167">167</a>) Made the last sentence its own paragraph for the sake of formatting. Added <quote>(If you wish to keep the Shovel, it takes up two spaces in your Backpack.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote><a idref="action">Action Chart</a>, and</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Action Chart</a> and</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect167">167</a>) Made the last sentence its own paragraph for the sake of formatting. Added <quote>(If you wish to keep the Shovel, it takes up two spaces in your Backpack.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote><a idref="action">Action Chart</a>, and</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Action Chart</a> and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect168">168</a>) Replaced <quote>Dull satanic</quote> with <quote>Dull, satanic</quote>. Replaced <quote>move and</quote> with <quote>move, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect169">169</a>) Replaced <quote>him and</quote> with <quote>him, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>long curved</quote> with <quote>long, curved</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect171">171</a>) Replaced <quote>mile you</quote> with <quote>mile, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>journey, and</quote> with <quote>journey and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Durncrag mountains</quote> with <quote>Durncrag Mountains</quote>. Added <quote>(You have entered the Wildlands south of the Pass of Moytura and cannot use the Kai Discipline of Hunting to hunt for food in this desolate area.)</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect168">168</a>) Replaced <quote>Dull satanic</quote> with <quote>Dull, satanic</quote>. Replaced <quote>move and</quote> with <quote>move, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect169">169</a>) Replaced <quote>him and</quote> with <quote>him, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>long curved</quote> with <quote>long, curved</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect171">171</a>) Replaced <quote>mile you</quote> with <quote>mile, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>journey, and</quote> with <quote>journey and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Durncrag mountains</quote> with <quote>Durncrag Mountains</quote>. Added <quote>(You have entered the Wildlands south of the Pass of Moytura and cannot use the Kai Discipline of Hunting to hunt for food in this desolate area.)</quote>.</p>
@@ -5709,7 +5709,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect180">180</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>. Replaced <quote>cavern and</quote> with <quote>cavern, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness you</quote> with <quote>darkness, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>Maaken range</quote> with <quote>Maaken Range</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect182">182</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Replaced <quote>hit but</quote> with <quote>hit, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>fight; a</quote> with <quote>fight<ch.emdash/>a</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect180">180</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>. Replaced <quote>cavern and</quote> with <quote>cavern, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness you</quote> with <quote>darkness, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>Maaken range</quote> with <quote>Maaken Range</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect182">182</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Replaced <quote>hit but</quote> with <quote>hit, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>fight; a</quote> with <quote>fight<ch.emdash/>a</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Added <quote>(If you possess the Kai Discipline of Hunting, you are unable to use it within the Maaken Mines to hunt for food.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Added <quote>(If you possess the Kai Discipline of Hunting, you are unable to use it within the Maaken Mines to hunt for food.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>back and</quote> with <quote>back, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>oily black</quote> with <quote>oily, black</quote>. Replaced <quote>head, leaps</quote> with <quote>head leaps</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect189">189</a>) Replaced <quote>the ranger</quote> with <quote>a ranger</quote> in the second sentence. At this point, there are still several rangers left in the company. Also replaced <quote>air and</quote> with <quote>air, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect192">192</a>) Replaced <quote>serated</quote> with <quote>serrated</quote>. Replaced <quote>chest and</quote> with <quote>chest, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>back and</quote> with <quote>back, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>oily black</quote> with <quote>oily, black</quote>. Replaced <quote>head, leaps</quote> with <quote>head leaps</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect189">189</a>) Replaced <quote>the ranger</quote> with <quote>a ranger</quote> in the second sentence. At this point, there are still several rangers left in the company. Also replaced <quote>air and</quote> with <quote>air, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect192">192</a>) Replaced <quote>serated</quote> with <quote>serrated</quote>. Replaced <quote>chest and</quote> with <quote>chest, and</quote>.</p>
@@ -5764,7 +5764,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect265">265</a>) Replaced <quote>blood-stained</quote> with <quote>bloodstained</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect266">266</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow-slits</quote> with <quote>arrow slits</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) Replaced <quote>coup de grace</quote> with <quote>coup de gr<ch.acirc/>ce</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect265">265</a>) Replaced <quote>blood-stained</quote> with <quote>bloodstained</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect266">266</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow-slits</quote> with <quote>arrow slits</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) Replaced <quote>coup de grace</quote> with <quote>coup de gr<ch.acirc/>ce</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect269">269</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>. Added <quote>(If you possess the Kai Discipline of Hunting, you are unable to use it within the Maaken Mines to hunt for food.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect269">269</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>. Added <quote>(If you possess the Kai Discipline of Hunting, you are unable to use it within the Maaken Mines to hunt for food.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect270">270</a>) Replaced <quote>approach and</quote> with <quote>approach, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>a Torch</quote> with <quote>a Torch and a Tinderbox</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and</quote> with <quote>darkness and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect272">272</a>) Replaced <quote>sommersaulted</quote> with <quote>somersaulted</quote>. Replaced <quote>wounds, and</quote> with <quote>wounds and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Maaken range</quote> with <quote>Maaken Range</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items and</quote> with <quote>Items, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>feet first</quote> with <quote>feet-first</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect273">273</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect270">270</a>) Replaced <quote>approach and</quote> with <quote>approach, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>a Torch</quote> with <quote>a Torch and a Tinderbox</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and</quote> with <quote>darkness and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect272">272</a>) Replaced <quote>sommersaulted</quote> with <quote>somersaulted</quote>. Replaced <quote>wounds, and</quote> with <quote>wounds and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Maaken range</quote> with <quote>Maaken Range</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items and</quote> with <quote>Items, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>feet first</quote> with <quote>feet-first</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect273">273</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
@@ -5809,7 +5809,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect324">324</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>first floor</quote> with <quote>first-floor</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect325">325</a>) Replaced <quote>will and</quote> with <quote>will, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Replaced <quote>south you</quote> with <quote>south, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>Maaken range</quote> with <quote>Maaken Range</quote>. Replaced <quote>Maaken mines</quote> with <quote>Maaken Mines</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect324">324</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>first floor</quote> with <quote>first-floor</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect325">325</a>) Replaced <quote>will and</quote> with <quote>will, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Replaced <quote>south you</quote> with <quote>south, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>Maaken range</quote> with <quote>Maaken Range</quote>. Replaced <quote>Maaken mines</quote> with <quote>Maaken Mines</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect327">327</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Captain</quote> with <quote>captain</quote>. Added <quote>(Remember to erase this Sword from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect327">327</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Captain</quote> with <quote>captain</quote>. Added <quote>(Remember to erase this Sword from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect329">329</a>) Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>. Replaced <quote>eyes and</quote> with <quote>eyes, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect330">330</a>) Replaced <quote>tree-trunks</quote> with <quote>tree trunks</quote>. Replaced <quote>Ruanon forest</quote> with <quote>Ruanon Forest</quote>. Replaced <quote>few minutes ride</quote> with <quote>few minutes<ch.apos/> ride</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect331">331</a>) Replaced <quote>Maaken mines</quote> with <quote>Maaken Mines</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect329">329</a>) Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>. Replaced <quote>eyes and</quote> with <quote>eyes, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect330">330</a>) Replaced <quote>tree-trunks</quote> with <quote>tree trunks</quote>. Replaced <quote>Ruanon forest</quote> with <quote>Ruanon Forest</quote>. Replaced <quote>few minutes ride</quote> with <quote>few minutes<ch.apos/> ride</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect331">331</a>) Replaced <quote>Maaken mines</quote> with <quote>Maaken Mines</quote>.</p>
diff --git a/en/xml/04wotw.xml b/en/xml/04wotw.xml

index 18075c3..70c5211 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/04wotw.xml
+++ b/en/xml/04wotw.xml
@@ -536,7 +536,7 @@
         <footnote id="equipmnt-1-foot" idref="equipmnt-1"><p>If you have completed a previous adventure, you keep all equipment you had at the end of that adventure. You do not receive any new equipment, unless you have just selected Alchemy as your sixth Lesser Magick, or if you have not mastered the Lesser Magick of Alchemy but you have selected the Higher Magick of Theurgy, in which case you receive a Herb Pouch with contents as indicated in this section.</p></footnote>
         <footnote id="equipmnt-2-foot" idref="equipmnt-2"><p>If you have mastered the Lesser Magick of Alchemy or the Higher Magick of Theurgy and therefore have a Herb Pouch, you may choose to keep potions, vials, or ingredients in either the Herb Pouch or your Backpack. All other Backpack Items must be kept in your Backpack.</p></footnote>
        <footnote id="equipmnt-3-foot" idref="equipmnt-3">
         <footnote id="equipmnt-1-foot" idref="equipmnt-1"><p>If you have completed a previous adventure, you keep all equipment you had at the end of that adventure. You do not receive any new equipment, unless you have just selected Alchemy as your sixth Lesser Magick, or if you have not mastered the Lesser Magick of Alchemy but you have selected the Higher Magick of Theurgy, in which case you receive a Herb Pouch with contents as indicated in this section.</p></footnote>
         <footnote id="equipmnt-2-foot" idref="equipmnt-2"><p>If you have mastered the Lesser Magick of Alchemy or the Higher Magick of Theurgy and therefore have a Herb Pouch, you may choose to keep potions, vials, or ingredients in either the Herb Pouch or your Backpack. All other Backpack Items must be kept in your Backpack.</p></footnote>
        <footnote id="equipmnt-3-foot" idref="equipmnt-3">
-       <p>The new Mongoose Publishing editions of the gamebooks clarify that <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote></p>
+       <p>The Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions of the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> books clarify that <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote></p>
        </footnote>
       </footnotes>
  
        </footnote>
       </footnotes>
  
diff --git a/en/xml/05sots.xml b/en/xml/05sots.xml

index fb5067e..d670500 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/05sots.xml
+++ b/en/xml/05sots.xml
@@ -6046,7 +6046,7 @@
  
        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Kai Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai Discipline section</quote> with <quote>Kai Disciplines section</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>discipline(s)</quote> with <quote>Discipline(s)</quote>. Set the Weapons list in initial capital letters instead of all capitals. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Kai Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai Discipline section</quote> with <quote>Kai Disciplines section</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>discipline(s)</quote> with <quote>Discipline(s)</quote>. Set the Weapons list in initial capital letters instead of all capitals. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>.</p>
  
-      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote> (see the front of this book)</quote>. Capitalized the items in the list rather than setting them in all capitals. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Safe Keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>also they cannot</quote> with <quote>neither can they</quote>. Replaced <quote>slung over shoulder</quote> with <quote>slung over the shoulder</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote> (see the front of this book)</quote>. Capitalized the items in the list rather than setting them in all capitals. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Safe Keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>also they cannot</quote> with <quote>neither can they</quote>. Replaced <quote>slung over shoulder</quote> with <quote>slung over the shoulder</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Placed <quote>or below</quote> after <quote>reduced to zero</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced</quote> with <quote>possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Placed <quote>or below</quote> after <quote>reduced to zero</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced</quote> with <quote>possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
@@ -6057,11 +6057,11 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>you must<ch.emdash/></quote> with <quote>you must<ch.ellips/></quote>. Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>minarets and</quote> with <quote>minarets, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect2">2</a>) Replaced <quote>fades; and</quote> with <quote>fades, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>diseases, or</quote> with <quote>diseases or</quote>. Replaced <quote>entered, and</quote> with <quote>entered and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Gold Chain and Key</quote> with <quote>Gold Key on a chain</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Key</quote> with <quote>the Gold Key</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Potion</quote> with <quote>the Oede herb</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect3">3</a>) Replaced <quote>sixty-seven</quote> with <quote>67</quote>. Altered the paragraph breaks to mirror <a idref="sect101">Section 101</a>. Replaced <quote>dial.</quote> with <quote>dial!</quote> in harmony with <a idref="sect101">Section 101</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>you must<ch.emdash/></quote> with <quote>you must<ch.ellips/></quote>. Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>minarets and</quote> with <quote>minarets, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect2">2</a>) Replaced <quote>fades; and</quote> with <quote>fades, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>diseases, or</quote> with <quote>diseases or</quote>. Replaced <quote>entered, and</quote> with <quote>entered and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Gold Chain and Key</quote> with <quote>Gold Key on a chain</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Key</quote> with <quote>the Gold Key</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Potion</quote> with <quote>the Oede herb</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect3">3</a>) Replaced <quote>sixty-seven</quote> with <quote>67</quote>. Altered the paragraph breaks to mirror <a idref="sect101">Section 101</a>. Replaced <quote>dial.</quote> with <quote>dial!</quote> in harmony with <a idref="sect101">Section 101</a>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect4">4</a>) Replaced <quote>Palace Jailer</quote> with <quote>Palace Gaoler</quote>. Replaced <quote>If the fight lasts</quote> with <quote>If you win and the fight lasts</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect4">4</a>) Replaced <quote>Palace Jailer</quote> with <quote>Palace Gaoler</quote>. Replaced <quote>If the fight lasts</quote> with <quote>If you win and the fight lasts</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Replaced <quote>half-way</quote> with <quote>halfway</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect7">7</a>) Replaced <quote>bowstring and</quote> with <quote>bowstring, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>range and</quote> with <quote>range, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>surrounded and</quote> with <quote>surrounded, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect8">8</a>) Replaced <quote>efforts and</quote> with <quote>efforts, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Replaced <quote>half-way</quote> with <quote>halfway</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect7">7</a>) Replaced <quote>bowstring and</quote> with <quote>bowstring, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>range and</quote> with <quote>range, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>surrounded and</quote> with <quote>surrounded, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect8">8</a>) Replaced <quote>efforts and</quote> with <quote>efforts, and</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>wire and</quote> with <quote>wire, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>. Replaced <quote>Gold Crowns and</quote> with <quote>Gold Crowns, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>to your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> with <quote>to your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>, but note your lost possessions elsewhere in case you find them again later</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>wire and</quote> with <quote>wire, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>. Replaced <quote>Gold Crowns and</quote> with <quote>Gold Crowns, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>to your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> with <quote>to your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>, but note your lost possessions elsewhere in case you find them again later</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect12">12</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Replaced <quote>appalling, and choking</quote> with <quote>appalling; choking</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect14">14</a>) Replaced <quote>urns and all kinds of fruit</quote> with <quote>urns, and all kinds of fruit</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapons and Gold Crowns</quote> with <quote>Weapons, and Gold Crowns</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect12">12</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Replaced <quote>appalling, and choking</quote> with <quote>appalling; choking</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect14">14</a>) Replaced <quote>urns and all kinds of fruit</quote> with <quote>urns, and all kinds of fruit</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapons and Gold Crowns</quote> with <quote>Weapons, and Gold Crowns</quote>.</p>
@@ -6094,7 +6094,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect66">66</a>) Replaced <quote>guard, and</quote> with <quote>guard and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect67">67</a>) Replaced <quote>deep dark</quote> with <quote>deep, dark</quote>. Replaced <quote>now extinct</quote> with <quote>now extinct elsewhere</quote>. Replaced <quote>shape and</quote> with <quote>shape, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect68">68</a>) Replaced <quote>Welcome Northlander</quote> with <quote>Welcome, Northlander</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect66">66</a>) Replaced <quote>guard, and</quote> with <quote>guard and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect67">67</a>) Replaced <quote>deep dark</quote> with <quote>deep, dark</quote>. Replaced <quote>now extinct</quote> with <quote>now extinct elsewhere</quote>. Replaced <quote>shape and</quote> with <quote>shape, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect68">68</a>) Replaced <quote>Welcome Northlander</quote> with <quote>Welcome, Northlander</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect69">69</a>) Replaced <quote>crisscrossed</quote> with <quote>criss-crossed</quote>. Replaced <quote>free, and</quote> with <quote>free and</quote>. Replaced <quote>greedily, and</quote> with <quote>greedily and</quote>. Replaced <quote>hospitality?</quote> with <quote>hospitality.</quote> since the sentence is not constructed as a question. Added <quote>(Erase from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> all Weapons, Special Items, Gold Crowns, and your Backpack and all its contents, but note them down elsewhere in case you should find them again later.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect69">69</a>) Replaced <quote>crisscrossed</quote> with <quote>criss-crossed</quote>. Replaced <quote>free, and</quote> with <quote>free and</quote>. Replaced <quote>greedily, and</quote> with <quote>greedily and</quote>. Replaced <quote>hospitality?</quote> with <quote>hospitality.</quote> since the sentence is not constructed as a question. Added <quote>(Erase from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> all Weapons, Special Items, Gold Crowns, and your Backpack and all its contents, but note them down elsewhere in case you should find them again later.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect73">73</a>) Replaced <quote>something and</quote> with <quote>something, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect74">74</a>) Replaced <quote>door, and</quote> with <quote>door and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect75">75</a>) Replaced <quote>Quickly Northlander, I</quote> with <quote>Quickly, Northlander. I</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect73">73</a>) Replaced <quote>something and</quote> with <quote>something, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect74">74</a>) Replaced <quote>door, and</quote> with <quote>door and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect75">75</a>) Replaced <quote>Quickly Northlander, I</quote> with <quote>Quickly, Northlander. I</quote>.</p>
@@ -6109,7 +6109,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Replaced <quote>overturned and</quote> with <quote>overturned, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kara Kala and</quote> with <quote>Kara Kala, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>There is</quote> with <quote>Then there is</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect89">89</a>) Replaced <quote>equipment, and</quote> with <quote>equipment and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect90">90</a>) Replaced <quote>advice, and</quote> with <quote>advice and</quote>. Replaced <quote>water keeping</quote> with <quote>water, keeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>Baga-darooz</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-vassagonian">Baga-darooz</foreign></quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Replaced <quote>overturned and</quote> with <quote>overturned, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kara Kala and</quote> with <quote>Kara Kala, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>There is</quote> with <quote>Then there is</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect89">89</a>) Replaced <quote>equipment, and</quote> with <quote>equipment and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect90">90</a>) Replaced <quote>advice, and</quote> with <quote>advice and</quote>. Replaced <quote>water keeping</quote> with <quote>water, keeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>Baga-darooz</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-vassagonian">Baga-darooz</foreign></quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect91">91</a>) Replaced <quote>If the fight lasts</quote> with <quote>If you win and the fight lasts</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect91">91</a>) Replaced <quote>If the fight lasts</quote> with <quote>If you win and the fight lasts</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect93">93</a>) Replaced <quote>parched and</quote> with <quote>parched, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect94">94</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect95">95</a>) Replaced <quote>swim but</quote> with <quote>swim, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect93">93</a>) Replaced <quote>parched and</quote> with <quote>parched, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect94">94</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect95">95</a>) Replaced <quote>swim but</quote> with <quote>swim, but</quote>.</p>
@@ -6155,7 +6155,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Replaced <quote>place and</quote> with <quote>place, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect152">152</a>) Replaced <quote>stone, and</quote> with <quote>stone and</quote>. Replaced <quote>pass; but</quote> with <quote>pass, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>sunset and</quote> with <quote>sunset, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect153">153</a>) Replaced <quote>water! <quote>There he is.</quote></quote> with <quote>water: <quote>There he is!</quote></quote>. Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Replaced <quote>place and</quote> with <quote>place, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect152">152</a>) Replaced <quote>stone, and</quote> with <quote>stone and</quote>. Replaced <quote>pass; but</quote> with <quote>pass, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>sunset and</quote> with <quote>sunset, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect153">153</a>) Replaced <quote>water! <quote>There he is.</quote></quote> with <quote>water: <quote>There he is!</quote></quote>. Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect154">154</a>) Replaced <quote>vials and</quote> with <quote>vials, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>You may purchase any of the above</quote> with <quote>You may purchase any of the above and in any quantity you desire</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect154">154</a>) Replaced <quote>vials and</quote> with <quote>vials, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>You may purchase any of the above</quote> with <quote>You may purchase any of the above and in any quantity you desire</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect155">155</a>) Replaced <quote>Dahir mountains</quote> with <quote>Dahir Mountains</quote>. Replaced <quote>south-east</quote> with <quote>southeast</quote>. Replaced <quote>south-west</quote> with <quote>southwest</quote>. Replaced <quote>To the north</quote> with <quote>To the east</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect158">158</a>) Replaced <quote>gallery and</quote> with <quote>gallery, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect159">159</a>) Replaced <quote>entrance, but</quote> with <quote>entrance but</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, and</quote> with <quote>combat and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect155">155</a>) Replaced <quote>Dahir mountains</quote> with <quote>Dahir Mountains</quote>. Replaced <quote>south-east</quote> with <quote>southeast</quote>. Replaced <quote>south-west</quote> with <quote>southwest</quote>. Replaced <quote>To the north</quote> with <quote>To the east</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect158">158</a>) Replaced <quote>gallery and</quote> with <quote>gallery, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect159">159</a>) Replaced <quote>entrance, but</quote> with <quote>entrance but</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, and</quote> with <quote>combat and</quote>.</p>
@@ -6164,11 +6164,11 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect163">163</a>) Replaced <quote>you, and</quote> with <quote>you and</quote>. Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect164">164</a>) Replaced <quote>mouth and</quote> with <quote>mouth, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect167">167</a>) Replaced <quote>door, and</quote> with <quote>door and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect163">163</a>) Replaced <quote>you, and</quote> with <quote>you and</quote>. Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect164">164</a>) Replaced <quote>mouth and</quote> with <quote>mouth, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect167">167</a>) Replaced <quote>door, and</quote> with <quote>door and</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect168">168</a>) Replaced <quote>sommersaults</quote> with <quote>somersaults</quote>. Replaced <quote>If the fight lasts</quote> with <quote>If you win and the fight lasts</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect168">168</a>) Replaced <quote>sommersaults</quote> with <quote>somersaults</quote>. Replaced <quote>If the fight lasts</quote> with <quote>If you win and the fight lasts</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect171">171</a>) Replaced <quote>dark and</quote> with <quote>dark, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>corridor, and</quote> with <quote>corridor and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect173">173</a>) Replaced <quote>north-west</quote> with <quote>northwest</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Baga-darooz</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-vassagonian">Baga-darooz</foreign></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect175">175</a>) Replaced <quote>Maouk who</quote> with <quote>Maouk, who</quote>. Replaced <quote>shadows, a dart</quote> with <quote>shadows<ch.emdash/>a dart</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect171">171</a>) Replaced <quote>dark and</quote> with <quote>dark, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>corridor, and</quote> with <quote>corridor and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect173">173</a>) Replaced <quote>north-west</quote> with <quote>northwest</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Baga-darooz</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-vassagonian">Baga-darooz</foreign></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect175">175</a>) Replaced <quote>Maouk who</quote> with <quote>Maouk, who</quote>. Replaced <quote>shadows, a dart</quote> with <quote>shadows<ch.emdash/>a dart</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect176">176</a>) Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>. Replaced <quote>Gold and</quote> with <quote>Gold Crowns, and</quote>. Added <quote>(Make all the necessary adjustments to your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>, but note your lost possessions elsewhere in case you find them again later.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect176">176</a>) Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>. Replaced <quote>Gold and</quote> with <quote>Gold Crowns, and</quote>. Added <quote>(Make all the necessary adjustments to your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>, but note your lost possessions elsewhere in case you find them again later.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect177">177</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect178">178</a>) Replaced <quote>half-way</quote> with <quote>halfway</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, and</quote> with <quote>body and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect179">179</a>) Replaced <quote>potions and</quote> with <quote>potions, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Baga-darooz</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-vassagonian">Baga-darooz</foreign></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect177">177</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect178">178</a>) Replaced <quote>half-way</quote> with <quote>halfway</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, and</quote> with <quote>body and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect179">179</a>) Replaced <quote>potions and</quote> with <quote>potions, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Baga-darooz</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-vassagonian">Baga-darooz</foreign></quote>.</p>
@@ -6196,7 +6196,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect216">216</a>) Replaced <quote>town, and</quote> with <quote>town and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect217">217</a>) Replaced <quote>ring, and</quote> with <quote>ring and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect218">218</a>) Replaced <quote>tongues and</quote> with <quote>tongues, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect216">216</a>) Replaced <quote>town, and</quote> with <quote>town and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect217">217</a>) Replaced <quote>ring, and</quote> with <quote>ring and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect218">218</a>) Replaced <quote>tongues and</quote> with <quote>tongues, and</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect221">221</a>) Replaced <quote>If you possess a Crystal Star Pendant</quote> with <quote>If you have ever been given a Crystal Star Pendant</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect221">221</a>) Replaced <quote>If you possess a Crystal Star Pendant</quote> with <quote>If you have ever been given a Crystal Star Pendant</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>razor sharp</quote> with <quote>razor-sharp</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect225">225</a>) Replaced <quote>found, and</quote> with <quote>found and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>razor sharp</quote> with <quote>razor-sharp</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect225">225</a>) Replaced <quote>found, and</quote> with <quote>found and</quote>.</p>
@@ -6237,7 +6237,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect282">282</a>) Replaced <quote>However for</quote> with <quote>However, for</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect285">285</a>) Replaced <quote>hand, and</quote> with <quote>hand and</quote>. Replaced <quote>muzzle-first</quote> with <quote>muzzle first</quote>. Replaced <quote>death blow</quote> with <quote>death-blow</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>is another arch and a staircase</quote> with <quote>are another arch and a staircase</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect287">287</a>) Replaced <quote>saddle ring and</quote> with <quote>saddle ring, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect282">282</a>) Replaced <quote>However for</quote> with <quote>However, for</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect285">285</a>) Replaced <quote>hand, and</quote> with <quote>hand and</quote>. Replaced <quote>muzzle-first</quote> with <quote>muzzle first</quote>. Replaced <quote>death blow</quote> with <quote>death-blow</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>is another arch and a staircase</quote> with <quote>are another arch and a staircase</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect287">287</a>) Replaced <quote>saddle ring and</quote> with <quote>saddle ring, and</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect288">288</a>) Replaced <quote>If you possess a Crystal Star Pendant</quote> with <quote>If you have ever been given a Crystal Star Pendant</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect288">288</a>) Replaced <quote>If you possess a Crystal Star Pendant</quote> with <quote>If you have ever been given a Crystal Star Pendant</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect289">289</a>) Replaced <quote>surface and</quote> with <quote>surface, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>gutteral</quote> with <quote>guttural</quote>. Italicised <quote><onomatopoeia>crack</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect290">290</a>) Replaced <quote>Drakkar leader</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim leader</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect291">291</a>) Replaced <quote>Tentarias are</quote> with <quote>Tentarias is</quote>. Replaced <quote>over a thousand miles</quote> with <quote>nearly three thousand miles</quote>. Replaced <quote>cargo and</quote> with <quote>cargo, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>result Banedon</quote> with <quote>result, Banedon</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect289">289</a>) Replaced <quote>surface and</quote> with <quote>surface, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>gutteral</quote> with <quote>guttural</quote>. Italicised <quote><onomatopoeia>crack</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect290">290</a>) Replaced <quote>Drakkar leader</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim leader</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect291">291</a>) Replaced <quote>Tentarias are</quote> with <quote>Tentarias is</quote>. Replaced <quote>over a thousand miles</quote> with <quote>nearly three thousand miles</quote>. Replaced <quote>cargo and</quote> with <quote>cargo, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>result Banedon</quote> with <quote>result, Banedon</quote>.</p>
@@ -6258,7 +6258,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Replaced <quote>cringes thew woman</quote> with <quote>says the woman cringingly</quote> as <quote>cringes</quote> is not considered a mode of speech.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Replaced <quote>collar bone</quote> with <quote>collarbone</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect316">316</a>) Replaced <quote>surprise, their weapons</quote> with <quote>surprise; their weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Replaced <quote>cringes thew woman</quote> with <quote>says the woman cringingly</quote> as <quote>cringes</quote> is not considered a mode of speech.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Replaced <quote>collar bone</quote> with <quote>collarbone</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect316">316</a>) Replaced <quote>surprise, their weapons</quote> with <quote>surprise; their weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Replaced <quote>blood but</quote> with <quote>blood, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>back-breaking</quote> with <quote>backbreaking</quote>. Replaced <quote>Koneshi mountains</quote> with <quote>Koneshi Mountains</quote>. Replaced <quote>sky-ship</quote> with <quote>skyship</quote>. Added <quote>(You may not use Hunting if required to eat a Meal in the middle of this wasteland.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Replaced <quote>blood but</quote> with <quote>blood, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>back-breaking</quote> with <quote>backbreaking</quote>. Replaced <quote>Koneshi mountains</quote> with <quote>Koneshi Mountains</quote>. Replaced <quote>sky-ship</quote> with <quote>skyship</quote>. Added <quote>(You may not use Hunting if required to eat a Meal in the middle of this wasteland.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect322">322</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>sky-ship</quote> with <quote>skyship</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar riders</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim riders</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect324">324</a>) Replaced <quote>Drakkar Sentry</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Sentry</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect322">322</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>sky-ship</quote> with <quote>skyship</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar riders</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim riders</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect324">324</a>) Replaced <quote>Drakkar Sentry</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Sentry</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
@@ -6298,7 +6298,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect376">376</a>) Replaced <quote>white-washed</quote> with <quote>whitewashed</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect377">377</a>) Replaced <quote>turn round</quote> with <quote>turn around</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect380">380</a>) Replaced <quote>helm but</quote> with <quote>helm, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>bo<ch.apos/>sun</quote> with <quote>Bo<ch.apos/>sun</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Drakkar riders</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim riders</quote> in both the section text and the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect376">376</a>) Replaced <quote>white-washed</quote> with <quote>whitewashed</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect377">377</a>) Replaced <quote>turn round</quote> with <quote>turn around</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect380">380</a>) Replaced <quote>helm but</quote> with <quote>helm, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>bo<ch.apos/>sun</quote> with <quote>Bo<ch.apos/>sun</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Drakkar riders</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim riders</quote> in both the section text and the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect382">382</a>) Replaced the choice at the end of this section to match those in <a idref="sect288">Section 288</a>. Replaced <quote>If you possess a Crystal Star Pendant</quote> with <quote>If you have ever been given a Crystal Star Pendant</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect382">382</a>) Replaced the choice at the end of this section to match those in <a idref="sect288">Section 288</a>. Replaced <quote>If you possess a Crystal Star Pendant</quote> with <quote>If you have ever been given a Crystal Star Pendant</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect384">384</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect385">385</a>) Replaced <quote>seering</quote> with <quote>searing</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect386">386</a>) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect384">384</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect385">385</a>) Replaced <quote>seering</quote> with <quote>searing</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect386">386</a>) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.</p>
diff --git a/en/xml/06tkot.xml b/en/xml/06tkot.xml

index d1481d4..012dce8 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/06tkot.xml
+++ b/en/xml/06tkot.xml
@@ -6361,7 +6361,7 @@
  
         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Magnakai Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>scent, and</quote> with <quote>scent and</quote>. Replaced <quote>points, and</quote> with <quote>points and</quote>. Replaced <quote>danger, or</quote> with <quote>danger or</quote>. Removed all extraneous spaces between a number and its sign (e.g. replaced <quote>+ 3</quote> with <quote>+3</quote>). Set the list of items in initial capital letters instead of all capitals. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Magnakai Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>scent, and</quote> with <quote>scent and</quote>. Replaced <quote>points, and</quote> with <quote>points and</quote>. Replaced <quote>danger, or</quote> with <quote>danger or</quote>. Removed all extraneous spaces between a number and its sign (e.g. replaced <quote>+ 3</quote> with <quote>+3</quote>). Set the list of items in initial capital letters instead of all capitals. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
  
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Capitalized the list of items rather than setting them in all capital letters. Removed <quote> (see front inside cover)</quote>. Replaced <quote>pouch and</quote> with <quote>pouch, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>notes but</quote> with <quote>notes, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>effect it</quote> with <quote>effect they</quote>. Replaced <quote>TINDERBOX carried</quote> with <quote>Tinderbox<ch.emdash/>carried</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>number of weapons</quote> with <quote>number of Weapons</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Capitalized the list of items rather than setting them in all capital letters. Removed <quote> (see front inside cover)</quote>. Replaced <quote>pouch and</quote> with <quote>pouch, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>notes but</quote> with <quote>notes, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>effect it</quote> with <quote>effect they</quote>. Replaced <quote>TINDERBOX carried</quote> with <quote>Tinderbox<ch.emdash/>carried</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>number of weapons</quote> with <quote>number of Weapons</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Replaced <quote>to evade combat, but</quote> with <quote>to evade combat but</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Replaced <quote>to evade combat, but</quote> with <quote>to evade combat but</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
@@ -6411,7 +6411,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Deleted a period in the middle of the second sentence.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect52">52</a>) Replaced <quote>neck and</quote> with <quote>neck, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect53">53</a>) In the first choice, replaced <quote>Unless you have already done so, if you wish to approach the merchant</quote> with <quote>If you wish to approach the merchant</quote>. It is actually impossible to have already approached the merchant at this point.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Deleted a period in the middle of the second sentence.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect52">52</a>) Replaced <quote>neck and</quote> with <quote>neck, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect53">53</a>) In the first choice, replaced <quote>Unless you have already done so, if you wish to approach the merchant</quote> with <quote>If you wish to approach the merchant</quote>. It is actually impossible to have already approached the merchant at this point.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>men and</quote> with <quote>men, and</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>aim and</quote> with <quote>aim, and</quote>. Added <quote>(in this instance, 0 = 10)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>men and</quote> with <quote>men, and</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>aim and</quote> with <quote>aim, and</quote>. Added <quote>(in this instance, 0 = 10)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect58">58</a>) Replaced <quote>guildhouse</quote> with <quote>guild-house</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect60">60</a>) Replaced <quote>old but</quote> with <quote>old, but</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect62">62</a>) Replaced <quote>truth for</quote> with <quote>truth, for</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect58">58</a>) Replaced <quote>guildhouse</quote> with <quote>guild-house</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect60">60</a>) Replaced <quote>old but</quote> with <quote>old, but</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect62">62</a>) Replaced <quote>truth for</quote> with <quote>truth, for</quote>.</p>
@@ -6507,7 +6507,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect197">197</a>) Replaced <quote>points), and</quote> with <quote>points) and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect199">199</a>) Deleted a period after <quote>He asks</quote> in the last sentence. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Replaced <quote>open and, as</quote> with <quote>open, and as</quote>. Replaced <quote>chill stale</quote> with <quote>chill, stale</quote>. Replaced <quote>key but</quote> with <quote>key, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>Silver Key</quote> with <quote>Small Silver Key</quote> (see errata entry for <a idref="sect158">Section 158</a> for reasoning).</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect197">197</a>) Replaced <quote>points), and</quote> with <quote>points) and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect199">199</a>) Deleted a period after <quote>He asks</quote> in the last sentence. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Replaced <quote>open and, as</quote> with <quote>open, and as</quote>. Replaced <quote>chill stale</quote> with <quote>chill, stale</quote>. Replaced <quote>key but</quote> with <quote>key, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>Silver Key</quote> with <quote>Small Silver Key</quote> (see errata entry for <a idref="sect158">Section 158</a> for reasoning).</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect201">201</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>If the combat</quote> with <quote>If you win and the combat</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect201">201</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>If the combat</quote> with <quote>If you win and the combat</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect202">202</a>) Replaced <quote>much-needed</quote> with <quote>much needed</quote>. Replaced <quote>equipment and then collect</quote> with <quote>equipment, and then collect</quote>. Replaced <quote>shabby and bare</quote> with <quote>shabby, and bare</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect204">204</a>) Replaced <quote>company and</quote> with <quote>company, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect206">206</a>) Replaced <quote>copse, and</quote> with <quote>copse and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect202">202</a>) Replaced <quote>much-needed</quote> with <quote>much needed</quote>. Replaced <quote>equipment and then collect</quote> with <quote>equipment, and then collect</quote>. Replaced <quote>shabby and bare</quote> with <quote>shabby, and bare</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect204">204</a>) Replaced <quote>company and</quote> with <quote>company, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect206">206</a>) Replaced <quote>copse, and</quote> with <quote>copse and</quote>.</p>
@@ -6549,7 +6549,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect265">265</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) Replaced <quote>Varettian plain</quote> with <quote>Varettian Plain</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect268">268</a>) Replaced <quote>with a bow</quote> with <quote>with Bow</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect265">265</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) Replaced <quote>Varettian plain</quote> with <quote>Varettian Plain</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect268">268</a>) Replaced <quote>with a bow</quote> with <quote>with Bow</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect270">270</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Added <quote> If you wield the Sommerswerd in this combat, you may double all <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point losses inflicted upon your enemy.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect270">270</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Added <quote> If you wield the Sommerswerd in this combat, you may double all <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point losses inflicted upon your enemy.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect271">271</a>) Replaced <quote>competition and</quote> with <quote>competition, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect272">272</a>) Replaced <quote>east and</quote> with <quote>east, and</quote>. Moved the Curing choice into the first position.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect273">273</a>) Replaced all occurrences of <quote>..</quote> with <quote><ch.ellips/></quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect271">271</a>) Replaced <quote>competition and</quote> with <quote>competition, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect272">272</a>) Replaced <quote>east and</quote> with <quote>east, and</quote>. Moved the Curing choice into the first position.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect273">273</a>) Replaced all occurrences of <quote>..</quote> with <quote><ch.ellips/></quote>.</p>
@@ -6620,7 +6620,7 @@
      <section class="backmatter" id="errstat">
       <meta><title>Note on Adjusted Combat Statistics</title></meta>
        <data>
      <section class="backmatter" id="errstat">
       <meta><title>Note on Adjusted Combat Statistics</title></meta>
        <data>
-       <p>One enemy in this book have had his statistics altered in accordance with the Mongoose Publishing edition to balance the game. Here is a table to show which enemy has been altered.</p>
+       <p>One enemy in this book has had his statistics altered in accordance with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition to balance the game. Here is a table to show which enemy has been altered.</p>
          <table>
           <tr>
            <th colspan="4" scope="colgroup">Revised combat statistics</th>
          <table>
           <tr>
            <th colspan="4" scope="colgroup">Revised combat statistics</th>
@@ -6629,7 +6629,7 @@
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Section</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Enemy</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Original</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Section</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Enemy</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Original</th>
-          <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Mongoose</th>
+          <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition</th>
           </tr>
           <tr>
            <td><a idref="sect26">26</a></td>
           </tr>
           <tr>
            <td><a idref="sect26">26</a></td>
diff --git a/en/xml/07cd.xml b/en/xml/07cd.xml

index e702717..0de577b 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/07cd.xml
+++ b/en/xml/07cd.xml
@@ -5498,7 +5498,7 @@
  
         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Italicised <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Italicised <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
  
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote> (see inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Capitalized the list of items rather than setting them in all capital letters. Replaced <quote>fireseeds</quote> with <quote>Fireseeds</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg</quote> with <quote>(e.g.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of<quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>number of weapons</quote> with <quote>number of Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote> (see inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Capitalized the list of items rather than setting them in all capital letters. Replaced <quote>fireseeds</quote> with <quote>Fireseeds</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg</quote> with <quote>(e.g.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of<quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>number of weapons</quote> with <quote>number of Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Deleted <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Deleted <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
@@ -5605,7 +5605,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect138">138</a>) Replaced <quote>heard and</quote> with <quote>heard, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord!</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect139">139</a>) Replaced <quote>undisturbed, not</quote> with <quote>undisturbed: not</quote>. Replaced <quote>worms and snakes, denizens common to every subterranean lair, have</quote> with <quote>worms, and snakes<ch.emdash/>denizens common to every subterranean lair<ch.emdash/>have</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect141">141</a>) Replaced <quote>go but, as</quote> with <quote>go, but as</quote>. Replaced <quote>mace but</quote> with <quote>mace, but</quote>. Moved the Lore-circle of the Spirit choice into the first position.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect138">138</a>) Replaced <quote>heard and</quote> with <quote>heard, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord!</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect139">139</a>) Replaced <quote>undisturbed, not</quote> with <quote>undisturbed: not</quote>. Replaced <quote>worms and snakes, denizens common to every subterranean lair, have</quote> with <quote>worms, and snakes<ch.emdash/>denizens common to every subterranean lair<ch.emdash/>have</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect141">141</a>) Replaced <quote>go but, as</quote> with <quote>go, but as</quote>. Replaced <quote>mace but</quote> with <quote>mace, but</quote>. Moved the Lore-circle of the Spirit choice into the first position.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>If the fight lasts</quote> with <quote>If you win and the fight lasts</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>If the fight lasts</quote> with <quote>If you win and the fight lasts</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect145">145</a>) Replaced <quote>hole and</quote> with <quote>hole, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect146">146</a>) Replaced <quote>face, and</quote> with <quote>face and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect148">148</a>) Replaced <quote>warm and</quote> with <quote>warm, and</quote>. Capitalized the list of items rather than setting them in all capitals. Replaced <quote>these Items</quote> with <quote>these items</quote>. Replaced <quote>several Items</quote> with <quote>several items</quote>. Replaced <quote>drawbolt</quote> with <quote>bolt</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect145">145</a>) Replaced <quote>hole and</quote> with <quote>hole, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect146">146</a>) Replaced <quote>face, and</quote> with <quote>face and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect148">148</a>) Replaced <quote>warm and</quote> with <quote>warm, and</quote>. Capitalized the list of items rather than setting them in all capitals. Replaced <quote>these Items</quote> with <quote>these items</quote>. Replaced <quote>several Items</quote> with <quote>several items</quote>. Replaced <quote>drawbolt</quote> with <quote>bolt</quote>.</p>
@@ -5693,7 +5693,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect273">273</a>) Replaced <quote>power-staves and</quote> with <quote>power-staves, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect274">274</a>) Replaced <quote>rivets or hinges</quote> with <quote>rivets, or hinges</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect276">276</a>) Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect273">273</a>) Replaced <quote>power-staves and</quote> with <quote>power-staves, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect274">274</a>) Replaced <quote>rivets or hinges</quote> with <quote>rivets, or hinges</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect276">276</a>) Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect280">280</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>to zero in</quote> with <quote>to zero or below in</quote>. Replaced <quote>If combat lasts four rounds</quote> with <quote>If you win the combat in four rounds</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect280">280</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>to zero in</quote> with <quote>to zero or below in</quote>. Replaced <quote>If combat lasts four rounds</quote> with <quote>If you win the combat in four rounds</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect282">282</a>) Replaced <quote><!--link-text-->turn to 173<!--/link-text--></quote> with <quote><!--link-text-->turn to 273<!--/link-text--></quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect283">283</a>) Replaced <quote>legs and hands</quote> with <quote>legs, and hands</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect286">286</a>) Replaced <quote>open and</quote> with <quote>open, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>. Replaced <quote>mist and</quote> with <quote>mist, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>semi-circular</quote> with <quote>semicircular</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness and</quote> with <quote>darkness, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect282">282</a>) Replaced <quote><!--link-text-->turn to 173<!--/link-text--></quote> with <quote><!--link-text-->turn to 273<!--/link-text--></quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect283">283</a>) Replaced <quote>legs and hands</quote> with <quote>legs, and hands</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect286">286</a>) Replaced <quote>open and</quote> with <quote>open, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>. Replaced <quote>mist and</quote> with <quote>mist, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>semi-circular</quote> with <quote>semicircular</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness and</quote> with <quote>darkness, and</quote>.</p>
diff --git a/en/xml/08tjoh.xml b/en/xml/08tjoh.xml

index a0c11d4..c8bf7bd 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/08tjoh.xml
+++ b/en/xml/08tjoh.xml
@@ -5441,7 +5441,7 @@
  
        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Magnakai Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>with combat</quote> with <quote>without combat</quote>. Replaced <quote>as listed overleaf</quote> with <quote>in the list below</quote>. Replaced <quote>page 9</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Removed <quote>that appears on your Action Chart</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Magnakai Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>with combat</quote> with <quote>without combat</quote>. Replaced <quote>as listed overleaf</quote> with <quote>in the list below</quote>. Replaced <quote>page 9</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Removed <quote>that appears on your Action Chart</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
  
-      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote> (see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>swamp-jungle</quote> with <quote>jungle-swamp</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>additional Items</quote> with <quote>additional items</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote> (see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>swamp-jungle</quote> with <quote>jungle-swamp</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>additional Items</quote> with <quote>additional items</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Deleted <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Deleted <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
@@ -5462,7 +5462,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect8">8</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>ordeal and</quote> with <quote>ordeal, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>hidden but</quote> with <quote>hidden, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>identities and</quote> with <quote>identities, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>thought but</quote> with <quote>thought, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Replaced <quote>skill you</quote> with <quote>skill, you</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect8">8</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>ordeal and</quote> with <quote>ordeal, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>hidden but</quote> with <quote>hidden, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>identities and</quote> with <quote>identities, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>thought but</quote> with <quote>thought, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Replaced <quote>skill you</quote> with <quote>skill, you</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>. Replaced <quote>258</quote> with <quote>158</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you win the combat in four rounds</quote> with <quote>If you win the combat in six rounds</quote>. Replaced <quote>If combat lasts longer than five rounds, <!--link-text-->turn to 158<!--/link-text-->.</quote> with <quote>If the combat lasts seven rounds or longer, do not continue with the combat but <!--link-text-->turn immediately to 158<!--/link-text-->.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>. Replaced <quote>258</quote> with <quote>158</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you win the combat in four rounds</quote> with <quote>If you win the combat in six rounds</quote>. Replaced <quote>If combat lasts longer than five rounds, <!--link-text-->turn to 158<!--/link-text-->.</quote> with <quote>If the combat lasts seven rounds or longer, do not continue with the combat but <!--link-text-->turn immediately to 158<!--/link-text-->.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect14">14</a>) Replaced <quote>watch-tower, and</quote> with <quote>watchtower and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect15">15</a>) Replaced <quote>hand and</quote> with <quote>hand, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Unfortunately with</quote> with <quote>Unfortunately, with</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect16">16</a>) Replaced <quote>answer and, at</quote> with <quote>answer, and at</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect14">14</a>) Replaced <quote>watch-tower, and</quote> with <quote>watchtower and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect15">15</a>) Replaced <quote>hand and</quote> with <quote>hand, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Unfortunately with</quote> with <quote>Unfortunately, with</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect16">16</a>) Replaced <quote>answer and, at</quote> with <quote>answer, and at</quote>.</p>
@@ -5477,18 +5477,18 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect25">25</a>) Replaced <quote>vibrating and, what</quote> with <quote>vibrating, and what</quote>. Replaced <quote>are vibrating</quote> with <quote>is vibrating</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect26">26</a>) Replaced <quote>inn and slowly</quote> with <quote>inn, and slowly</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect27">27</a>) Replaced <quote>legs and</quote> with <quote>legs, and</quote>. Moved the Divination choice into the first position.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect25">25</a>) Replaced <quote>vibrating and, what</quote> with <quote>vibrating, and what</quote>. Replaced <quote>are vibrating</quote> with <quote>is vibrating</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect26">26</a>) Replaced <quote>inn and slowly</quote> with <quote>inn, and slowly</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect27">27</a>) Replaced <quote>legs and</quote> with <quote>legs, and</quote>. Moved the Divination choice into the first position.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect28">28</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Switched the sections to which the choices lead to make them work correctly with Special Item and Discipline bonuses. Replaced <quote>0<ch.endash/>4</quote> with <quote>4 or lower</quote>. Replaced <quote>5<ch.endash/>9</quote> with <quote>5 or higher</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect30">30</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sommerswerd.</quote> with <quote>Sommerswerd.)</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect28">28</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Switched the sections to which the choices lead to make them work correctly with Special Item and Discipline bonuses. Replaced <quote>0<ch.endash/>4</quote> with <quote>4 or lower</quote>. Replaced <quote>5<ch.endash/>9</quote> with <quote>5 or higher</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect30">30</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sommerswerd.</quote> with <quote>Sommerswerd.)</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect31">31</a>) Replaced <quote>Oxydine, or Oede</quote> with <quote>Oxydine or of Oede</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Replaced <quote>gallop and</quote> with <quote>gallop, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>and, not</quote> with <quote>and not</quote>. Replaced <quote>gate, do</quote> with <quote>gate do</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced <quote>feet first</quote> with <quote>feet-first</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect35">35</a>) Replaced <quote>glueing</quote> with <quote>gluing</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>head and</quote> with <quote>head, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>hides and</quote> with <quote>hides, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Switched the order of the choices for clarity. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect31">31</a>) Replaced <quote>Oxydine, or Oede</quote> with <quote>Oxydine or of Oede</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Replaced <quote>gallop and</quote> with <quote>gallop, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>and, not</quote> with <quote>and not</quote>. Replaced <quote>gate, do</quote> with <quote>gate do</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced <quote>feet first</quote> with <quote>feet-first</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect35">35</a>) Replaced <quote>glueing</quote> with <quote>gluing</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>head and</quote> with <quote>head, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>hides and</quote> with <quote>hides, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Switched the order of the choices for clarity. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect42">42</a>) Replaced <quote>me and</quote> with <quote>me, and</quote>. Set the items in initial capital letters. Replaced <quote>lord of the sun-realm</quote> with <quote>Lord of the Sun-realm</quote>. Replaced <quote>skarn</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-dessi">Skarn,</foreign></quote>. Added <quote>If you are infected with the korovax bacillus, you may use the Tincture of Oxydine to cure yourself.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect42">42</a>) Replaced <quote>me and</quote> with <quote>me, and</quote>. Set the items in initial capital letters. Replaced <quote>lord of the sun-realm</quote> with <quote>Lord of the Sun-realm</quote>. Replaced <quote>skarn</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-dessi">Skarn,</foreign></quote>. Added <quote>If you are infected with the korovax bacillus, you may use the Tincture of Oxydine to cure yourself.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect44">44</a>) Replaced <quote>Unfortunately she</quote> with <quote>Unfortunately, she</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect46">46</a>) Replaced <quote>dead but</quote> with <quote>dead, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect44">44</a>) Replaced <quote>Unfortunately she</quote> with <quote>Unfortunately, she</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect46">46</a>) Replaced <quote>dead but</quote> with <quote>dead, but</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect47">47</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-shield you</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>Spirit you</quote> with <quote>Spirit, you</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect47">47</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-shield you</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>Spirit you</quote> with <quote>Spirit, you</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect48">48</a>) Replaced <quote>air, and</quote> with <quote>air and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect49">49</a>) Replaced <quote>or you</quote> with <quote>or if you</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect50">50</a>) Replaced <quote>others many</quote> with <quote>others, many</quote>. Replaced <quote>apart and, as</quote> with <quote>apart, and as</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect48">48</a>) Replaced <quote>air, and</quote> with <quote>air and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect49">49</a>) Replaced <quote>or you</quote> with <quote>or if you</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect50">50</a>) Replaced <quote>others many</quote> with <quote>others, many</quote>. Replaced <quote>apart and, as</quote> with <quote>apart, and as</quote>.</p>
@@ -5512,7 +5512,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect72">72</a>) Replaced <quote>Divination, or</quote> with <quote>Divination or</quote>. Moved the Divination/Tutelary choice into the first position.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect73">73</a>) Replaced <quote>market place</quote> with <quote>marketplace</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lodge but</quote> with <quote>Lodge, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>watch-tower</quote> with <quote>watchtower</quote>. Replaced <quote>sword and</quote> with <quote>sword, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>barn and</quote> with <quote>barn, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magnakai rank</quote> with <quote>Kai rank</quote> for consistency with the rest of the series. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect74">74</a>) Replaced <quote>weapons or</quote> with <quote>Weapons, or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect72">72</a>) Replaced <quote>Divination, or</quote> with <quote>Divination or</quote>. Moved the Divination/Tutelary choice into the first position.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect73">73</a>) Replaced <quote>market place</quote> with <quote>marketplace</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lodge but</quote> with <quote>Lodge, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>watch-tower</quote> with <quote>watchtower</quote>. Replaced <quote>sword and</quote> with <quote>sword, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>barn and</quote> with <quote>barn, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magnakai rank</quote> with <quote>Kai rank</quote> for consistency with the rest of the series. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect74">74</a>) Replaced <quote>weapons or</quote> with <quote>Weapons, or</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Added <quote> The monks of Talestria are infamous for their gluttony. Tales of their thirty-course meals and week-long banquets are well known throughout Magnamund. However, despite their voluminous robes, you cannot help but notice how emaciated these monks appear to be.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Added <quote> The monks of Talestria are infamous for their gluttony. Tales of their thirty-course meals and week-long banquets are well known throughout Magnamund. However, despite their voluminous robes, you cannot help but notice how emaciated these monks appear to be.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect77">77</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect78">78</a>) Replaced <quote>gaj</quote> with <quote>Gaj</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect79">79</a>) Replaced <quote>out-numbered</quote> with <quote>outnumbered</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect77">77</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect78">78</a>) Replaced <quote>gaj</quote> with <quote>Gaj</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect79">79</a>) Replaced <quote>out-numbered</quote> with <quote>outnumbered</quote>.</p>
@@ -5521,7 +5521,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect83">83</a>) Replaced <quote>hand but</quote> with <quote>hand, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>returns and</quote> with <quote>returns, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>pain, as</quote> with <quote>pain as</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect84">84</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-power</quote> with <quote>psi-power</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect85">85</a>) Replaced <quote>face but</quote> with <quote>face, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect83">83</a>) Replaced <quote>hand but</quote> with <quote>hand, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>returns and</quote> with <quote>returns, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>pain, as</quote> with <quote>pain as</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect84">84</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-power</quote> with <quote>psi-power</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect85">85</a>) Replaced <quote>face but</quote> with <quote>face, but</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect86">86</a>) Added <quote>(in this instance, 0 = 10)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect86">86</a>) Added <quote>(in this instance, 0 = 10)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect87">87</a>) Replaced <quote>bow but</quote> with <quote>Bow, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>silver bow</quote> with <quote>Silver Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Silver Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Replaced <quote>crash and</quote> with <quote>crash, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle cry</quote> with <quote>battle-cry</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle cry</quote> with <quote>battle-cry:</quote>. Replaced <quote>bronze-helmeted</quote> with <quote>bronze-helmed</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Drakkar Horselord</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Horselord</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect89">89</a>) Replaced <quote>Ghorkas</quote> with <quote>ghorkas</quote>. Replaced <quote>a-piece</quote> with <quote>apiece</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect87">87</a>) Replaced <quote>bow but</quote> with <quote>Bow, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>silver bow</quote> with <quote>Silver Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Silver Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Replaced <quote>crash and</quote> with <quote>crash, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle cry</quote> with <quote>battle-cry</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle cry</quote> with <quote>battle-cry:</quote>. Replaced <quote>bronze-helmeted</quote> with <quote>bronze-helmed</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Drakkar Horselord</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Horselord</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect89">89</a>) Replaced <quote>Ghorkas</quote> with <quote>ghorkas</quote>. Replaced <quote>a-piece</quote> with <quote>apiece</quote>.</p>
@@ -5566,7 +5566,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Replaced <quote>choose.</quote> with <quote>choose?</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect153">153</a>) Replaced <quote>around your</quote> with <quote>around, your</quote>. Replaced <quote>tap but, instead</quote> with <quote>tap, but instead</quote>. Replaced <quote>click and</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia>, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect154">154</a>) Replaced <quote>air and</quote> with <quote>air, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Replaced <quote>choose.</quote> with <quote>choose?</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect153">153</a>) Replaced <quote>around your</quote> with <quote>around, your</quote>. Replaced <quote>tap but, instead</quote> with <quote>tap, but instead</quote>. Replaced <quote>click and</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia>, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect154">154</a>) Replaced <quote>air and</quote> with <quote>air, and</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect156">156</a>) Replaced <quote>herb the</quote> with <quote>herb, the</quote>. Replaced <quote>Oxydene</quote> with <quote>Oxydine</quote>. Added <quote>(If you possess either the Tincture or the herb, you may use it immediately to cure the korovax infection.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect156">156</a>) Replaced <quote>herb the</quote> with <quote>herb, the</quote>. Replaced <quote>Oxydene</quote> with <quote>Oxydine</quote>. Added <quote>(If you possess either the Tincture or the herb, you may use it immediately to cure the korovax infection.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect157">157</a>) Replaced <quote>deadly and</quote> with <quote>deadly, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>We made extensive changes to the choices presented at the end of the section. The original reads as follows.</p>
        <blockquote>
        <p>(<a idref="sect157">157</a>) Replaced <quote>deadly and</quote> with <quote>deadly, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>We made extensive changes to the choices presented at the end of the section. The original reads as follows.</p>
        <blockquote>
@@ -5599,7 +5599,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect178">178</a>) Replaced <quote>chest you</quote> with <quote>chest, you</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect179">179</a>) Replaced <quote>book but</quote> with <quote>book, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect182">182</a>) Replaced <quote>pain it</quote> with <quote>pain, it</quote>. Replaced <quote>you and</quote> with <quote>you, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>aim and</quote> with <quote>aim, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect178">178</a>) Replaced <quote>chest you</quote> with <quote>chest, you</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect179">179</a>) Replaced <quote>book but</quote> with <quote>book, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect182">182</a>) Replaced <quote>pain it</quote> with <quote>pain, it</quote>. Replaced <quote>you and</quote> with <quote>you, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>aim and</quote> with <quote>aim, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect183">183</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-screen you</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lore-Circle of the Spirit you</quote> with <quote>Lore-circle of the Spirit, you</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect183">183</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-screen you</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lore-Circle of the Spirit you</quote> with <quote>Lore-circle of the Spirit, you</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Replaced <quote>true but</quote> with <quote>true, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>wound but</quote> with <quote>wound, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>clothing and</quote> with <quote>clothing, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Replaced <quote>chase but</quote> with <quote>chase, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>harrass</quote> with <quote>harass</quote>. Replaced <quote>chase, they</quote> with <quote>chase; they</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>eyes you</quote> with <quote>eyes, you</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Replaced <quote>true but</quote> with <quote>true, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>wound but</quote> with <quote>wound, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>clothing and</quote> with <quote>clothing, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Replaced <quote>chase but</quote> with <quote>chase, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>harrass</quote> with <quote>harass</quote>. Replaced <quote>chase, they</quote> with <quote>chase; they</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>eyes you</quote> with <quote>eyes, you</quote>.</p>
@@ -5684,7 +5684,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Changed the first choice to read in part <quote>If you have a bow and <em>two</em> Arrows, and wish to use them,<ch.ellips/></quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect306">306</a>) Replaced <quote>chair and</quote> with <quote>chair, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect307">307</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Changed the first choice to read in part <quote>If you have a bow and <em>two</em> Arrows, and wish to use them,<ch.ellips/></quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect306">306</a>) Replaced <quote>chair and</quote> with <quote>chair, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect307">307</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>) Replaced <quote>staff but</quote> with <quote>staff, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>) Replaced <quote>staff but</quote> with <quote>staff, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect310">310</a>) Replaced <quote>side steps</quote> with <quote>sidesteps</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Replaced <quote>revolting jelly-like</quote> with <quote>revolting, jelly-like</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect310">310</a>) Replaced <quote>side steps</quote> with <quote>sidesteps</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Replaced <quote>revolting jelly-like</quote> with <quote>revolting, jelly-like</quote>.</p>
@@ -5740,7 +5740,7 @@
      <section class="backmatter" id="errstat">
       <meta><title>Note on Adjusted Combat Statistics</title></meta>
        <data>
      <section class="backmatter" id="errstat">
       <meta><title>Note on Adjusted Combat Statistics</title></meta>
        <data>
-       <p>Some enemies in this book have had their statistics altered in accordance with the Mongoose Publishing edition to balance the game. Here is a table to show which enemies have been altered.</p>
+       <p>Some enemies in this book have had their statistics altered in accordance with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition to balance the game. Here is a table to show which enemies have been altered.</p>
          <table>
           <tr>
            <th colspan="4" scope="colgroup">Revised combat statistics</th>
          <table>
           <tr>
            <th colspan="4" scope="colgroup">Revised combat statistics</th>
@@ -5749,7 +5749,7 @@
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Section</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Enemy</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Original</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Section</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Enemy</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Original</th>
-          <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Mongoose</th>
+          <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition</th>
           </tr>
           <tr>
            <td><a idref="sect183">183</a></td>
           </tr>
           <tr>
            <td><a idref="sect183">183</a></td>
diff --git a/en/xml/09tcof.xml b/en/xml/09tcof.xml

index 4acfeaa..98ea0c4 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/09tcof.xml
+++ b/en/xml/09tcof.xml
@@ -5587,7 +5587,7 @@
  
        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Magnakai Disciplines</a>) Deleted <quote>that appears on page 9</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Magnakai Disciplines</a>) Deleted <quote>that appears on page 9</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
  
-      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced all occurrences of <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced all three occurrences of <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced all occurrences of <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced all three occurrences of <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
@@ -5600,12 +5600,12 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>Xulun mountains</quote> with <quote>Xulun Mountains</quote>. Replaced <quote>giaks</quote> with <quote>Giaks</quote>. Replaced <quote>cavalry and</quote> with <quote>cavalry, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect2">2</a>) Replaced <quote>noon but</quote> with <quote>noon, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect3">3</a>) Replaced <quote>blow but</quote> with <quote>blow, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>Xulun mountains</quote> with <quote>Xulun Mountains</quote>. Replaced <quote>giaks</quote> with <quote>Giaks</quote>. Replaced <quote>cavalry and</quote> with <quote>cavalry, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect2">2</a>) Replaced <quote>noon but</quote> with <quote>noon, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect3">3</a>) Replaced <quote>blow but</quote> with <quote>blow, but</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Capitalised all items on the list. Deleted <quote>Spyglass</quote> from the list of items in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Capitalised all items on the list. Deleted <quote>Spyglass</quote> from the list of items in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect7">7</a>) Added <quote>(Erase the Rope from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect7">7</a>) Added <quote>(Erase the Rope from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect9">9</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect9">9</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>lose 6 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points</quote> with <quote>lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points for each Meal missed</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Twice you stop to sleep and eat (erase 2 Meals from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> or lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points for each Meal missed) before you near the centre of the city.</quote> with <quote>Twice you stop to sleep and eat before you near the centre of the city. (Erase 2 Meals from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> or lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points for each Meal missed. If you possess the Magnakai Discipline of Huntmastery, you are able to forage for food from the wasteland of Zaaryx and therefore you do not need to make any deductions.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect12">12</a>) Replaced <quote>yellow-flanged</quote> with <quote>yellow-fanged</quote>. Replaced <quote>mercy but</quote> with <quote>mercy, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you wish to fire your Bow again</quote> with <quote>If you possess at least one more Arrow and wish to fire your Bow again</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>lose 6 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points</quote> with <quote>lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points for each Meal missed</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Twice you stop to sleep and eat (erase 2 Meals from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> or lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points for each Meal missed) before you near the centre of the city.</quote> with <quote>Twice you stop to sleep and eat before you near the centre of the city. (Erase 2 Meals from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> or lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points for each Meal missed. If you possess the Magnakai Discipline of Huntmastery, you are able to forage for food from the wasteland of Zaaryx and therefore you do not need to make any deductions.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect12">12</a>) Replaced <quote>yellow-flanged</quote> with <quote>yellow-fanged</quote>. Replaced <quote>mercy but</quote> with <quote>mercy, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you wish to fire your Bow again</quote> with <quote>If you possess at least one more Arrow and wish to fire your Bow again</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Altered list so that only the first letters of each item are capitalised.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect14">14</a>) Replaced <quote>wall and</quote> with <quote>wall, and</quote>. Added <quote>(If your source of light is a Torch, remember to erase it from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect15">15</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Altered list so that only the first letters of each item are capitalised.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect14">14</a>) Replaced <quote>wall and</quote> with <quote>wall, and</quote>. Added <quote>(If your source of light is a Torch, remember to erase it from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect15">15</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
@@ -5615,16 +5615,16 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect19">19</a>) Replaced <quote>lane;</quote> with <quote>lane.</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect22">22</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect24">24</a>) Replaced <quote>whisper;</quote> with <quote>whisper,</quote>. Replaced <quote>sight, do</quote> with <quote>sight do</quote>. Replaced <quote>brotherhood</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect19">19</a>) Replaced <quote>lane;</quote> with <quote>lane.</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect22">22</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect24">24</a>) Replaced <quote>whisper;</quote> with <quote>whisper,</quote>. Replaced <quote>sight, do</quote> with <quote>sight do</quote>. Replaced <quote>brotherhood</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect25">25</a>) Added <quote>(Erase one dose of Sabito from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect25">25</a>) Added <quote>(Erase one dose of Sabito from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect28">28</a>) Replaced <quote>your gold</quote> with <quote>your coins</quote>, since you may also give them silver Lune (cf. <a idref="sect163">Section 163</a>).</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect28">28</a>) Replaced <quote>your gold</quote> with <quote>your coins</quote>, since you may also give them silver Lune (cf. <a idref="sect163">Section 163</a>).</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect29">29</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Added <quote>(Record both doses of Sabito on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as a single Backpack Item.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect29">29</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Added <quote>(Record both doses of Sabito on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as a single Backpack Item.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect30">30</a>) Replaced <quote>secure you</quote> with <quote>secure, you</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect31">31</a>) Replaced <quote>narrow but</quote> with <quote>narrow, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>of milky</quote> with <quote>of a milky</quote>. Replaced <quote>air and gives</quote> with <quote>air, and gives</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced <quote>life you</quote> with <quote>life, you</quote>. Added <quote>(If your source of light is a Torch, remember to erase it from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>Or, you may</quote> with <quote>Or you may</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect35">35</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>attack and</quote> with <quote>attack, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect30">30</a>) Replaced <quote>secure you</quote> with <quote>secure, you</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect31">31</a>) Replaced <quote>narrow but</quote> with <quote>narrow, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>of milky</quote> with <quote>of a milky</quote>. Replaced <quote>air and gives</quote> with <quote>air, and gives</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced <quote>life you</quote> with <quote>life, you</quote>. Added <quote>(If your source of light is a Torch, remember to erase it from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>Or, you may</quote> with <quote>Or you may</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect35">35</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>attack and</quote> with <quote>attack, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Added <quote>(If you possess both of these Magnakai Disciplines, you may only add 3 to the number picked.)</quote> as per the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Added <quote>(If you possess both of these Magnakai Disciplines, you may only add 3 to the number picked.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Replaced <quote>despatched</quote> with <quote>dispatched</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Replaced <quote>west bank</quote> with <quote>east bank</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect42">42</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Guildhouse</quote> with <quote>Guild-house</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Replaced <quote>despatched</quote> with <quote>dispatched</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Replaced <quote>west bank</quote> with <quote>east bank</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect42">42</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Guildhouse</quote> with <quote>Guild-house</quote>.</p>
@@ -5645,7 +5645,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect69">69</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect70">70</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar assault-troopers</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim assault-troopers</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect71">71</a>) Replaced <quote>above an</quote> with <quote>above, an</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect69">69</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect70">70</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar assault-troopers</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim assault-troopers</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect71">71</a>) Replaced <quote>above an</quote> with <quote>above, an</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect72">72</a>) Added <quote>(in this instance, 0 = 10)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect72">72</a>) Added <quote>(in this instance, 0 = 10)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect74">74</a>) Replaced <quote>sight I<ch.apos/>ll</quote> with <quote>sight, I<ch.apos/>ll</quote>. Replaced <quote>that he</quote> with <quote>that, he</quote>. Replaced <quote>brotherhood</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect75">75</a>) Replaced <quote>later it</quote> with <quote>later, it</quote>. Replaced <quote>freedom but</quote> with <quote>freedom, but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>space, then</quote> with <quote>space; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>grey-haired aristocratic figure of Chiban, the other</quote> with <quote>grey-haired, aristocratic figure of Chiban; the other</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Replaced <quote>city and</quote> with <quote>city, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect74">74</a>) Replaced <quote>sight I<ch.apos/>ll</quote> with <quote>sight, I<ch.apos/>ll</quote>. Replaced <quote>that he</quote> with <quote>that, he</quote>. Replaced <quote>brotherhood</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect75">75</a>) Replaced <quote>later it</quote> with <quote>later, it</quote>. Replaced <quote>freedom but</quote> with <quote>freedom, but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>space, then</quote> with <quote>space; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>grey-haired aristocratic figure of Chiban, the other</quote> with <quote>grey-haired, aristocratic figure of Chiban; the other</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Replaced <quote>city and</quote> with <quote>city, and</quote>.</p>
@@ -5658,11 +5658,11 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Replaced <quote>ghorkas steak</quote> with <quote>ghorka steak</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect92">92</a>) Replaced <quote>doomwolves</quote> with <quote>Doomwolves</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect95">95</a>) Replaced <quote>bow-strings</quote> with <quote>bowstrings</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Replaced <quote>ghorkas steak</quote> with <quote>ghorka steak</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect92">92</a>) Replaced <quote>doomwolves</quote> with <quote>Doomwolves</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect95">95</a>) Replaced <quote>bow-strings</quote> with <quote>bowstrings</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect97">97</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Added <quote>If you wield the Sommerswerd in this combat, you may double this undead creature<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point loss.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect97">97</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Added <quote>If you wield the Sommerswerd in this combat, you may double this undead creature<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point loss.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect99">99</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect101">101</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect102">102</a>) Replaced <quote>direction,</quote> with <quote>direction.</quote>. Replaced <quote>desperation one</quote> with <quote>desperation, one</quote>. Replaced <quote>soldiers on</quote> with <quote>soldiers at</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect99">99</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect101">101</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect102">102</a>) Replaced <quote>direction,</quote> with <quote>direction.</quote>. Replaced <quote>desperation one</quote> with <quote>desperation, one</quote>. Replaced <quote>soldiers on</quote> with <quote>soldiers at</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect104">104</a>) Replaced <quote>hollow a</quote> with <quote>hollow, a</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Added <quote>If you wield the Sommerswerd in this combat, you may double this undead creature<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point loss.</quote> Replaced <quote>If the fight lasts</quote> with <quote>If you win and the fight lasts</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect104">104</a>) Replaced <quote>hollow a</quote> with <quote>hollow, a</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Added <quote>If you wield the Sommerswerd in this combat, you may double this undead creature<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point loss.</quote> Replaced <quote>If the fight lasts</quote> with <quote>If you win and the fight lasts</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect107">107</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect109">109</a>) Replaced <quote>Guildhouse</quote> with <quote>Guild-house</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect111">111</a>) Replaced <quote>thrown and</quote> with <quote>thrown, and</quote> and moved the last choice so that it is positioned first.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect107">107</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect109">109</a>) Replaced <quote>Guildhouse</quote> with <quote>Guild-house</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect111">111</a>) Replaced <quote>thrown and</quote> with <quote>thrown, and</quote> and moved the last choice so that it is positioned first.</p>
@@ -5697,7 +5697,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect159">159</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect160">160</a>) Replaced <quote>pass, despite</quote> with <quote>pass despite</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect163">163</a>) Replaced <quote>three or more Gold Crowns, (twelve Lune)</quote> with <quote>three Gold Crowns (twelve Lune) or more</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect159">159</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect160">160</a>) Replaced <quote>pass, despite</quote> with <quote>pass despite</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect163">163</a>) Replaced <quote>three or more Gold Crowns, (twelve Lune)</quote> with <quote>three Gold Crowns (twelve Lune) or more</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>) Added <quote>If you wield the Sommerswerd in this combat, you may double this undead creature<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point loss.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>) Added <quote>If you wield the Sommerswerd in this combat, you may double this undead creature<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point loss.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect167">167</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>savanna</quote> with <quote>savannah</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect168">168</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect169">169</a>) Replaced <quote>choking rancid</quote> with <quote>choking, rancid</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect167">167</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>savanna</quote> with <quote>savannah</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect168">168</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect169">169</a>) Replaced <quote>choking rancid</quote> with <quote>choking, rancid</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
@@ -5705,7 +5705,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect171">171</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lantern or</quote> with <quote>Lantern, or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect172">172</a>) Capitalised all items on the list.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect174">174</a>) Replaced <quote>suicidal and</quote> with <quote>suicidal, and </quote>. Replaced <quote>Items and</quote> with <quote>Items, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect171">171</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lantern or</quote> with <quote>Lantern, or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect172">172</a>) Capitalised all items on the list.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect174">174</a>) Replaced <quote>suicidal and</quote> with <quote>suicidal, and </quote>. Replaced <quote>Items and</quote> with <quote>Items, and</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect175">175</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Added <quote>(If you possess the Magnakai Discipline of Huntmastery, you are able to forage for food from the wasteland of Zaaryx and therefore you do not need to make any deductions.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect175">175</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Added <quote>(If you possess the Magnakai Discipline of Huntmastery, you are able to forage for food from the wasteland of Zaaryx and therefore you do not need to make any deductions.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect176">176</a>) Replaced <quote>them and</quote> with <quote>them, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect177">177</a>) Capitalised all items on the list. Replaced <quote>goods and</quote> with <quote>goods, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon list</quote> with <quote>Weapons List</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect178">178</a>) Replaced <quote>on to the</quote> with <quote>on the</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect176">176</a>) Replaced <quote>them and</quote> with <quote>them, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect177">177</a>) Capitalised all items on the list. Replaced <quote>goods and</quote> with <quote>goods, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon list</quote> with <quote>Weapons List</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect178">178</a>) Replaced <quote>on to the</quote> with <quote>on the</quote>.</p>
@@ -5717,7 +5717,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Replaced <quote>jet black</quote> with <quote>jet-black</quote>. Replaced <quote>pirazin</quote> with <quote>Pirazin</quote>. Replaced <quote>o<ch.apos/>here</quote> with <quote>o<ch.apos/> here</quote>. Replaced <quote>offer but</quote> with <quote>offer, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Replaced <quote>narrows, then</quote> with <quote>narrows, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect190">190</a>) Capitalised all items on the list.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Replaced <quote>jet black</quote> with <quote>jet-black</quote>. Replaced <quote>pirazin</quote> with <quote>Pirazin</quote>. Replaced <quote>o<ch.apos/>here</quote> with <quote>o<ch.apos/> here</quote>. Replaced <quote>offer but</quote> with <quote>offer, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Replaced <quote>narrows, then</quote> with <quote>narrows, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect190">190</a>) Capitalised all items on the list.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect191">191</a>) Added <quote>If you wield the Sommerswerd in this combat, you may double this undead creature<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point loss.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect191">191</a>) Added <quote>If you wield the Sommerswerd in this combat, you may double this undead creature<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point loss.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect192">192</a>) Replaced <quote>tower and</quote> with <quote>tower, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect193">193</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect194">194</a>) Replaced <quote>building <!--link-text-->turn to 217<!--/link-text--></quote> with <quote>building, <!--link-text-->turn to 217<!--/link-text--></quote>. Added <quote>(If your source of light is a Torch, remember to erase it from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect192">192</a>) Replaced <quote>tower and</quote> with <quote>tower, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect193">193</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect194">194</a>) Replaced <quote>building <!--link-text-->turn to 217<!--/link-text--></quote> with <quote>building, <!--link-text-->turn to 217<!--/link-text--></quote>. Added <quote>(If your source of light is a Torch, remember to erase it from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote>.</p>
@@ -5736,7 +5736,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect211">211</a>) Replaced <quote>life it</quote> with <quote>life, it</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect213">213</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect216">216</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect211">211</a>) Replaced <quote>life it</quote> with <quote>life, it</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect213">213</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect216">216</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect218">218</a>) Replaced <quote>exhausted and</quote> with <quote>exhausted, and</quote>. Added <quote> (If you possess the Magnakai Discipline of Huntmastery, you are able to forage for food from the wasteland of Zaaryx and therefore you do not need to make any deductions.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect218">218</a>) Replaced <quote>exhausted and</quote> with <quote>exhausted, and</quote>. Added <quote> (If you possess the Magnakai Discipline of Huntmastery, you are able to forage for food from the wasteland of Zaaryx and therefore you do not need to make any deductions.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect219">219</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Added <quote>(If your source of light is a Torch, remember to erase it from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect220">220</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Drakkar Assault-troopers</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Assault-troopers</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect222">222</a>) Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect219">219</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Added <quote>(If your source of light is a Torch, remember to erase it from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect220">220</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Drakkar Assault-troopers</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Assault-troopers</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect222">222</a>) Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
@@ -5744,7 +5744,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>descend you</quote> with <quote>descend, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pathmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>. Replaced <quote>or Divination</quote> with <quote>or of Divination</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect226">226</a>) Replaced <quote>shaft and</quote> with <quote>shaft, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect229">229</a>) Replaced <quote>Divination add</quote> with <quote>Divination, add</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>descend you</quote> with <quote>descend, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pathmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>. Replaced <quote>or Divination</quote> with <quote>or of Divination</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect226">226</a>) Replaced <quote>shaft and</quote> with <quote>shaft, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect229">229</a>) Replaced <quote>Divination add</quote> with <quote>Divination, add</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect231">231</a>) Added <quote>(If you possess both of these Magnakai Disciplines, you may only add 3 to the number picked.)</quote> in harmony with Section 38 of the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect231">231</a>) Added <quote>(If you possess both of these Magnakai Disciplines, you may only add 3 to the number picked.)</quote> in harmony with Section 38 of the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Replaced <quote>name but</quote> with <quote>name, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Replaced <quote>donation and</quote> with <quote>donation, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect237">237</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Replaced <quote>name but</quote> with <quote>name, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Replaced <quote>donation and</quote> with <quote>donation, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect237">237</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>.</p>
@@ -5757,8 +5757,8 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect245">245</a>) Replaced <quote>camp fires</quote> with <quote>campfires</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect251">251</a>) Replaced <quote>sight, as</quote> with <quote>sight as</quote>. Replaced <quote>stygian</quote> with <quote>Stygian</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect252">252</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Takas</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-anarian">Takas</foreign></quote>. Replaced <quote>Darklord armies</quote> with <quote>Darkland armies</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect245">245</a>) Replaced <quote>camp fires</quote> with <quote>campfires</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect251">251</a>) Replaced <quote>sight, as</quote> with <quote>sight as</quote>. Replaced <quote>stygian</quote> with <quote>Stygian</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect252">252</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Takas</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-anarian">Takas</foreign></quote>. Replaced <quote>Darklord armies</quote> with <quote>Darkland armies</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect253">253</a>) Added <quote>(Gold Crowns may not be used in lieu of Lune in this instance.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>Lune, or</quote> with <quote>Lune or</quote>. Replaced <quote>sum, and</quote> with <quote>sum and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Or, leave</quote> with <quote>Or leave</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect254">254</a>) Added <quote>If you wield the Sommerswerd in this combat, you may double these undead creatures<ch.apos/> <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point loss.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect253">253</a>) Added <quote>(Gold Crowns may not be used in lieu of Lune in this instance.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>Lune, or</quote> with <quote>Lune or</quote>. Replaced <quote>sum, and</quote> with <quote>sum and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Or, leave</quote> with <quote>Or leave</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect254">254</a>) Added <quote>If you wield the Sommerswerd in this combat, you may double these undead creatures<ch.apos/> <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point loss.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect256">256</a>) Replaced <quote>softens, as</quote> with <quote>softens as</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech. Replaced <quote>He who</quote> with <quote>Him who</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect257">257</a>) Replaced <quote>doomwolves</quote> with <quote>Doomwolves</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect258">258</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect256">256</a>) Replaced <quote>softens, as</quote> with <quote>softens as</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech. Replaced <quote>He who</quote> with <quote>Him who</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect257">257</a>) Replaced <quote>doomwolves</quote> with <quote>Doomwolves</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect258">258</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
@@ -5782,13 +5782,13 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect293">293</a>) Replaced <quote>chase but</quote> with <quote>chase, but</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Vanta</quote> with <quote>Varta</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect299">299</a>) Replaced <quote>him he</quote> with <quote>him, he</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect300">300</a>) Replaced <quote>finished the</quote> with <quote>finished, the</quote>. Replaced <quote>arches and</quote> with <quote>arches, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>soldiers and</quote> with <quote>soldiers, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>people and</quote> with <quote>people, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect293">293</a>) Replaced <quote>chase but</quote> with <quote>chase, but</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Vanta</quote> with <quote>Varta</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect299">299</a>) Replaced <quote>him he</quote> with <quote>him, he</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect300">300</a>) Replaced <quote>finished the</quote> with <quote>finished, the</quote>. Replaced <quote>arches and</quote> with <quote>arches, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>soldiers and</quote> with <quote>soldiers, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>people and</quote> with <quote>people, and</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>) Added <quote>If you wield the Sommerswerd in this combat, you may double this undead creature<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point loss.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>) Added <quote>If you wield the Sommerswerd in this combat, you may double this undead creature<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point loss.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect302">302</a>) Replaced <quote>mind stranger</quote> with <quote>mind, stranger</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect303">303</a>) Replaced <quote>counter-attack</quote> with <quote>counterattack</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced <quote>willingly and</quote> with <quote>willingly, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect306">306</a>) Replaced <quote>doomwolf</quote> with <quote>Doomwolf</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect307">307</a>) Replaced <quote>beyond a</quote> with <quote>beyond, a</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect302">302</a>) Replaced <quote>mind stranger</quote> with <quote>mind, stranger</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect303">303</a>) Replaced <quote>counter-attack</quote> with <quote>counterattack</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced <quote>willingly and</quote> with <quote>willingly, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect306">306</a>) Replaced <quote>doomwolf</quote> with <quote>Doomwolf</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect307">307</a>) Replaced <quote>beyond a</quote> with <quote>beyond, a</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect309">309</a>) Replaced <quote>yells <ch.lsquot/>Take</quote> with <quote>yells, <ch.lsquot/>Take</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you win the first round of combat</quote> with <quote>If you defeat the pair of Tower Guards</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect309">309</a>) Replaced <quote>yells <ch.lsquot/>Take</quote> with <quote>yells, <ch.lsquot/>Take</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you win the first round of combat</quote> with <quote>If you defeat the pair of Tower Guards</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect310">310</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect311">311</a>) Replaced <quote>Court and</quote> with <quote>Court, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect312">312</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Items and</quote> with <quote>Items, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect310">310</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect311">311</a>) Replaced <quote>Court and</quote> with <quote>Court, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect312">312</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Items and</quote> with <quote>Items, and</quote>.</p>
@@ -5796,7 +5796,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect316">316</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>You must deduct 4 points from your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> for the duration of the fight, as you are without a Weapon.</quote> with <quote>Make the proper adjustments to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> for the duration of this fight, as you are without a Weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>. Replaced <quote>Ha! that was</quote> with <quote>Ha! That was</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect321">321</a>) Replaced <quote>as Special</quote> with <quote>as a Special</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect316">316</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>You must deduct 4 points from your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> for the duration of the fight, as you are without a Weapon.</quote> with <quote>Make the proper adjustments to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> for the duration of this fight, as you are without a Weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>. Replaced <quote>Ha! that was</quote> with <quote>Ha! That was</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect321">321</a>) Replaced <quote>as Special</quote> with <quote>as a Special</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect322">322</a>) Added <quote>If you wield the Sommerswerd in this combat, you may double these undead creatures<ch.apos/> <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point loss.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect322">322</a>) Added <quote>If you wield the Sommerswerd in this combat, you may double these undead creatures<ch.apos/> <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point loss.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Replaced <quote>wrong-doers</quote> with <quote>wrongdoers</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Replaced <quote>key </quote> with <quote>key,</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech. Replaced <quote>the female</quote> with <quote>a female</quote>, since it is likely a player will reach here without visiting <a idref="sect313">Section 313</a> where the female leader is previously introduced.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect330">330</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Replaced <quote>wrong-doers</quote> with <quote>wrongdoers</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Replaced <quote>key </quote> with <quote>key,</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech. Replaced <quote>the female</quote> with <quote>a female</quote>, since it is likely a player will reach here without visiting <a idref="sect313">Section 313</a> where the female leader is previously introduced.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect330">330</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
@@ -5809,7 +5809,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect341">341</a>) Replaced <quote>air and gives</quote> with <quote>air, and gives</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect342">342</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>. Replaced <quote>or have</quote> with <quote>or if you have</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect345">345</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect341">341</a>) Replaced <quote>air and gives</quote> with <quote>air, and gives</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect342">342</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>. Replaced <quote>or have</quote> with <quote>or if you have</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect345">345</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>counter-attack</quote> with <quote>counterattack</quote>. Replaced <quote>end and</quote> with <quote>end, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>stewn</quote> with <quote>strewn</quote>. Replaced <quote>this;</quote> with <quote>this:</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>white and</quote> with <quote>white, and</quote>. Added <quote>(If any of your Weapons or weapon-like Special Items were confiscated by the South Gate Guard, they are now gratefully returned to you.)</quote> as clarified in the <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter Summer Special 1987</cite> and in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>Darklord armies</quote> with <quote>Darkland armies</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>counter-attack</quote> with <quote>counterattack</quote>. Replaced <quote>end and</quote> with <quote>end, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>stewn</quote> with <quote>strewn</quote>. Replaced <quote>this;</quote> with <quote>this:</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>white and</quote> with <quote>white, and</quote>. Added <quote>(If any of your Weapons or weapon-like Special Items were confiscated by the South Gate Guard, they are now gratefully returned to you.)</quote> as clarified in the <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter Summer Special 1987</cite> and in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>Darklord armies</quote> with <quote>Darkland armies</quote>.</p>
  
        <p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>. Replaced <quote>top of chart</quote> with <quote>top of the chart</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to 0</quote> with <quote>falls to 0 or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pick number from</quote> with <quote>Pick a number from the</quote>. Replaced <quote>Turn to Combat</quote> with <quote>Turn to the Combat</quote>. Replaced <quote>to random number</quote> with <quote>to the random number</quote>. Replaced <quote>when ENDURANCE</quote> with <quote>when the ENDURANCE</quote>. Replaced <quote>ignored, only</quote> with <quote>ignored; only</quote>.</p>
       </data>
  
        <p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>. Replaced <quote>top of chart</quote> with <quote>top of the chart</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to 0</quote> with <quote>falls to 0 or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pick number from</quote> with <quote>Pick a number from the</quote>. Replaced <quote>Turn to Combat</quote> with <quote>Turn to the Combat</quote>. Replaced <quote>to random number</quote> with <quote>to the random number</quote>. Replaced <quote>when ENDURANCE</quote> with <quote>when the ENDURANCE</quote>. Replaced <quote>ignored, only</quote> with <quote>ignored; only</quote>.</p>
       </data>
@@ -5842,7 +5842,7 @@
      <section class="backmatter" id="errstat">
       <meta><title>Note on Adjusted Combat Statistics</title></meta>
        <data>
      <section class="backmatter" id="errstat">
       <meta><title>Note on Adjusted Combat Statistics</title></meta>
        <data>
-       <p>Some enemies in this book have had their statistics altered in accordance with the Mongoose Publishing edition to balance the game. Here is a table to show which enemies have been altered.</p>
+       <p>Some enemies in this book have had their statistics altered in accordance with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition to balance the game. Here is a table to show which enemies have been altered.</p>
          <table>
           <tr>
            <th colspan="4" scope="colgroup">Revised combat statistics</th>
          <table>
           <tr>
            <th colspan="4" scope="colgroup">Revised combat statistics</th>
@@ -5851,7 +5851,7 @@
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Section</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Enemy</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Original</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Section</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Enemy</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Original</th>
-          <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Mongoose</th>
+          <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition</th>
           </tr>
           <tr>
            <td><a idref="sect10">10</a></td>
           </tr>
           <tr>
            <td><a idref="sect10">10</a></td>
diff --git a/en/xml/10tdot.xml b/en/xml/10tdot.xml

index 6a24b73..350eaf1 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/10tdot.xml
+++ b/en/xml/10tdot.xml
@@ -5411,7 +5411,7 @@
  
        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Magnakai Disciplines</a>) Added <quote>The fact that you are skilled with three Weapons does not mean that you begin the adventure carrying any of them. However, you will have opportunities to acquire Weapons during your adventure. For every <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> book that you complete in the Magnakai series, you may add an additional Weapon to your list.</quote> to the description of Weaponmastery. This text is taken directly from the Weaponmastery section found in <bookref series="lw" book="06tkot"><cite>The Kingdoms of Terror</cite></bookref>. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Magnakai Disciplines</a>) Added <quote>The fact that you are skilled with three Weapons does not mean that you begin the adventure carrying any of them. However, you will have opportunities to acquire Weapons during your adventure. For every <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> book that you complete in the Magnakai series, you may add an additional Weapon to your list.</quote> to the description of Weaponmastery. This text is taken directly from the Weaponmastery section found in <bookref series="lw" book="06tkot"><cite>The Kingdoms of Terror</cite></bookref>. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
  
-      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>currency of Anari</quote> with <quote>currency of Eru</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 Gold Crown</quote> with <quote>one Gold Crown</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced all three occurrences of <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Elder Magi give you</quote> with <quote>the Senate of Tahou give you</quote> to agree with <a idref="sect1">Section 1</a>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition. Added <quote>Potion of Alether (Backpack Items) This potion of strength will increase your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> by +2 points when swallowed immediately prior to a combat. It lasts for the duration of one combat only. There is enough for one dose.</quote> to the list of items you may choose from in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>currency of Anari</quote> with <quote>currency of Eru</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 Gold Crown</quote> with <quote>one Gold Crown</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced all three occurrences of <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Elder Magi give you</quote> with <quote>the Senate of Tahou give you</quote> to agree with <a idref="sect1">Section 1</a>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>Potion of Alether (Backpack Items) This potion of strength will increase your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> by +2 points when swallowed immediately prior to a combat. It lasts for the duration of one combat only. There is enough for one dose.</quote> to the list of items you may choose from in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
@@ -5447,7 +5447,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect47">47</a>) Replaced <quote>Drakkar officer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim officer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>red beard and</quote> with <quote>red beard, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect52">52</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect47">47</a>) Replaced <quote>Drakkar officer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim officer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>red beard and</quote> with <quote>red beard, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect52">52</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect54">54</a>) Replaced <quote>rock face</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>. Added <quote>You may not use the Silver Bow of Duadon in this combat (if you possess this Special Item). If you have reached the rank of Tutelary and possess the Discipline of Weaponmastery, you only need deduct 2 points from your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> if you do not possess a weapon-like Special Item.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect54">54</a>) Replaced <quote>rock face</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>. Added <quote>You may not use the Silver Bow of Duadon in this combat (if you possess this Special Item). If you have reached the rank of Tutelary and possess the Discipline of Weaponmastery, you only need deduct 2 points from your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> if you do not possess a weapon-like Special Item.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>death cry</quote> with <quote>death-cry</quote>. Replaced <quote>your shoulder and</quote> with <quote>your shoulder, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect59">59</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect60">60</a>) Replaced <quote>hornet<ch.apos/>s nest</quote> with <quote>hornets<ch.apos/> nest</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>death cry</quote> with <quote>death-cry</quote>. Replaced <quote>your shoulder and</quote> with <quote>your shoulder, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect59">59</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect60">60</a>) Replaced <quote>hornet<ch.apos/>s nest</quote> with <quote>hornets<ch.apos/> nest</quote>.</p>
@@ -5487,7 +5487,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote>rope and</quote> with <quote>Rope and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Replaced <quote>newly arrived</quote> with <quote>newly-arrived</quote>. Replaced <quote>Here then are</quote> with <quote>Here, then, are</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote>rope and</quote> with <quote>Rope and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Replaced <quote>newly arrived</quote> with <quote>newly-arrived</quote>. Replaced <quote>Here then are</quote> with <quote>Here, then, are</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect126">126</a>) Replaced <quote>pack move</quote> with <quote>pack moves</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>combat and</quote> with <quote>combat, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>If the fight lasts</quote> with <quote>If you win, and the fight lasts</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect126">126</a>) Replaced <quote>pack move</quote> with <quote>pack moves</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>combat and</quote> with <quote>combat, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>If the fight lasts</quote> with <quote>If you win, and the fight lasts</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect127">127</a>) Replaced <quote>north a</quote> with <quote>north, a</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kraagenskul</quote> with <quote>Kraagensk<ch.ucirc/>l</quote>. Replaced <quote>Talestria and</quote> with <quote>Talestria, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Adamas<ch.apos/>s tent</quote> with <quote>Adamas<ch.apos/> tent</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect129">129</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect130">130</a>) Replaced <quote>dagger</quote> with <quote>Dagger</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect127">127</a>) Replaced <quote>north a</quote> with <quote>north, a</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kraagenskul</quote> with <quote>Kraagensk<ch.ucirc/>l</quote>. Replaced <quote>Talestria and</quote> with <quote>Talestria, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Adamas<ch.apos/>s tent</quote> with <quote>Adamas<ch.apos/> tent</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect129">129</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect130">130</a>) Replaced <quote>dagger</quote> with <quote>Dagger</quote>.</p>
@@ -5513,7 +5513,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect170">170</a>) Replaced <quote>bushes and walk</quote> with <quote>bushes, and walk</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect172">172</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect176">176</a>) Replaced <quote>woodsmoke</quote> with <quote>wood smoke</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect170">170</a>) Replaced <quote>bushes and walk</quote> with <quote>bushes, and walk</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect172">172</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect176">176</a>) Replaced <quote>woodsmoke</quote> with <quote>wood smoke</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect177">177</a>) Changed the list of items to initial capitals. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Black Key (Backpack Item)</quote> with <quote>Black Key (Special Item)</quote> to harmonize with <a idref="sect285">Section 285</a>. Replaced <quote>pockets and</quote> with <quote>pockets, and</quote>. Added <quote>Kika are a form of currency used in the Darklands and the Drakkarim nations. Each coin is worth one-tenth of a Gold Crown and ten Kika take up the same space as one Gold Crown in your <a idref="action">Belt Pouch</a>.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect177">177</a>) Changed the list of items to initial capitals. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Black Key (Backpack Item)</quote> with <quote>Black Key (Special Item)</quote> to harmonize with <a idref="sect285">Section 285</a>. Replaced <quote>pockets and</quote> with <quote>pockets, and</quote>. Added <quote>Kika are a form of currency used in the Darklands and the Drakkarim nations. Each coin is worth one-tenth of a Gold Crown and ten Kika take up the same space as one Gold Crown in your <a idref="action">Belt Pouch</a>.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect179">179</a>) Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar fortress</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim fortress</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced <quote>a group of knghts appears</quote> with <quote>a group of knights appear</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect181">181</a>) Replaced <quote>water-course</quote> with <quote>watercourse</quote>. Replaced <quote>inky-black</quote> with <quote>inky black</quote>. Replaced <quote>forego</quote> with <quote>forgo</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect182">182</a>) Replaced <quote>your flesh and</quote> with <quote>your flesh, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect179">179</a>) Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar fortress</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim fortress</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced <quote>a group of knghts appears</quote> with <quote>a group of knights appear</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect181">181</a>) Replaced <quote>water-course</quote> with <quote>watercourse</quote>. Replaced <quote>inky-black</quote> with <quote>inky black</quote>. Replaced <quote>forego</quote> with <quote>forgo</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect182">182</a>) Replaced <quote>your flesh and</quote> with <quote>your flesh, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
@@ -5545,7 +5545,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>Primate or more</quote> with <quote>Primate or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magnakai rank</quote> with <quote>Kai rank</quote> for consistency with the rest of the series. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>blood-lust</quote> with <quote>bloodlust</quote>. Replaced <quote>curled-up</quote> with <quote>curled up</quote>. Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>or have</quote> with <quote>or if you have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect244">244</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>Primate or more</quote> with <quote>Primate or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magnakai rank</quote> with <quote>Kai rank</quote> for consistency with the rest of the series. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>blood-lust</quote> with <quote>bloodlust</quote>. Replaced <quote>curled-up</quote> with <quote>curled up</quote>. Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>or have</quote> with <quote>or if you have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect244">244</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect245">245</a>) Replaced <quote>win and</quote> with <quote>win, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>If the fight lasts longer</quote> with <quote>If you win, and the fight lasts longer</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect245">245</a>) Replaced <quote>win and</quote> with <quote>win, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>If the fight lasts longer</quote> with <quote>If you win, and the fight lasts longer</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect250">250</a>) Replaced <quote>forego</quote> with <quote>forgo</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect252">252</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect260">260</a>) Replaced <quote>crosslegged</quote> with <quote>cross-legged</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect250">250</a>) Replaced <quote>forego</quote> with <quote>forgo</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect252">252</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect260">260</a>) Replaced <quote>crosslegged</quote> with <quote>cross-legged</quote>.</p>
@@ -5571,7 +5571,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect300">300</a>) Replaced <quote>enemy have</quote> with <quote>enemy has</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>) Replaced <quote>Adamas<ch.apos/>s army</quote> with <quote>Adamas<ch.apos/> army</quote> in both the text and the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect303">303</a>) Replaced <quote>Cener druids</quote> with <quote>Cener Druids</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect300">300</a>) Replaced <quote>enemy have</quote> with <quote>enemy has</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>) Replaced <quote>Adamas<ch.apos/>s army</quote> with <quote>Adamas<ch.apos/> army</quote> in both the text and the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect303">303</a>) Replaced <quote>Cener druids</quote> with <quote>Cener Druids</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect304">304</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>one hand (a sword, mace, axe, dagger, short sword or warhammer</quote> with <quote>one hand (i.e. a Sword, Mace, Axe, Dagger, Short Sword, or Warhammer</quote> and added <quote>You cannot make use of a Shield. All weapon-like Special Items should be treated just as normal weapons for determining whether or not you may use them in this combat (e.g. you cannot use the Silver Bow of Duadon but you may use the Sommerswerd).</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect304">304</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>one hand (a sword, mace, axe, dagger, short sword or warhammer</quote> with <quote>one hand (i.e. a Sword, Mace, Axe, Dagger, Short Sword, or Warhammer</quote> and added <quote>You cannot make use of a Shield. All weapon-like Special Items should be treated just as normal weapons for determining whether or not you may use them in this combat (e.g. you cannot use the Silver Bow of Duadon but you may use the Sommerswerd).</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced <quote>your shoulder and</quote> with <quote>your shoulder, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect306">306</a>) Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>) Replaced <quote>behind and</quote> with <quote>behind, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced <quote>your shoulder and</quote> with <quote>your shoulder, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect306">306</a>) Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>) Replaced <quote>behind and</quote> with <quote>behind, and</quote>.</p>
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@@ -5308,7 +5308,7 @@
  
        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Magnakai Disciplines</a>) Added <quote>The fact that you are skilled with three Weapons does not mean that you begin the adventure carrying any of them. However, you will have opportunities to acquire Weapons during your adventure. For every <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> book that you complete in the Magnakai series, you may add an additional Weapon to your list.</quote> to the description of Weaponmastery. This text is taken directly from the Weaponmastery section found in <bookref series="lw" book="06tkot"><cite>The Kingdoms of Terror</cite></bookref>. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Magnakai Disciplines</a>) Added <quote>The fact that you are skilled with three Weapons does not mean that you begin the adventure carrying any of them. However, you will have opportunities to acquire Weapons during your adventure. For every <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> book that you complete in the Magnakai series, you may add an additional Weapon to your list.</quote> to the description of Weaponmastery. This text is taken directly from the Weaponmastery section found in <bookref series="lw" book="06tkot"><cite>The Kingdoms of Terror</cite></bookref>. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
  
-      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed both occurrences of <quote>Surplus Special Items may be left in safe-keeping at your Kai monastery.</quote> since safekeeping is not available at the beginning of this adventure. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed both occurrences of <quote>Surplus Special Items may be left in safe-keeping at your Kai monastery.</quote> since safekeeping is not available at the beginning of this adventure. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Replaced <quote>on the page after the Random Number Table.</quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Replaced <quote>on the page after the Random Number Table.</quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
@@ -5323,7 +5323,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect2">2</a>) Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect3">3</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai Skill</quote> with <quote>Kai skill</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect4">4</a>) Replaced <quote>handrail</quote> with <quote>hand-rail</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect2">2</a>) Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect3">3</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai Skill</quote> with <quote>Kai skill</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect4">4</a>) Replaced <quote>handrail</quote> with <quote>hand-rail</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Replaced <quote>chaos horde</quote> with <quote>chaos-horde</quote>. Replaced <quote>share a Meal</quote> with <quote>share a meal</quote>. Added <quote>(you do not need to erase a Meal from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Replaced <quote>chaos horde</quote> with <quote>chaos-horde</quote>. Replaced <quote>share a Meal</quote> with <quote>share a meal</quote>. Added <quote>(you do not need to erase a Meal from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect7">7</a>) Replaced <quote>weight is</quote> with <quote>weight are</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect8">8</a>) Replaced <quote>Lorestone of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Lorestone of Nyxator</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect7">7</a>) Replaced <quote>weight is</quote> with <quote>weight are</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect8">8</a>) Replaced <quote>Lorestone of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Lorestone of Nyxator</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>.</p>
@@ -5339,7 +5339,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect27">27</a>) Replaced <quote>army are</quote> with <quote>army is</quote>. Replaced <quote>jubliant</quote> with <quote>jubilant</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced <quote>handrail</quote> with <quote>hand-rail</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect27">27</a>) Replaced <quote>army are</quote> with <quote>army is</quote>. Replaced <quote>jubliant</quote> with <quote>jubilant</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced <quote>handrail</quote> with <quote>hand-rail</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Added <quote>Unless you possess the Magnakai Discipline of Curing and have reached the Kai rank of Mentora or higher, add 2 to any <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point losses you sustain during this combat, owing to the poisonous lash of their tentacles.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition (cf. <a idref="sect298">Section 298</a>).</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Added <quote>Unless you possess the Magnakai Discipline of Curing and have reached the Kai rank of Mentora or higher, add 2 to any <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point losses you sustain during this combat, owing to the poisonous lash of their tentacles.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition (cf. <a idref="sect298">Section 298</a>).</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Replaced <quote>his comrade and</quote> with <quote>his comrade, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>hand, then</quote> with <quote>hand, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect41">41</a>) Replaced <quote>lances, then</quote> with <quote>lances; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Replaced <quote>his comrade and</quote> with <quote>his comrade, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>hand, then</quote> with <quote>hand, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect41">41</a>) Replaced <quote>lances, then</quote> with <quote>lances; then</quote>.</p>
@@ -5351,7 +5351,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>dragon-mount</quote> with <quote>dragonmount</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech. Replaced <quote>warrior, I</quote> with <quote>warrior; I</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect58">58</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>pauses, then</quote> with <quote>pauses, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect59">59</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>dragon-mount</quote> with <quote>dragonmount</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech. Replaced <quote>warrior, I</quote> with <quote>warrior; I</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect58">58</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>pauses, then</quote> with <quote>pauses, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect59">59</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect62">62</a>) Added <quote>(If you have both Disciplines, add only 4 to the number you have picked.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect62">62</a>) Added <quote>(If you have both Disciplines, add only 4 to the number you have picked.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect63">63</a>) Italicised <quote><foreign>en route</foreign></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect65">65</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>. Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Curing, and</quote> with <quote>Curing and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect69">69</a>) Replaced <quote>lurking ready</quote> with <quote>lurking, ready</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect63">63</a>) Italicised <quote><foreign>en route</foreign></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect65">65</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>. Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Curing, and</quote> with <quote>Curing and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect69">69</a>) Replaced <quote>lurking ready</quote> with <quote>lurking, ready</quote>.</p>
@@ -5371,7 +5371,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect91">91</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect92">92</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect93">93</a>) Replaced <quote>the skill</quote> with <quote>this skill</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect91">91</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect92">92</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect93">93</a>) Replaced <quote>the skill</quote> with <quote>this skill</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect95">95</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Added <quote>(If you have both Disciplines, add only 4 to the number you have picked.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect95">95</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Added <quote>(If you have both Disciplines, add only 4 to the number you have picked.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect98">98</a>) Replaced <quote>Zhamin plateau</quote> with <quote>Zhamin Plateau</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect101">101</a>) Replaced <quote>well being</quote> with <quote>well-being</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect105">105</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect98">98</a>) Replaced <quote>Zhamin plateau</quote> with <quote>Zhamin Plateau</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect101">101</a>) Replaced <quote>well being</quote> with <quote>well-being</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect105">105</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
@@ -5417,12 +5417,12 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect193">193</a>) Replaced <quote>O<ch.endash/>4</quote> with <quote>0<ch.endash/>4</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect194">194</a>) Replaced <quote>imposter</quote> with <quote>impostor</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect195">195</a>) Replaced <quote>drawbolts</quote> with <quote>bolts</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect193">193</a>) Replaced <quote>O<ch.endash/>4</quote> with <quote>0<ch.endash/>4</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect194">194</a>) Replaced <quote>imposter</quote> with <quote>impostor</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect195">195</a>) Replaced <quote>drawbolts</quote> with <quote>bolts</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect198">198</a>) Replaced <quote>delete from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> all the items, including Meals, that you were carrying in your Backpack</quote> with <quote>delete your Backpack as well as its contents, including Meals, from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. You may not acquire any Backpack Items until your Backpack has been replaced</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect198">198</a>) Replaced <quote>delete from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> all the items, including Meals, that you were carrying in your Backpack</quote> with <quote>delete your Backpack as well as its contents, including Meals, from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. You may not acquire any Backpack Items until your Backpack has been replaced</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect201">201</a>) Added <quote>You may not use a Shield in this combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect201">201</a>) Added <quote>You may not use a Shield in this combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect202">202</a>) Replaced <quote>Zhenga</quote> with <quote>Zhengha</quote>. Replaced <quote>turn 157</quote> with <quote>turn to 157</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect205">205</a>) Replaced <quote>hills and</quote> with <quote>hills, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect202">202</a>) Replaced <quote>Zhenga</quote> with <quote>Zhengha</quote>. Replaced <quote>turn 157</quote> with <quote>turn to 157</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect205">205</a>) Replaced <quote>hills and</quote> with <quote>hills, and</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect210">210</a>) Added <quote>If you already possess the maximum number of Special Items permissible, you must discard one in favour of the Obsidian Seal.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect210">210</a>) Added <quote>If you already possess the maximum number of Special Items permissible, you must discard one in favour of the Obsidian Seal.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect212">212</a>) Replaced <quote>symetrically</quote> with <quote>symmetrically</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pathmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect213">213</a>) Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect215">215</a>) Replaced <quote>Pathmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect212">212</a>) Replaced <quote>symetrically</quote> with <quote>symmetrically</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pathmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect213">213</a>) Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect215">215</a>) Replaced <quote>Pathmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>.</p>
@@ -5431,7 +5431,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>spread before</quote> with <quote>laid before</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect228">228</a>) Replaced <quote>birdsong</quote> with <quote>bird song</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>. Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect233">233</a>) Replaced <quote>see illustration XIV</quote> with <quote>see the accompanying illustration</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Forest, then</quote> with <quote>Forest, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>spread before</quote> with <quote>laid before</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect228">228</a>) Replaced <quote>birdsong</quote> with <quote>bird song</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>. Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect233">233</a>) Replaced <quote>see illustration XIV</quote> with <quote>see the accompanying illustration</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Forest, then</quote> with <quote>Forest, and then</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect234">234</a>) Replaced <quote>Oede Herb</quote> with <quote>Oede herb</quote> in line with all other instances of this term in the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> series.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect234">234</a>) Replaced <quote>Oede Herb</quote> with <quote>Oede herb</quote> in harmony with all other instances of this term in the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> series.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect236">236</a>) Replaced <quote>Zhamin plateau</quote> with <quote>Zhamin Plateau</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect237">237</a>) Replaced <quote>parapet you</quote> with <quote>parapet, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lorestone but</quote> with <quote>Lorestone, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect238">238</a>) Replaced <quote>bath and</quote> with <quote>bath, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect236">236</a>) Replaced <quote>Zhamin plateau</quote> with <quote>Zhamin Plateau</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect237">237</a>) Replaced <quote>parapet you</quote> with <quote>parapet, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lorestone but</quote> with <quote>Lorestone, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect238">238</a>) Replaced <quote>bath and</quote> with <quote>bath, and</quote>.</p>
@@ -5444,13 +5444,13 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect250">250</a>) Replaced <quote>resist, the</quote> with <quote>resist; the</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect253">253</a>) Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>. Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect256">256</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect250">250</a>) Replaced <quote>resist, the</quote> with <quote>resist; the</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect253">253</a>) Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>. Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect256">256</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect261">261</a>) Added <quote>(restore 4 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points due to the beneficial effect of the draught you have just drunk)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect261">261</a>) Added <quote>(restore 4 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points due to the beneficial effect of the draught you have just drunk)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect263">263</a>) Replaced <quote>swordbelt</quote> with <quote>sword belt</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect264">264</a>) Replaced <quote>Ryl<ch.apos/>aan noorma</quote> with <quote>Ryl<ch.apos/>aan noorna</quote> (cf. <a idref="sect64">Section 64</a>). Replaced <quote>Discipline, or</quote> with <quote>Discipline or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect266">266</a>) Since <a idref="sect332">Section 332</a> was originally unreachable, we changed the choice involving leaping from the chariot to point there instead of <a idref="sect299">Section 299</a>. Since <a idref="sect299">Section 299</a> involves a greater loss of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>, we reasoned that it should only be accessible after the chariot is out of control.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) Capitalised the list of items.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect268">268</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect263">263</a>) Replaced <quote>swordbelt</quote> with <quote>sword belt</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect264">264</a>) Replaced <quote>Ryl<ch.apos/>aan noorma</quote> with <quote>Ryl<ch.apos/>aan noorna</quote> (cf. <a idref="sect64">Section 64</a>). Replaced <quote>Discipline, or</quote> with <quote>Discipline or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect266">266</a>) Since <a idref="sect332">Section 332</a> was originally unreachable, we changed the choice involving leaping from the chariot to point there instead of <a idref="sect299">Section 299</a>. Since <a idref="sect299">Section 299</a> involves a greater loss of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>, we reasoned that it should only be accessible after the chariot is out of control.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) Capitalised the list of items.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect268">268</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect270">270</a>) Added <quote>The <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus for using a Shield does not apply here, nor do any bonuses for using Alether or any weapon-like Special Items such as the Sommerswerd. The only exception is the bonus granted for possessing the Silver Helm. Any bonuses to <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> due to armour should likewise not be applied during this combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect270">270</a>) Added <quote>The <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus for using a Shield does not apply here, nor do any bonuses for using Alether or any weapon-like Special Items such as the Sommerswerd. The only exception is the bonus granted for possessing the Silver Helm. Any bonuses to <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> due to armour should likewise not be applied during this combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect271">271</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect273">273</a>) Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect274">274</a>) Replaced <quote>swordbelt</quote> with <quote>sword belt</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect271">271</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect273">273</a>) Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect274">274</a>) Replaced <quote>swordbelt</quote> with <quote>sword belt</quote>.</p>
@@ -5465,7 +5465,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect292">292</a>) Replaced <quote>borehole</quote> with <quote>bore-hole</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect294">294</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect296">296</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect292">292</a>) Replaced <quote>borehole</quote> with <quote>bore-hole</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect294">294</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect296">296</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect298">298</a>) Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>You can evade combat at any time by running towards Baylon<ch.apos/>s tomb</quote> with <quote>If you have not already visited Baylon<ch.apos/>s Tomb, you may evade combat at any time by running towards it</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect298">298</a>) Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>You can evade combat at any time by running towards Baylon<ch.apos/>s tomb</quote> with <quote>If you have not already visited Baylon<ch.apos/>s Tomb, you may evade combat at any time by running towards it</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>) Replaced <quote>sound, then</quote> with <quote>sound, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect304">304</a>) Replaced <quote>bow skill</quote> with <quote>bow-skill</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced <quote>much-improved</quote> with <quote>much improved</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>) Replaced <quote>sound, then</quote> with <quote>sound, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect304">304</a>) Replaced <quote>bow skill</quote> with <quote>bow-skill</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced <quote>much-improved</quote> with <quote>much improved</quote>.</p>
@@ -5486,7 +5486,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect346">346</a>) Replaced <quote>Lorestone of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Lorestone of Nyxator</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect347">347</a>) Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech. Replaced <quote>Shadow Gate, your flight from the storm and your encounter with the fierce Khozinda, and</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate and your flight from the storm, and</quote> since you did not necessarily encounter the Khozinda (cf. <a idref="sect67">Section 67</a>).</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect348">348</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>. Replaced <quote>Tutelary or more</quote> with <quote>Tutelary or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pathsmanship, and</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect346">346</a>) Replaced <quote>Lorestone of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Lorestone of Nyxator</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect347">347</a>) Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech. Replaced <quote>Shadow Gate, your flight from the storm and your encounter with the fierce Khozinda, and</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate and your flight from the storm, and</quote> since you did not necessarily encounter the Khozinda (cf. <a idref="sect67">Section 67</a>).</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect348">348</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>. Replaced <quote>Tutelary or more</quote> with <quote>Tutelary or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pathsmanship, and</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship and</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect349">349</a>) Added <quote>(If you possess both Disciplines, you may only add 4 to the number you pick.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect349">349</a>) Added <quote>(If you possess both Disciplines, you may only add 4 to the number you pick.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
        <p>(<a idref="map">Map</a>) Replaced <quote>Kaltesee</quote> with <quote>Kaltersee</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>. Replaced <quote>top of chart</quote> with <quote>top of the chart</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to 0</quote> with <quote>falls to 0 or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pick number from</quote> with <quote>Pick a number from the</quote>. Replaced <quote>Turn to Combat</quote> with <quote>Turn to the Combat</quote>. Replaced <quote>to random number</quote> with <quote>to the random number</quote>. Replaced <quote>when ENDURANCE</quote> with <quote>when the ENDURANCE</quote>. Replaced <quote>ignored, only</quote> with <quote>ignored; only</quote>.</p>
  
        <p>(<a idref="map">Map</a>) Replaced <quote>Kaltesee</quote> with <quote>Kaltersee</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>. Replaced <quote>top of chart</quote> with <quote>top of the chart</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to 0</quote> with <quote>falls to 0 or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pick number from</quote> with <quote>Pick a number from the</quote>. Replaced <quote>Turn to Combat</quote> with <quote>Turn to the Combat</quote>. Replaced <quote>to random number</quote> with <quote>to the random number</quote>. Replaced <quote>when ENDURANCE</quote> with <quote>when the ENDURANCE</quote>. Replaced <quote>ignored, only</quote> with <quote>ignored; only</quote>.</p>
@@ -5496,7 +5496,7 @@
      <section class="backmatter" id="errstat">
       <meta><title>Note on Adjusted Combat Statistics</title></meta>
        <data>
      <section class="backmatter" id="errstat">
       <meta><title>Note on Adjusted Combat Statistics</title></meta>
        <data>
-       <p>Some enemies in this book have had their statistics altered in accordance with the Mongoose Publishing edition to balance the game. Here is a table to show which enemies have been altered.</p>
+       <p>Some enemies in this book have had their statistics altered in accordance with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition to balance the game. Here is a table to show which enemies have been altered.</p>
          <table>
           <tr>
            <th colspan="4" scope="colgroup">Revised combat statistics</th>
          <table>
           <tr>
            <th colspan="4" scope="colgroup">Revised combat statistics</th>
@@ -5505,7 +5505,7 @@
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Section</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Enemy</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Original</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Section</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Enemy</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Original</th>
-          <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Mongoose</th>
+          <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition</th>
           </tr>
           <tr>
            <td><a idref="sect204">204</a></td>
           </tr>
           <tr>
            <td><a idref="sect204">204</a></td>
diff --git a/en/xml/12tmod.xml b/en/xml/12tmod.xml

index 154b74b..12c3881 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/12tmod.xml
+++ b/en/xml/12tmod.xml
@@ -6592,7 +6592,7 @@
  
         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Magnakai Disciplines</a>) Added <quote>The fact that you are skilled with three Weapons does not mean that you begin the adventure carrying any of them. However, you will have opportunities to acquire Weapons during your adventure. For every <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> book that you complete in the Magnakai series, you may add an additional Weapon to your list.</quote> to the description of Weaponmastery. This text is taken directly from the Weaponmastery section found in <bookref series="lw" book="06tkot"><cite>The Kingdoms of Terror</cite></bookref>. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge; also emphasized the first occurrence of <quote><em>Mindblast</em></quote> in this section. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Magnakai Disciplines</a>) Added <quote>The fact that you are skilled with three Weapons does not mean that you begin the adventure carrying any of them. However, you will have opportunities to acquire Weapons during your adventure. For every <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> book that you complete in the Magnakai series, you may add an additional Weapon to your list.</quote> to the description of Weaponmastery. This text is taken directly from the Weaponmastery section found in <bookref series="lw" book="06tkot"><cite>The Kingdoms of Terror</cite></bookref>. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge; also emphasized the first occurrence of <quote><em>Mindblast</em></quote> in this section. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section.</p>
  
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kaltesee</quote> with <quote>Kaltersee</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kaltesee</quote> with <quote>Kaltersee</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
@@ -6605,7 +6605,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="kaiwisdm">Magnakai Wisdom</a>) Replaced <quote>god Kai</quote> with <quote>God Kai</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="sect2">2</a>) Replaced <quote>shoulder, then</quote> with <quote>shoulder; then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="kaiwisdm">Magnakai Wisdom</a>) Replaced <quote>god Kai</quote> with <quote>God Kai</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="sect2">2</a>) Replaced <quote>shoulder, then</quote> with <quote>shoulder; then</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Replaced <quote>bow string</quote> with <quote>bowstring</quote>. Replaced <quote>three rounds or less</quote> with <quote>four rounds or less</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>Weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>this weapon</quote> with <quote>this Weapon</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar officer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim officer</quote> and <quote>Drakkar Marine Officer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Marine Officer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>you win, and</quote> with <quote>you win and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Replaced <quote>bow string</quote> with <quote>bowstring</quote>. Replaced <quote>three rounds or less</quote> with <quote>four rounds or less</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>Weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>this weapon</quote> with <quote>this Weapon</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar officer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim officer</quote> and <quote>Drakkar Marine Officer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Marine Officer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>you win, and</quote> with <quote>you win and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) Replaced <quote>Sommerswerd had</quote> with <quote>Sommerswerd has</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect7">7</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Drakkar Marine</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Marine</quote> in the main section text and <quote>Drakkar Marine</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim marine</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect8">8</a>) Replaced <quote>infra-vision</quote> with <quote>infravision</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>you win, and</quote> with <quote>you win and</quote> in the second option.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) Replaced <quote>Sommerswerd had</quote> with <quote>Sommerswerd has</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect7">7</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Drakkar Marine</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Marine</quote> in the main section text and <quote>Drakkar Marine</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim marine</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect8">8</a>) Replaced <quote>infra-vision</quote> with <quote>infravision</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>you win, and</quote> with <quote>you win and</quote> in the second option.</p>
@@ -6641,7 +6641,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect57">57</a>) Replaced <quote>hard pressed</quote> with <quote>hard-pressed</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect58">58</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar sailor</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim sailor</quote> and <quote>Drakkar Sailor</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Sailor</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect60">60</a>) Replaced <quote>awe-struck</quote> with <quote>awestruck</quote>. Replaced <quote>balista</quote> with <quote>ballista</quote>. Replaced <quote>balistas</quote> with <quote>ballistas</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kaltesee</quote> with <quote>Kaltersee</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sommerswerd, and</quote> with <quote>Sommerswerd and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect57">57</a>) Replaced <quote>hard pressed</quote> with <quote>hard-pressed</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect58">58</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar sailor</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim sailor</quote> and <quote>Drakkar Sailor</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Sailor</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect60">60</a>) Replaced <quote>awe-struck</quote> with <quote>awestruck</quote>. Replaced <quote>balista</quote> with <quote>ballista</quote>. Replaced <quote>balistas</quote> with <quote>ballistas</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kaltesee</quote> with <quote>Kaltersee</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sommerswerd, and</quote> with <quote>Sommerswerd and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect61">61</a>) Replaced <quote>lop-sided</quote> with <quote>lopsided</quote>. Replaced <quote>minimum bet is 10) on </quote> with <quote>minimum bet is 10; Gold Crowns or Lune may not be used in lieu of Kika in this instance) on </quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect61">61</a>) Replaced <quote>lop-sided</quote> with <quote>lopsided</quote>. Replaced <quote>minimum bet is 10) on </quote> with <quote>minimum bet is 10; Gold Crowns or Lune may not be used in lieu of Kika in this instance) on </quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect67">67</a>) Replaced <quote>win and</quote> with <quote>win, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>If the combat lasts longer</quote> with <quote>If you win, and the combat lasts longer</quote> in the third choice. Replaced <quote>Sommerswerd, and</quote> with <quote>Sommerswerd and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect68">68</a>) Replaced <quote>Bosun</quote> with <quote>Bo<ch.apos/>sun</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect70">70</a>) Replaced <quote>the Liganim passes</quote> with <quote>the Ligan passes</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect67">67</a>) Replaced <quote>win and</quote> with <quote>win, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>If the combat lasts longer</quote> with <quote>If you win, and the combat lasts longer</quote> in the third choice. Replaced <quote>Sommerswerd, and</quote> with <quote>Sommerswerd and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect68">68</a>) Replaced <quote>Bosun</quote> with <quote>Bo<ch.apos/>sun</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect70">70</a>) Replaced <quote>the Liganim passes</quote> with <quote>the Ligan passes</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
@@ -6691,7 +6691,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Replaced <quote>gold braided</quote> with <quote>gold-braided</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect143">143</a>) Replaced <quote>semi-circular</quote> with <quote>semicircular</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect144">144</a>) Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>. Replaced <quote>Animal Control, and</quote> with <quote>Animal Control and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Replaced <quote>gold braided</quote> with <quote>gold-braided</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect143">143</a>) Replaced <quote>semi-circular</quote> with <quote>semicircular</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect144">144</a>) Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>. Replaced <quote>Animal Control, and</quote> with <quote>Animal Control and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect145">145</a>) Replaced <quote>the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>). Also, the</quote> with <quote>the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. Also, the</quote>. Added <quote>(This loss of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is permanent.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect145">145</a>) Replaced <quote>the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>). Also, the</quote> with <quote>the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. Also, the</quote>. Added <quote>(This loss of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is permanent.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect146">146</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow, or</quote> with <quote>Bow or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar warrior</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim warrior</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect148">148</a>) Replaced <quote><ch.thinspace/><foreign xml:lang="x-giak"><ch.lsquot/>Sez dot got!<ch.rsquot/></foreign><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><foreign xml:lang="x-giak"><ch.lsquot/>Shez dok tot!<ch.rsquot/></foreign><ch.thinspace/></quote> as the original does not seem to make any sense. Replaced <quote>Drakkar officer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim officer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect150">150</a>) Replaced <quote>fireswept</quote> with <quote>fire-swept</quote>. Replaced <quote>it is their pain, not their bodies, that feed</quote> with <quote>it is their pain, not their bodies, that feeds</quote>. Replaced <quote>ice-cold</quote> with <quote>ice cold</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect146">146</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow, or</quote> with <quote>Bow or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar warrior</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim warrior</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect148">148</a>) Replaced <quote><ch.thinspace/><foreign xml:lang="x-giak"><ch.lsquot/>Sez dot got!<ch.rsquot/></foreign><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><foreign xml:lang="x-giak"><ch.lsquot/>Shez dok tot!<ch.rsquot/></foreign><ch.thinspace/></quote> as the original does not seem to make any sense. Replaced <quote>Drakkar officer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim officer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect150">150</a>) Replaced <quote>fireswept</quote> with <quote>fire-swept</quote>. Replaced <quote>it is their pain, not their bodies, that feed</quote> with <quote>it is their pain, not their bodies, that feeds</quote>. Replaced <quote>ice-cold</quote> with <quote>ice cold</quote>.</p>
@@ -6699,10 +6699,10 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect154">154</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>albeit it reluctantly</quote> with <quote>albeit reluctantly</quote>. Replaced <quote>This particular Liganim</quote> with <quote>This particular Ligan</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar armour</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim armour</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect157">157</a>) Replaced <quote>zig-zags</quote> with <quote>zigzags</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect158">158</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect154">154</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>albeit it reluctantly</quote> with <quote>albeit reluctantly</quote>. Replaced <quote>This particular Liganim</quote> with <quote>This particular Ligan</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar armour</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim armour</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect157">157</a>) Replaced <quote>zig-zags</quote> with <quote>zigzags</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect158">158</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect159">159</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>either (or both) the Bronin Vest or the Silver Bracers, mark</quote> with <quote>either the Bronin Vest or the Silver Bracers (or both), mark</quote>. Added <quote>It may be worn with a Padded Leather Waistcoat, but not with a Chainmail Waistcoat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect159">159</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>either (or both) the Bronin Vest or the Silver Bracers, mark</quote> with <quote>either the Bronin Vest or the Silver Bracers (or both), mark</quote>. Added <quote>It may be worn with a Padded Leather Waistcoat, but not with a Chainmail Waistcoat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect160">160</a>) Replaced <quote>imposter</quote> with <quote>impostor</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Liganim</quote> with <quote>Ligan</quote> and <quote>Liganim<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Ligan<ch.apos/>s</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect161">161</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect160">160</a>) Replaced <quote>imposter</quote> with <quote>impostor</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Liganim</quote> with <quote>Ligan</quote> and <quote>Liganim<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Ligan<ch.apos/>s</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect161">161</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect162">162</a>) Reordered the choices at the end of the section. Replaced <quote> Kika, and wish</quote> with <quote>Kika (Gold Crowns or Lune may not be used in lieu of Kika in this instance) and wish</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect162">162</a>) Reordered the choices at the end of the section. Replaced <quote> Kika, and wish</quote> with <quote>Kika (Gold Crowns or Lune may not be used in lieu of Kika in this instance) and wish</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect163">163</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar warrior</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim warrior</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect165">165</a>) Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>) Replaced <quote>hard pressed</quote> with <quote>hard-pressed</quote>. Replaced <quote>god Kai</quote> with <quote>God Kai</quote>. Replaced <quote>freelands</quote> with <quote>Freelands</quote>. Replaced <quote>blockade, then</quote> with <quote>blockade, and then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect163">163</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar warrior</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim warrior</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect165">165</a>) Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>) Replaced <quote>hard pressed</quote> with <quote>hard-pressed</quote>. Replaced <quote>god Kai</quote> with <quote>God Kai</quote>. Replaced <quote>freelands</quote> with <quote>Freelands</quote>. Replaced <quote>blockade, then</quote> with <quote>blockade, and then</quote>.</p>
@@ -6714,14 +6714,14 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect176">176</a>) Replaced <quote>sword, Helshezag, and</quote> with <quote>sword Helshezag and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Zejar-deluga</quote> with <quote>Zejar-dulaga</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sommerswerd, and</quote> with <quote>Sommerswerd and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect177">177</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect178">178</a>) Replaced <quote>Control, and have</quote> with <quote>Control and have</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect176">176</a>) Replaced <quote>sword, Helshezag, and</quote> with <quote>sword Helshezag and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Zejar-deluga</quote> with <quote>Zejar-dulaga</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sommerswerd, and</quote> with <quote>Sommerswerd and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect177">177</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect178">178</a>) Replaced <quote>Control, and have</quote> with <quote>Control and have</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect179">179</a>) Replaced <quote>Were you to take this item, it is possible that it could detonate and kill you at any time.</quote> with <quote>If you decide to take this item, it is possible that it could detonate and kill you at any time.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect179">179</a>) Replaced <quote>Were you to take this item, it is possible that it could detonate and kill you at any time.</quote> with <quote>If you decide to take this item, it is possible that it could detonate and kill you at any time.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect180">180</a>) Replaced <quote>Kaltesee</quote> with <quote>Kaltersee</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect181">181</a>) Replaced <quote>Pathmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kaltesee</quote> with <quote>Kaltersee</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect183">183</a>) Replaced <quote>icy-cold</quote> with <quote>icy cold</quote>. Replaced <quote>gulley</quote> with <quote>gully</quote>. Replaced <quote>throughly</quote> with <quote>thoroughly</quote>. Replaced <quote>fatigue and</quote> with <quote>fatigue, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kaltesee</quote> with <quote>Kaltersee</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect180">180</a>) Replaced <quote>Kaltesee</quote> with <quote>Kaltersee</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect181">181</a>) Replaced <quote>Pathmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kaltesee</quote> with <quote>Kaltersee</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect183">183</a>) Replaced <quote>icy-cold</quote> with <quote>icy cold</quote>. Replaced <quote>gulley</quote> with <quote>gully</quote>. Replaced <quote>throughly</quote> with <quote>thoroughly</quote>. Replaced <quote>fatigue and</quote> with <quote>fatigue, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kaltesee</quote> with <quote>Kaltersee</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>the name of the Liganim</quote> with <quote>the name of the Ligan</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced <quote>Ak nart gug?</quote> with <quote>Stak nart gug?</quote> since Ak means <em>red</em> and Stak means <em>orange</em>. Replaced <quote>Kika and wish</quote> with <quote>Kika (Gold Crowns or Lune may not be used in lieu of Kika in this instance) and wish</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>Kika, or</quote> with <quote>Kika or</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>the name of the Liganim</quote> with <quote>the name of the Ligan</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced <quote>Ak nart gug?</quote> with <quote>Stak nart gug?</quote> since Ak means <em>red</em> and Stak means <em>orange</em>. Replaced <quote>Kika and wish</quote> with <quote>Kika (Gold Crowns or Lune may not be used in lieu of Kika in this instance) and wish</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>Kika, or</quote> with <quote>Kika or</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Replaced <quote>wavers, then</quote> with <quote>wavers; then</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>withdraw, then</quote> with <quote>withdraw, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>wall, then</quote> with <quote>wall, and then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>bow skill</quote> with <quote>bow-skill</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Replaced <quote>wavers, then</quote> with <quote>wavers; then</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>withdraw, then</quote> with <quote>withdraw, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>wall, then</quote> with <quote>wall, and then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>bow skill</quote> with <quote>bow-skill</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Added <quote>The Zejar-dulaga occupies the same space in your Quiver as a normal Arrow. If you have 6 Arrows, you may discard one in favour of the Zejar-dulaga.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Added <quote>The Zejar-dulaga occupies the same space in your Quiver as a normal Arrow. If you have 6 Arrows, you may discard one in favour of the Zejar-dulaga.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect188">188</a>) Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar officer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim officer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced <quote>Curing, or</quote> with <quote>Curing or</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect189">189</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>imposter</quote> with <quote>impostor</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar warrior</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim warrior</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect190">190</a>) Replaced <quote>Sommerswerd, and</quote> with <quote>Sommerswerd and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Item, or</quote> with <quote>Item or</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect188">188</a>) Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar officer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim officer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced <quote>Curing, or</quote> with <quote>Curing or</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect189">189</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>imposter</quote> with <quote>impostor</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar warrior</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim warrior</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect190">190</a>) Replaced <quote>Sommerswerd, and</quote> with <quote>Sommerswerd and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Item, or</quote> with <quote>Item or</quote>.</p>
@@ -6730,7 +6730,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect194">194</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar sailor</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim sailor</quote> and <quote>Drakkar Sailor</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Sailor</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect196">196</a>) Replaced the second and third occurrences of <quote>Argazad</quote> with <quote>Aarnak</quote><ch.emdash/>surely the naval base (Argazad) doesn<ch.apos/>t supply itself.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect197">197</a>) Replaced <quote>Divination, and</quote> with <quote>Divination and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect194">194</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar sailor</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim sailor</quote> and <quote>Drakkar Sailor</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Sailor</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect196">196</a>) Replaced the second and third occurrences of <quote>Argazad</quote> with <quote>Aarnak</quote><ch.emdash/>surely the naval base (Argazad) doesn<ch.apos/>t supply itself.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect197">197</a>) Replaced <quote>Divination, and</quote> with <quote>Divination and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Scion-kai or more</quote> with <quote>Scion-kai or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>newly constructed</quote> with <quote>newly-constructed</quote>. Added <quote>(If you only possess the Kai Discipline of Hunting<ch.emdash/>not Huntmastery<ch.emdash/>you may no longer hunt for food as you venture deeper into the Darklands.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>Psi-surge, and</quote> with <quote>Psi-surge and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Invisibility, and</quote> with <quote>Invisibility and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Scion-kai or more</quote> with <quote>Scion-kai or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>newly constructed</quote> with <quote>newly-constructed</quote>. Added <quote>(If you only possess the Kai Discipline of Hunting<ch.emdash/>not Huntmastery<ch.emdash/>you may no longer hunt for food as you venture deeper into the Darklands.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>Psi-surge, and</quote> with <quote>Psi-surge and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Invisibility, and</quote> with <quote>Invisibility and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect206">206</a>) Merged the second and third paragraph. Replaced <quote>Primate or more</quote> with <quote>Primate or higher</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect209">209</a>) Replaced <quote>a third arrow</quote> with <quote>another arrow</quote>, since if you arrive here from <a idref="sect321">Section 321</a> instead of <a idref="sect53">Section 53</a>, the Drakkarim assassin will have fired only one arrow rather than two. Replaced <quote>Kaltesee</quote> with <quote>Kaltersee</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect210">210</a>) Replaced <quote>eventaully</quote> with <quote>eventually</quote>. Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Divination, and</quote> with <quote>Divination and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Or, you can</quote> with <quote>Or you can</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect206">206</a>) Merged the second and third paragraph. Replaced <quote>Primate or more</quote> with <quote>Primate or higher</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect209">209</a>) Replaced <quote>a third arrow</quote> with <quote>another arrow</quote>, since if you arrive here from <a idref="sect321">Section 321</a> instead of <a idref="sect53">Section 53</a>, the Drakkarim assassin will have fired only one arrow rather than two. Replaced <quote>Kaltesee</quote> with <quote>Kaltersee</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect210">210</a>) Replaced <quote>eventaully</quote> with <quote>eventually</quote>. Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Divination, and</quote> with <quote>Divination and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Or, you can</quote> with <quote>Or you can</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
@@ -6740,7 +6740,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect214">214</a>) Replaced <quote>vibrate, then</quote> with <quote>vibrate, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>power of the the</quote> with <quote>power of the</quote>. Replaced <quote>vapourized</quote> with <quote>vapourised</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect216">216</a>) Replaced <quote>Darklord Kraagensk<ch.ucirc/>l, rises</quote> with <quote>Darklord Kraagensk<ch.ucirc/>l rises</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect217">217</a>) Replaced <quote>blood-stained</quote> with <quote>bloodstained</quote>. Replaced <quote>foam, then</quote> with <quote>foam, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kaltesee</quote> with <quote>Kaltersee</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect214">214</a>) Replaced <quote>vibrate, then</quote> with <quote>vibrate, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>power of the the</quote> with <quote>power of the</quote>. Replaced <quote>vapourized</quote> with <quote>vapourised</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect216">216</a>) Replaced <quote>Darklord Kraagensk<ch.ucirc/>l, rises</quote> with <quote>Darklord Kraagensk<ch.ucirc/>l rises</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect217">217</a>) Replaced <quote>blood-stained</quote> with <quote>bloodstained</quote>. Replaced <quote>foam, then</quote> with <quote>foam, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kaltesee</quote> with <quote>Kaltersee</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect221">221</a>) Reordered the choices at the end of the section. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kika, and wish</quote> with <quote>Kika (Gold Crowns or Lune may not be used in lieu of Kika in this instance) and wish</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect221">221</a>) Reordered the choices at the end of the section. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kika, and wish</quote> with <quote>Kika (Gold Crowns or Lune may not be used in lieu of Kika in this instance) and wish</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect222">222</a>) Replaced <quote>Scion-kai or more</quote> with <quote>Scion-kai or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar dagger</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim dagger</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced <quote>Invisibility, and</quote> with <quote>Invisibility and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>) Replaced <quote>Drakkar warriors</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim warriors</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar marine</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim marine</quote> and <quote>Drakkar Marine</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Marine</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect222">222</a>) Replaced <quote>Scion-kai or more</quote> with <quote>Scion-kai or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar dagger</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim dagger</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced <quote>Invisibility, and</quote> with <quote>Invisibility and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>) Replaced <quote>Drakkar warriors</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim warriors</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar marine</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim marine</quote> and <quote>Drakkar Marine</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Marine</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
@@ -6759,7 +6759,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect236">236</a>) Replaced <quote>bow string</quote> with <quote>bowstring</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect238">238</a>) Replaced <quote>Zejar-Dulaga</quote> with <quote>Zejar-dulaga</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect239">239</a>) Replaced <quote>men, then</quote> with <quote>men, and then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect236">236</a>) Replaced <quote>bow string</quote> with <quote>bowstring</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect238">238</a>) Replaced <quote>Zejar-Dulaga</quote> with <quote>Zejar-dulaga</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect239">239</a>) Replaced <quote>men, then</quote> with <quote>men, and then</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote> and reordered the first and last choices at the end of the section. Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Added <quote>This reduction is permanent.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote> and reordered the first and last choices at the end of the section. Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Added <quote>This reduction is permanent.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect241">241</a>) Replaced <quote>early-morning</quote> with <quote>early morning</quote>. Replaced <quote>fog. A</quote> with <quote>fog, a</quote>. Replaced <quote>kuri-storm</quote> with <quote>Kuri-storm</quote>, as this presumably refers to sub-tropical storms found in the Kuri Sea to the south of Durenor.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pathsmanship, and have</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship and have</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect245">245</a>) Replaced <quote>this weapon</quote> with <quote>this Weapon</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect241">241</a>) Replaced <quote>early-morning</quote> with <quote>early morning</quote>. Replaced <quote>fog. A</quote> with <quote>fog, a</quote>. Replaced <quote>kuri-storm</quote> with <quote>Kuri-storm</quote>, as this presumably refers to sub-tropical storms found in the Kuri Sea to the south of Durenor.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pathsmanship, and have</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship and have</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect245">245</a>) Replaced <quote>this weapon</quote> with <quote>this Weapon</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
@@ -6825,7 +6825,7 @@
         <p>(<a id="err347" idref="sect347">347</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>You shoulder your Bow and draw</quote> with <quote>You draw</quote>. The shouldering of the Bow has been moved to <a idref="sect119">Section 119</a> (cf. <a idref="err119">Errata for Section 119</a>) to fix game-flow issues. If you arrived at Section 347 from <a idref="sect5">Section 5</a> your Bow was destroyed, and you didn<ch.apos/>s even ready your Bow if you arrived from <a idref="sect232">Section 232</a>!</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect348">348</a>) Replaced <quote>imposter</quote> with <quote>impostor</quote>. Replaced <quote>place then</quote> with <quote>place and then</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Liganim</quote> with <quote>Ligan</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect349">349</a>) Replaced <quote>clang</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>clang</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a id="err347" idref="sect347">347</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>You shoulder your Bow and draw</quote> with <quote>You draw</quote>. The shouldering of the Bow has been moved to <a idref="sect119">Section 119</a> (cf. <a idref="err119">Errata for Section 119</a>) to fix game-flow issues. If you arrived at Section 347 from <a idref="sect5">Section 5</a> your Bow was destroyed, and you didn<ch.apos/>s even ready your Bow if you arrived from <a idref="sect232">Section 232</a>!</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect348">348</a>) Replaced <quote>imposter</quote> with <quote>impostor</quote>. Replaced <quote>place then</quote> with <quote>place and then</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Liganim</quote> with <quote>Ligan</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect349">349</a>) Replaced <quote>clang</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>clang</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>. Added <quote>The next book in the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> series is entitled <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor"><cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite></bookref>.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>. Added <quote>The next book in the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> series is entitled <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor"><cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite></bookref>.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="map">Map</a>) Replaced <quote>Kaltesee</quote> with <quote>Kaltersee</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>. Replaced <quote>top of chart</quote> with <quote>top of the chart</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to 0</quote> with <quote>falls to 0 or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pick number from</quote> with <quote>Pick a number from the</quote>. Replaced <quote>Turn to Combat</quote> with <quote>Turn to the Combat</quote>. Replaced <quote>to random number</quote> with <quote>to the random number</quote>. Replaced <quote>when ENDURANCE</quote> with <quote>when the ENDURANCE</quote>. Replaced <quote>ignored, only</quote> with <quote>ignored; only</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill and</quote> with <quote>skill, and</quote>.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="map">Map</a>) Replaced <quote>Kaltesee</quote> with <quote>Kaltersee</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>. Replaced <quote>top of chart</quote> with <quote>top of the chart</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to 0</quote> with <quote>falls to 0 or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pick number from</quote> with <quote>Pick a number from the</quote>. Replaced <quote>Turn to Combat</quote> with <quote>Turn to the Combat</quote>. Replaced <quote>to random number</quote> with <quote>to the random number</quote>. Replaced <quote>when ENDURANCE</quote> with <quote>when the ENDURANCE</quote>. Replaced <quote>ignored, only</quote> with <quote>ignored; only</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill and</quote> with <quote>skill, and</quote>.</p>
diff --git a/en/xml/13tplor.xml b/en/xml/13tplor.xml

index 108712e..bcc2ce4 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/13tplor.xml
+++ b/en/xml/13tplor.xml
@@ -5978,9 +5978,9 @@
  
        <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote> that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote>. Replaced <quote>To do this take a pencil and, with your eyes closed, point with the blunt end of it on to the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> on the last page of this book</quote> with <quote>To do this, pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>ie,</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>These scores may include Weaponmastery, Curing, and Psi-surge bonuses.</quote> with <quote>These scores may include Lore-circle bonuses. You may also benefit from the Disciplines that you<ch.apos/>ve mastered (e.g. Weaponmastery, Curing, and Psi-surge bonuses)</quote>. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Italicised <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> when referring to the series.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote> that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote>. Replaced <quote>To do this take a pencil and, with your eyes closed, point with the blunt end of it on to the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> on the last page of this book</quote> with <quote>To do this, pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>ie,</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>These scores may include Weaponmastery, Curing, and Psi-surge bonuses.</quote> with <quote>These scores may include Lore-circle bonuses. You may also benefit from the Disciplines that you<ch.apos/>ve mastered (e.g. Weaponmastery, Curing, and Psi-surge bonuses)</quote>. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Italicised <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> when referring to the series.</p>
  
-      <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed below.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing editions. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced <quote>THE CAPTIVES OF KAAG</quote> with <quote><cite>The Captives of Kaag</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons listed overleaf</quote> with <quote>weapons listed below</quote>. Replaced <quote>disciplines</quote> with <quote>Disciplines</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>left-handed magic</quote> with <quote>Left-handed magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Added <quote>These skills include the basic use of Old Kingdom Spells such as <spell>Shield</spell>, <spell>Power Word</spell>, and <spell>Invisible Fist</spell>.</quote> as found in the Magi-magic section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote>These spells include <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, <spell>Levitation</spell>, and <spell>Mind Charm</spell>.</quote> as found in the Kai-alchemy section in Books 19 and 20. Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Kai and Magnakai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Kai <ch.ampersand/> Magnakai Disciplines</quote> for consistency with later books. Italicised <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>the next Grand Master adventure</quote> with <quote>the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed below.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced <quote>THE CAPTIVES OF KAAG</quote> with <quote><cite>The Captives of Kaag</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons listed overleaf</quote> with <quote>weapons listed below</quote>. Replaced <quote>disciplines</quote> with <quote>Disciplines</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>left-handed magic</quote> with <quote>Left-handed magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Added <quote>These skills include the basic use of Old Kingdom Spells such as <spell>Shield</spell>, <spell>Power Word</spell>, and <spell>Invisible Fist</spell>.</quote> as found in the Magi-magic section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote>These spells include <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, <spell>Levitation</spell>, and <spell>Mind Charm</spell>.</quote> as found in the Kai-alchemy section in Books 19 and 20. Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Kai and Magnakai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Kai <ch.ampersand/> Magnakai Disciplines</quote> for consistency with later books. Italicised <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>the next Grand Master adventure</quote> with <quote>the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
  
  
-      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> or <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Amended the text to correctly reflect the +5 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus for Grand Weaponmastery. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> or <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Amended the text to correctly reflect the +5 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus for Grand Weaponmastery. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. In the example combat, changed Lone Wolf<ch.apos/>s initial <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> to 27 and corrected the Kai-surge bonus to +8 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. In the example combat, changed Lone Wolf<ch.apos/>s initial <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> to 27 and corrected the Kai-surge bonus to +8 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
@@ -6035,11 +6035,11 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect85">85</a>) Replaced <quote>dwellings, and</quote> with <quote>dwellings and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect86">86</a>) Replaced <quote>Acolytes of Vashna: <em>(One with Medallion of Protection)</em></quote> with <quote>Acolytes of Vashna (One with Medallion of Protection)</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect87">87</a>) Replaced <quote>pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect85">85</a>) Replaced <quote>dwellings, and</quote> with <quote>dwellings and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect86">86</a>) Replaced <quote>Acolytes of Vashna: <em>(One with Medallion of Protection)</em></quote> with <quote>Acolytes of Vashna (One with Medallion of Protection)</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect87">87</a>) Replaced <quote>pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect91">91</a>) Replaced <quote>If you possess Grand Mastery of Kai-surge, add 3 to the number you have chosen. If your current <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score is 20 or higher, add a further 2 to your score.</quote> with <quote>If your current <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score is 20 or higher, add 2 to your score. If you possess Grand Mastery of Kai-surge, add a further 3 to the number you have chosen.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect91">91</a>) Replaced <quote>If you possess Grand Mastery of Kai-surge, add 3 to the number you have chosen. If your current <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score is 20 or higher, add a further 2 to your score.</quote> with <quote>If your current <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score is 20 or higher, add 2 to your score. If you possess Grand Mastery of Kai-surge, add a further 3 to the number you have chosen.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect96">96</a>) Replaced <quote>Cener druid</quote> with <quote>Cener Druid</quote>. Replaced <quote>bridge timbers, then</quote> with <quote>bridge timbers; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect98">98</a>) Replaced <quote>Cener druids</quote> with <quote>Cener Druids</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect99">99</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect96">96</a>) Replaced <quote>Cener druid</quote> with <quote>Cener Druid</quote>. Replaced <quote>bridge timbers, then</quote> with <quote>bridge timbers; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect98">98</a>) Replaced <quote>Cener druids</quote> with <quote>Cener Druids</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect99">99</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Replaced <quote>If the combat takes 6 rounds or more</quote> with <quote>If you win and the combat takes 6 rounds or more</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Replaced <quote>If the combat takes 6 rounds or more</quote> with <quote>If you win and the combat takes 6 rounds or more</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect102">102</a>) Replaced <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>clunk<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>clunk</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect103">103</a>) Replaced <quote>Grand Mastery of Nexus, and</quote> with <quote>Mastery of Grand Nexus and</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines, or</quote> with <quote>Disciplines or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect104">104</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect102">102</a>) Replaced <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>clunk<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>clunk</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect103">103</a>) Replaced <quote>Grand Mastery of Nexus, and</quote> with <quote>Mastery of Grand Nexus and</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines, or</quote> with <quote>Disciplines or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect104">104</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>.</p>
@@ -6061,7 +6061,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect125">125</a>) Replaced <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect127">127</a>) Replaced <quote>You wait</quote> with <quote>Waiting</quote>. Replaced <quote>gong echoes n some</quote> with <quote>gong echoes in some</quote>. Replaced <quote>begining</quote> with <quote>beginning</quote>. Replaced <quote>barrels and</quote> with <quote>barrels, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect128">128</a>) Replaced <quote>beating time</quote> with <quote>beating in time</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect125">125</a>) Replaced <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect127">127</a>) Replaced <quote>You wait</quote> with <quote>Waiting</quote>. Replaced <quote>gong echoes n some</quote> with <quote>gong echoes in some</quote>. Replaced <quote>begining</quote> with <quote>beginning</quote>. Replaced <quote>barrels and</quote> with <quote>barrels, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect128">128</a>) Replaced <quote>beating time</quote> with <quote>beating in time</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>) Replaced <quote>ante-room</quote> with <quote>anteroom</quote>. Replaced <quote>foward</quote> with <quote>forward</quote>. Replaced <quote>icy-cold</quote> with <quote>icy cold</quote>. Replaced <quote>plague agarashi</quote> with <quote>Plague Agarashi</quote>. Replaced <quote>Plague agarashi</quote> with <quote>Plague Agarashi</quote>. Added <quote>If you wield the Sommerswerd, remember to double the Undead Plague Agarashi<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point loss in each round of combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>) Replaced <quote>ante-room</quote> with <quote>anteroom</quote>. Replaced <quote>foward</quote> with <quote>forward</quote>. Replaced <quote>icy-cold</quote> with <quote>icy cold</quote>. Replaced <quote>plague agarashi</quote> with <quote>Plague Agarashi</quote>. Replaced <quote>Plague agarashi</quote> with <quote>Plague Agarashi</quote>. Added <quote>If you wield the Sommerswerd, remember to double the Undead Plague Agarashi<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point loss in each round of combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>Bow and wish to use it</quote> with <quote>Bow and an Arrow and wish to use them</quote>. Replaced <quote>Bow, or</quote> with <quote>Bow or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect133">133</a>) Replaced <quote>hand holds</quote> with <quote>handholds</quote>. Replaced <quote>pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect134">134</a>) Replaced <quote>Ghardoz bridge</quote> with <quote>Ghardoz Bridge</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>Bow and wish to use it</quote> with <quote>Bow and an Arrow and wish to use them</quote>. Replaced <quote>Bow, or</quote> with <quote>Bow or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect133">133</a>) Replaced <quote>hand holds</quote> with <quote>handholds</quote>. Replaced <quote>pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect134">134</a>) Replaced <quote>Ghardoz bridge</quote> with <quote>Ghardoz Bridge</quote>.</p>
@@ -6094,7 +6094,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect180">180</a>) Replaced <quote>tendrils, then</quote> with <quote>tendrils, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect182">182</a>) Replaced <quote>fast flowing</quote> with <quote>fast-flowing</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle banners</quote> with <quote>battle-banners</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect183">183</a>) Replaced <quote>Cener druid</quote> with <quote>Cener Druid</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect180">180</a>) Replaced <quote>tendrils, then</quote> with <quote>tendrils, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect182">182</a>) Replaced <quote>fast flowing</quote> with <quote>fast-flowing</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle banners</quote> with <quote>battle-banners</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect183">183</a>) Replaced <quote>Cener druid</quote> with <quote>Cener Druid</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Replaced <quote>If you possess a Bow and are able to use it</quote> with <quote>If you possess a Bow and at least one Arrow</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>Bow, or</quote> with <quote>Bow or</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Replaced <quote>If you possess a Bow and are able to use it</quote> with <quote>If you possess a Bow and at least one Arrow</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>Bow, or</quote> with <quote>Bow or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Replaced <quote>dried leaves, then</quote> with <quote>dried leaves; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>. Replaced <quote></quote> with <quote>spell <spell>Lightning Hand</spell> as</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>suface</quote> with <quote>surface</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Replaced <quote>dried leaves, then</quote> with <quote>dried leaves; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>. Replaced <quote></quote> with <quote>spell <spell>Lightning Hand</spell> as</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>suface</quote> with <quote>surface</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
@@ -6117,14 +6117,14 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect218">218</a>) Italicised <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-cenerese">narbul</foreign></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect219">219</a>) Replaced <quote>weapon, then</quote> with <quote>weapon, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect220">220</a>) Replaced <quote>0<ch.endash/>2 <!--link-text-->turn to 42<!--/link-text--></quote> with <quote>0<ch.endash/>2, <!--link-text-->turn to 42<!--/link-text--></quote>. Replaced <quote>porcelain or</quote> with <quote>porcelain, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect218">218</a>) Italicised <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-cenerese">narbul</foreign></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect219">219</a>) Replaced <quote>weapon, then</quote> with <quote>weapon, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect220">220</a>) Replaced <quote>0<ch.endash/>2 <!--link-text-->turn to 42<!--/link-text--></quote> with <quote>0<ch.endash/>2, <!--link-text-->turn to 42<!--/link-text--></quote>. Replaced <quote>porcelain or</quote> with <quote>porcelain, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect221">221</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Plague hound</quote> with <quote>Plague Hound</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>If the combat lasts 5 rounds</quote> with <quote>If you win the combat in 5 rounds</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect221">221</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Plague hound</quote> with <quote>Plague Hound</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>If the combat lasts 5 rounds</quote> with <quote>If you win the combat in 5 rounds</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>) Replaced <quote>Unforturnately</quote> with <quote>Unfortunately</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>Cener druids</quote> with <quote>Cener Druids</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect225">225</a>) Removed quote marks from around <onomatopoeia>thok</onomatopoeia>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>the bridge and</quote> with <quote>the bridge, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect227">227</a>) Replaced <quote>drawbolt</quote> with <quote>bolt</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect228">228</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>name of</quote> with <quote>names of</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>) Replaced <quote>Unforturnately</quote> with <quote>Unfortunately</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>Cener druids</quote> with <quote>Cener Druids</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect225">225</a>) Removed quote marks from around <onomatopoeia>thok</onomatopoeia>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>the bridge and</quote> with <quote>the bridge, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect227">227</a>) Replaced <quote>drawbolt</quote> with <quote>bolt</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect228">228</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>name of</quote> with <quote>names of</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect234">234</a>) Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>. Added <quote> Restores 10 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points if swallowed before or after combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition (cf. <bookref series="lw" book="05sots"><cite>Shadow on the Sand</cite></bookref> <bookref series="lw" book="05sots" section="sect2">Section 2</bookref>). Replaced <quote>All of these jars are Backpack Items.</quote> with <quote>Each jar contains all of a given herb or potion in a concentrated form created by the Cener Druids (e.g. all five doses of Laumspur are contained in a single jar). Each jar counts as one Backpack Item.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect234">234</a>) Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>. Added <quote> Restores 10 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points if swallowed before or after combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition (cf. <bookref series="lw" book="05sots"><cite>Shadow on the Sand</cite></bookref> <bookref series="lw" book="05sots" section="sect2">Section 2</bookref>). Replaced <quote>All of these jars are Backpack Items.</quote> with <quote>Each jar contains all of a given herb or potion in a concentrated form created by the Cener Druids (e.g. all five doses of Laumspur are contained in a single jar). Each jar counts as one Backpack Item.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>death cry</quote> with <quote>death-cry</quote>. Replaced <quote>spreadeagled</quote> with <quote>spread-eagled</quote>. Replaced <quote>steps, then</quote> with <quote>steps, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect239">239</a>) Replaced <quote>remember to adjust your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> accordingly</quote> with <quote>remember to record it on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as a Backpack Item</quote> (cf. <a idref="sect18">Section 18</a>).</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>inlayed</quote> with <quote>inlaid</quote>. Replaced <quote>antechamber, however</quote> with <quote>antechamber; however</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>death cry</quote> with <quote>death-cry</quote>. Replaced <quote>spreadeagled</quote> with <quote>spread-eagled</quote>. Replaced <quote>steps, then</quote> with <quote>steps, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect239">239</a>) Replaced <quote>remember to adjust your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> accordingly</quote> with <quote>remember to record it on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as a Backpack Item</quote> (cf. <a idref="sect18">Section 18</a>).</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>inlayed</quote> with <quote>inlaid</quote>. Replaced <quote>antechamber, however</quote> with <quote>antechamber; however</quote>.</p>
@@ -6169,14 +6169,14 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect310">310</a>) Replaced <quote>lifiting</quote> with <quote>lifting</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect312">312</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect313">313</a>) Replaced <quote>attacks, then</quote> with <quote>attacks, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect310">310</a>) Replaced <quote>lifiting</quote> with <quote>lifting</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect312">312</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect313">313</a>) Replaced <quote>attacks, then</quote> with <quote>attacks, and then</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Replaced <quote>If you possess a Bow and are able to use it</quote> with <quote>If you possess a Bow and at least one Arrow</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>Bow, or</quote> with <quote>Bow or</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Replaced <quote>If you possess a Bow and are able to use it</quote> with <quote>If you possess a Bow and at least one Arrow</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>Bow, or</quote> with <quote>Bow or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Replaced <quote>yourself, then</quote> with <quote>yourself, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect317">317</a>) Replaced <quote>death cry</quote> with <quote>death-cry</quote>. Replaced <quote>faltering steps, then</quote> with <quote>faltering steps; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Replaced <quote>suddeness</quote> with <quote>suddenness</quote>. Replaced <quote>gravity, then</quote> with <quote>gravity, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect322">322</a>) Replaced <quote>moment, then</quote> with <quote>moment, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>you, then</quote> with <quote>you, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Replaced <quote>Bloodspattered</quote> with <quote>Blood-spattered</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect324">324</a>) Replaced <quote>dusty ground, then</quote> with <quote>dusty ground; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>He lunges, you</quote> with <quote>He lunges. You</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Replaced <quote>yourself, then</quote> with <quote>yourself, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect317">317</a>) Replaced <quote>death cry</quote> with <quote>death-cry</quote>. Replaced <quote>faltering steps, then</quote> with <quote>faltering steps; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Replaced <quote>suddeness</quote> with <quote>suddenness</quote>. Replaced <quote>gravity, then</quote> with <quote>gravity, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect322">322</a>) Replaced <quote>moment, then</quote> with <quote>moment, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>you, then</quote> with <quote>you, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Replaced <quote>Bloodspattered</quote> with <quote>Blood-spattered</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect324">324</a>) Replaced <quote>dusty ground, then</quote> with <quote>dusty ground; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>He lunges, you</quote> with <quote>He lunges. You</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect325">325</a>) Replaced <quote>Plague hound</quote> with <quote>Plague Hound</quote>. Replaced <quote>the gigantic hound</quote> with <quote>a gigantic hound</quote> in the illustration caption. Replaced <quote>If the combat lasts 5 rounds</quote> with <quote>If you win the combat in 5 rounds</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect325">325</a>) Replaced <quote>Plague hound</quote> with <quote>Plague Hound</quote>. Replaced <quote>the gigantic hound</quote> with <quote>a gigantic hound</quote> in the illustration caption. Replaced <quote>If the combat lasts 5 rounds</quote> with <quote>If you win the combat in 5 rounds</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect329">329</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect330">330</a>) Replaced <quote>charcoal and</quote> with <quote>charcoal, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>bang</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>bang</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect329">329</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect330">330</a>) Replaced <quote>charcoal and</quote> with <quote>charcoal, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>bang</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>bang</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
@@ -6185,7 +6185,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect338">338</a>) Replaced <quote>It can not</quote> with <quote>It cannot</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect339">339</a>) Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect340">340</a>) Replaced <quote>of death, then</quote> with <quote>of death; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>heels, then</quote> with <quote>heels, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect338">338</a>) Replaced <quote>It can not</quote> with <quote>It cannot</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect339">339</a>) Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect340">340</a>) Replaced <quote>of death, then</quote> with <quote>of death; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>heels, then</quote> with <quote>heels, and then</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect341">341</a>) Typeset the list of items in initial capital letters instead of all capitals. Added <quote> Restores 10 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points if swallowed before or after combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition (cf. <bookref series="lw" book="05sots"><cite>Shadow on the Sand</cite></bookref> <bookref series="lw" book="05sots" section="sect2">Section 2</bookref>). Replaced <quote>All of these jars are Backpack Items.</quote> with <quote>Each jar contains all of a given herb or potion in a concentrated form created by the Cener Druids (e.g. all five doses of Laumspur are contained in a single jar). Each jar counts as one Backpack Item.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect341">341</a>) Typeset the list of items in initial capital letters instead of all capitals. Added <quote> Restores 10 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points if swallowed before or after combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition (cf. <bookref series="lw" book="05sots"><cite>Shadow on the Sand</cite></bookref> <bookref series="lw" book="05sots" section="sect2">Section 2</bookref>). Replaced <quote>All of these jars are Backpack Items.</quote> with <quote>Each jar contains all of a given herb or potion in a concentrated form created by the Cener Druids (e.g. all five doses of Laumspur are contained in a single jar). Each jar counts as one Backpack Item.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect345">345</a>) Replaced <quote><ch.lsquot/>The Invisible Fist<ch.rsquot/></quote> with <quote><spell>The Invisible Fist</spell></quote>. Replaced <quote>fist, then</quote> with <quote>fist, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect346">346</a>) Replaced <quote>pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Typeset <quote><bookref series="lw" book="14tcok"><cite>The Captives of Kaag</cite></bookref></quote> in initial capital letters instead of all capitals. Replaced <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>. Replaced <quote>their Captain</quote> with <quote>their captain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect345">345</a>) Replaced <quote><ch.lsquot/>The Invisible Fist<ch.rsquot/></quote> with <quote><spell>The Invisible Fist</spell></quote>. Replaced <quote>fist, then</quote> with <quote>fist, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect346">346</a>) Replaced <quote>pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Typeset <quote><bookref series="lw" book="14tcok"><cite>The Captives of Kaag</cite></bookref></quote> in initial capital letters instead of all capitals. Replaced <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>. Replaced <quote>their Captain</quote> with <quote>their captain</quote>.</p>
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@@ -5765,11 +5765,11 @@
  
          <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far<ch.ellips/></a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced <quote>freestate</quote> with <quote>Freeland</quote>. Replaced <quote>re-birth</quote> with <quote>rebirth</quote>. Replaced <quote>monastery of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Monastery of the Kai</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Replaced <quote>north-east</quote> with <quote>northeast</quote>. Replaced <quote>Gournen and</quote> with <quote>Gournen, and</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>comprised</quote> with <quote>were part of</quote>.</p>
  
  
          <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far<ch.ellips/></a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced <quote>freestate</quote> with <quote>Freeland</quote>. Replaced <quote>re-birth</quote> with <quote>rebirth</quote>. Replaced <quote>monastery of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Monastery of the Kai</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Replaced <quote>north-east</quote> with <quote>northeast</quote>. Replaced <quote>Gournen and</quote> with <quote>Gournen, and</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>comprised</quote> with <quote>were part of</quote>.</p>
  
-        <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Replaced <quote>13-onwards</quote> with <quote>Book 13 onwards</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite> Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Added <quote>Silver Bracers</quote> and <quote>Korlinium Scabbard</quote> to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the <cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite> and <cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite> books in harmony with the Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+        <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Replaced <quote>13-onwards</quote> with <quote>Book 13 onwards</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite> Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Added <quote>Silver Bracers</quote> and <quote>Korlinium Scabbard</quote> to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the <cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite> and <cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite> books in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
  
-        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed below.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing editions. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Added <quote>These skills include the basic use of Old Kingdom Spells such as <spell>Shield</spell>, <spell>Power Word</spell>, and <spell>Invisible Fist</spell>.</quote> as found in the Magi-magic section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote>These spells include <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, <spell>Levitation</spell>, and <spell>Mind Charm</spell>.</quote> as found in the Kai-alchemy section in Books 19 and 20. Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Kai and Magnakai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Kai <ch.ampersand/> Magnakai Disciplines</quote> for consistency with later books. Replaced <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite> Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>the next Grand Master adventure</quote> with <quote>the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
+        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed below.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Added <quote>These skills include the basic use of Old Kingdom Spells such as <spell>Shield</spell>, <spell>Power Word</spell>, and <spell>Invisible Fist</spell>.</quote> as found in the Magi-magic section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote>These spells include <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, <spell>Levitation</spell>, and <spell>Mind Charm</spell>.</quote> as found in the Kai-alchemy section in Books 19 and 20. Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Kai and Magnakai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Kai <ch.ampersand/> Magnakai Disciplines</quote> for consistency with later books. Replaced <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite> Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>the next Grand Master adventure</quote> with <quote>the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
  
  
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> or <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Amended the text to correctly reflect the +5 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus for Grand Weaponmastery. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> or <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Amended the text to correctly reflect the +5 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus for Grand Weaponmastery. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. In the example combat, changed Lone Wolf<ch.apos/>s initial <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> to 27 and corrected the Kai-surge bonus to +8 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. In the example combat, changed Lone Wolf<ch.apos/>s initial <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> to 27 and corrected the Kai-surge bonus to +8 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
@@ -5815,7 +5815,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect57">57</a>) Replaced <quote>torch-lit</quote> with <quote>torchlit</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect58">58</a>) Replaced <quote>this barrier, then</quote> with <quote>this barrier; then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect60">60</a>) Replaced <quote>hesitates, then</quote> with <quote>hesitates, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>An okak oknar?<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><foreign xml:lang="x-giak"><ch.lsquot/>An okak oknar?<ch.rsquot/></foreign><ch.thinspace/></quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect57">57</a>) Replaced <quote>torch-lit</quote> with <quote>torchlit</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect58">58</a>) Replaced <quote>this barrier, then</quote> with <quote>this barrier; then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect60">60</a>) Replaced <quote>hesitates, then</quote> with <quote>hesitates, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>An okak oknar?<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><foreign xml:lang="x-giak"><ch.lsquot/>An okak oknar?<ch.rsquot/></foreign><ch.thinspace/></quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect62">62</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>double all bonuses it bestows upon you (for the duration of this combat only)</quote> with <quote>its power doubles in strength for the duration of this combat (<ch.plus/>16 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>possess</quote> with <quote>wield</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect62">62</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>double all bonuses it bestows upon you (for the duration of this combat only)</quote> with <quote>its power doubles in strength for the duration of this combat (<ch.plus/>16 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>possess</quote> with <quote>wield</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect64">64</a>) Replaced <quote>presses</quote> with <quote>press</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect67">67</a>) Replaced <quote>potholes</quote> with <quote>pot-holes</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect68">68</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect64">64</a>) Replaced <quote>presses</quote> with <quote>press</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect67">67</a>) Replaced <quote>potholes</quote> with <quote>pot-holes</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect68">68</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
@@ -5924,7 +5924,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>spyhole</quote> with <quote>spy-hole</quote>. Replaced <quote>storeroom</quote> with <quote>store room</quote>. Replaced <quote>nearby), then</quote> with <quote>nearby) and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar uniform</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim uniform</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect227">227</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spell</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect228">228</a>) Emphasized the word <quote>both</quote> in the last choice.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>spyhole</quote> with <quote>spy-hole</quote>. Replaced <quote>storeroom</quote> with <quote>store room</quote>. Replaced <quote>nearby), then</quote> with <quote>nearby) and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar uniform</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim uniform</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect227">227</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spell</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect228">228</a>) Emphasized the word <quote>both</quote> in the last choice.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect230">230</a>) Replaced <quote>(10 Kika = 1 Gold Crown)</quote> with <quote>(Kika are one-tenth of the value of one Gold Crown and they also take up one-tenth of the space of one Gold Crown in your Belt Pouch)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect230">230</a>) Replaced <quote>(10 Kika = 1 Gold Crown)</quote> with <quote>(Kika are one-tenth of the value of one Gold Crown and they also take up one-tenth of the space of one Gold Crown in your Belt Pouch)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect231">231</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect234">234</a>) Replaced <quote>power word</quote> with <quote>power-word</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Replaced <quote>moments, then</quote> with <quote>moments, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons and</quote> with <quote>weapons, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>that once comprised</quote> with <quote>that were once part of</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect231">231</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect234">234</a>) Replaced <quote>power word</quote> with <quote>power-word</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Replaced <quote>moments, then</quote> with <quote>moments, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons and</quote> with <quote>weapons, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>that once comprised</quote> with <quote>that were once part of</quote>.</p>
@@ -5946,7 +5946,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect258">258</a>) Replaced <quote>arching</quote> with <quote>arcing</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect259">259</a>) Replaced <quote>of sparks, then</quote> with <quote>of sparks; then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect261">261</a>) Replaced <quote>egorgh</quote> with <quote>Egorgh</quote>. Replaced <quote>presses</quote> with <quote>press</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect258">258</a>) Replaced <quote>arching</quote> with <quote>arcing</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect259">259</a>) Replaced <quote>of sparks, then</quote> with <quote>of sparks; then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect261">261</a>) Replaced <quote>egorgh</quote> with <quote>Egorgh</quote>. Replaced <quote>presses</quote> with <quote>press</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect263">263</a>) Replaced <quote>double all bonuses it bestows upon you (for the duration of this combat only)</quote> with <quote>its power doubles in strength for the duration of this combat (<ch.plus/>16 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>possess</quote> with <quote>wield</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect263">263</a>) Replaced <quote>double all bonuses it bestows upon you (for the duration of this combat only)</quote> with <quote>its power doubles in strength for the duration of this combat (<ch.plus/>16 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>possess</quote> with <quote>wield</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect264">264</a>) Replaced <quote>torch-lit</quote> with <quote>torchlit</quote>. Replaced <quote>drawbolt</quote> with <quote>bolt</quote>. Replaced <quote>The sound of footfalls outside the door warn</quote> with <quote>The sound of footfalls outside the door warns</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect266">266</a>) Replaced <quote>out-run</quote> with <quote>outrun</quote>. Replaced <quote>Huntmastery, and</quote> with <quote>Huntmastery and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect273">273</a>) Replaced <quote>Drakkar warrior</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim warrior</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect264">264</a>) Replaced <quote>torch-lit</quote> with <quote>torchlit</quote>. Replaced <quote>drawbolt</quote> with <quote>bolt</quote>. Replaced <quote>The sound of footfalls outside the door warn</quote> with <quote>The sound of footfalls outside the door warns</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect266">266</a>) Replaced <quote>out-run</quote> with <quote>outrun</quote>. Replaced <quote>Huntmastery, and</quote> with <quote>Huntmastery and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect273">273</a>) Replaced <quote>Drakkar warrior</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim warrior</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
diff --git a/en/xml/15tdc.xml b/en/xml/15tdc.xml

index 4a93926..fbaef18 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/15tdc.xml
+++ b/en/xml/15tdc.xml
@@ -1821,7 +1821,7 @@
  
       <footnotes>
        <footnote id="sect72-1-foot" idref="sect72-1">
  
       <footnotes>
        <footnote id="sect72-1-foot" idref="sect72-1">
-       <p>This section is unreachable and superfluous since it is equivalent to <a idref="sect349">Section 349</a> and <a idref="sect185">Section 185</a>. It has been rewritten in the Mongoose Publishing edition to almost parallel Sections <a idref="sect29">29</a> and <a idref="sect287">287</a> by adding an extra option for the <a idref="random">Random Number</a> pick from <a idref="sect86">Section 86</a>.</p>
+       <p>This section is unreachable and superfluous since it is equivalent to <a idref="sect349">Section 349</a> and <a idref="sect185">Section 185</a>. It has been rewritten in the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition to almost parallel Sections <a idref="sect29">29</a> and <a idref="sect287">287</a> by adding an extra option for the <a idref="random">Random Number</a> pick from <a idref="sect86">Section 86</a>.</p>
        </footnote>
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-       <p>This section is unreachable and superfluous since it is equivalent to <a idref="sect19">Section 19</a> but less complete. It has been rewritten in the Mongoose Publishing edition to almost parallel Sections <a idref="sect269">269</a> and <a idref="sect77">77</a> by adding an extra option for the <a idref="random">Random Number</a> pick from <a idref="sect345">Section 345</a>.</p>
+       <p>This section is unreachable and superfluous since it is equivalent to <a idref="sect19">Section 19</a> but less complete. It has been rewritten in the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition to almost parallel Sections <a idref="sect269">269</a> and <a idref="sect77">77</a> by adding an extra option for the <a idref="random">Random Number</a> pick from <a idref="sect345">Section 345</a>.</p>
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        <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far<ch.ellips/></a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>feted</quote> with <quote>f<ch.ecirc/>ted</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Left-Handed</quote> with <quote>Left-handed</quote>. Replaced <quote>Right-Handed</quote> with <quote>Right-handed</quote>. Replaced <quote>freestate</quote> with <quote>Freeland</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>doomstone</quote> with <quote>Doomstone</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced <quote>monastery of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Monastery of the Kai</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Added a paragraph break after <quote>their own extinction</quote> in line with this section in other Grand Master books. Replaced <quote>north-east</quote> with <quote>northeast</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom Magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>Akagazad and</quote> with <quote>Akagazad, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Banedon, then</quote> with <quote>Banedon, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Magic</quote> with <quote>magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>comprised</quote> with <quote>were part of</quote>. Replaced <quote>he replied, <ch.lsquot/>Were the</quote> with <quote>he replied, <ch.lsquot/>were the</quote>. Replaced <quote>my Lord</quote> with <quote>my lord</quote>.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far<ch.ellips/></a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>feted</quote> with <quote>f<ch.ecirc/>ted</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Left-Handed</quote> with <quote>Left-handed</quote>. Replaced <quote>Right-Handed</quote> with <quote>Right-handed</quote>. Replaced <quote>freestate</quote> with <quote>Freeland</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>doomstone</quote> with <quote>Doomstone</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced <quote>monastery of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Monastery of the Kai</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Added a paragraph break after <quote>their own extinction</quote> in line with this section in other Grand Master books. Replaced <quote>north-east</quote> with <quote>northeast</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom Magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>Akagazad and</quote> with <quote>Akagazad, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Banedon, then</quote> with <quote>Banedon, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Magic</quote> with <quote>magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>comprised</quote> with <quote>were part of</quote>. Replaced <quote>he replied, <ch.lsquot/>Were the</quote> with <quote>he replied, <ch.lsquot/>were the</quote>. Replaced <quote>my Lord</quote> with <quote>my lord</quote>.</p>
  
-      <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote> that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote>. Removed <quote> on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>(ie</quote> with <quote>(i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf Kai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite></quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Magnakai</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Added <quote>Silver Bracers</quote> and <quote>Korlinium Scabbard</quote> to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the <cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite> and <cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite> books in harmony with the Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote> that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote>. Removed <quote> on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>(ie</quote> with <quote>(i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf Kai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite></quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Magnakai</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Added <quote>Silver Bracers</quote> and <quote>Korlinium Scabbard</quote> to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the <cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite> and <cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite> books in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
  
-      <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed overleaf.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing editions. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Added <quote>These skills include the basic use of Old Kingdom Spells such as <spell>Shield</spell>, <spell>Power Word</spell>, and <spell>Invisible Fist</spell>.</quote> as found in the Magi-magic section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote>These spells include <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, <spell>Levitation</spell>, and <spell>Mind Charm</spell>.</quote> as found in the Kai-alchemy section in Books 19 and 20. Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Kai and Magnakai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Kai <ch.ampersand/> Magnakai Disciplines</quote> for consistency with later books. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>the next Grand Master adventure</quote> with <quote>the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed overleaf.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Added <quote>These skills include the basic use of Old Kingdom Spells such as <spell>Shield</spell>, <spell>Power Word</spell>, and <spell>Invisible Fist</spell>.</quote> as found in the Magi-magic section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote>These spells include <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, <spell>Levitation</spell>, and <spell>Mind Charm</spell>.</quote> as found in the Kai-alchemy section in Books 19 and 20. Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Kai and Magnakai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Kai <ch.ampersand/> Magnakai Disciplines</quote> for consistency with later books. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>the next Grand Master adventure</quote> with <quote>the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
  
  
-      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg,</quote> with <quote>(e.g.</quote>. Replaced five occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced two occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced eight occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Inserted the explanation of how to use Gold Crowns. Removed <quote> (see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Amended the text to correctly reflect the +5 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus for Grand Weaponmastery. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg,</quote> with <quote>(e.g.</quote>. Replaced five occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced two occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced eight occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Inserted the explanation of how to use Gold Crowns. Removed <quote> (see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Amended the text to correctly reflect the +5 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus for Grand Weaponmastery. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. In the example combat, changed Lone Wolf<ch.apos/>s initial <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> to 27 and corrected the Kai Surge bonus to +8 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
        <p>(<a idref="levels">Levels of Grand Mastership</a>) Replaced <quote>rank and titles</quote> with <quote>ranks and titles</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. In the example combat, changed Lone Wolf<ch.apos/>s initial <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> to 27 and corrected the Kai Surge bonus to +8 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
        <p>(<a idref="levels">Levels of Grand Mastership</a>) Replaced <quote>rank and titles</quote> with <quote>ranks and titles</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>.</p>
  
-      <p>(<a idref="imprvdsc">Improved Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>(e.g. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, Spear etc)</quote> with <quote>(i.e. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, and Spear)</quote>. Replaced <quote>(i.e. arrows, axes, crossbow bolts etc)</quote> with <quote>(e.g. arrows, axes, crossbow bolts)</quote> in the <spell>Halt Missile</spell> section. Added the description of the improvements for Grand Guardian. Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Improved Grand Master Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spells</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spells</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>range and numbers of insects so affected increases</quote> with <quote>range and number of insects so affected increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>whilst fighting an enemy in unarmed combat</quote> with <quote>whilst fighting an enemy</quote> in line with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="imprvdsc">Improved Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>(e.g. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, Spear etc)</quote> with <quote>(i.e. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, and Spear)</quote>. Replaced <quote>(i.e. arrows, axes, crossbow bolts etc)</quote> with <quote>(e.g. arrows, axes, crossbow bolts)</quote> in the <spell>Halt Missile</spell> section. Added the description of the improvements for Grand Guardian. Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Improved Grand Master Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spells</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spells</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>range and numbers of insects so affected increases</quote> with <quote>range and number of insects so affected increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>whilst fighting an enemy in unarmed combat</quote> with <quote>whilst fighting an enemy</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
        <p>(<a idref="kaiwisdm">Grand Master<ch.apos/>s Wisdom</a>) Replaced <quote>Pick your four Grand</quote> with <quote>Pick your Grand</quote>. Replaced <quote>helotry of Nyras</quote> with <quote>Helotry of Nyras</quote>.</p>
  
  
        <p>(<a idref="kaiwisdm">Grand Master<ch.apos/>s Wisdom</a>) Replaced <quote>Pick your four Grand</quote> with <quote>Pick your Grand</quote>. Replaced <quote>helotry of Nyras</quote> with <quote>Helotry of Nyras</quote>.</p>
  
@@ -5946,7 +5946,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect30">30</a>) Replaced <quote>breath, then</quote> with <quote>breath; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect31">31</a>) Replaced <quote>aimed ready</quote> with <quote>aimed, ready</quote>. Replaced <quote>It is near</quote> with <quote>He is near</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai rank of Grand Guardian</quote> with <quote>rank of Kai Grand Guardian</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Replaced <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect30">30</a>) Replaced <quote>breath, then</quote> with <quote>breath; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect31">31</a>) Replaced <quote>aimed ready</quote> with <quote>aimed, ready</quote>. Replaced <quote>It is near</quote> with <quote>He is near</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai rank of Grand Guardian</quote> with <quote>rank of Kai Grand Guardian</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Replaced <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>floroa</quote> with <quote>Floroa</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you wish to take some of this fungi with you, record it on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> with <quote>If you wish to take some of this fungi with you, record a single dose on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>floroa</quote> with <quote>Floroa</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you wish to take some of this fungi with you, record it on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> with <quote>If you wish to take some of this fungi with you, record a single dose on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Replaced <quote>the Captain<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>the captain<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect35">35</a>) Replaced <quote>weapon, then</quote> with <quote>weapon, and then</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar lancer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim lancer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>steps and, as</quote> with <quote>steps, and as</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Replaced <quote>breath, then</quote> with <quote>breath, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Replaced <quote>the Captain<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>the captain<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect35">35</a>) Replaced <quote>weapon, then</quote> with <quote>weapon, and then</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar lancer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim lancer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>steps and, as</quote> with <quote>steps, and as</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Replaced <quote>breath, then</quote> with <quote>breath, and then</quote>.</p>
@@ -5963,7 +5963,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Replaced <quote>icy-cold</quote> with <quote>icy cold</quote>. Replaced <quote>t<ch.apos/>is</quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.apos/>tis</quote>. Replaced <quote>much-needed</quote> with <quote>much needed</quote>. Replaced <quote>side, then</quote> with <quote>side, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>air, then</quote> with <quote>air, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>sense immediately that the coin is showing heads</quote> with <quote>sense immediately what the coin is showing</quote> to avoid inconsistencies with Sections <a idref="sect117">117</a> and <a idref="sect298">298</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect57">57</a>) Replaced <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Gazim!<ch.rsquot/> shouts</quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><foreign xml:lang="x-giak"><ch.lsquot/>Gazim!<ch.rsquot/></foreign> shouts</quote>. Replaced <quote>Tukodaks</quote> with <quote>Tukodak Guards</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Replaced <quote>icy-cold</quote> with <quote>icy cold</quote>. Replaced <quote>t<ch.apos/>is</quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.apos/>tis</quote>. Replaced <quote>much-needed</quote> with <quote>much needed</quote>. Replaced <quote>side, then</quote> with <quote>side, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>air, then</quote> with <quote>air, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>sense immediately that the coin is showing heads</quote> with <quote>sense immediately what the coin is showing</quote> to avoid inconsistencies with Sections <a idref="sect117">117</a> and <a idref="sect298">298</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect57">57</a>) Replaced <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Gazim!<ch.rsquot/> shouts</quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><foreign xml:lang="x-giak"><ch.lsquot/>Gazim!<ch.rsquot/></foreign> shouts</quote>. Replaced <quote>Tukodaks</quote> with <quote>Tukodak Guards</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect59">59</a>) Removed <quote> (or higher)</quote>. Added a comma before <quote>add 2</quote>. Replaced <quote>try and</quote> with <quote>try to</quote>. Added <quote> These bonuses are not cumulative (i.e. if you hold the rank of Sun Knight, you add just 2 <em>not</em> 3).</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect59">59</a>) Removed <quote> (or higher)</quote>. Added a comma before <quote>add 2</quote>. Replaced <quote>try and</quote> with <quote>try to</quote>. Added <quote> These bonuses are not cumulative (i.e. if you hold the rank of Sun Knight, you add just 2 <em>not</em> 3).</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect61">61</a>) Replaced <quote>men, then</quote> with <quote>men; then</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect63">63</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>breastplace</quote> with <quote>breastplate</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect65">65</a>) Replaced <quote>argument, then</quote> with <quote>argument. Then</quote>. Replaced <quote>open and</quote> with <quote>open, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>recently-cleared</quote> with <quote>recently cleared</quote>. Replaced <quote>voices and</quote> with <quote>voices, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect61">61</a>) Replaced <quote>men, then</quote> with <quote>men; then</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect63">63</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>breastplace</quote> with <quote>breastplate</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect65">65</a>) Replaced <quote>argument, then</quote> with <quote>argument. Then</quote>. Replaced <quote>open and</quote> with <quote>open, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>recently-cleared</quote> with <quote>recently cleared</quote>. Replaced <quote>voices and</quote> with <quote>voices, and</quote>.</p>
@@ -6010,7 +6010,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect115">115</a>) Replaced <quote>animal control</quote> with <quote>Animal Control</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect117">117</a>) Replaced <quote>timberline</quote> with <quote>timber-line</quote>. Replaced <quote>breaths</quote> with <quote>breathes</quote>. Added <quote><ch.lsquot/>Heads!<ch.rsquot/> says Prarg.</quote> to parallel <a idref="sect298">Section 298</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>or do</quote> with <quote>or if you do</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Drakkar officer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim officer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote> in both the text and the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect115">115</a>) Replaced <quote>animal control</quote> with <quote>Animal Control</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect117">117</a>) Replaced <quote>timberline</quote> with <quote>timber-line</quote>. Replaced <quote>breaths</quote> with <quote>breathes</quote>. Added <quote><ch.lsquot/>Heads!<ch.rsquot/> says Prarg.</quote> to parallel <a idref="sect298">Section 298</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>or do</quote> with <quote>or if you do</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Drakkar officer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim officer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote> in both the text and the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Removed <quote> (or higher)</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>wintery</quote> with <quote>wintry</quote>. Added <quote>At the end of combat, reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score by 5  unless it causes your score to fall to zero or below, in which case you should reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> total to 1 point.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Removed <quote> (or higher)</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>wintery</quote> with <quote>wintry</quote>. Added <quote>At the end of combat, reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score by 5  unless it causes your score to fall to zero or below, in which case you should reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> total to 1 point.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect122">122</a>) Replaced <quote>distented</quote> with <quote>distended</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote>footsteps, then</quote> with <quote>footsteps; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Replaced <quote>loudly, then</quote> with <quote>loudly, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>his Captain<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>his captain<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect122">122</a>) Replaced <quote>distented</quote> with <quote>distended</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote>footsteps, then</quote> with <quote>footsteps; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Replaced <quote>loudly, then</quote> with <quote>loudly, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>his Captain<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>his captain<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
@@ -6037,7 +6037,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect152">152</a>) Removed the quotation marks and dashes around <quote>Lightning Hand</quote>. Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect154">154</a>) Replaced <quote>barnlike</quote> with <quote>barn-like</quote>. Replaced <quote>to zero</quote> with <quote>to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>anvil and</quote> with <quote>anvil, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect155">155</a>) Replaced <quote>hard-worn</quote> with <quote>hard-won</quote>. Replaced <quote>t<ch.apos/>is</quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.apos/>tis</quote>. Replaced <quote>much-needed</quote> with <quote>much needed</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect152">152</a>) Removed the quotation marks and dashes around <quote>Lightning Hand</quote>. Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect154">154</a>) Replaced <quote>barnlike</quote> with <quote>barn-like</quote>. Replaced <quote>to zero</quote> with <quote>to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>anvil and</quote> with <quote>anvil, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect155">155</a>) Replaced <quote>hard-worn</quote> with <quote>hard-won</quote>. Replaced <quote>t<ch.apos/>is</quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.apos/>tis</quote>. Replaced <quote>much-needed</quote> with <quote>much needed</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect156">156</a>) Added <quote>(if it is currently above this level)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect156">156</a>) Added <quote>(if it is currently above this level)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect158">158</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Kai Alchemy</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy</quote>. Changed the choice that requires the rank of Sun Knight to lead to <a idref="sect17">Section 17</a> instead of <a idref="sect86">Section 86</a>, and changed the other choice to lead to <a idref="sect86">Section 86</a> instead of <a idref="sect17">Section 17</a>. <a idref="sect17">Section 17</a> assumes that you<ch.apos/>ve reached the rank of Sun Knight. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>ca, then</quote> with <quote>can; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect159">159</a>) Replaced <quote>Prarg, <ch.lsquot/>If</quote> with <quote>Prarg. <ch.lsquot/>If</quote>. Replaced <quote>or you</quote> with <quote>or if you</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect160">160</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon, then</quote> with <quote>weapon, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar lancer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim lancer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect158">158</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Kai Alchemy</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy</quote>. Changed the choice that requires the rank of Sun Knight to lead to <a idref="sect17">Section 17</a> instead of <a idref="sect86">Section 86</a>, and changed the other choice to lead to <a idref="sect86">Section 86</a> instead of <a idref="sect17">Section 17</a>. <a idref="sect17">Section 17</a> assumes that you<ch.apos/>ve reached the rank of Sun Knight. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>ca, then</quote> with <quote>can; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect159">159</a>) Replaced <quote>Prarg, <ch.lsquot/>If</quote> with <quote>Prarg. <ch.lsquot/>If</quote>. Replaced <quote>or you</quote> with <quote>or if you</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect160">160</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon, then</quote> with <quote>weapon, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar lancer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim lancer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
@@ -6092,7 +6092,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect233">233</a>) Replaced <quote>breath, then</quote> with <quote>breath; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect234">234</a>) Replaced <quote>crusader<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>crusaders<ch.apos/></quote>. Replaced <quote>en route</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="fr">en route</foreign></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect233">233</a>) Replaced <quote>breath, then</quote> with <quote>breath; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect234">234</a>) Replaced <quote>crusader<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>crusaders<ch.apos/></quote>. Replaced <quote>en route</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="fr">en route</foreign></quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect238">238</a>) Added <quote>The weapon bonuses are cumulative (e.g. the Dagger of Vashna, which is a Dagger and a Special Item, will confer a bonus of <ch.plus/>1: 2 <ch.minus/> 1).</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect238">238</a>) Added <quote>The weapon bonuses are cumulative (e.g. the Dagger of Vashna, which is a Dagger and a Special Item, will confer a bonus of <ch.plus/>1: 2 <ch.minus/> 1).</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>louder, then</quote> with <quote>louder; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect241">241</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow, then</quote> with <quote>Arrow, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>or choose</quote> with <quote>or if you choose</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>louder, then</quote> with <quote>louder; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect241">241</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow, then</quote> with <quote>Arrow, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>or choose</quote> with <quote>or if you choose</quote>.</p>
@@ -6130,7 +6130,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect291">291</a>) Replaced <quote>or have</quote> with <quote>or if you have</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect294">294</a>) Replaced <quote>length and, upon</quote> with <quote>length, and upon</quote>. Replaced <quote>suggestion and, after</quote> with <quote>suggestion, and after</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect295">295</a>) Replaced <quote>his Captain<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>his captain<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect291">291</a>) Replaced <quote>or have</quote> with <quote>or if you have</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect294">294</a>) Replaced <quote>length and, upon</quote> with <quote>length, and upon</quote>. Replaced <quote>suggestion and, after</quote> with <quote>suggestion, and after</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect295">295</a>) Replaced <quote>his Captain<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>his captain<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect297">297</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Removed <quote> (or higher)</quote>. Replaced <quote>wintery</quote> with <quote>wintry</quote>. Added <quote>At the end of combat, reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score by 5  unless it causes your score to fall to zero or below, in which case you should reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> total to 1 point.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect297">297</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Removed <quote> (or higher)</quote>. Replaced <quote>wintery</quote> with <quote>wintry</quote>. Added <quote>At the end of combat, reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score by 5  unless it causes your score to fall to zero or below, in which case you should reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> total to 1 point.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect299">299</a>) Replaced <quote>Action Charts</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect304">304</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>click, then</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia>; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced <quote>inate</quote> with <quote>innate</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect299">299</a>) Replaced <quote>Action Charts</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect304">304</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>click, then</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia>; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced <quote>inate</quote> with <quote>innate</quote>.</p>
@@ -6148,7 +6148,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Replaced <quote>Mastery, and</quote> with <quote>Mastery and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>or have</quote> with <quote>or if you have</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect321">321</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect322">322</a>) Replaced <quote>oars, then</quote> with <quote>oars; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Replaced <quote>Mastery, and</quote> with <quote>Mastery and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>or have</quote> with <quote>or if you have</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect321">321</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect322">322</a>) Replaced <quote>oars, then</quote> with <quote>oars; then</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Replaced <quote>momentoes</quote> with <quote>mementoes</quote>. Replaced <quote>jadin amulet</quote> with <quote>Jadin Amulet</quote>. Replaced <quote>less-noble</quote> with <quote>less noble</quote>. Replaced <quote>etc</quote> with <quote>etc.</quote>. Replaced <quote>pass, then</quote> with <quote>pass; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>jewellery and</quote> with <quote>jewellery, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>neckchain</quote> with <quote>neck-chain</quote>. Replaced <quote>to check against normal missiles (arrows, bolts, darts, etc.)</quote> with <quote>when trying to avoid normal missiles (e.g. arrows, bolts, darts, etc.) aimed at you</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Replaced <quote>momentoes</quote> with <quote>mementoes</quote>. Replaced <quote>jadin amulet</quote> with <quote>Jadin Amulet</quote>. Replaced <quote>less-noble</quote> with <quote>less noble</quote>. Replaced <quote>etc</quote> with <quote>etc.</quote>. Replaced <quote>pass, then</quote> with <quote>pass; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>jewellery and</quote> with <quote>jewellery, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>neckchain</quote> with <quote>neck-chain</quote>. Replaced <quote>to check against normal missiles (arrows, bolts, darts, etc.)</quote> with <quote>when trying to avoid normal missiles (e.g. arrows, bolts, darts, etc.) aimed at you</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect325">325</a>) Replaced <quote>urgently. <ch.lsquot/>we</quote> with <quote>urgently. <ch.lsquot/>We</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect327">327</a>) Replaced <quote>inate</quote> with <quote>innate</quote>. Replaced <quote>ale and</quote> with <quote>ale, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect328">328</a>) Replaced <quote>north-west</quote> with <quote>northwest</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect325">325</a>) Replaced <quote>urgently. <ch.lsquot/>we</quote> with <quote>urgently. <ch.lsquot/>We</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect327">327</a>) Replaced <quote>inate</quote> with <quote>innate</quote>. Replaced <quote>ale and</quote> with <quote>ale, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect328">328</a>) Replaced <quote>north-west</quote> with <quote>northwest</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>.</p>
diff --git a/en/xml/16tlov.xml b/en/xml/16tlov.xml

index 1eea8cc..7e6c65c 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/16tlov.xml
+++ b/en/xml/16tlov.xml
@@ -5060,7 +5060,7 @@
  
        <footnotes>
         <footnote id="sect332-1-foot" idref="sect332-1">
  
        <footnotes>
         <footnote id="sect332-1-foot" idref="sect332-1">
-        <p>The Mongoose Publishing edition of <cite>The Legacy of Vashna</cite> adds here: <quote>If you do not possess any Gold Crowns, you must give the stable boy one item from your Backpack, of your own choosing.</quote> However, it does not clarify what to do if you lack money <em>and</em> any Backpack Items. In such a scenario, it would seem best to simply disregard this cost.</p>
+        <p>The Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition of <cite>The Legacy of Vashna</cite> adds here: <quote>If you do not possess any Gold Crowns, you must give the stable boy one item from your Backpack, of your own choosing.</quote> However, it does not clarify what to do if you lack money <em>and</em> any Backpack Items. In such a scenario, it would seem best to simply disregard this cost.</p>
         </footnote>
        </footnotes>
  
         </footnote>
        </footnotes>
  
@@ -5857,11 +5857,11 @@
  
         <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>no Kai lord</quote> with <quote>no Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced <quote>strongholds fierce</quote> with <quote>strongholds, fierce</quote>. Replaced <quote>Right-Handed Magic</quote> with <quote>Right-handed magic</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Replaced <quote>Dark God and</quote> with <quote>Dark God, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>vigilant for</quote> with <quote>vigilant, for</quote>. Replaced <quote>free-state</quote> with <quote>Freeland</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, and those</quote> with <quote>body, along with those</quote>. Replaced <quote>north-east</quote> with <quote>northeast</quote>. Replaced <quote>quickly and</quote> with <quote>quickly, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>monastery of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Monastery of the Kai</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>the Monastery</quote> with <quote>the monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Akagazad and</quote> with <quote>Akagazad, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>safely and</quote> with <quote>safely, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>comprised</quote> with <quote>were part of</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>no Kai lord</quote> with <quote>no Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced <quote>strongholds fierce</quote> with <quote>strongholds, fierce</quote>. Replaced <quote>Right-Handed Magic</quote> with <quote>Right-handed magic</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Replaced <quote>Dark God and</quote> with <quote>Dark God, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>vigilant for</quote> with <quote>vigilant, for</quote>. Replaced <quote>free-state</quote> with <quote>Freeland</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, and those</quote> with <quote>body, along with those</quote>. Replaced <quote>north-east</quote> with <quote>northeast</quote>. Replaced <quote>quickly and</quote> with <quote>quickly, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>monastery of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Monastery of the Kai</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>the Monastery</quote> with <quote>the monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Akagazad and</quote> with <quote>Akagazad, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>safely and</quote> with <quote>safely, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>comprised</quote> with <quote>were part of</quote>.</p>
  
-       <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote>. Removed <quote>on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf Kai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite></quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Magnakai</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Added <quote>Silver Bracers</quote> and <quote>Korlinium Scabbard</quote> to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the <cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite> and <cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite> books in harmony with the Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote>. Removed <quote>on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf Kai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite></quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Magnakai</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Added <quote>Silver Bracers</quote> and <quote>Korlinium Scabbard</quote> to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the <cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite> and <cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite> books in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
  
-       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>(ie,</quote> with <quote>(i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed below.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing editions. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote> according to <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>opposite and overleaf</quote> with <quote>below</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Added <quote>These skills include the basic use of Old Kingdom Spells such as <spell>Shield</spell>, <spell>Power Word</spell>, and <spell>Invisible Fist</spell>.</quote> as found in the Magi-magic section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote>These spells include <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, <spell>Levitation</spell>, and <spell>Mind Charm</spell>.</quote> as found in the Kai-alchemy section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>the next Grand Master adventure</quote> with <quote>the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>(ie,</quote> with <quote>(i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed below.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote> according to <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>opposite and overleaf</quote> with <quote>below</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Added <quote>These skills include the basic use of Old Kingdom Spells such as <spell>Shield</spell>, <spell>Power Word</spell>, and <spell>Invisible Fist</spell>.</quote> as found in the Magi-magic section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote>These spells include <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, <spell>Levitation</spell>, and <spell>Mind Charm</spell>.</quote> as found in the Kai-alchemy section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>the next Grand Master adventure</quote> with <quote>the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
  
  
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced <quote>Magador you</quote> with <quote>Magador, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg Gold</quote> with <quote>e.g. Gold</quote>. Replaced <quote>map of the area</quote> with <quote>map of the Maakengorge and surrounding territories</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>adds 3 points</quote> with <quote>adds 5 points</quote>. Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a section about Gold Crowns which reads <quote>The currency of Magador is the Gold Crown. These are always carried in the Belt Pouch. It will hold a maximum of fifty Crowns.</quote> Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced <quote>Magador you</quote> with <quote>Magador, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg Gold</quote> with <quote>e.g. Gold</quote>. Replaced <quote>map of the area</quote> with <quote>map of the Maakengorge and surrounding territories</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>adds 3 points</quote> with <quote>adds 5 points</quote>. Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a section about Gold Crowns which reads <quote>The currency of Magador is the Gold Crown. These are always carried in the Belt Pouch. It will hold a maximum of fifty Crowns.</quote> Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> 32)</quote> with <quote>Lone Wolf (<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> 27)</quote>. Replaced <quote>adds 3 points</quote> with <quote>adds 8 points</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>to zero</quote> with <quote>to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> 32)</quote> with <quote>Lone Wolf (<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> 27)</quote>. Replaced <quote>adds 3 points</quote> with <quote>adds 8 points</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>to zero</quote> with <quote>to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
@@ -5872,7 +5872,7 @@
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiwisdm">Grand Master<ch.apos/>s Wisdom</a>) Moved this section of the book to its normal position after <a idref="imprvdsc">Improved Grand Master Disciplines</a>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Pick your four Grand</quote> with <quote>Pick your Grand</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiwisdm">Grand Master<ch.apos/>s Wisdom</a>) Moved this section of the book to its normal position after <a idref="imprvdsc">Improved Grand Master Disciplines</a>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Pick your four Grand</quote> with <quote>Pick your Grand</quote>.</p>
  
-       <p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>skyship Skyrider</quote> with <quote>skyship, <cite>Skyrider</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>scroll</quote> with <quote>Scroll</quote>. Replaced <quote>invisibility</quote> with <quote>Invisibility</quote>. Added <quote>(Record this Scroll as a Special Item that does not take up any space on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>skyship Skyrider</quote> with <quote>skyship, <cite>Skyrider</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>scroll</quote> with <quote>Scroll</quote>. Replaced <quote>invisibility</quote> with <quote>Invisibility</quote>. Added <quote>(Record this Scroll as a Special Item that does not take up any space on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect2">2</a>) Replaced <quote>animal kinship</quote> with <quote>Animal Kinship</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect3">3</a>) Replaced <quote>beyond is</quote> with <quote>beyond are</quote>. Replaced <quote>Nexus, and</quote> with <quote>Nexus and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sun Knight, or higher</quote> with <quote>Sun Knight or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) Replaced <quote>tier and</quote> with <quote>tier, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect2">2</a>) Replaced <quote>animal kinship</quote> with <quote>Animal Kinship</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect3">3</a>) Replaced <quote>beyond is</quote> with <quote>beyond are</quote>. Replaced <quote>Nexus, and</quote> with <quote>Nexus and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sun Knight, or higher</quote> with <quote>Sun Knight or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) Replaced <quote>tier and</quote> with <quote>tier, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
@@ -5896,7 +5896,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect31">31</a>) Replaced <quote>life force</quote> with <quote>life-force</quote>. Replaced <quote>prey on which</quote> with <quote>prey with which</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced <quote>huntmastery</quote> with <quote>Huntmastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>swarthy-face</quote> with <quote>swarthy-faced</quote>. Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Replaced <quote>Kraagenskul</quote> with <quote>Kraagensk<ch.ucirc/>l</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect31">31</a>) Replaced <quote>life force</quote> with <quote>life-force</quote>. Replaced <quote>prey on which</quote> with <quote>prey with which</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced <quote>huntmastery</quote> with <quote>Huntmastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>swarthy-face</quote> with <quote>swarthy-faced</quote>. Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Replaced <quote>Kraagenskul</quote> with <quote>Kraagensk<ch.ucirc/>l</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>Vortex</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>. Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>. Replaced <quote>add 5 to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score</quote> with <quote>restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>Vortex</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>. Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>. Replaced <quote>add 5 to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score</quote> with <quote>restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Replaced <quote>belt pouch</quote> with <quote>Belt Pouch</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Replaced <quote>curing</quote> with <quote>Curing</quote>. Replaced <quote>Vakovarian brigands</quote> with <quote>Vakovarian Brigands</quote>. Replaced <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Lightning Hand</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Replaced <quote>belt pouch</quote> with <quote>Belt Pouch</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Replaced <quote>curing</quote> with <quote>Curing</quote>. Replaced <quote>Vakovarian brigands</quote> with <quote>Vakovarian Brigands</quote>. Replaced <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Lightning Hand</quote>.</p>
@@ -5907,7 +5907,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect50">50</a>) Replaced <quote>them they</quote> with <quote>them, they</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect52">52</a>) Replaced <quote>psychic ability</quote> with <quote>psychic abilities</quote>. Replaced <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>. Replaced <quote>lair, then</quote> with <quote>lair; then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect50">50</a>) Replaced <quote>them they</quote> with <quote>them, they</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect52">52</a>) Replaced <quote>psychic ability</quote> with <quote>psychic abilities</quote>. Replaced <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>. Replaced <quote>lair, then</quote> with <quote>lair; then</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect54">54</a>) Replaced <quote>invisibility yet</quote> with <quote>invisibility, yet</quote>. Added <quote>Arch Druid Cadak is immune to Mindblast and Psi-surge, but he is vulnerable to Kai-surge.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect54">54</a>) Replaced <quote>invisibility yet</quote> with <quote>invisibility, yet</quote>. Added <quote>Arch Druid Cadak is immune to Mindblast and Psi-surge, but he is vulnerable to Kai-surge.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect55">55</a>) Replaced <quote>runic disc</quote> with <quote>Runic Disc</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>eagle eyes</quote> with <quote>eagle-eyes</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect57">57</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Net</quote>. Replaced <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>. Replaced <quote>A fluid gush of sticky strands shoot</quote> with <quote>A fluid gush of sticky strands shoots</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect55">55</a>) Replaced <quote>runic disc</quote> with <quote>Runic Disc</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>eagle eyes</quote> with <quote>eagle-eyes</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect57">57</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Net</quote>. Replaced <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>. Replaced <quote>A fluid gush of sticky strands shoot</quote> with <quote>A fluid gush of sticky strands shoots</quote>.</p>
@@ -5945,7 +5945,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect99">99</a>) Replaced all occurrences of <quote>jackals</quote> with <quote>Jackals</quote>. Replaced <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sun Knight, or higher</quote> with <quote>Sun Knight or higher</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Replaced <quote>t<ch.apos/>is</quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.apos/>tis</quote>. Replaced <quote>At first I, too, made</quote> with <quote>At first, I too made</quote>. Replaced <quote>hills and</quote> with <quote>hills, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect102">102</a>) Replaced <quote>investigate and your</quote> with <quote>investigate. Your</quote>. Replaced <quote>acolyte of Vashna</quote> with <quote>Acolyte of Vashna</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect99">99</a>) Replaced all occurrences of <quote>jackals</quote> with <quote>Jackals</quote>. Replaced <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sun Knight, or higher</quote> with <quote>Sun Knight or higher</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Replaced <quote>t<ch.apos/>is</quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.apos/>tis</quote>. Replaced <quote>At first I, too, made</quote> with <quote>At first, I too made</quote>. Replaced <quote>hills and</quote> with <quote>hills, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect102">102</a>) Replaced <quote>investigate and your</quote> with <quote>investigate. Your</quote>. Replaced <quote>acolyte of Vashna</quote> with <quote>Acolyte of Vashna</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect103">103</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>. Replaced <quote>add 5 to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score</quote> with <quote>restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect103">103</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>. Replaced <quote>add 5 to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score</quote> with <quote>restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect104">104</a>) Replaced <quote>gulley</quote> with <quote>gully</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect105">105</a>) Replaced <quote>Citystate</quote> with <quote>City-state</quote>. Replaced <quote>destoyed</quote> with <quote>destroyed</quote>. Replaced <quote>Casiorn, then</quote> with <quote>Casiorn, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>give rise for</quote> with <quote>give cause for</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect106">106</a>) Replaced <quote>life force</quote> with <quote>life-force</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon, or</quote> with <quote>Weapon or</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect104">104</a>) Replaced <quote>gulley</quote> with <quote>gully</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect105">105</a>) Replaced <quote>Citystate</quote> with <quote>City-state</quote>. Replaced <quote>destoyed</quote> with <quote>destroyed</quote>. Replaced <quote>Casiorn, then</quote> with <quote>Casiorn, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>give rise for</quote> with <quote>give cause for</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect106">106</a>) Replaced <quote>life force</quote> with <quote>life-force</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon, or</quote> with <quote>Weapon or</quote>.</p>
@@ -5954,12 +5954,12 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect109">109</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and draw an arrow</quote> with <quote>Bow and draw an Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow and the arrow</quote> with <quote>Bow and the Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>says, sneeringly</quote> with <quote>says, sneering</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect110">110</a>) Replaced <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect111">111</a>) Replaced <quote>Sun Lord, or higher</quote> with <quote>Sun Lord</quote> since Sun Lord is the highest available rank in this book. Replaced <quote>Kai-surge, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-surge and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect109">109</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and draw an arrow</quote> with <quote>Bow and draw an Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow and the arrow</quote> with <quote>Bow and the Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>says, sneeringly</quote> with <quote>says, sneering</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect110">110</a>) Replaced <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect111">111</a>) Replaced <quote>Sun Lord, or higher</quote> with <quote>Sun Lord</quote> since Sun Lord is the highest available rank in this book. Replaced <quote>Kai-surge, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-surge and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect112">112</a>) Replaced <quote>shore and</quote> with <quote>shore, and</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>jackals</quote> with <quote>Jackals</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Added <quote>If you are able to only eat 1 Meal, you lose only 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect112">112</a>) Replaced <quote>shore and</quote> with <quote>shore, and</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>jackals</quote> with <quote>Jackals</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Added <quote>If you are able to only eat 1 Meal, you lose only 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect113">113</a>) Replaced <quote>off-balance</quote> with <quote>off balance</quote>. Replaced <quote>them you</quote> with <quote>them, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>can and</quote> with <quote>can, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>heels, pausing</quote> with <quote>heels pausing</quote>. Replaced <quote>chase but</quote> with <quote>chase, but</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect113">113</a>) Replaced <quote>off-balance</quote> with <quote>off balance</quote>. Replaced <quote>them you</quote> with <quote>them, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>can and</quote> with <quote>can, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>heels, pausing</quote> with <quote>heels pausing</quote>. Replaced <quote>chase but</quote> with <quote>chase, but</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Replaced <quote>add 5 to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score</quote> with <quote>restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Replaced <quote>add 5 to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score</quote> with <quote>restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect120">120</a>) Replaced <quote>bow, draw an arrow</quote> with <quote>Bow, draw an Arrow</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Replaced <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote> as per Joe Dever<ch.apos/>s original manuscript.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect120">120</a>) Replaced <quote>bow, draw an arrow</quote> with <quote>Bow, draw an Arrow</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Replaced <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote> as per Joe Dever<ch.apos/>s original manuscript.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Lightning Hand</quote>. Replaced replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote>. Replaced <quote>offguard</quote> with <quote>off-guard</quote>. Added <quote>Arch Druid Cadak is immune to Mindblast and Psi-surge, but he is vulnerable to Kai-surge.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Lightning Hand</quote>. Replaced replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote>. Replaced <quote>offguard</quote> with <quote>off-guard</quote>. Added <quote>Arch Druid Cadak is immune to Mindblast and Psi-surge, but he is vulnerable to Kai-surge.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Replaced <quote>adgana</quote> with <quote>Adgana</quote>. Replaced <quote>long discordant</quote> with <quote>long, discordant</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect125">125</a>) Replaced <quote>far sinister</quote> with <quote>far more sinister</quote>. Replaced <quote>psi-screen</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect127">127</a>) Removed the quotation marks from around <quote>Levitation</quote>. Replaced replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote>. Removed the choices at the end since they are superfluous: Lone Wolf must have Kai-alchemy to reach this section. The choices read:</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Replaced <quote>adgana</quote> with <quote>Adgana</quote>. Replaced <quote>long discordant</quote> with <quote>long, discordant</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect125">125</a>) Replaced <quote>far sinister</quote> with <quote>far more sinister</quote>. Replaced <quote>psi-screen</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect127">127</a>) Removed the quotation marks from around <quote>Levitation</quote>. Replaced replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote>. Removed the choices at the end since they are superfluous: Lone Wolf must have Kai-alchemy to reach this section. The choices read:</p>
@@ -5978,25 +5978,25 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai Blast</quote> with <quote>Kai-blast</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect133">133</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Telegnosis, and</quote> with <quote>Telegnosis and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Discipline, or</quote> with <quote>Discipline or</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect134">134</a>) Replaced <quote>acolyte Elder</quote> with <quote>Elder</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai Blast</quote> with <quote>Kai-blast</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect133">133</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Telegnosis, and</quote> with <quote>Telegnosis and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Discipline, or</quote> with <quote>Discipline or</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect134">134</a>) Replaced <quote>acolyte Elder</quote> with <quote>Elder</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect135">135</a>) Added <quote>Arch Druid Cadak is immune to Mindblast and Psi-surge, but he is vulnerable to Kai-surge.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect135">135</a>) Added <quote>Arch Druid Cadak is immune to Mindblast and Psi-surge, but he is vulnerable to Kai-surge.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect136">136</a>) Replaced <quote>invisibility</quote> with <quote>Invisibility</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Removed the quotation marks around <quote><spell>Mind Charm</spell></quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect137">137</a>) Replaced <quote>unconscious and</quote> with <quote>unconscious, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>inside, then you</quote> with <quote>inside, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>If, before</quote> with <quote>If before</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect138">138</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect139">139</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote> as per Joe Dever<ch.apos/>s original manuscript.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect140">140</a>) Replaced <quote>battle frenzy</quote> with <quote>battle-frenzy</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect141">141</a>) Replaced <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect136">136</a>) Replaced <quote>invisibility</quote> with <quote>Invisibility</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Removed the quotation marks around <quote><spell>Mind Charm</spell></quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect137">137</a>) Replaced <quote>unconscious and</quote> with <quote>unconscious, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>inside, then you</quote> with <quote>inside, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>If, before</quote> with <quote>If before</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect138">138</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect139">139</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote> as per Joe Dever<ch.apos/>s original manuscript.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect140">140</a>) Replaced <quote>battle frenzy</quote> with <quote>battle-frenzy</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect141">141</a>) Replaced <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Replaced <quote>add 5 to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score</quote> with <quote>restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect143">143</a>) Replaced <quote>we celebrate</quote> with <quote>We celebrate</quote>. Replaced <quote>acolytes of Vashna</quote> with <quote>Acolytes of Vashna</quote>. Added <quote> (these bonuses are cumulative)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Replaced <quote>add 5 to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score</quote> with <quote>restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect143">143</a>) Replaced <quote>we celebrate</quote> with <quote>We celebrate</quote>. Replaced <quote>acolytes of Vashna</quote> with <quote>Acolytes of Vashna</quote>. Added <quote> (these bonuses are cumulative)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect144">144</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>. Replaced <quote>swoop</quote> with <quote>swoops</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect146">146</a>) Replaced <quote>Telegnosis, and</quote> with <quote>Telegnosis and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect147">147</a>) Replaced <quote>streetfighters</quote> with <quote>street-fighters</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect149">149</a>) Replaced <quote>command and</quote> with <quote>command, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect144">144</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>. Replaced <quote>swoop</quote> with <quote>swoops</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect146">146</a>) Replaced <quote>Telegnosis, and</quote> with <quote>Telegnosis and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect147">147</a>) Replaced <quote>streetfighters</quote> with <quote>street-fighters</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect149">149</a>) Replaced <quote>command and</quote> with <quote>command, and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect150">150</a>) Replaced <quote>hilltrack</quote> with <quote>hill track</quote>. Added <quote> (these bonuses are cumulative)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect150">150</a>) Replaced <quote>hilltrack</quote> with <quote>hill track</quote>. Added <quote> (these bonuses are cumulative)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Replaced <quote>mineshaft</quote> with <quote>mine shaft</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect152">152</a>) Replaced <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote> as per Joe Dever<ch.apos/>s original manuscript.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect153">153</a>) Replaced <quote>If you do not possess these skills, or if you have yet to attain the rank of Sun Lord,</quote> with <quote>Otherwise,</quote>. Replaced <quote>Telegnosis, and</quote> with <quote>Telegnosis and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect154">154</a>) Replaced <quote>guttering</quote> with <quote>gutter</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Replaced <quote>mineshaft</quote> with <quote>mine shaft</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect152">152</a>) Replaced <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote> as per Joe Dever<ch.apos/>s original manuscript.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect153">153</a>) Replaced <quote>If you do not possess these skills, or if you have yet to attain the rank of Sun Lord,</quote> with <quote>Otherwise,</quote>. Replaced <quote>Telegnosis, and</quote> with <quote>Telegnosis and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect154">154</a>) Replaced <quote>guttering</quote> with <quote>gutter</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect155">155</a>) Added <quote>These nutritious blossoms have no healing properties.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect155">155</a>) Added <quote>These nutritious blossoms have no healing properties.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect157">157</a>) Replaced <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect158">158</a>) Replaced <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect159">159</a>) Replaced <quote>and it makes</quote> with <quote>which makes</quote>. Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect157">157</a>) Replaced <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect158">158</a>) Replaced <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect159">159</a>) Replaced <quote>and it makes</quote> with <quote>which makes</quote>. Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>.</p>
@@ -6020,7 +6020,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>tunic, and</quote> with <quote>tunic and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Replaced <quote>kilometre</quote> with <quote>mile</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect188">188</a>) Replaced <quote>quivers and</quote> with <quote>quivers, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>tunic, and</quote> with <quote>tunic and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Replaced <quote>kilometre</quote> with <quote>mile</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect188">188</a>) Replaced <quote>quivers and</quote> with <quote>quivers, and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect189">189</a>) Replaced <quote>In addition to the loyal servants, there are two Dwellers of the Abyss.</quote> with <quote>I possess two Dwellers of the Abyss. My loyal servants are equal in number to the months in a Magnamund year, less the number of my Dwellers of the Abyss.</quote> in harmony with Mongoose Publishing<ch.apos/>s revised text of this section. Deleted <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>In addition to the loyal servants, there are two Dwellers of the Abyss.<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect189">189</a>) Replaced <quote>In addition to the loyal servants, there are two Dwellers of the Abyss.</quote> with <quote>I possess two Dwellers of the Abyss. My loyal servants are equal in number to the months in a Magnamund year, less the number of my Dwellers of the Abyss.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Deleted <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>In addition to the loyal servants, there are two Dwellers of the Abyss.<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect190">190</a>) Replaced <quote>cloak and</quote> with <quote>cloak, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect193">193</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect194">194</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>mouth, then</quote> with <quote>mouth; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>pass, then</quote> with <quote>pass; then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect190">190</a>) Replaced <quote>cloak and</quote> with <quote>cloak, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect193">193</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect194">194</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>mouth, then</quote> with <quote>mouth; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>pass, then</quote> with <quote>pass; then</quote>.</p>
@@ -6048,7 +6048,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect226">226</a>) Replaced <quote>furrier<ch.apos/>s shop</quote> with <quote>furriers<ch.apos/> shop</quote>. Replaced <quote>mitts</quote> with <quote>Mitts</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>cloaks</quote> with <quote>Cloaks</quote>. Replaced <quote>corvayl</quote> with <quote>Corvayl</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>pelts</quote> in the sale list with <quote>Pelts</quote>. Replaced <quote>White wolf</quote> with <quote>White Wolf</quote>. Replaced <quote>hides</quote> with <quote>Hides</quote>. Replaced <quote>furs, or</quote> with <quote>furs or</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect227">227</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>man, clad in furs clutching</quote> with <quote>man clad in furs and clutching</quote>. Replaced <quote>Telegnosis, and</quote> with <quote>Telegnosis and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect228">228</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced <quote>maniacally, <ch.lsquot/>You</quote> with <quote>maniacally. <ch.lsquot/>You</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect226">226</a>) Replaced <quote>furrier<ch.apos/>s shop</quote> with <quote>furriers<ch.apos/> shop</quote>. Replaced <quote>mitts</quote> with <quote>Mitts</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>cloaks</quote> with <quote>Cloaks</quote>. Replaced <quote>corvayl</quote> with <quote>Corvayl</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>pelts</quote> in the sale list with <quote>Pelts</quote>. Replaced <quote>White wolf</quote> with <quote>White Wolf</quote>. Replaced <quote>hides</quote> with <quote>Hides</quote>. Replaced <quote>furs, or</quote> with <quote>furs or</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect227">227</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>man, clad in furs clutching</quote> with <quote>man clad in furs and clutching</quote>. Replaced <quote>Telegnosis, and</quote> with <quote>Telegnosis and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect228">228</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced <quote>maniacally, <ch.lsquot/>You</quote> with <quote>maniacally. <ch.lsquot/>You</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect229">229</a>) Replaced <quote>Your Kai blast</quote> with <quote>Your devastating blast</quote>. Replaced <quote>weakened by Kai blast</quote> with <quote>weakened by psychic attack</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>add 5 to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score</quote> with <quote>restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect229">229</a>) Replaced <quote>Your Kai blast</quote> with <quote>Your devastating blast</quote>. Replaced <quote>weakened by Kai blast</quote> with <quote>weakened by psychic attack</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>add 5 to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score</quote> with <quote>restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect230">230</a>) Replaced <quote>horseshoe circle</quote> with <quote>horseshoe shape</quote>. Replaced <quote>wintery</quote> with <quote>wintry</quote>. Replaced <quote>kilometre</quote> with <quote>mile</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect231">231</a>) Replaced <quote>eagle eyes</quote> with <quote>eagle-eyes</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Replaced <quote>cloud of crypt spawn</quote> with <quote>cloud of Crypt Spawn</quote>. Replaced <quote>Crypt spawn</quote> with <quote>Crypt Spawn</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect230">230</a>) Replaced <quote>horseshoe circle</quote> with <quote>horseshoe shape</quote>. Replaced <quote>wintery</quote> with <quote>wintry</quote>. Replaced <quote>kilometre</quote> with <quote>mile</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect231">231</a>) Replaced <quote>eagle eyes</quote> with <quote>eagle-eyes</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Replaced <quote>cloud of crypt spawn</quote> with <quote>cloud of Crypt Spawn</quote>. Replaced <quote>Crypt spawn</quote> with <quote>Crypt Spawn</quote>.</p>
@@ -6078,7 +6078,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect263">263</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect264">264</a>) Replaced <quote>psi-screen</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>. Replaced <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote> as per Joe Dever<ch.apos/>s original manuscript.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect265">265</a>) Replaced <quote>acolyte Elder</quote> with <quote>Acolyte Elder</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect263">263</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect264">264</a>) Replaced <quote>psi-screen</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>. Replaced <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote> as per Joe Dever<ch.apos/>s original manuscript.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect265">265</a>) Replaced <quote>acolyte Elder</quote> with <quote>Acolyte Elder</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) Replaced <quote>offguard</quote> with <quote>off-guard</quote>. Added <quote>Arch Druid Cadak is immune to Mindblast and Psi-surge, but he is vulnerable to Kai-surge.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) Replaced <quote>offguard</quote> with <quote>off-guard</quote>. Added <quote>Arch Druid Cadak is immune to Mindblast and Psi-surge, but he is vulnerable to Kai-surge.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect268">268</a>) Replaced <quote>Vakovarian brigands</quote> with <quote>Vakovarian Brigands</quote>. Replaced <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect269">269</a>) Replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote>. Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Mind Charm</quote>. Replaced <quote>be<ch.emdash/>a lowly acolyte of Vashna</quote> with <quote>be: a lowly Acolyte of Vashna</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect272">272</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect268">268</a>) Replaced <quote>Vakovarian brigands</quote> with <quote>Vakovarian Brigands</quote>. Replaced <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect269">269</a>) Replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote>. Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Mind Charm</quote>. Replaced <quote>be<ch.emdash/>a lowly acolyte of Vashna</quote> with <quote>be: a lowly Acolyte of Vashna</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect272">272</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
@@ -6096,7 +6096,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect287">287</a>) Replaced <quote>gold crowns</quote> with <quote>Gold Crowns</quote>. Replaced <quote>lop-sided</quote> with <quote>lopsided</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect288">288</a>) Replaced <quote>Elder-magi</quote> with <quote>Elder Magi</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect290">290</a>) Replaced <quote>belt pouch</quote> with <quote>Belt Pouch</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect287">287</a>) Replaced <quote>gold crowns</quote> with <quote>Gold Crowns</quote>. Replaced <quote>lop-sided</quote> with <quote>lopsided</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect288">288</a>) Replaced <quote>Elder-magi</quote> with <quote>Elder Magi</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect290">290</a>) Replaced <quote>belt pouch</quote> with <quote>Belt Pouch</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect293">293</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>Backpack (up to a maximum of 2 Meals).</quote> with <quote>Backpack. (You may take up to a maximum of 2 Meals. These nutritious blossoms have no healing properties.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect293">293</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>Backpack (up to a maximum of 2 Meals).</quote> with <quote>Backpack. (You may take up to a maximum of 2 Meals. These nutritious blossoms have no healing properties.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect294">294</a>) Replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from <quote>Mind Charm</quote>. Replaced <quote>eyes, then</quote> with <quote>eyes; then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect295">295</a>) Replaced <quote>throng who are kneeling</quote> with <quote>throng kneeling</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect296">296</a>) Replaced <quote>ever-nearer</quote> with <quote>ever nearer</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect294">294</a>) Replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from <quote>Mind Charm</quote>. Replaced <quote>eyes, then</quote> with <quote>eyes; then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect295">295</a>) Replaced <quote>throng who are kneeling</quote> with <quote>throng kneeling</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect296">296</a>) Replaced <quote>ever-nearer</quote> with <quote>ever nearer</quote>.</p>
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         <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far</a>) Replaced <quote>no Kai lord</quote> with <quote>no Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Replaced <quote>north-east</quote> with <quote>northeast</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>freestate</quote> with <quote>Freeland</quote>. Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>Naar<ch.emdash/>the King</quote> with <quote>Naar, the King</quote>. Replaced <quote>Age of the Old Kingdoms</quote> with <quote>Age of War</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master Disciplines, and grasp</quote> with <quote>Grand Master Disciplines and grasp</quote>. Replaced <quote>monastery of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Monastery of the Kai</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>the Monastery</quote> with <quote>the monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>chasm of doom</quote> with <quote>Chasm of Doom</quote>. Replaced <quote>comprised</quote> with <quote>were part of</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>demoness</quote> with <quote>Demoness</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far</a>) Replaced <quote>no Kai lord</quote> with <quote>no Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Replaced <quote>north-east</quote> with <quote>northeast</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>freestate</quote> with <quote>Freeland</quote>. Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>Naar<ch.emdash/>the King</quote> with <quote>Naar, the King</quote>. Replaced <quote>Age of the Old Kingdoms</quote> with <quote>Age of War</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master Disciplines, and grasp</quote> with <quote>Grand Master Disciplines and grasp</quote>. Replaced <quote>monastery of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Monastery of the Kai</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>the Monastery</quote> with <quote>the monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>chasm of doom</quote> with <quote>Chasm of Doom</quote>. Replaced <quote>comprised</quote> with <quote>were part of</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>demoness</quote> with <quote>Demoness</quote>.</p>
  
-       <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote>. Removed <quote>on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf Kai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite></quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Magnakai</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Added <quote>Dagger of Vashna</quote> and <quote>Helshezag</quote> to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the <cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite> and <cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite> books in harmony with the Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote>. Removed <quote>on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf Kai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite></quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Magnakai</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Added <quote>Dagger of Vashna</quote> and <quote>Helshezag</quote> to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the <cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite> and <cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite> books in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
  
-       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>(ie,</quote> with <quote>(i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>gods Kai and Ishir</quote> with <quote>Gods Kai and Ishir</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed below.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing editions. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>opposite and overleaf</quote> with <quote>below</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Added <quote>These skills include the basic use of Old Kingdom Spells such as <spell>Shield</spell>, <spell>Power Word</spell>, and <spell>Invisible Fist</spell>.</quote> as found in the Magi-magic section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote>These spells include <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, <spell>Levitation</spell>, and <spell>Mind Charm</spell>.</quote> as found in the Kai-alchemy section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>the next Grand Master adventure</quote> with <quote>the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>(ie,</quote> with <quote>(i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>gods Kai and Ishir</quote> with <quote>Gods Kai and Ishir</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed below.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>opposite and overleaf</quote> with <quote>below</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Added <quote>These skills include the basic use of Old Kingdom Spells such as <spell>Shield</spell>, <spell>Power Word</spell>, and <spell>Invisible Fist</spell>.</quote> as found in the Magi-magic section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote>These spells include <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, <spell>Levitation</spell>, and <spell>Mind Charm</spell>.</quote> as found in the Kai-alchemy section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>the next Grand Master adventure</quote> with <quote>the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
  
  
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced <quote>your Monastery</quote> with <quote>your monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg Gold</quote> with <quote>e.g. Gold</quote>. Replaced <quote>map of the area</quote> with <quote>map of Ixia and the Hardlands</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>adds 3 points</quote> with <quote>adds 5 points</quote>. Added a section about Gold Crowns which reads <quote>These are always carried in the Belt Pouch. It will hold a maximum of fifty Crowns. The currency of Lencia is the Lune. The exchange rate is 4 Lune for 1 Gold Crown.</quote> Replaced <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg Gold Dagger</quote> with <quote>(e.g. Gold Dagger</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>BROADSWORD</quote> with <quote>Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>BOW</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUIVER</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>DAGGER</quote> with <quote>Dagger</quote>. Replaced <quote>SWORD</quote> with <quote>Sword</quote>. Replaced <quote>MEALS</quote> with <quote>Meals</quote>. Replaced <quote>ROPE</quote> with <quote>Rope</quote>. Replaced <quote>POTION OF LAUMSPUR</quote> with <quote>Potion of Laumspur</quote>. Replaced <quote>AXE</quote> with <quote>Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced <quote>your Monastery</quote> with <quote>your monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg Gold</quote> with <quote>e.g. Gold</quote>. Replaced <quote>map of the area</quote> with <quote>map of Ixia and the Hardlands</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>adds 3 points</quote> with <quote>adds 5 points</quote>. Added a section about Gold Crowns which reads <quote>These are always carried in the Belt Pouch. It will hold a maximum of fifty Crowns. The currency of Lencia is the Lune. The exchange rate is 4 Lune for 1 Gold Crown.</quote> Replaced <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg Gold Dagger</quote> with <quote>(e.g. Gold Dagger</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>BROADSWORD</quote> with <quote>Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>BOW</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUIVER</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>DAGGER</quote> with <quote>Dagger</quote>. Replaced <quote>SWORD</quote> with <quote>Sword</quote>. Replaced <quote>MEALS</quote> with <quote>Meals</quote>. Replaced <quote>ROPE</quote> with <quote>Rope</quote>. Replaced <quote>POTION OF LAUMSPUR</quote> with <quote>Potion of Laumspur</quote>. Replaced <quote>AXE</quote> with <quote>Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> 32)</quote> with <quote>Lone Wolf (<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> 27)</quote>. Replaced <quote>adds 3 points</quote> with <quote>adds 8 points</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>to zero</quote> with <quote>to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="levels">Levels of Kai Grand Mastership</a>) Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>rank and titles</quote> with <quote>ranks and titles</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> 32)</quote> with <quote>Lone Wolf (<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> 27)</quote>. Replaced <quote>adds 3 points</quote> with <quote>adds 8 points</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>to zero</quote> with <quote>to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="levels">Levels of Kai Grand Mastership</a>) Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>rank and titles</quote> with <quote>ranks and titles</quote>.</p>
  
-       <p>(<a idref="imprvdsc">Improved Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Kai-Blast</quote> with <quote>Kai-blast</quote>. Replaced <quote>surface, eg:</quote> with <quote>surfaces, e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Surge</quote> with <quote>Kai-surge</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>arrow, or arrow-like</quote> with <quote>Arrow or Arrow-like</quote>. Replaced <quote>lava and</quote> with <quote>lava, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>body-weight</quote> with <quote>body weight</quote>. Added <quote>(7 Disciplines)</quote> after <quote>Sun Lord</quote>. Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Lightning Hand</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>ie. lightning</quote> with <quote>i.e. lightning</quote>. Replaced <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Improved Grand Master Disciplines<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote><cite>Improved Grand Master Disciplines</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spells</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell <ch.lsquot/>Lightning Hand<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Lightning Hand</spell></quote>. Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spells</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>ie. they</quote> with <quote>i.e. they</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>whilst fighting an enemy in unarmed combat</quote> with <quote>whilst fighting an enemy</quote> in line with the recent Mongoose Publishing editions.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="imprvdsc">Improved Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Kai-Blast</quote> with <quote>Kai-blast</quote>. Replaced <quote>surface, eg:</quote> with <quote>surfaces, e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Surge</quote> with <quote>Kai-surge</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>arrow, or arrow-like</quote> with <quote>Arrow or Arrow-like</quote>. Replaced <quote>lava and</quote> with <quote>lava, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>body-weight</quote> with <quote>body weight</quote>. Added <quote>(7 Disciplines)</quote> after <quote>Sun Lord</quote>. Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Lightning Hand</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>ie. lightning</quote> with <quote>i.e. lightning</quote>. Replaced <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Improved Grand Master Disciplines<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote><cite>Improved Grand Master Disciplines</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spells</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell <ch.lsquot/>Lightning Hand<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Lightning Hand</spell></quote>. Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spells</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>ie. they</quote> with <quote>i.e. they</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>whilst fighting an enemy in unarmed combat</quote> with <quote>whilst fighting an enemy</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiwisdm">Grand Master<ch.apos/>s Wisdom</a>) Moved this section of the book to its normal position after <a idref="imprvdsc">Improved Grand Master Disciplines</a>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Pick your four Grand</quote> with <quote>Pick your Grand</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiwisdm">Grand Master<ch.apos/>s Wisdom</a>) Moved this section of the book to its normal position after <a idref="imprvdsc">Improved Grand Master Disciplines</a>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Pick your four Grand</quote> with <quote>Pick your Grand</quote>.</p>
  
@@ -5909,7 +5909,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect18">18</a>) Replaced <quote>Skark oil</quote> with <quote>skark oil</quote>. Began a new paragraph before <quote>Do not fear,<ch.ellips/></quote>. Replaced <quote>you reply, <ch.lsquot/>I shall soon return.<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote>you reply. <ch.lsquot/>I shall soon return.<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>fought, Captain</quote> with <quote>fought, captain</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect19">19</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>attained, above</quote> with <quote>attained above</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect20">20</a>) Replaced <quote>now-open</quote> with <quote>now open</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>free-standing</quote> with <quote>freestanding</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect18">18</a>) Replaced <quote>Skark oil</quote> with <quote>skark oil</quote>. Began a new paragraph before <quote>Do not fear,<ch.ellips/></quote>. Replaced <quote>you reply, <ch.lsquot/>I shall soon return.<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote>you reply. <ch.lsquot/>I shall soon return.<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>fought, Captain</quote> with <quote>fought, captain</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect19">19</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>attained, above</quote> with <quote>attained above</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect20">20</a>) Replaced <quote>now-open</quote> with <quote>now open</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>free-standing</quote> with <quote>freestanding</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect22">22</a>) Replaced <quote>freestate</quote> with <quote>Freeland state</quote>. Replaced <quote>in previous Lone Wolf adventures</quote> with <quote>in any previous <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> adventures</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you have not</quote> with <quote>If you did not</quote>. Replaced <quote>King<ch.apos/> greeting, then</quote> with <quote>King<ch.apos/>s greeting; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Lencian capital</quote> with <quote>the great northern Lencian port</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>Cetza, or</quote> with <quote>Cetza or</quote>. Replaced <quote>my Lord</quote> with <quote>my lord</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect22">22</a>) Replaced <quote>freestate</quote> with <quote>Freeland state</quote>. Replaced <quote>in previous Lone Wolf adventures</quote> with <quote>in any previous <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> adventures</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you have not</quote> with <quote>If you did not</quote>. Replaced <quote>King<ch.apos/> greeting, then</quote> with <quote>King<ch.apos/>s greeting; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Lencian capital</quote> with <quote>the great northern Lencian port</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>Cetza, or</quote> with <quote>Cetza or</quote>. Replaced <quote>my Lord</quote> with <quote>my lord</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect23">23</a>) Replaced <quote>Ixian undead</quote> with <quote>Ixian Undead</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect24">24</a>) Replaced <quote>your psi-screen</quote> with <quote>your Psi-screen</quote>. Replaced <quote>head in which</quote> with <quote>head from which</quote>. Replaced <quote>Bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Replaced <quote>them, or</quote> with <quote>them or</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect25">25</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect23">23</a>) Replaced <quote>Ixian undead</quote> with <quote>Ixian Undead</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect24">24</a>) Replaced <quote>your psi-screen</quote> with <quote>your Psi-screen</quote>. Replaced <quote>head in which</quote> with <quote>head from which</quote>. Replaced <quote>Bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Replaced <quote>them, or</quote> with <quote>them or</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect25">25</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>.</p>
@@ -5926,7 +5926,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Replaced <quote>Upon the instant</quote> with <quote>At the instant</quote>. Replaced <quote>demonlord<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Demonlord<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect42">42</a>) Replaced <quote>Ixian undead</quote> with <quote>Ixian Undead</quote>. Replaced <quote>feet first</quote> with <quote>feet-first</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect44">44</a>) Replaced <quote>to try and</quote> with <quote>to try to</quote>. Replaced <quote>intensity and, for</quote> with <quote>intensity, and for</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Replaced <quote>Upon the instant</quote> with <quote>At the instant</quote>. Replaced <quote>demonlord<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Demonlord<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect42">42</a>) Replaced <quote>Ixian undead</quote> with <quote>Ixian Undead</quote>. Replaced <quote>feet first</quote> with <quote>feet-first</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect44">44</a>) Replaced <quote>to try and</quote> with <quote>to try to</quote>. Replaced <quote>intensity and, for</quote> with <quote>intensity, and for</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect45">45</a>) Added <quote>This being is immune to all forms of psychic attack, except Kai-surge and Kai-blast.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>If, at</quote> with <quote>If at</quote>. Replaced <quote>fight, you</quote> with <quote>fight you</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect45">45</a>) Added <quote>This being is immune to all forms of psychic attack, except Kai-surge and Kai-blast.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>If, at</quote> with <quote>If at</quote>. Replaced <quote>fight, you</quote> with <quote>fight you</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect46">46</a>) Replaced <quote>power word Battlespell</quote> with <quote>battle-spell <spell>Power Word</spell></quote>. Replaced <quote>power word<ch.emdash/>Gloar!<ch.emdash/>at</quote> with <quote>power-word <spell>Gloar!</spell> at</quote>. Replaced <quote>keyhole, then</quote> with <quote>keyhole; then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect48">48</a>) Replaced <quote>battle cry</quote> with <quote>battle-cry</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect50">50</a>) Replaced <quote>Ixian undead</quote> with <quote>Ixian Undead</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect46">46</a>) Replaced <quote>power word Battlespell</quote> with <quote>battle-spell <spell>Power Word</spell></quote>. Replaced <quote>power word<ch.emdash/>Gloar!<ch.emdash/>at</quote> with <quote>power-word <spell>Gloar!</spell> at</quote>. Replaced <quote>keyhole, then</quote> with <quote>keyhole; then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect48">48</a>) Replaced <quote>battle cry</quote> with <quote>battle-cry</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect50">50</a>) Replaced <quote>Ixian undead</quote> with <quote>Ixian Undead</quote>.</p>
@@ -5940,18 +5940,18 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect61">61</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/><spell>Sense Evil</spell><ch.emdash/>you</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Sense Evil</spell> you</quote>. Replaced <quote>he splutters, <ch.lsquot/>it<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>he splutters. <ch.lsquot/>It<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect62">62</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>crystal spire</quote> with <quote>Crystal Spire</quote>. Replaced <quote>shockwave</quote> with <quote>shock wave</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect63">63</a>) Replaced <quote>Backpack items</quote> with <quote>Backpack Items</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect61">61</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/><spell>Sense Evil</spell><ch.emdash/>you</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Sense Evil</spell> you</quote>. Replaced <quote>he splutters, <ch.lsquot/>it<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>he splutters. <ch.lsquot/>It<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect62">62</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>crystal spire</quote> with <quote>Crystal Spire</quote>. Replaced <quote>shockwave</quote> with <quote>shock wave</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect63">63</a>) Replaced <quote>Backpack items</quote> with <quote>Backpack Items</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect64">64</a>) Replaced <quote>the shimmering curtain of light by which you arrived here</quote> with <quote>the shimmering curtain of light you saw before you arrived here</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>Sommerswerd, and</quote> with <quote>Sommerswerd and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Item, or</quote> with <quote>Item or</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect64">64</a>) Replaced <quote>the shimmering curtain of light by which you arrived here</quote> with <quote>the shimmering curtain of light you saw before you arrived here</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>Sommerswerd, and</quote> with <quote>Sommerswerd and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Item, or</quote> with <quote>Item or</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect66">66</a>) Replaced <quote>Hard a-port!</quote> with <quote>Hard a<ch.apos/>port!</quote>. Replaced <quote>swig, then</quote> with <quote>swig, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect66">66</a>) Replaced <quote>Hard a-port!</quote> with <quote>Hard a<ch.apos/>port!</quote>. Replaced <quote>swig, then</quote> with <quote>swig, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect67">67</a>) Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>. Replaced <quote>Chaos horde</quote> with <quote>Chaos-horde</quote>. Added <quote>Unless you have Grand Weaponmastery and are a Sun Knight or higher, you may not use a two-handed weapon (i.e. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, or Spear) for this combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect67">67</a>) Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>. Replaced <quote>Chaos horde</quote> with <quote>Chaos-horde</quote>. Added <quote>Unless you have Grand Weaponmastery and are a Sun Knight or higher, you may not use a two-handed weapon (i.e. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, or Spear) for this combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect68">68</a>) Replaced <quote>all of your Backpack items</quote> with <quote>all of your Backpack Items</quote>. Replaced <quote>wildly, then</quote> with <quote>wildly; then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect69">69</a>) Changed the illustration from being numbered (Illustration V) to an unnumbered minor illustration similar to how puzzles are handled in other books. Replaced <quote>following grid</quote> with <quote>grid</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect71">71</a>) Replaced <quote>Grand Nexus, and</quote> with <quote>Grand Nexus and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect72">72</a>) Replaced <quote>demonlord</quote> with <quote>Demonlord</quote>. Replaced <quote>senses and, in</quote> with <quote>senses, and in</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect68">68</a>) Replaced <quote>all of your Backpack items</quote> with <quote>all of your Backpack Items</quote>. Replaced <quote>wildly, then</quote> with <quote>wildly; then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect69">69</a>) Changed the illustration from being numbered (Illustration V) to an unnumbered minor illustration similar to how puzzles are handled in other books. Replaced <quote>following grid</quote> with <quote>grid</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect71">71</a>) Replaced <quote>Grand Nexus, and</quote> with <quote>Grand Nexus and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect72">72</a>) Replaced <quote>demonlord</quote> with <quote>Demonlord</quote>. Replaced <quote>senses and, in</quote> with <quote>senses, and in</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect73">73</a>) Replaced <quote>main mast</quote> with <quote>mainmast</quote>. Replaced <quote>fifteen thousand</quote> with <quote>eleven thousand</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect73">73</a>) Replaced <quote>main mast</quote> with <quote>mainmast</quote>. Replaced <quote>fifteen thousand</quote> with <quote>eleven thousand</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect74">74</a>) Replaced <quote>Bulkhead door</quote> with <quote>Bulkhead Door</quote>. Replaced <quote>zero</quote> with <quote>zero or below</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect75">75</a>) Replaced all occurrences of <quote>demonlord</quote> with <quote>Demonlord</quote>. Replaced <quote>delete this weapon</quote> with <quote>delete this Weapon</quote>. Replaced <quote>pre-emptive</quote> with <quote>preemptive</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Replaced <quote>plan you</quote> with <quote>plan, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>barrels and</quote> with <quote>barrels, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect74">74</a>) Replaced <quote>Bulkhead door</quote> with <quote>Bulkhead Door</quote>. Replaced <quote>zero</quote> with <quote>zero or below</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect75">75</a>) Replaced all occurrences of <quote>demonlord</quote> with <quote>Demonlord</quote>. Replaced <quote>delete this weapon</quote> with <quote>delete this Weapon</quote>. Replaced <quote>pre-emptive</quote> with <quote>preemptive</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Replaced <quote>plan you</quote> with <quote>plan, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>barrels and</quote> with <quote>barrels, and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect77">77</a>) Reduced the illustration number from VI to V (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>). Added <quote>The Power Spike is a magical Dagger.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect77">77</a>) Reduced the illustration number from VI to V (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>). Added <quote>The Power Spike is a magical Dagger.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect79">79</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>despatch</quote> with <quote>dispatch</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect80">80</a>) Replaced <quote>creamy-coloured</quote> with <quote>cream-coloured</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect81">81</a>) Replaced <quote>Bulkhead door</quote> with <quote>Bulkhead Door</quote>. Replaced <quote>zero</quote> with <quote>zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>power word</quote> with <quote>power-word</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect79">79</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>despatch</quote> with <quote>dispatch</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect80">80</a>) Replaced <quote>creamy-coloured</quote> with <quote>cream-coloured</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect81">81</a>) Replaced <quote>Bulkhead door</quote> with <quote>Bulkhead Door</quote>. Replaced <quote>zero</quote> with <quote>zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>power word</quote> with <quote>power-word</quote>.</p>
@@ -5961,7 +5961,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect89">89</a>) Replaced <quote>at its centre</quote> with <quote>from its centre</quote>. Replaced <quote>round, by</quote> with <quote>round by</quote>. Reduced the illustration number from VII to VI (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>).</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect90">90</a>) Replaced <quote>raising a Deathstaff</quote> with <quote>raising the Deathstaff</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect92">92</a>) Replaced <quote>its feet, then</quote> with <quote>its feet; then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect89">89</a>) Replaced <quote>at its centre</quote> with <quote>from its centre</quote>. Replaced <quote>round, by</quote> with <quote>round by</quote>. Reduced the illustration number from VII to VI (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>).</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect90">90</a>) Replaced <quote>raising a Deathstaff</quote> with <quote>raising the Deathstaff</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect92">92</a>) Replaced <quote>its feet, then</quote> with <quote>its feet; then</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect96">96</a>) Added <quote>If you used the Sommerswerd, <!--link-text-->turn to 238<!--/link-text-->.</quote>. Added <quote>Kajarda are undead.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect96">96</a>) Added <quote>If you used the Sommerswerd, <!--link-text-->turn to 238<!--/link-text-->.</quote>. Added <quote>Kajarda are undead.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect97">97</a>) Replaced <quote>swig, then</quote> with <quote>swig, and then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect101">101</a>) Replaced <quote>korlinium scabbard</quote> with <quote>Korlinium Scabbard</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect103">103</a>) Replaced <quote>bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect97">97</a>) Replaced <quote>swig, then</quote> with <quote>swig, and then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect101">101</a>) Replaced <quote>korlinium scabbard</quote> with <quote>Korlinium Scabbard</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect103">103</a>) Replaced <quote>bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
@@ -5980,9 +5980,9 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect120">120</a>) Replaced <quote>bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/>Lightning Hand<ch.emdash/>and</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Lightning Hand</spell> and</quote>. Reduced the illustration number from VIII to VII (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>).</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect120">120</a>) Replaced <quote>bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/>Lightning Hand<ch.emdash/>and</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Lightning Hand</spell> and</quote>. Reduced the illustration number from VIII to VII (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>).</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote>demonlord</quote> with <quote>Demonlord</quote>. Added <quote>(count 0 as a 1)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote>demonlord</quote> with <quote>Demonlord</quote>. Added <quote>(count 0 as a 1)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Replaced <quote>hurling towards</quote> with <quote>hurtling towards</quote>. Replaced <quote>both</quote> with <quote><em>both</em></quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Replaced <quote>hurling towards</quote> with <quote>hurtling towards</quote>. Replaced <quote>both</quote> with <quote><em>both</em></quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect125">125</a>) Added <quote>Kajarda are undead.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect125">125</a>) Added <quote>Kajarda are undead.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect127">127</a>) Replaced <quote>galley</quote> with <quote>gallery</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect128">128</a>) Replaced <quote>place it into your belt</quote> with <quote>stow it in your belt</quote>. Replaced <quote>in Magnamund</quote> with <quote>on Magnamund</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect129">129</a>) Replaced <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>. Replaced <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect127">127</a>) Replaced <quote>galley</quote> with <quote>gallery</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect128">128</a>) Replaced <quote>place it into your belt</quote> with <quote>stow it in your belt</quote>. Replaced <quote>in Magnamund</quote> with <quote>on Magnamund</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect129">129</a>) Replaced <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>. Replaced <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>.</p>
@@ -5992,11 +5992,11 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect133">133</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/><spell>Breathe Water</spell></quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Breathe Water</spell></quote>. Replaced <quote>sea water</quote> with <quote>seawater</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect135">135</a>)Replaced <quote>tip; the</quote> with <quote>tip<ch.emdash/>the</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect136">136</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/>Levitation</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Levitation</spell></quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect133">133</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/><spell>Breathe Water</spell></quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Breathe Water</spell></quote>. Replaced <quote>sea water</quote> with <quote>seawater</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect135">135</a>)Replaced <quote>tip; the</quote> with <quote>tip<ch.emdash/>the</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect136">136</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/>Levitation</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Levitation</spell></quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect137">137</a>) Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>. Replaced <quote>Chaos horde</quote> with <quote>Chaos-horde</quote>. Added <quote> Unless you have Grand Weaponmastery and are a Sun Knight or higher, you may not use a two-handed weapon (i.e. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, or Spear) for this combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect137">137</a>) Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>. Replaced <quote>Chaos horde</quote> with <quote>Chaos-horde</quote>. Added <quote> Unless you have Grand Weaponmastery and are a Sun Knight or higher, you may not use a two-handed weapon (i.e. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, or Spear) for this combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect138">138</a>) Replaced <quote>Backpack items</quote> with <quote>Backpack Items</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect139">139</a>) Replaced <quote>disciplines, or</quote> with <quote>Disciplines or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect140">140</a>) Reduced the illustration number from IX to VIII (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>).</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect138">138</a>) Replaced <quote>Backpack items</quote> with <quote>Backpack Items</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect139">139</a>) Replaced <quote>disciplines, or</quote> with <quote>Disciplines or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect140">140</a>) Reduced the illustration number from IX to VIII (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>).</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect141">141</a>) Replaced <quote>millenniums</quote> with <quote>millennia</quote>. Replaced <quote>they were crafted by Old Kingdom armourers</quote> with <quote>they were crafted by armourers during the Age of Eternal Night</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect141">141</a>) Replaced <quote>millenniums</quote> with <quote>millennia</quote>. Replaced <quote>they were crafted by Old Kingdom armourers</quote> with <quote>they were crafted by armourers during the Age of Eternal Night</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Added <quote>This being is immune to all forms of psychic attack, except Kai-surge and Kai-blast.</quote>, copied from <a idref="sect341">Section 341</a>, earlier in the adventure.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect143">143</a>) Replaced all occurrences of <quote>free-standing</quote> with <quote>freestanding</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect145">145</a>) Replaced <quote>Chaos horde</quote> with <quote>Chaos-horde</quote>. Replaced <quote>their misshapen form</quote> with <quote>their misshapen forms</quote>. Replaced <quote>six rounds, by</quote> with <quote>six rounds by</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Added <quote>This being is immune to all forms of psychic attack, except Kai-surge and Kai-blast.</quote>, copied from <a idref="sect341">Section 341</a>, earlier in the adventure.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect143">143</a>) Replaced all occurrences of <quote>free-standing</quote> with <quote>freestanding</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect145">145</a>) Replaced <quote>Chaos horde</quote> with <quote>Chaos-horde</quote>. Replaced <quote>their misshapen form</quote> with <quote>their misshapen forms</quote>. Replaced <quote>six rounds, by</quote> with <quote>six rounds by</quote>.</p>
@@ -6005,16 +6005,16 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect148">148</a>) Replaced <quote>attained, above</quote> with <quote>attained above</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect149">149</a>) Replaced <quote>Ghosts, in</quote> with <quote>Ghosts in</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect150">150</a>) Replaced <quote>demonlord</quote> with <quote>Demonlord</quote>. Replaced <quote>before, in</quote> with <quote>before in</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect148">148</a>) Replaced <quote>attained, above</quote> with <quote>attained above</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect149">149</a>) Replaced <quote>Ghosts, in</quote> with <quote>Ghosts in</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect150">150</a>) Replaced <quote>demonlord</quote> with <quote>Demonlord</quote>. Replaced <quote>before, in</quote> with <quote>before in</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect152">152</a>) Replaced <quote>Sun Lord, or higher</quote> with <quote>Sun Lord or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>crystal spire</quote> with <quote>Crystal Spire</quote>. Replaced <quote>where once, in the time of the Old Kingdoms, a proud and mighty race reigned supreme</quote> with <quote>where once, at the beginning of the Age of Eternal Night, a proud and mighty race reigned supreme</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect152">152</a>) Replaced <quote>Sun Lord, or higher</quote> with <quote>Sun Lord or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>crystal spire</quote> with <quote>Crystal Spire</quote>. Replaced <quote>where once, in the time of the Old Kingdoms, a proud and mighty race reigned supreme</quote> with <quote>where once, at the beginning of the Age of Eternal Night, a proud and mighty race reigned supreme</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect153">153</a>) Replaced <quote>main mast</quote> with <quote>mainmast</quote>. Reduced the illustration number from X to IX (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>). Replaced <quote>boom, then</quote> with <quote>boom, and then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect154">154</a>) Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect155">155</a>) Replaced <quote>shortlived</quote> with <quote>short-lived</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect156">156</a>) Replaced <quote>cavern; by</quote> with <quote>cavern: by</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect161">161</a>) Replaced <quote>Sun Thane, or higher</quote> with <quote>Sun Thane</quote> because Sun Thane is the highest possible rank to have attained in this book. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect153">153</a>) Replaced <quote>main mast</quote> with <quote>mainmast</quote>. Reduced the illustration number from X to IX (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>). Replaced <quote>boom, then</quote> with <quote>boom, and then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect154">154</a>) Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect155">155</a>) Replaced <quote>shortlived</quote> with <quote>short-lived</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect156">156</a>) Replaced <quote>cavern; by</quote> with <quote>cavern: by</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect161">161</a>) Replaced <quote>Sun Thane, or higher</quote> with <quote>Sun Thane</quote> because Sun Thane is the highest possible rank to have attained in this book. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect162">162</a>) Replaced <quote>propelled by Old Kingdom magic</quote> with <quote>propelled by Ixian witchcraft</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect162">162</a>) Replaced <quote>propelled by Old Kingdom magic</quote> with <quote>propelled by Ixian witchcraft</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect163">163</a>) Replaced <quote>Above you</quote> with <quote>Above, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>hilt of rusty sword</quote> with <quote>hilt of a rusty sword</quote>. Replaced <quote>turn to 126</quote> with <quote>turn to 26</quote> (cf. Sections <a idref="sect37">37</a>, <a idref="sect58">58</a>, and <a idref="sect247">247</a>).</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect164">164</a>) Replaced <quote>in Magnamund</quote> with <quote>on Magnamund</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect163">163</a>) Replaced <quote>Above you</quote> with <quote>Above, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>hilt of rusty sword</quote> with <quote>hilt of a rusty sword</quote>. Replaced <quote>turn to 126</quote> with <quote>turn to 26</quote> (cf. Sections <a idref="sect37">37</a>, <a idref="sect58">58</a>, and <a idref="sect247">247</a>).</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect164">164</a>) Replaced <quote>in Magnamund</quote> with <quote>on Magnamund</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect165">165</a>) Replaced <quote>Lord, or higher</quote> with <quote>Lord or higher</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>crystal spire</quote> with <quote>Crystal Spire</quote>. Reduced the illustration number from XI to X (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>). Replaced <quote>race of the Old Kingdoms reigned supreme</quote> with <quote>race reigned supreme</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect165">165</a>) Replaced <quote>Lord, or higher</quote> with <quote>Lord or higher</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>crystal spire</quote> with <quote>Crystal Spire</quote>. Reduced the illustration number from XI to X (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>). Replaced <quote>race of the Old Kingdoms reigned supreme</quote> with <quote>race reigned supreme</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>) Replaced <quote>me my</quote> with <quote>me, my</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect167">167</a>) Replaced <quote>bonuses to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote>bonuses</quote>. Replaced <quote>Mindblast and Kai-surge</quote> with <quote>Mindblast, Psi-surge, and Kai-surge</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect168">168</a>) Replaced <quote>eye-sockets</quote> with <quote>eye sockets</quote>. Replaced <quote>staff and, in</quote> with <quote>staff, and in</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>) Replaced <quote>me my</quote> with <quote>me, my</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect167">167</a>) Replaced <quote>bonuses to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote>bonuses</quote>. Replaced <quote>Mindblast and Kai-surge</quote> with <quote>Mindblast, Psi-surge, and Kai-surge</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect168">168</a>) Replaced <quote>eye-sockets</quote> with <quote>eye sockets</quote>. Replaced <quote>staff and, in</quote> with <quote>staff, and in</quote>.</p>
@@ -6024,7 +6024,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect175">175</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>have picked</quote> with <quote>have picked.</quote>. Replaced <quote>attained, above</quote> with <quote>attained above</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect176">176</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/>Levitation<ch.emdash/>and</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Levitation</spell> and</quote>. Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect178">178</a>) Replaced <quote>crystal spire</quote> with <quote>Crystal Spire</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect175">175</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>have picked</quote> with <quote>have picked.</quote>. Replaced <quote>attained, above</quote> with <quote>attained above</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect176">176</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/>Levitation<ch.emdash/>and</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Levitation</spell> and</quote>. Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect178">178</a>) Replaced <quote>crystal spire</quote> with <quote>Crystal Spire</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect179">179</a>) Deleted <quote>While you wait out the storm in this makeshift shelter, you must eat a Meal or lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect179">179</a>) Deleted <quote>While you wait out the storm in this makeshift shelter, you must eat a Meal or lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect180">180</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>Special Item, do not</quote> with <quote>Special Item, or do not</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Nexus, and</quote> with <quote>Grand Nexus and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect181">181</a>) Reduced the illustration number from XII to XI (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>).</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect182">182</a>) Replaced <quote>starboard and</quote> with <quote>starboard, and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect180">180</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>Special Item, do not</quote> with <quote>Special Item, or do not</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Nexus, and</quote> with <quote>Grand Nexus and</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect181">181</a>) Reduced the illustration number from XII to XI (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>).</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect182">182</a>) Replaced <quote>starboard and</quote> with <quote>starboard, and</quote>.</p>
@@ -6050,7 +6050,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect211">211</a>) Replaced <quote>explosion white-hot</quote> with <quote>explosion of white-hot</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect212">212</a>) Replaced <quote>icy chill, then</quote> with <quote>icy chill; then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect213">213</a>) Replaced <quote>chamber, is</quote> with <quote>chamber is</quote>. Replaced <quote>which can be found within 150 miles of Xaagon</quote> with <quote>which lie within 150 miles to the west of Xaagon</quote>. The answer to the first part of the puzzle should be <em>2</em>, but according to the <a idref="map">map</a> there are 4 islands within a radius of 150 miles around Xaagon. Limiting it to islands to the west of Xaagon is the simplest way of fixing this error.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect211">211</a>) Replaced <quote>explosion white-hot</quote> with <quote>explosion of white-hot</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect212">212</a>) Replaced <quote>icy chill, then</quote> with <quote>icy chill; then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect213">213</a>) Replaced <quote>chamber, is</quote> with <quote>chamber is</quote>. Replaced <quote>which can be found within 150 miles of Xaagon</quote> with <quote>which lie within 150 miles to the west of Xaagon</quote>. The answer to the first part of the puzzle should be <em>2</em>, but according to the <a idref="map">map</a> there are 4 islands within a radius of 150 miles around Xaagon. Limiting it to islands to the west of Xaagon is the simplest way of fixing this error.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect216">216</a>) Replaced <quote>demonlord</quote> with <quote>Demonlord</quote>. Replaced <quote>fight, you</quote> with <quote>fight you</quote>. Added <quote>This being is immune to all forms of psychic attack, except Kai-surge and Kai-blast.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing editions.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect216">216</a>) Replaced <quote>demonlord</quote> with <quote>Demonlord</quote>. Replaced <quote>fight, you</quote> with <quote>fight you</quote>. Added <quote>This being is immune to all forms of psychic attack, except Kai-surge and Kai-blast.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect217">217</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/>Counterspell<ch.emdash/>and</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Counterspell</spell> and</quote>. Replaced <quote>electricity, then</quote> with <quote>electricity; then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect218">218</a>) Replaced <quote>Lavas come swooping down</quote> with <quote>Lavas comes swooping down</quote>. Replaced <quote>demonlord</quote> with <quote>Demonlord</quote>. Replaced <quote>towards the Tagazin</quote> with <quote>towards Tagazin</quote>. Replaced <quote>demonlord<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Demonlord<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect219">219</a>) Removed the quotation marks around Banedon<ch.apos/>s warning. Replaced <quote>korlinium scabbard</quote> with <quote>Korlinium Scabbard</quote>. Replaced <quote>another weapon</quote> with <quote>another Weapon</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect217">217</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/>Counterspell<ch.emdash/>and</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Counterspell</spell> and</quote>. Replaced <quote>electricity, then</quote> with <quote>electricity; then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect218">218</a>) Replaced <quote>Lavas come swooping down</quote> with <quote>Lavas comes swooping down</quote>. Replaced <quote>demonlord</quote> with <quote>Demonlord</quote>. Replaced <quote>towards the Tagazin</quote> with <quote>towards Tagazin</quote>. Replaced <quote>demonlord<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Demonlord<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect219">219</a>) Removed the quotation marks around Banedon<ch.apos/>s warning. Replaced <quote>korlinium scabbard</quote> with <quote>Korlinium Scabbard</quote>. Replaced <quote>another weapon</quote> with <quote>another Weapon</quote>.</p>
@@ -6068,7 +6068,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Replaced all occurrences of <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect236">236</a>) Replaced <quote>sea water</quote> with <quote>seawater</quote>. Replaced <quote>rail, then</quote> with <quote>rail, and then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect239">239</a>) Replaced <quote>Ixian undead</quote> with <quote>Ixian Undead</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Replaced all occurrences of <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect236">236</a>) Replaced <quote>sea water</quote> with <quote>seawater</quote>. Replaced <quote>rail, then</quote> with <quote>rail, and then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect239">239</a>) Replaced <quote>Ixian undead</quote> with <quote>Ixian Undead</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>fifteen thousand</quote> with <quote>eleven thousand</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>fifteen thousand</quote> with <quote>eleven thousand</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect241">241</a>) Replaced <quote>to see better</quote> with <quote>to better see</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sun Knight, or higher</quote> with <quote>Sun Knight or higher</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>Ixian undead</quote> with <quote>Ixian Undead</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect243">243</a>) Replaced <quote>Drakkarim undead</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Undead</quote>. Reduced the illustration number from XVI to XV (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>).</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect241">241</a>) Replaced <quote>to see better</quote> with <quote>to better see</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sun Knight, or higher</quote> with <quote>Sun Knight or higher</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>Ixian undead</quote> with <quote>Ixian Undead</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect243">243</a>) Replaced <quote>Drakkarim undead</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Undead</quote>. Reduced the illustration number from XVI to XV (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>).</p>
@@ -6104,7 +6104,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect283">283</a>) Replaced <quote>in which</quote> with <quote>from which</quote>. Replaced <quote>Bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Replaced <quote>them, or</quote> with <quote>them or</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect284">284</a>) Replaced <quote>helmsman at the bow</quote> with <quote>helmsman at the stern</quote>. Replaced <quote>swig, then</quote> with <quote>swig, and then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect285">285</a>) Replaced <quote>rope</quote> with <quote>Rope</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect283">283</a>) Replaced <quote>in which</quote> with <quote>from which</quote>. Replaced <quote>Bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Replaced <quote>them, or</quote> with <quote>them or</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect284">284</a>) Replaced <quote>helmsman at the bow</quote> with <quote>helmsman at the stern</quote>. Replaced <quote>swig, then</quote> with <quote>swig, and then</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect285">285</a>) Replaced <quote>rope</quote> with <quote>Rope</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect287">287</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>six round</quote> with <quote>six rounds</quote>. Added <quote>If you used the Sommerswerd, <!--link-text-->turn to 238<!--/link-text-->.</quote>. Added <quote>Kajarda are undead.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect287">287</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>six round</quote> with <quote>six rounds</quote>. Added <quote>If you used the Sommerswerd, <!--link-text-->turn to 238<!--/link-text-->.</quote>. Added <quote>Kajarda are undead.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect288">288</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>Ziog: (damaged)</quote> with <quote>Ziog (damaged)</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect289">289</a>) Replaced <quote>millenniums</quote> with <quote>millennia</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect290">290</a>) Replaced <quote>millenniums</quote> with <quote>millennia</quote>. Replaced <quote>crystal spire</quote> with <quote>Crystal Spire</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect288">288</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>Ziog: (damaged)</quote> with <quote>Ziog (damaged)</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect289">289</a>) Replaced <quote>millenniums</quote> with <quote>millennia</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect290">290</a>) Replaced <quote>millenniums</quote> with <quote>millennia</quote>. Replaced <quote>crystal spire</quote> with <quote>Crystal Spire</quote>.</p>
@@ -6136,7 +6136,7 @@
         <p>(<a idref="sect339">339</a>) Replaced <quote>korlinium scabbard</quote> with <quote>Korlinium Scabbard</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect340">340</a>) Replaced <quote>main mast</quote> with <quote>mainmast</quote>. Reduced the illustration number from XX to XIX (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>).</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect341">341</a>) Replaced <quote>demonlord<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Demonlord<ch.apos/>s</quote>. Replaced <quote>If, at any time during this fight, you reduce Tagazin<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score to 25 or less</quote> with <quote>If you reduce Tagazin<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score to 25 or less at any time during this fight</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect339">339</a>) Replaced <quote>korlinium scabbard</quote> with <quote>Korlinium Scabbard</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect340">340</a>) Replaced <quote>main mast</quote> with <quote>mainmast</quote>. Reduced the illustration number from XX to XIX (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>).</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect341">341</a>) Replaced <quote>demonlord<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Demonlord<ch.apos/>s</quote>. Replaced <quote>If, at any time during this fight, you reduce Tagazin<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score to 25 or less</quote> with <quote>If you reduce Tagazin<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score to 25 or less at any time during this fight</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect343">343</a>) Replaced <quote>by huge frozen fountain</quote> with <quote>by a huge frozen fountain</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lord, or higher</quote> with <quote>Lord or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>crystal spire</quote> with <quote>Crystal Spire</quote>. Replaced <quote>in the time of the Old Kingdoms</quote> with <quote>at the beginning of the Age of Eternal Night</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect343">343</a>) Replaced <quote>by huge frozen fountain</quote> with <quote>by a huge frozen fountain</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lord, or higher</quote> with <quote>Lord or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>crystal spire</quote> with <quote>Crystal Spire</quote>. Replaced <quote>in the time of the Old Kingdoms</quote> with <quote>at the beginning of the Age of Eternal Night</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect346">346</a>) Replaced <quote>Crack!</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>crack!</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect347">347</a>) Replaced <quote>demonlord</quote> with <quote>Demonlord</quote>. Reduced the illustration number from XXI to XX (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>).</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>Ardan, <ch.lsquot/>Is</quote> with <quote>Ardan. <ch.lsquot/>Is</quote>. Replaced <quote>county</quote> with <quote>country</quote>. Replaced <quote>home, and</quote> with <quote>home and</quote>. Replaced <quote>DAWN OF THE DRAGONS</quote> with <quote><bookref series="lw" book="18dotd"><cite>Dawn of the Dragons</cite></bookref></quote>. Replaced <quote>grave news I<ch.apos/>m afraid</quote> with <quote>grave news, I<ch.apos/>m afraid</quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect346">346</a>) Replaced <quote>Crack!</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>crack!</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect347">347</a>) Replaced <quote>demonlord</quote> with <quote>Demonlord</quote>. Reduced the illustration number from XXI to XX (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>).</p>
         <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>Ardan, <ch.lsquot/>Is</quote> with <quote>Ardan. <ch.lsquot/>Is</quote>. Replaced <quote>county</quote> with <quote>country</quote>. Replaced <quote>home, and</quote> with <quote>home and</quote>. Replaced <quote>DAWN OF THE DRAGONS</quote> with <quote><bookref series="lw" book="18dotd"><cite>Dawn of the Dragons</cite></bookref></quote>. Replaced <quote>grave news I<ch.apos/>m afraid</quote> with <quote>grave news, I<ch.apos/>m afraid</quote>.</p>
@@ -6147,7 +6147,7 @@
       <section class="backmatter" id="errstat">
        <meta><title>Note on Adjusted Combat Statistics</title></meta>
         <data>
       <section class="backmatter" id="errstat">
        <meta><title>Note on Adjusted Combat Statistics</title></meta>
         <data>
-       <p>Many enemies in this book have had their statistics altered in accordance with the Mongoose Publishing edition to balance the game. Here is a table to show which enemies have been altered.</p>
+       <p>Many enemies in this book have had their statistics altered in accordance with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition to balance the game. Here is a table to show which enemies have been altered.</p>
          <table>
           <tr>
            <th colspan="4" scope="colgroup">Revised combat statistics</th>
          <table>
           <tr>
            <th colspan="4" scope="colgroup">Revised combat statistics</th>
@@ -6156,7 +6156,7 @@
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Section</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Enemy</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Original</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Section</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Enemy</th>
            <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Original</th>
-          <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Mongoose</th>
+          <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition</th>
           </tr>
           <tr>
            <td><a idref="sect21">21</a></td>
           </tr>
           <tr>
            <td><a idref="sect21">21</a></td>
diff --git a/en/xml/18dotd.xml b/en/xml/18dotd.xml

index b0cd23f..80f5ff9 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/18dotd.xml
+++ b/en/xml/18dotd.xml
@@ -5977,11 +5977,11 @@
  
         <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far<ch.ellips/></a>) Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf, of</quote> with <quote>Lone Wolf of</quote>. Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>Naar<ch.emdash/>the King</quote> with <quote>Naar, the King</quote>. Replaced <quote>freestate</quote> with <quote>Freeland</quote>. Replaced <quote>monastery of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Monastery of the Kai</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>the Monastery</quote> with <quote>the monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Replaced <quote>comprised</quote> with <quote>were part of</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far<ch.ellips/></a>) Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf, of</quote> with <quote>Lone Wolf of</quote>. Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>Naar<ch.emdash/>the King</quote> with <quote>Naar, the King</quote>. Replaced <quote>freestate</quote> with <quote>Freeland</quote>. Replaced <quote>monastery of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Monastery of the Kai</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>the Monastery</quote> with <quote>the monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Replaced <quote>comprised</quote> with <quote>were part of</quote>.</p>
  
-       <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote>. Removed <quote>on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>chamber, wrought</quote> with <quote>chamber wrought</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Added <quote>Dagger of Vashna</quote> and <quote>Helshezag</quote> to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the <cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite> and <cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite> books in harmony with the Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote>. Removed <quote>on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>chamber, wrought</quote> with <quote>chamber wrought</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Added <quote>Dagger of Vashna</quote> and <quote>Helshezag</quote> to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the <cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite> and <cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite> books in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
  
-       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>against<ch.emdash/>hypnosis</quote> with <quote>against hypnosis</quote>. Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed below.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing editions. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>opposite and overleaf</quote> with <quote>below</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and toxins</quote> with <quote>venoms, and toxins</quote>. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Added <quote>These skills include the basic use of Old Kingdom Spells such as <spell>Shield</spell>, <spell>Power Word</spell>, and <spell>Invisible Fist</spell>.</quote> as found in the Magi-magic section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote>These spells include <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, <spell>Levitation</spell>, and <spell>Mind Charm</spell>.</quote> as found in the Kai-alchemy section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>the next Grand Master adventure</quote> with <quote>the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>against<ch.emdash/>hypnosis</quote> with <quote>against hypnosis</quote>. Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed below.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>opposite and overleaf</quote> with <quote>below</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and toxins</quote> with <quote>venoms, and toxins</quote>. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Added <quote>These skills include the basic use of Old Kingdom Spells such as <spell>Shield</spell>, <spell>Power Word</spell>, and <spell>Invisible Fist</spell>.</quote> as found in the Magi-magic section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote>These spells include <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, <spell>Levitation</spell>, and <spell>Mind Charm</spell>.</quote> as found in the Kai-alchemy section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>the next Grand Master adventure</quote> with <quote>the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
  
  
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUARTERSTAFF</quote> with <quote>Quarterstaff</quote>. Replaced <quote>BOW</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUIVER</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>DAGGER</quote> with <quote>Dagger</quote>. Replaced <quote>SWORD</quote> with <quote>Sword</quote>. Replaced <quote>2 MEALS</quote> with <quote>2 Meals (Meals)</quote>. Replaced <quote>ROPE</quote> with <quote>Rope</quote>. Replaced <quote>POTION OF LAUMSPUR</quote> with <quote>Potion of Laumspur</quote>. Replaced <quote>AXE</quote> with <quote>Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>effect that</quote> with <quote>effect they</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUARTERSTAFF</quote> with <quote>Quarterstaff</quote>. Replaced <quote>BOW</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUIVER</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>DAGGER</quote> with <quote>Dagger</quote>. Replaced <quote>SWORD</quote> with <quote>Sword</quote>. Replaced <quote>2 MEALS</quote> with <quote>2 Meals (Meals)</quote>. Replaced <quote>ROPE</quote> with <quote>Rope</quote>. Replaced <quote>POTION OF LAUMSPUR</quote> with <quote>Potion of Laumspur</quote>. Replaced <quote>AXE</quote> with <quote>Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>effect that</quote> with <quote>effect they</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> 32)</quote> with <quote>Lone Wolf (<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> 27)</quote>. Replaced <quote>adds 3 points</quote> with <quote>adds 8 points</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>to zero</quote> with <quote>to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> 32)</quote> with <quote>Lone Wolf (<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> 27)</quote>. Replaced <quote>adds 3 points</quote> with <quote>adds 8 points</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>to zero</quote> with <quote>to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
  
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         <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far<ch.ellips/></a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>freestate</quote> with <quote>Freeland</quote>. Replaced <quote>Naar<ch.emdash/>the King of the Darkness<ch.emdash/></quote> with <quote>Naar, the King of the Darkness,</quote>. Replaced <quote>monastery of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Monastery of the Kai</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Replaced <quote>Three years earlier</quote> with <quote>Three years ago</quote>. Replaced <quote>body; you</quote> with <quote>body: you</quote>. Replaced <quote>Darklands armies</quote> with <quote>Darkland armies</quote>. Replaced <quote>years peace</quote> with <quote>years, peace</quote>. Replaced <quote>crowd were</quote> with <quote>crowd was</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magnamund have</quote> with <quote>Magnamund, have</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far<ch.ellips/></a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>freestate</quote> with <quote>Freeland</quote>. Replaced <quote>Naar<ch.emdash/>the King of the Darkness<ch.emdash/></quote> with <quote>Naar, the King of the Darkness,</quote>. Replaced <quote>monastery of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Monastery of the Kai</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Replaced <quote>Three years earlier</quote> with <quote>Three years ago</quote>. Replaced <quote>body; you</quote> with <quote>body: you</quote>. Replaced <quote>Darklands armies</quote> with <quote>Darkland armies</quote>. Replaced <quote>years peace</quote> with <quote>years, peace</quote>. Replaced <quote>crowd were</quote> with <quote>crowd was</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magnamund have</quote> with <quote>Magnamund, have</quote>.</p>
  
-       <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Deleted <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages.</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Added <quote>Dagger of Vashna</quote> and <quote>Helshezag</quote> to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the <cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite> and <cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite> books in harmony with the Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Deleted <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages.</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Added <quote>Dagger of Vashna</quote> and <quote>Helshezag</quote> to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the <cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite> and <cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite> books in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
  
-       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>gods Kai and Ishir</quote> with <quote>Gods Kai and Ishir</quote>. Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>footprints <ch.ampersand/> tracks</quote> with <quote>footprints and tracks</quote>. Replaced <quote>500 yds</quote> with <quote>500 yards</quote>. Replaced <quote>against<ch.emdash/>hypnosis</quote> with <quote>against hypnosis</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms <ch.ampersand/> toxins</quote> with <quote>venoms, and toxins</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed below.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing editions. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>opposite and overleaf</quote> with <quote>below</quote>. Added the missing illustration to the Weaponmastery subheading. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Grand Master adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>gods Kai and Ishir</quote> with <quote>Gods Kai and Ishir</quote>. Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>footprints <ch.ampersand/> tracks</quote> with <quote>footprints and tracks</quote>. Replaced <quote>500 yds</quote> with <quote>500 yards</quote>. Replaced <quote>against<ch.emdash/>hypnosis</quote> with <quote>against hypnosis</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms <ch.ampersand/> toxins</quote> with <quote>venoms, and toxins</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed below.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>opposite and overleaf</quote> with <quote>below</quote>. Added the missing illustration to the Weaponmastery subheading. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Grand Master adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
  
  
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced <quote>Before you set off on your long journey home to Sommerlund you took with you a map of Northern Magnamund</quote> with <quote>You have in your possession a <a idref="map">map of Sommerlund and the Wildlands</a></quote>, since the original text was clearly erroneously copied directly from <bookref series="lw" book="18dotd">Book 18</bookref>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>BROADSWORD</quote> with <quote>Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>BOW</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUIVER</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote> six arrows</quote> with <quote>six Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>DAGGER</quote> with <quote>Dagger</quote>. Replaced <quote>SWORD</quote> with <quote>Sword</quote>. Replaced <quote>2 MEALS</quote> with <quote>2 Meals (Meals)</quote>. Replaced <quote>ROPE</quote> with <quote>Rope</quote>. Replaced <quote>POTION OF LAUMSPUR</quote> with <quote>Potion of Laumspur</quote>. Replaced <quote>AXE</quote> with <quote>Axe</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>adds 3 points</quote> with <quote>adds 5 points</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>that may have</quote> with <quote>they may have</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg Gold Dagger</quote> with <quote>(e.g. Gold Dagger</quote>. Added section for How to Use Gold Crowns that reads: <quote>These are always carried in the Belt Pouch. It will hold a maximum of fifty crowns.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced the illustration of the Short Sword with that of a Sword. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced <quote>Before you set off on your long journey home to Sommerlund you took with you a map of Northern Magnamund</quote> with <quote>You have in your possession a <a idref="map">map of Sommerlund and the Wildlands</a></quote>, since the original text was clearly erroneously copied directly from <bookref series="lw" book="18dotd">Book 18</bookref>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>BROADSWORD</quote> with <quote>Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>BOW</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUIVER</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote> six arrows</quote> with <quote>six Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>DAGGER</quote> with <quote>Dagger</quote>. Replaced <quote>SWORD</quote> with <quote>Sword</quote>. Replaced <quote>2 MEALS</quote> with <quote>2 Meals (Meals)</quote>. Replaced <quote>ROPE</quote> with <quote>Rope</quote>. Replaced <quote>POTION OF LAUMSPUR</quote> with <quote>Potion of Laumspur</quote>. Replaced <quote>AXE</quote> with <quote>Axe</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>adds 3 points</quote> with <quote>adds 5 points</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>that may have</quote> with <quote>they may have</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg Gold Dagger</quote> with <quote>(e.g. Gold Dagger</quote>. Added section for How to Use Gold Crowns that reads: <quote>These are always carried in the Belt Pouch. It will hold a maximum of fifty crowns.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced the illustration of the Short Sword with that of a Sword. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Deleted <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat.)</quote> with <quote>combat).</quote>. Replaced <quote>until <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points</quote> with <quote>until the <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>the one with the zero score</quote> with <quote>that combatant</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote> points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the Random Number Table</quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Deleted <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat.)</quote> with <quote>combat).</quote>. Replaced <quote>until <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points</quote> with <quote>until the <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>the one with the zero score</quote> with <quote>that combatant</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote> points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the Random Number Table</quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>.</p>
  
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@@ -5878,11 +5878,11 @@
  
         <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>monastery of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Monastery of the Kai</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master Disciplines, and grasp</quote> with <quote>Grand Master Disciplines and grasp</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>artifact</quote> with <quote>artefact</quote>. Replaced <quote>free-state</quote> with <quote>Freeland</quote>. Replaced <quote>if you were</quote> with <quote>if you are</quote>. Replaced <quote>most-trusted</quote> with <quote>most trusted</quote>. Replaced <quote>Shianti, whose</quote> with <quote>Shianti whose</quote>. Replaced <quote>Gate<ch.emdash/>an</quote> with <quote>Gate, an</quote>. Replaced <quote>Darkness<ch.emdash/>the</quote> with <quote>Darkness, the</quote>. Replaced <quote>Shianti<ch.emdash/>a</quote> with <quote>Shianti, a</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magnamund have</quote> with <quote>Magnamund, have</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>monastery of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Monastery of the Kai</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master Disciplines, and grasp</quote> with <quote>Grand Master Disciplines and grasp</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>artifact</quote> with <quote>artefact</quote>. Replaced <quote>free-state</quote> with <quote>Freeland</quote>. Replaced <quote>if you were</quote> with <quote>if you are</quote>. Replaced <quote>most-trusted</quote> with <quote>most trusted</quote>. Replaced <quote>Shianti, whose</quote> with <quote>Shianti whose</quote>. Replaced <quote>Gate<ch.emdash/>an</quote> with <quote>Gate, an</quote>. Replaced <quote>Darkness<ch.emdash/>the</quote> with <quote>Darkness, the</quote>. Replaced <quote>Shianti<ch.emdash/>a</quote> with <quote>Shianti, a</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magnamund have</quote> with <quote>Magnamund, have</quote>.</p>
  
-       <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Removed <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote> and <quote>on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Magnakai</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Added <quote>Dagger of Vashna</quote> and <quote>Helshezag</quote> to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the <cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite> and <cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite> books in harmony with the Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Removed <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote> and <quote>on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Magnakai</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Grand Master series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series</quote>. Added <quote>Dagger of Vashna</quote> and <quote>Helshezag</quote> to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the <cite>Lone Wolf Kai</cite> and <cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite> books in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
  
-       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms <ch.ampersand/> toxins</quote> with <quote>venoms, and toxins</quote>. Replaced <quote>smell <ch.ampersand/> night vision</quote> with <quote>smell, and night vision</quote>. Replaced <quote>footprints <ch.ampersand/> tracks</quote> with <quote>footprints and tracks</quote>. Replaced <quote>500 yds</quote> with <quote>500 yards</quote>. Replaced <quote>Defence against: hypnosis</quote> with <quote>Defence against hypnosis</quote>. Replaced <quote>hostile telepathy, <ch.ampersand/> evil spirits</quote> with <quote>hostile telepathy, and evil spirits</quote>. Replaced <quote>gods Kai and Ishir</quote> with <quote>Gods Kai and Ishir</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed opposite and overleaf.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing editions. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spell</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms <ch.ampersand/> toxins</quote> with <quote>venoms, and toxins</quote>. Replaced <quote>smell <ch.ampersand/> night vision</quote> with <quote>smell, and night vision</quote>. Replaced <quote>footprints <ch.ampersand/> tracks</quote> with <quote>footprints and tracks</quote>. Replaced <quote>500 yds</quote> with <quote>500 yards</quote>. Replaced <quote>Defence against: hypnosis</quote> with <quote>Defence against hypnosis</quote>. Replaced <quote>hostile telepathy, <ch.ampersand/> evil spirits</quote> with <quote>hostile telepathy, and evil spirits</quote>. Replaced <quote>gods Kai and Ishir</quote> with <quote>Gods Kai and Ishir</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed opposite and overleaf.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spell</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
  
  
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced <quote>map of Magnamund</quote> with <quote>map of the Planes of Existence</quote>. Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUARTERSTAFF</quote> with <quote>Quarterstaff</quote>. Replaced <quote>BROADSWORD</quote> with <quote>Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>BOW</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUIVER</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>DAGGER</quote> with <quote>Dagger</quote>. Replaced <quote>SWORD</quote> with <quote>Sword</quote>. Replaced <quote>MEALS</quote> with <quote>Meals</quote>. Replaced <quote>ROPE</quote> with <quote>Rope</quote>. Replaced <quote>POTION OF LAUMSPUR</quote> with <quote>Potion of Laumspur</quote>. Replaced <quote>AXE</quote> with <quote>Axe</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg Gold Dagger</quote> with <quote>(e.g. Gold Dagger</quote>. Added a section about Gold Crowns which reads <quote>These are always carried in the Belt Pouch. It will hold a maximum of fifty Crowns.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>effect that may have</quote> with <quote>effect they may have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced the image of the Short Sword with the correct image of the Sword. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced <quote>map of Magnamund</quote> with <quote>map of the Planes of Existence</quote>. Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUARTERSTAFF</quote> with <quote>Quarterstaff</quote>. Replaced <quote>BROADSWORD</quote> with <quote>Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>BOW</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUIVER</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>DAGGER</quote> with <quote>Dagger</quote>. Replaced <quote>SWORD</quote> with <quote>Sword</quote>. Replaced <quote>MEALS</quote> with <quote>Meals</quote>. Replaced <quote>ROPE</quote> with <quote>Rope</quote>. Replaced <quote>POTION OF LAUMSPUR</quote> with <quote>Potion of Laumspur</quote>. Replaced <quote>AXE</quote> with <quote>Axe</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced occurrences of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg Gold Dagger</quote> with <quote>(e.g. Gold Dagger</quote>. Added a section about Gold Crowns which reads <quote>These are always carried in the Belt Pouch. It will hold a maximum of fifty Crowns.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>effect that may have</quote> with <quote>effect they may have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced the image of the Short Sword with the correct image of the Sword. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>until <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points</quote> with <quote>until the <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points</quote>. Replaced <quote>to zero</quote> with <quote>to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the Random Number Table</quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>until <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points</quote> with <quote>until the <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points</quote>. Replaced <quote>to zero</quote> with <quote>to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the Random Number Table</quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>.</p>
  
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--- a/en/xml/21votm.xml
+++ b/en/xml/21votm.xml
@@ -310,7 +310,7 @@
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-        <p>The rules in the Mongoose Publishing editions state that the bonus for Grand Weaponmastery with Bow is 5. Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
+        <p>The rules in the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions state that the bonus for Grand Weaponmastery with Bow is 5. Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
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         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">New Order Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Animal control</quote> with <quote>Animal Control</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>symbols and</quote> with <quote>symbols, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases and</quote> with <quote>gases, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 to 3</quote> with <quote>one to three</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-surge, Psi-surge, and Mindblast</quote> with <quote>Kai-surge and Mindblast</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom battle magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>individual (or combinations of) elements that are available,</quote> with <quote>individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof,</quote>. Replaced <quote>guild of magicians</quote> with <quote>Guild of Magicians</quote>. Replaced <quote>remove or</quote> with <quote>remove, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>multitalented</quote> with <quote>multi-talented</quote>. Replaced <quote>dialect and</quote> with <quote>dialect, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon and</quote> with <quote>Weapon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>further Discipline</quote> with <quote>further Grand Master Discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>extra Discipline</quote> with <quote>extra Grand Master Discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>four Disciplines</quote> with <quote>four Grand Master Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>four of the New Order Disciplines</quote> with <quote>four of the New Order Grand Master Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>all of the New Order Disciplines</quote> with <quote>all of the New Order Grand Master Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>four of the New Order Disciplines</quote> with <quote>four of the New Order Grand Master Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order Disciplines section</quote> with <quote>Grand Master Disciplines section</quote>. Replaced <quote>EQUIPMENT</quote> with <quote>Equipment</quote>. Replaced <quote><strong>Mindblast</strong></quote> with <quote>Mindblast</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote> with <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the <cite>New Order</cite> series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases</quote> with <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his in animate body increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>predictions increases</quote> with <quote>predictions increase</quote>. Used Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from subsequent books. Replaced <quote>Grand Master Senior</quote> with <quote>Kai Grand Master Senior</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (New Order) series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>any other Special Items that</quote> with <quote>any other Special Items and Backpack Items that</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">New Order Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Animal control</quote> with <quote>Animal Control</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>symbols and</quote> with <quote>symbols, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases and</quote> with <quote>gases, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 to 3</quote> with <quote>one to three</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-surge, Psi-surge, and Mindblast</quote> with <quote>Kai-surge and Mindblast</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom battle magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>individual (or combinations of) elements that are available,</quote> with <quote>individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof,</quote>. Replaced <quote>guild of magicians</quote> with <quote>Guild of Magicians</quote>. Replaced <quote>remove or</quote> with <quote>remove, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>multitalented</quote> with <quote>multi-talented</quote>. Replaced <quote>dialect and</quote> with <quote>dialect, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon and</quote> with <quote>Weapon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>further Discipline</quote> with <quote>further Grand Master Discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>extra Discipline</quote> with <quote>extra Grand Master Discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>four Disciplines</quote> with <quote>four Grand Master Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>four of the New Order Disciplines</quote> with <quote>four of the New Order Grand Master Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>all of the New Order Disciplines</quote> with <quote>all of the New Order Grand Master Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>four of the New Order Disciplines</quote> with <quote>four of the New Order Grand Master Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order Disciplines section</quote> with <quote>Grand Master Disciplines section</quote>. Replaced <quote>EQUIPMENT</quote> with <quote>Equipment</quote>. Replaced <quote><strong>Mindblast</strong></quote> with <quote>Mindblast</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote> with <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the <cite>New Order</cite> series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases</quote> with <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his in animate body increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>predictions increases</quote> with <quote>predictions increase</quote>. Used Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from subsequent books. Replaced <quote>Grand Master Senior</quote> with <quote>Kai Grand Master Senior</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (New Order) series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>any other Special Items that</quote> with <quote>any other Special Items and Backpack Items that</quote>.</p>
  
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Set the items on the list of equipment in Initial Capitals. Replaced <quote>Special item</quote> with <quote>Special Item</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>have to your</quote> with <quote>have on your</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>you take with you</quote> with <quote>you acquire</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>Disciplines then</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, then</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote> in the <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</quote> section. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Set the items on the list of equipment in Initial Capitals. Replaced <quote>Special item</quote> with <quote>Special Item</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>have to your</quote> with <quote>have on your</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>you take with you</quote> with <quote>you acquire</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>Disciplines then</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, then</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote> in the <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</quote> section. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiweapn">Kai Weapons</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>cave or</quote> with <quote>cave, or</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>vs.</quote> with <quote>versus</quote> on the table. Replaced <quote>the Monastery</quote> with <quote>the Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword</quote> with <quote>magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>broadsword <quote>Illuminatus</quote></quote> with <quote>Broadsword <quote>Illuminatus</quote></quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiweapn">Kai Weapons</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>cave or</quote> with <quote>cave, or</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>vs.</quote> with <quote>versus</quote> on the table. Replaced <quote>the Monastery</quote> with <quote>the Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword</quote> with <quote>magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>broadsword <quote>Illuminatus</quote></quote> with <quote>Broadsword <quote>Illuminatus</quote></quote>.</p>
  
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-        <p>The rules in the Mongoose Publishing editions state that the bonus for Grand Weaponmastery with Bow is 5. Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
+        <p>The rules in the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions state that the bonus for Grand Weaponmastery with Bow is 5. Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
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         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">New Order Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>symbols and</quote> with <quote>symbols, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases and</quote> with <quote>gases, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>honour and</quote> with <quote>honour, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Four Disciplines</quote> with <quote>four Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand masters</quote> with <quote>Grand Masters</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom battle magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>Moon and</quote> with <quote>Moon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>individual (or combinations of) elements that are available,</quote> with <quote>individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof,</quote>. Replaced <quote>remove or</quote> with <quote>remove, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>multitalented</quote> with <quote>multi-talented</quote>. Replaced <quote>dialect and</quote> with <quote>dialect, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon and</quote> with <quote>Weapon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 to 3</quote> with <quote>one to three</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>guild of magicians</quote> with <quote>Guild of Magicians</quote>. Replaced <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote> with <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote><strong>Mindblast</strong></quote> with <quote>Mindblast</quote>. Replaced <quote>Fire and</quote> with <quote>Fire, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases</quote> with <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his in animate body increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>predictions increases</quote> with <quote>predictions increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>EQUIPMENT</quote> with <quote>Equipment</quote>. Replaced <quote>undertaken then</quote> with <quote>undertaken, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (New Order) series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>any other Special Items that</quote> with <quote>any other Special Items and Backpack Items that</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">New Order Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>symbols and</quote> with <quote>symbols, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases and</quote> with <quote>gases, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>honour and</quote> with <quote>honour, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Four Disciplines</quote> with <quote>four Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand masters</quote> with <quote>Grand Masters</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom battle magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>Moon and</quote> with <quote>Moon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>individual (or combinations of) elements that are available,</quote> with <quote>individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof,</quote>. Replaced <quote>remove or</quote> with <quote>remove, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>multitalented</quote> with <quote>multi-talented</quote>. Replaced <quote>dialect and</quote> with <quote>dialect, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon and</quote> with <quote>Weapon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 to 3</quote> with <quote>one to three</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>guild of magicians</quote> with <quote>Guild of Magicians</quote>. Replaced <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote> with <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote><strong>Mindblast</strong></quote> with <quote>Mindblast</quote>. Replaced <quote>Fire and</quote> with <quote>Fire, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases</quote> with <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his in animate body increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>predictions increases</quote> with <quote>predictions increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>EQUIPMENT</quote> with <quote>Equipment</quote>. Replaced <quote>undertaken then</quote> with <quote>undertaken, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (New Order) series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>any other Special Items that</quote> with <quote>any other Special Items and Backpack Items that</quote>.</p>
  
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>have to your</quote> with <quote>have on your</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>south-eastern</quote> with <quote>southeastern</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUARTERSTAFF</quote> with <quote>Quarterstaff</quote>. Replaced <quote>BOW</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUIVER</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>FLUTE</quote> with <quote>Flute</quote>. Replaced <quote>DAGGER</quote> with <quote>Dagger</quote>. Replaced <quote>SWORD</quote> with <quote>Sword</quote>. Replaced <quote>2 MEALS</quote> with <quote>2 Meals</quote>. Replaced <quote>ROPE</quote> with <quote>Rope</quote>. Replaced <quote>POTION OF LAUMSPUR</quote> with <quote>Potion of Laumspur</quote>. Replaced <quote>AXE</quote> with <quote>Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>you take with you</quote> with <quote>you acquire</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>the total sum of</quote> with <quote>the number of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines then</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, then</quote>. Added the Section <quote>Gold Crowns</quote> under the heading <strong>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</strong> which reads: <quote>The currency most readily accepted in southeastern Magnamund is the Noble. These are always carried in the Belt Pouch. It will hold a maximum of fifty Nobles. Gold Crowns are readily accepted at a rate of 1 Gold Crown for 1 Noble.</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote> in the <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</quote> section. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>have to your</quote> with <quote>have on your</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>south-eastern</quote> with <quote>southeastern</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUARTERSTAFF</quote> with <quote>Quarterstaff</quote>. Replaced <quote>BOW</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>QUIVER</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>FLUTE</quote> with <quote>Flute</quote>. Replaced <quote>DAGGER</quote> with <quote>Dagger</quote>. Replaced <quote>SWORD</quote> with <quote>Sword</quote>. Replaced <quote>2 MEALS</quote> with <quote>2 Meals</quote>. Replaced <quote>ROPE</quote> with <quote>Rope</quote>. Replaced <quote>POTION OF LAUMSPUR</quote> with <quote>Potion of Laumspur</quote>. Replaced <quote>AXE</quote> with <quote>Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>you take with you</quote> with <quote>you acquire</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>the total sum of</quote> with <quote>the number of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines then</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, then</quote>. Added the Section <quote>Gold Crowns</quote> under the heading <strong>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</strong> which reads: <quote>The currency most readily accepted in southeastern Magnamund is the Noble. These are always carried in the Belt Pouch. It will hold a maximum of fifty Nobles. Gold Crowns are readily accepted at a rate of 1 Gold Crown for 1 Noble.</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote> in the <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</quote> section. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiweapn">Kai Weapons</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>cave or</quote> with <quote>cave, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword</quote> with <quote>magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>broadsword <quote>Illuminatus</quote></quote> with <quote>Broadsword <quote>Illuminatus</quote></quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiweapn">Kai Weapons</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>cave or</quote> with <quote>cave, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword</quote> with <quote>magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>broadsword <quote>Illuminatus</quote></quote> with <quote>Broadsword <quote>Illuminatus</quote></quote>.</p>
  
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-        <p>The rules in the Mongoose Publishing editions state that the bonus for Grand Weaponmastery with Bow is 5. Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
+        <p>The rules in the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions state that the bonus for Grand Weaponmastery with Bow is 5. Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
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         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">New Order Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>symbols and</quote> with <quote>symbols, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases and</quote> with <quote>gases, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>honour and</quote> with <quote>honour, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Four Disciplines</quote> with <quote>four Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand masters</quote> with <quote>Grand Masters</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom battle magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>Moon and</quote> with <quote>Moon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>individual (or combinations of) elements that are available,</quote> with <quote>individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof,</quote>. Replaced <quote>remove or</quote> with <quote>remove, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>multitalented</quote> with <quote>multi-talented</quote>. Replaced <quote>dialect and</quote> with <quote>dialect, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon and</quote> with <quote>Weapon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Book 22</quote> with <quote>Book 23</quote>. Replaced <quote>in Book 23</quote> with <quote>in Book 24</quote>. Replaced <quote><cite>Mydnight<ch.apos/>s Hero</cite></quote> with <quote><cite>Rune War</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>1 to 3</quote> with <quote>one to three</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>guild of magicians</quote> with <quote>Guild of Magicians</quote>. Replaced <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote> with <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the <cite>New Order</cite> series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote>Fire and</quote> with <quote>Fire, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases</quote> with <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his inanimate body increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>predictions increases</quote> with <quote>predictions increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>EQUIPMENT</quote> with <quote>Equipment</quote>. Replaced <quote>undertaken then</quote> with <quote>undertaken, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (New Order) series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>any other Special Items that</quote> with <quote>any other Special Items and Backpack Items that</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">New Order Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>symbols and</quote> with <quote>symbols, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases and</quote> with <quote>gases, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>honour and</quote> with <quote>honour, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Four Disciplines</quote> with <quote>four Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand masters</quote> with <quote>Grand Masters</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom battle magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>Moon and</quote> with <quote>Moon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>individual (or combinations of) elements that are available,</quote> with <quote>individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof,</quote>. Replaced <quote>remove or</quote> with <quote>remove, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>multitalented</quote> with <quote>multi-talented</quote>. Replaced <quote>dialect and</quote> with <quote>dialect, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon and</quote> with <quote>Weapon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Book 22</quote> with <quote>Book 23</quote>. Replaced <quote>in Book 23</quote> with <quote>in Book 24</quote>. Replaced <quote><cite>Mydnight<ch.apos/>s Hero</cite></quote> with <quote><cite>Rune War</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>1 to 3</quote> with <quote>one to three</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>guild of magicians</quote> with <quote>Guild of Magicians</quote>. Replaced <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote> with <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the <cite>New Order</cite> series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote>Fire and</quote> with <quote>Fire, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases</quote> with <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his inanimate body increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>predictions increases</quote> with <quote>predictions increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>EQUIPMENT</quote> with <quote>Equipment</quote>. Replaced <quote>undertaken then</quote> with <quote>undertaken, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (New Order) series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>any other Special Items that</quote> with <quote>any other Special Items and Backpack Items that</quote>.</p>
  
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>have to your</quote> with <quote>have on your</quote>. Replaced <quote>Before you leave Elzian and begin your long voyage south to the Isle of Lorn, you take with you a map of south-eastern Magnamund</quote> with <quote>Before you leave the Port of Suhn and begin your long voyage to the Isle of Sheasu, you take with you a map of central Southern Magnamund</quote>. Set the items on the list of equipment in Initial Capitals. Replaced <quote>the previous New Order adventure (Book 21)</quote> with <quote>completed either of the previous adventures in the <cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series (Books 21<ch.endash/>22)</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>the total sum of</quote> with <quote>the number of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines then</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, then</quote>. Added the section on <quote>Gold Crowns</quote> which reads: <quote>The currency of Siyen is the Lune. These are always carried in the Belt Pouch. It will hold a maximum of 200 Lune or 50 Gold Crowns. Gold Crowns are also readily accepted at a rate of 1 Gold Crown for 4 Lune. In the course of your journey you may also come across Ren. Ren is accepted at a rate of 10 Ren for 1 Gold Crown, and accordingly your Belt Pouch can hold a maximum of 500 Ren.</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote> in the <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</quote> section. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>have to your</quote> with <quote>have on your</quote>. Replaced <quote>Before you leave Elzian and begin your long voyage south to the Isle of Lorn, you take with you a map of south-eastern Magnamund</quote> with <quote>Before you leave the Port of Suhn and begin your long voyage to the Isle of Sheasu, you take with you a map of central Southern Magnamund</quote>. Set the items on the list of equipment in Initial Capitals. Replaced <quote>the previous New Order adventure (Book 21)</quote> with <quote>completed either of the previous adventures in the <cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series (Books 21<ch.endash/>22)</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>the total sum of</quote> with <quote>the number of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines then</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, then</quote>. Added the section on <quote>Gold Crowns</quote> which reads: <quote>The currency of Siyen is the Lune. These are always carried in the Belt Pouch. It will hold a maximum of 200 Lune or 50 Gold Crowns. Gold Crowns are also readily accepted at a rate of 1 Gold Crown for 4 Lune. In the course of your journey you may also come across Ren. Ren is accepted at a rate of 10 Ren for 1 Gold Crown, and accordingly your Belt Pouch can hold a maximum of 500 Ren.</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote> in the <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</quote> section. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiweapn">Kai Weapons</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>cave or</quote> with <quote>cave, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword</quote> with <quote>magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>broadsword <quote>Illuminatus</quote></quote> with <quote>Broadsword <quote>Illuminatus</quote></quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiweapn">Kai Weapons</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>cave or</quote> with <quote>cave, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword</quote> with <quote>magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>broadsword <quote>Illuminatus</quote></quote> with <quote>Broadsword <quote>Illuminatus</quote></quote>.</p>
  
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-        <p>The rules in the Mongoose Publishing editions state that the bonus for Grand Weaponmastery with Bow is 5. Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
+        <p>The rules in the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions state that the bonus for Grand Weaponmastery with Bow is 5. Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
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         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">New Order Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>symbols and</quote> with <quote>symbols, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases and</quote> with <quote>gases, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>honour and</quote> with <quote>honour, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Four Disciplines</quote> with <quote>four Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand masters</quote> with <quote>Grand Masters</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom battle magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>Moon and</quote> with <quote>Moon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>individual (or combinations of) elements that are available,</quote> with <quote>individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof,</quote>. Replaced <quote>remove or</quote> with <quote>remove, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>multitalented</quote> with <quote>multi-talented</quote>. Replaced <quote>dialect and</quote> with <quote>dialect, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon and</quote> with <quote>Weapon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 to 3</quote> with <quote>one to three</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>guild of magicians</quote> with <quote>Guild of Magicians</quote>. Replaced <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote> with <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the <cite>New Order</cite> series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases</quote> with <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his inanimate body increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>predictions increases</quote> with <quote>predictions increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>EQUIPMENT</quote> with <quote>Equipment</quote>. Replaced <quote>undertaken then</quote> with <quote>undertaken, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (New Order) series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>any other Special Items that</quote> with <quote>any other Special Items and Backpack Items that</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">New Order Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>symbols and</quote> with <quote>symbols, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases and</quote> with <quote>gases, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>honour and</quote> with <quote>honour, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Four Disciplines</quote> with <quote>four Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand masters</quote> with <quote>Grand Masters</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom battle magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>Moon and</quote> with <quote>Moon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>individual (or combinations of) elements that are available,</quote> with <quote>individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof,</quote>. Replaced <quote>remove or</quote> with <quote>remove, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>multitalented</quote> with <quote>multi-talented</quote>. Replaced <quote>dialect and</quote> with <quote>dialect, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon and</quote> with <quote>Weapon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 to 3</quote> with <quote>one to three</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>guild of magicians</quote> with <quote>Guild of Magicians</quote>. Replaced <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote> with <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the <cite>New Order</cite> series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases</quote> with <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his inanimate body increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>predictions increases</quote> with <quote>predictions increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>EQUIPMENT</quote> with <quote>Equipment</quote>. Replaced <quote>undertaken then</quote> with <quote>undertaken, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (New Order) series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>any other Special Items that</quote> with <quote>any other Special Items and Backpack Items that</quote>.</p>
  
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>have to your</quote> with <quote>have on your</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added missing illustration of the Potion of Laumspur. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>the total sum of</quote> with <quote>the number of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines then</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventures</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventures</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote> in the <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</quote> section. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>have to your</quote> with <quote>have on your</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added missing illustration of the Potion of Laumspur. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>the total sum of</quote> with <quote>the number of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines then</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventures</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventures</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote> in the <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</quote> section. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiweapn">Kai Weapons</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword</quote> with <quote>magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>axe <quote>Alema</quote><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote>Axe <quote>Alema</quote><ch.thinspace/></quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiweapn">Kai Weapons</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword</quote> with <quote>magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>axe <quote>Alema</quote><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote>Axe <quote>Alema</quote><ch.thinspace/></quote>.</p>
  
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-        <p>The rules in the Mongoose Publishing editions state that the bonus for Grand Weaponmastery with Bow is 5. Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
+        <p>The rules in the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions state that the bonus for Grand Weaponmastery with Bow is 5. Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
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@@ -5997,7 +5997,7 @@
  
         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">New Order Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>symbols and</quote> with <quote>symbols, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases and</quote> with <quote>gases, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>honour and</quote> with <quote>honour, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Four Disciplines</quote> with <quote>four Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand masters</quote> with <quote>Grand Masters</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom battle magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>Moon and</quote> with <quote>Moon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>individual (or combinations of) elements that are available,</quote> with <quote>individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof,</quote>. Replaced <quote>remove or</quote> with <quote>remove, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>multitalented</quote> with <quote>multi-talented</quote>. Replaced <quote>dialect and</quote> with <quote>dialect, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon and</quote> with <quote>Weapon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 to 3</quote> with <quote>one to three</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>guild of magicians</quote> with <quote>Guild of Magicians</quote>. Replaced <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote> with <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the <cite>New Order</cite> series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases</quote> with <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his in animate body increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>predictions increases</quote> with <quote>predictions increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>EQUIPMENT</quote> with <quote>Equipment</quote>. Replaced <quote>undertaken then</quote> with <quote>undertaken, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (New Order) series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>any other Special Items that</quote> with <quote>any other Special Items and Backpack Items that</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">New Order Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>symbols and</quote> with <quote>symbols, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases and</quote> with <quote>gases, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>honour and</quote> with <quote>honour, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Four Disciplines</quote> with <quote>four Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand masters</quote> with <quote>Grand Masters</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom battle magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>Moon and</quote> with <quote>Moon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>individual (or combinations of) elements that are available,</quote> with <quote>individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof,</quote>. Replaced <quote>remove or</quote> with <quote>remove, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>multitalented</quote> with <quote>multi-talented</quote>. Replaced <quote>dialect and</quote> with <quote>dialect, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon and</quote> with <quote>Weapon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 to 3</quote> with <quote>one to three</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>guild of magicians</quote> with <quote>Guild of Magicians</quote>. Replaced <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote> with <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the <cite>New Order</cite> series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases</quote> with <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his in animate body increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>predictions increases</quote> with <quote>predictions increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>EQUIPMENT</quote> with <quote>Equipment</quote>. Replaced <quote>undertaken then</quote> with <quote>undertaken, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (New Order) series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>any other Special Items that</quote> with <quote>any other Special Items and Backpack Items that</quote>.</p>
  
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>have to your</quote> with <quote>have on your</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>the total sum of</quote> with <quote>the number of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines then</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventures</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventures</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote> in the <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</quote> section. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>have to your</quote> with <quote>have on your</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>the total sum of</quote> with <quote>the number of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines then</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventures</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventures</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote> in the <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</quote> section. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiweapn">Kai Weapons</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword</quote> with <quote>magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>axe <quote>Alema</quote></quote> with <quote>Axe <quote>Alema</quote></quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiweapn">Kai Weapons</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword</quote> with <quote>magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>axe <quote>Alema</quote></quote> with <quote>Axe <quote>Alema</quote></quote>.</p>
  
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@@ -353,7 +353,7 @@
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-        <p>The rules in the Mongoose Publishing editions state that the bonus for Grand Weaponmastery with Bow is 5. Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
+        <p>The rules in the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions state that the bonus for Grand Weaponmastery with Bow is 5. Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
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@@ -6019,7 +6019,7 @@
  
         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">New Order Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>symbols and</quote> with <quote>symbols, and</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom battle magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>individual (or combinations of) elements that are available,</quote> with <quote>individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof,</quote>. Replaced <quote>remove or</quote> with <quote>remove, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>dialect and</quote> with <quote>dialect, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon and</quote> with <quote>Weapon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>earth, air, fire, and water</quote> with <quote>Earth, Air, Fire, and Water</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 to 3</quote> with <quote>one to three</quote>. Replaced <quote> guild of magicians</quote> with <quote>Guild of Magicians</quote>. Replaced <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote> with <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the <cite>New Order</cite> series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases</quote> with <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his in animate body increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>predictions increases</quote> with <quote>predictions increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>EQUIPMENT</quote> with <quote>Equipment</quote>. Replaced <quote>undertaken then</quote> with <quote>undertaken, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (New Order) series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>any other Special Items that</quote> with <quote>any other Special Items and Backpack Items that</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">New Order Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>symbols and</quote> with <quote>symbols, and</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom battle magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>individual (or combinations of) elements that are available,</quote> with <quote>individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof,</quote>. Replaced <quote>remove or</quote> with <quote>remove, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>dialect and</quote> with <quote>dialect, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon and</quote> with <quote>Weapon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>earth, air, fire, and water</quote> with <quote>Earth, Air, Fire, and Water</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 to 3</quote> with <quote>one to three</quote>. Replaced <quote> guild of magicians</quote> with <quote>Guild of Magicians</quote>. Replaced <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote> with <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the <cite>New Order</cite> series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases</quote> with <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his in animate body increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>predictions increases</quote> with <quote>predictions increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>EQUIPMENT</quote> with <quote>Equipment</quote>. Replaced <quote>undertaken then</quote> with <quote>undertaken, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (New Order) series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>any other Special Items that</quote> with <quote>any other Special Items and Backpack Items that</quote>.</p>
  
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>have to your</quote> with <quote>have on your</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>the total sum of</quote> with <quote>the number of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines then</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventures</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventures</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote> in the <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</quote> section. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>have to your</quote> with <quote>have on your</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>the total sum of</quote> with <quote>the number of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines then</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventures</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventures</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote> in the <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</quote> section. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiweapn">Kai Weapons</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword</quote> with <quote>magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>axe <quote>Alema</quote></quote> with <quote>Axe <quote>Alema</quote></quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiweapn">Kai Weapons</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword</quote> with <quote>magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>axe <quote>Alema</quote></quote> with <quote>Axe <quote>Alema</quote></quote>.</p>
  
@@ -6027,7 +6027,7 @@
  
         <p>(<a idref="levels">Levels of New Order Grand Mastership</a>) Removed parentheses from around <quote><em>You begin the New Order adventures at this level of Kai Grand Mastery</em></quote>. Replaced <quote>rank and titles</quote> with <quote>ranks and titles</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventures</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventures</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="levels">Levels of New Order Grand Mastership</a>) Removed parentheses from around <quote><em>You begin the New Order adventures at this level of Kai Grand Mastery</em></quote>. Replaced <quote>rank and titles</quote> with <quote>ranks and titles</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventures</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventures</quote>.</p>
  
-       <p>(<a idref="imprvdsc">Improved Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spells</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>Spear, etc)</quote> with <quote>and Spear)</quote>. Replaced <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>bolts, etc)</quote> with <quote>bolts)</quote>. Replaced <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Improved Grand Master Disciplines<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote>Improved Grand Master Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>3 yards</quote> with <quote>three yards</quote>. Replaced <quote>range and numbers of insects so affected increases</quote> with <quote>range and number of insects so affected increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>mastery of</quote> with <quote>Mastery of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf New Order books</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> books</quote>. Replaced <quote>an enemy in unarmed combat</quote> with <quote>an enemy</quote> in harmony with the Mongoose Publishing editions. Replaced <quote>full effect, using</quote> with <quote>full effect using</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="imprvdsc">Improved Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spells</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>Spear, etc)</quote> with <quote>and Spear)</quote>. Replaced <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>bolts, etc)</quote> with <quote>bolts)</quote>. Replaced <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Improved Grand Master Disciplines<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote>Improved Grand Master Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>3 yards</quote> with <quote>three yards</quote>. Replaced <quote>range and numbers of insects so affected increases</quote> with <quote>range and number of insects so affected increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>mastery of</quote> with <quote>Mastery of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf New Order books</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> books</quote>. Replaced <quote>an enemy in unarmed combat</quote> with <quote>an enemy</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions. Replaced <quote>full effect, using</quote> with <quote>full effect using</quote>.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiwisdm">New Order Wisdom</a>) Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Italicised <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiwisdm">New Order Wisdom</a>) Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Italicised <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>.</p>
  
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index 8ce2793..bd0fa05 100644 (file)
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@@ -323,7 +323,7 @@
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         </footnote>
  
         <footnote id="discplnz-2-foot" idref="discplnz-2">
-        <p>The rules in the Mongoose Publishing editions state that the bonus for Grand Weaponmastery with Bow is 5. Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
+        <p>The rules in the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions state that the bonus for Grand Weaponmastery with Bow is 5. Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
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@@ -5974,7 +5974,7 @@
  
         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">New Order Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>symbols and</quote> with <quote>symbols, and</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom battle magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>individual (or combinations of) elements that are available,</quote> with <quote>individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof,</quote>. Replaced <quote>remove or</quote> with <quote>remove, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>dialect and</quote> with <quote>dialect, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon and</quote> with <quote>Weapon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 to 3</quote> with <quote>one to three</quote>. Replaced <quote>guild of magicians</quote> with <quote>Guild of Magicians</quote>. Replaced <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote> with <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the <cite>New Order</cite> series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases</quote> with <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his in animate body increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>predictions increases</quote> with <quote>predictions increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>EQUIPMENT</quote> with <quote>Equipment</quote>. Replaced <quote>undertaken then</quote> with <quote>undertaken, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (New Order) series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>any other Special Items that</quote> with <quote>any other Special Items and Backpack Items that</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">New Order Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>symbols and</quote> with <quote>symbols, and</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom battle magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>individual (or combinations of) elements that are available,</quote> with <quote>individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof,</quote>. Replaced <quote>remove or</quote> with <quote>remove, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>dialect and</quote> with <quote>dialect, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon and</quote> with <quote>Weapon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 to 3</quote> with <quote>one to three</quote>. Replaced <quote>guild of magicians</quote> with <quote>Guild of Magicians</quote>. Replaced <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote> with <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the <cite>New Order</cite> series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases</quote> with <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his in animate body increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>predictions increases</quote> with <quote>predictions increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>EQUIPMENT</quote> with <quote>Equipment</quote>. Replaced <quote>undertaken then</quote> with <quote>undertaken, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (New Order) series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>any other Special Items that</quote> with <quote>any other Special Items and Backpack Items that</quote>.</p>
  
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>the total sum of</quote> with <quote>the number of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines then</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventures</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventures</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote> in the <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</quote> section. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>the total sum of</quote> with <quote>the number of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines then</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventures</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventures</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote> in the <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</quote> section. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiweapn">Kai Weapons</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword</quote> with <quote>magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>axe <quote>Alema</quote></quote> with <quote>Axe <quote>Alema</quote></quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiweapn">Kai Weapons</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword</quote> with <quote>magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>axe <quote>Alema</quote></quote> with <quote>Axe <quote>Alema</quote></quote>.</p>
  
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-        <p>The rules in the Mongoose Publishing editions state that the bonus for Grand Weaponmastery with Bow is 5. Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
+        <p>The rules in the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions state that the bonus for Grand Weaponmastery with Bow is 5. Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
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         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">New Order Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>symbols and</quote> with <quote>symbols, and</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom battle magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>individual (or combinations of) elements that are available,</quote> with <quote>individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof,</quote>. Replaced <quote>remove or</quote> with <quote>remove, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>dialect and</quote> with <quote>dialect, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon and</quote> with <quote>Weapon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 to 3</quote> with <quote>one to three</quote>. Replaced <quote>guild of magicians</quote> with <quote>Guild of Magicians</quote>. Replaced <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote> with <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the <cite>New Order</cite> series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote>Fire and</quote> with <quote>Fire, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases</quote> with <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his in animate body increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>predictions increases</quote> with <quote>predictions increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>EQUIPMENT</quote> with <quote>Equipment</quote>. Replaced <quote>undertaken then</quote> with <quote>undertaken, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (New Order) series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure, which is called: <cite>The Storms of Chai</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>any other Special Items that</quote> with <quote>any other Special Items and Backpack Items that</quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">New Order Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>symbols and</quote> with <quote>symbols, and</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom battle magic</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>magi-magic spells</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>individual (or combinations of) elements that are available,</quote> with <quote>individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof,</quote>. Replaced <quote>remove or</quote> with <quote>remove, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>dialect and</quote> with <quote>dialect, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapon and</quote> with <quote>Weapon, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 to 3</quote> with <quote>one to three</quote>. Replaced <quote>guild of magicians</quote> with <quote>Guild of Magicians</quote>. Replaced <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote> with <quote>For every adventure that you complete successfully in the <cite>New Order</cite> series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.</quote>. Replaced <quote>Fire and</quote> with <quote>Fire, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases</quote> with <quote>Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his in animate body increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>predictions increases</quote> with <quote>predictions increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>EQUIPMENT</quote> with <quote>Equipment</quote>. Replaced <quote>undertaken then</quote> with <quote>undertaken, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf (New Order) series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>New Order series</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure, which is called: <cite>The Storms of Chai</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventure</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>any other Special Items that</quote> with <quote>any other Special Items and Backpack Items that</quote>.</p>
  
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>the total sum of</quote> with <quote>the number of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines then</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventures</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventures</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote> in the <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</quote> section. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to use it</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Replaced <quote>the total sum of</quote> with <quote>the number of</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines then</quote> with <quote>Disciplines, then</quote>. Replaced <quote>normal weapons</quote> with <quote>normal Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>New Order adventures</quote> with <quote><cite>New Order</cite> adventures</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote> in the <quote>Equipment<ch.emdash/>How to Use It</quote> section. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiweapn">Kai Weapons</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword</quote> with <quote>magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>axe <quote>Alema</quote></quote> with <quote>Axe <quote>Alema</quote></quote>.</p>
  
  
         <p>(<a idref="kaiweapn">Kai Weapons</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword</quote> with <quote>magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword</quote>. Replaced <quote>axe <quote>Alema</quote></quote> with <quote>Axe <quote>Alema</quote></quote>.</p>
  
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        <footnotes>
         <footnote id="equipmnt-1-foot" idref="equipmnt-1">
  
        <footnotes>
         <footnote id="equipmnt-1-foot" idref="equipmnt-1">
-        <p>The new Mongoose Publishing editions of the gamebooks clarify that <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote></p>
+        <p>The Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions of the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> books clarify that <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote></p>
         </footnote>
        </footnotes>
  
         </footnote>
        </footnotes>
author	Simon Osborne <simon.osborne@projectaon.org>
	Fri, 12 Jul 2013 11:53:44 +0000 (11:53 +0000)
committer	Simon Osborne <simon.osborne@projectaon.org>
	Fri, 12 Jul 2013 11:53:44 +0000 (11:53 +0000)
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