18dotd: 0-4 > 4 or less, 5-9 > 5 or higher

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       <p>You draw and fire an Arrow in the blink of an eye. The shaft whistles through the trees and hits the war-dog squarely between its hideously yellow eyes. For a few seconds it continues to bound forward; then its front legs collapse beneath its weight and it crashes, nose-first, into the soft forest earth.</p>
       <p>Swiftly you shoulder your Bow and run headlong into the trees, desperate to make use of what little time you have gained by slaying the pack leader.</p>
       <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you possess Grand Pathsmanship, add 2 to the number you have picked. If you possess Grand Huntmastery, add 1.</p>
-      <choice idref="sect73">If your total score is now 0<ch.endash/>4, <link-text>turn to 73</link-text>.</choice>
-      <choice idref="sect12">If it is 5<ch.endash/>9, <link-text>turn to 12</link-text>.</choice>
+      <choice idref="sect73">If your total score is now 4 or less, <link-text>turn to 73</link-text>.</choice>
+      <choice idref="sect12">If it is 5 or higher, <link-text>turn to 12</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -6271,7 +6271,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect338">338</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai alchemy</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect339">339</a>) Replaced <quote>Weapons<ch.emdash/></quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Corrected the order of the Mace prices: bought for one Gold Crown and sold for two.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect340">340</a>) Replaced <quote>pouring</quote> with <quote>poring</quote>. Replaced <quote>stare, then</quote> with <quote>stare; then</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect341">341</a>) Replaced <quote>add 1</quote> with <quote>add 1.</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>forward, then</quote> with <quote>forward; then</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect341">341</a>) Replaced <quote>add 1</quote> with <quote>add 1.</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>forward, then</quote> with <quote>forward; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>0<ch.endash/>4</quote> with <quote>4 or less</quote>. Replaced <quote>5<ch.endash/>9</quote> with <quote>5 or higher</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect342">342</a>) Replaced <quote>her majesty, and</quote> with <quote>her Majesty and</quote>. Replaced <quote>reads: VANAMOR 280 miles</quote> with <quote>reads <ch.lsquot/>Vanamor 280 miles<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote>. Replaced <quote>court cavalrymen</quote> with <quote>Court Cavalrymen</quote>. Replaced <quote>by its East Gate and sets off towards the outlying village of Sharr. Here you cross the mighty River Phoen by way of a great stone bridge. On the far side of this bridge you notice a signpost which points to the east</quote> with <quote>by its East Gate. Here you cross a great stone bridge on the far side of which is a signpost pointing to the east</quote> because both Sharr and the River Phoen are many miles to the northeast of Garthen near the city of Phoena (cf. <bookref series="lw" book="08tjoh" section="sect271"><cite>The Jungle of Horrors</cite> Section 271</bookref>).</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect343">343</a>) Replaced <quote>add 1</quote> with <quote>add 1.</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect344">344</a>) Replaced <quote>lavas</quote> with <quote>Lavas</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Gate</quote> with <quote>the Shadow Gate</quote>. Replaced <quote>pain, then</quote> with <quote>pain; then</quote>.</p>