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authorJonathan Blake <jonathan.blake@projectaon.org>
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committerJonathan Blake <jonathan.blake@projectaon.org>
Sun, 11 Feb 2018 18:43:23 +0000 (18:43 +0000)
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       <p>Shafts of sunlight break through the slate-grey cloud, and the rain eases off and finally stops. You ride across the rolling valley floor towards the River Phoen until the track stops at a ramshackle house perched precariously on the river bank. An old wooden jetty juts out from the side of the house, its platform almost submerged in the rain-swollen river. A notice board standing in front of the house reads:</p>
       <signpost>
-       <p>FERRY HOUSE LANDING</p>
+       <p>Ferry House Landing</p>
        <p>
         <line>Passenger barges to Tharro<ch.emdash/>embark from this jetty.</line>
         <line>Barges to Phoena<ch.emdash/>embark from opposite bank.</line>
        </p>
-       <p>NO CATTLE, WAGONS, CARAVANS, OR HERD ANIMALS UNLESS BY SPECIAL ARRANGEMENT</p>
+       <p><em>No cattle, wagons, caravans, or herd animals unless by special arrangement.</em></p>
       </signpost>
       <choice idref="sect299">If you wish to wait here for a barge to Tharro, <link-text>turn to 299</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect130">If you wish to investigate the Ferry House, <link-text>turn to 130</link-text>.</choice>
         <line>Renegade Shaman of Mogaruith.</line>
         <line>Leader of the forbidden sect of Dazudskul.</line>
        </p>
-       <p>It is hereby proclaimed by lawful authority that in just retribution for vile acts of black sorcery perpetrated throughout the Freelands of Talestria, a bounty of TEN THOUSAND LUNE is offered for the head of Kezoor the Necromancer.</p>
+       <p>It is hereby proclaimed by lawful authority that in just retribution for vile acts of black sorcery perpetrated throughout the Freelands of Talestria, a bounty of <em>Ten Thousand Lune</em> is offered for the head of Kezoor the Necromancer.</p>
        <p class="right">
         <line>By order of Queen Evaine of Talestria</line>
         <line>MS<ch.nbsp/>5060</line>
      <meta><title>204</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-      <p>You arrive at a flagstoned quadrangle. It is well lit by street lanterns, which hang from the first-floor balcony of a large and unusual building constructed of blue stone, with silver and scarlet veins running through it. The bricks have been polished to give a mirror-like shine. A huge wooden door banded with copper dominates the entrance, above which a bronze cast depicts a flaming broadsword with the words <quote>TEMPLE OF THE SWORD</quote> engraved along the blade.</p>
+      <p>You arrive at a flagstoned quadrangle. It is well lit by street lanterns, which hang from the first-floor balcony of a large and unusual building constructed of blue stone, with silver and scarlet veins running through it. The bricks have been polished to give a mirror-like shine. A huge wooden door banded with copper dominates the entrance, above which a bronze cast depicts a flaming broadsword with the words <quote>Temple of the Sword</quote> engraved along the blade.</p>
       <p>Beyond the temple, a street ascends to a stone watchtower. It is built on the peak of a hill and dominates the town.</p>
       <choice idref="sect22">If you have a Map of Tharro, you may consult it before choosing any of the following options: <link-text>turn to 22</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect327">If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Pathsmanship, <link-text>turn to 327</link-text>.</choice>
       <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect53">53</a>) Replaced <quote>ago this</quote> with <quote>ago, this</quote>. Replaced <quote>luxurious but</quote> with <quote>luxurious, but</quote> and  <quote>air and</quote> with <quote>air, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>rope and</quote> with <quote>rope, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect54">54</a>) Replaced <quote>desperation one</quote> with <quote>desperation, one</quote>. Replaced <quote>Discipline</quote> with <quote>Disciplines</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect55">55</a>) Replaced <quote>cloud and</quote> with <quote>cloud, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>river-bank</quote> with <quote>river bank</quote>. Replaced <quote>noticeboard</quote> with <quote>notice board</quote>. Replaced <quote>CARAVANS OR</quote> with <quote>CARAVANS, OR</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect55">55</a>) Replaced <quote>cloud and</quote> with <quote>cloud, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>river-bank</quote> with <quote>river bank</quote>. Replaced <quote>noticeboard</quote> with <quote>notice board</quote>. Replaced <quote>FERRY HOUSE LANDING</quote> with <quote>Ferry House Landing</quote>. Replaced <quote>NO CATTLE, WAGONS, CARAVANS, OR HERD ANIMALS UNLESS BY SPECIAL ARRANGEMENT</quote> with <quote><em>No cattle, wagons, caravans, or herd animals unless by special arrangement.</em></quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>korlinium and</quote> with <quote>korlinium, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>signals it</quote> with <quote>signals, it</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect57">57</a>) Replaced <quote>confusion you</quote> with <quote>confusion, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>ribcage</quote> with <quote>rib cage</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect58">58</a>) Replaced <quote>light you</quote> with <quote>light, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect163">163</a>) Replaced <quote>explodes and</quote> with <quote>explodes, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect164">164</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect165">165</a>) Replaced <quote>aside but</quote> with <quote>aside, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>him but</quote> with <quote>him, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>inside and</quote> with <quote>inside, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Bor-musket</quote> with <quote>Bor musket</quote>. Replaced <quote>trigger and</quote> with <quote>trigger, and</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>) Replaced <quote>Dazudskul</quote> with <quote>Dazudskul.</quote>. Replaced <quote>fortune whispers</quote> with <quote>fortune,<ch.rsquot/> whispers</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>) Replaced <quote>Dazudskul</quote> with <quote>Dazudskul.</quote>. Replaced <quote>fortune whispers</quote> with <quote>fortune,<ch.rsquot/> whispers</quote>. Replaced <quote>TEN THOUSAND LUNE</quote> with <quote><em>Ten Thousand Lune</em></quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect168">168</a>) Replaced <quote>counter and</quote> with <quote>counter, and</quote>. Put dashes between each item on the list and its price. Replaced <quote>arrows and</quote> with <quote>arrows, and</quote>. Set the items in initial capital letters. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>bowstrings and</quote> with <quote>bowstrings, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>finger and wrist</quote> with <quote>wrist and finger</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect169">169</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>. Replaced <quote>duck and</quote> with <quote>duck, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>clawed skeletal</quote> with <quote>clawed, skeletal</quote>. Added <quote>If you win the combat against the Vordak you are able to retrieve the Weapon and keep it noted on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</quote> as clarified by the <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter Summer Special 1987</cite>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect172">172</a>) Replaced <quote>him and</quote> with <quote>him, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Replaced <quote>bang</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>bang</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect201">201</a>) Replaced <quote>aside and</quote> with <quote>aside, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>glowing silvery</quote> with <quote>glowing, silvery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Tan-ash-oka, Nadoknar Gnaag!</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-giak">Tan-ash-okja Nadoknar Gnaag!</foreign></quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect202">202</a>) Replaced <quote>remains and</quote> with <quote>remains, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>robes presumably</quote> with <quote>robes, presumably</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect204">204</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>watch-tower</quote> with <quote>watchtower</quote>. Moved the map choice into the first position and the Pathsmanship choice into the second position. Replaced <quote>options;</quote> with <quote>options:</quote>. Replaced <quote>building. Constructed</quote> with <quote>building constructed</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect204">204</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>watch-tower</quote> with <quote>watchtower</quote>. Moved the map choice into the first position and the Pathsmanship choice into the second position. Replaced <quote>options;</quote> with <quote>options:</quote>. Replaced <quote>building. Constructed</quote> with <quote>building constructed</quote>. Replaced <quote>TEMPLE OF THE SWORD</quote> with <quote>Temple of the Sword</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect206">206</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow or do</quote> with <quote>Bow, or if you do</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect208">208</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect209">209</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>