(er) 8: Gold Coins issue

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      <meta><title>8</title></meta>
 
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-       <p>Splashes of the creature<ch.apos/>s caustic blood and saliva draw wisps of smoke from the sleeves of your tunic. Quickly you run to a geyser pool and wash this vile fluid away before it eats through to your skin. As you are cleaning you clothes, you notice to your dismay that the caustic fluid has eaten a hole in your Belt Pouch and you have lost half of your gold coins.</p>
-       <p>You must reduce your current total of Gold Coins by half. Remember to make the necessary adjustment in the Belt Pouch section of your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> before continuing.</p>
+       <p>Splashes of the creature<ch.apos/>s caustic blood and saliva draw wisps of smoke from the sleeves of your tunic. Quickly you run to a geyser pool and wash this vile fluid away before it eats through to your skin. As you are cleaning your clothes, you notice to your dismay that the caustic fluid has eaten a hole in your Belt Pouch and you have lost half of your coins.</p>
+       <p>You must reduce your current total of coins by half. Remember to make the necessary adjustment in the Belt Pouch section of your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> before continuing.</p>
        <choice idref="sect2"><link-text>Turn to 2</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Replaced <quote>date and</quote> with <quote>date, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow of Atonement</quote>. Replaced <quote>steam cannon</quote> with <quote>steam-cannon</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect7">7</a>) Replaced <quote>everyone except the sentries are asleep</quote> with <quote>everyone is asleep except the sentries</quote>. Replaced <quote>rest, and unless</quote> with <quote>rest, unless</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect8">8</a>) Replaced <quote>belt pouch</quote> with <quote>Belt Pouch</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect8">8</a>) Replaced <quote>belt pouch</quote> with <quote>Belt Pouch</quote>. Replaced <quote>half of your coins</quote> with <quote>half of your coins</quote>. Replaced <quote>total of Gold Coins by half</quote> with <quote>total of coins by half</quote> because not all currency units are made of gold, and the loss is due to the Belt Pouch being eaten through rather than the gold coins being damaged.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect9">9</a>) Replaced <quote>burrows and</quote> with <quote>burrows, and</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>agarashi</quote> with <quote>Agarashi</quote>. Replaced <quote>fresh water spring</quote> with <quote>freshwater spring</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Replaced <quote>to Khea-khan<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>to the Khea-khan<ch.apos/>s</quote>. Replaced <quote>agarashi</quote> with <quote>Agarashi</quote>. Replaced <quote>western rim</quote> with <quote>eastern rim</quote> as <a idref="sect2">Sections 2</a> and <a idref="sect130">130</a> indicate a speedy exit from the vale early the following morning. Replaced <quote>Some descend</quote> with <quote>Some of the fissures descend</quote>.</p>