Changes made to regularise Item names (hat tip: David Kubecka) and to fix problems...
authorSimon Osborne <simon.osborne@projectaon.org>
Wed, 14 Nov 2012 11:32:43 +0000 (11:32 +0000)
committerSimon Osborne <simon.osborne@projectaon.org>
Wed, 14 Nov 2012 11:32:43 +0000 (11:32 +0000)
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en/xml/03btng.xml
en/xml/07cd.xml
en/xml/08tjoh.xml
en/xml/09tcof.xml
en/xml/11tpot.xml
en/xml/12tmod.xml
en/xml/13tplor.xml
en/xml/14tcok.xml
en/xml/16tlov.xml
en/xml/17tdoi.xml
en/xml/18dotd.xml
en/xml/19wb.xml
en/xml/23mh.xml
en/xml/24rw.xml

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        <p>(<a idref="sect218">218</a>) Replaced <quote>it.!</quote> with <quote>it!</quote>. Replaced <quote>Jahksa, as</quote> with <quote>Jahksa as</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect220">220</a>) Replaced <quote>the Elessi</quote> with <quote>only one Elessi</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Pipe</quote> with <quote>pipe</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>) Replaced <quote>hinge or</quote> with <quote>hinge, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>cloud plane</quote> with <quote>cloud plain</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect226">26</a> Replaced <quote>Staff, and have</quote> with <quote>Staff and have</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect234">234</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Replaced <quote>throat its</quote> with <quote>throat, its</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect237">237</a>) Replaced <quote>laughter; but</quote> with <quote>laughter<ch.emdash/>but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect327">327</a>) Replaced <quote>eternity you</quote> with <quote>eternity, you</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect330">330</a>) Replaced <quote>honorary</quote> with <quote>honoured</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect331">331</a>) Replaced <quote>city and</quote> with <quote>city, and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect334">334</a>) Replaced <quote>horror, there</quote> with <quote>horror. There</quote>. Replaced <quote>Staff, and have</quote> with <quote>Staff and have</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect334">334</a>) Replaced <quote>horror, there</quote> with <quote>horror. There</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect338">338</a>) Replaced <quote>Moonstone and</quote> with <quote>Moonstone, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>surface it</quote> with <quote>surface, it</quote>. Replaced <quote>you, but</quote> with <quote>you but</quote>. Replaced <quote>instruct and, with</quote> with <quote>instruct, and with</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect339">339</a>) Replaced <quote>cloud plane</quote> with <quote>cloud plain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect340">340</a>) Replaced <quote>agility you</quote> with <quote>agility, you</quote>.</p>
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         <dt>Coordination</dt>
          <dd>Jonathan Blake</dd>
         <dt>Special Thanks</dt>
-         <dd>Jan Charv<ch.aacute/>t, Alfred Hailey, Benjamin Krefetz, Dewi Morgan, Eric Rossing, Keith Sheldon, Wayne Stubbs, Denis Vald, Arthur Yin</dd>
+         <dd>Jan Charv<ch.aacute/>t, Alfred Hailey, Benjamin Krefetz, David Kubecka, Dewi Morgan, Eric Rossing, Keith Sheldon, Wayne Stubbs, Denis Vald, Arthur Yin</dd>
        </dl>
       </data>
      </section>
 
      <data>
       <p>The Blue Pills are made from the dried and crushed roots of the Sabito plant, commonly found in the Boari Jungle, but rare in any other part of Magnamund. They enable the human body to extract oxygen from water by absorbing it through the skin, thereby allowing anyone who swallows Sabito root to <quote>breathe</quote> underwater.</p>
-      <p>There are enough pills for one full dose.</p>
+      <p>There are enough pills for one full dose. Record them as Sabito on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
       <choice idref="sect323"><link-text>Turn to 323</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
 
      <data>
       <p>As soon as your hand touches the mist, a terrific bolt of blue lightning arcs towards it from one corner of the ceiling. Pain shoots up your arm, and you are catapulted into the water by the shock (lose 4 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points).</p>
-      <choice idref="sect230">If you have a Vial of Blue Pills, <link-text>turn to 230</link-text>.</choice>
+      <choice idref="sect230">If you possess some Sabito, <link-text>turn to 230</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect263">If you do not possess this item, <link-text>turn to 263</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
 
      <data>
       <p>Your lungs feel as if they are about to explode, but still the door will not open.</p>
-      <choice idref="sect230">If you have a Vial of Blue Pills, <link-text>turn to 230</link-text>.</choice>
+      <choice idref="sect230">If you possess some Sabito, <link-text>turn to 230</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect313">If you wish to continue to try to open the door with your Magnakai Discipline, <link-text>turn to 313</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect153">If you wish to swim to the surface, <link-text>turn to 153</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
        <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>staircase and</quote> with <quote>staircase, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Replaced <quote>louder but</quote> with <quote>louder, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect41">41</a>) Replaced <quote>warm but</quote> with <quote>warm, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect43">43</a>) Replaced <quote>Boari jungle</quote> with <quote>Boari Jungle</quote>. Replaced <quote>Boari jungle</quote> with <quote>Boari Jungle</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect43">43</a>) Replaced <quote>Boari jungle</quote> with <quote>Boari Jungle</quote>. Replaced <quote>Boari jungle</quote> with <quote>Boari Jungle</quote>. Added <quote>Record them as Sabito on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</quote> (cf. <bookref series="lw" book="09tcof"><cite>The Cauldron of Fear</cite></bookref> <bookref series="lw" book="09tcof" section="sect29">Section 29</bookref>).</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect44">44</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect45">45</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect46">46</a>) Moved the Invisibility/Pathsmanship/Divination choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>Pathsmanship or</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship, or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>beastmen</quote> with <quote>Beastmen</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items</quote> with <quote>items</quote>. Replaced <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>Special Items</quote> for clarity.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect57">57</a>) Replaced <quote>deeper but</quote> with <quote>deeper, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect58">58</a>) Replaced <quote>points.)</quote> with <quote>points).</quote>. Replaced <quote>presence but</quote> with <quote>presence, but</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect60">60</a>) Replaced <quote>arm and</quote> with <quote>arm, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>this Item</quote> with <quote>this item</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect60">60</a>) Replaced <quote>arm and</quote> with <quote>arm, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>this Item</quote> with <quote>this item</quote>. Replaced <quote>have a Vial of Blue Pills</quote> with <quote>possess some Sabito</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect61">61</a>) Replaced <quote>ceilings and scrambling</quote> with <quote>ceilings, and scrambling</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect63">63</a>) Replaced <quote>chamber, but</quote> with <quote>chamber but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect64">64</a>) Replaced <quote>deep and</quote> with <quote>deep, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect177">177</a>) Replaced <quote>lake splitting</quote> with <quote>lake, splitting</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect179">179</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect181">181</a>) Replaced <quote>life and</quote> with <quote>life, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>The torch splutters</quote> with <quote>The torch sputters</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>have a Vial of Blue Pills</quote> with <quote>possess some Sabito</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Replaced <quote>run you</quote> with <quote>run, you</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>human but</quote> with <quote>human, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>spear</quote> with <quote>Spear</quote>. Replaced <quote>blow but</quote> with <quote>blow, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Moved the Divination choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
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      <meta><title>204</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-      <p>You arrive at a flagstoned quadrangle. It is well lit by street lanterns, which hang from the first-floor balcony of a large and unusual building  constructed of blue stone, with silver and scarlet veins running through it. The bricks have been polished to give a mirror-like shine. A huge wooden door banded with copper dominates the entrance, above which a bronze cast depicts a flaming broadsword with the words <quote>TEMPLE OF THE SWORD</quote> engraved along the blade.</p>
+      <p>You arrive at a flagstoned quadrangle. It is well lit by street lanterns, which hang from the first-floor balcony of a large and unusual building constructed of blue stone, with silver and scarlet veins running through it. The bricks have been polished to give a mirror-like shine. A huge wooden door banded with copper dominates the entrance, above which a bronze cast depicts a flaming broadsword with the words <quote>TEMPLE OF THE SWORD</quote> engraved along the blade.</p>
       <p>Beyond the temple, a street ascends to a stone watchtower. It is built on the peak of a hill and dominates the town.</p>
       <choice idref="sect22">If you have a Map of Tharro, you may consult it before choosing any of the following options: <link-text>turn to 22</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect327">If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Pathsmanship, <link-text>turn to 327</link-text>.</choice>
        <p>Or you can hide among the pews by turning to 198.</p>
        <p>Or you can stand in the central aisle and await your pursuers by turning to 305.</p>
       </blockquote>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect160">160</a>) Replaced <quote>dead writhing</quote> with <quote>dead, writhing</quote>. Replaced <quote>pulpit<ch.emdash/>turn</quote> with <quote>pulpit, turn</quote>. Replaced <quote>pews<ch.emdash/>turn</quote> with <quote>pews, turn</quote>. Replaced <quote>pursuers<ch.emdash/>turn</quote> with <quote>pursuers, turn</quote>. Added <quote><ch.emdash/></quote> to the beginning of the last three choices.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect160">160</a>) Replaced <quote>dead writhing</quote> with <quote>dead, writhing</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect161">161</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect162">162</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar Horselord</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Horselord</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect163">163</a>) Replaced <quote>explodes and</quote> with <quote>explodes, and</quote>.</p>
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        <dt>Coordination</dt>
         <dd>Jonathan Blake</dd>
        <dt>Special Thanks</dt>
-        <dd>Jan Charv<ch.aacute/>t, Benjamin Krefetz, Neil McGrory, Dewi Morgan, Sam Seaver, Brian Thompson, Denis Vald, Robert Wellock</dd>
+        <dd>Jan Charv<ch.aacute/>t, Benjamin Krefetz, David Kubecka, Neil McGrory, Dewi Morgan, Sam Seaver, Brian Thompson, Denis Vald, Robert Wellock</dd>
       </dl>
      </data>
     </section>
 
      <data>
       <p>The icy water clogs your nose and throat and numbs you to the bone. Desperately you fight to control the panic gnawing at your insides as your air-starved lungs fill your chest with an agonizing pain.</p>
-      <choice idref="sect25">If you have a Vial of Blue Pills, <link-text>turn to 25</link-text>.</choice>
+      <choice idref="sect25">If you possess some Sabito, <link-text>turn to 25</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect329">If you do not possess this item, <link-text>turn to 329</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
       <p>(<a idref="sect283">283</a>) Replaced <quote>cream-coloured</quote> with <quote>cream coloured</quote>. Replaced <quote>instantly but</quote> with <quote>instantly, but</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect286">286</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect288">288</a>) Replaced <quote>you he</quote> with <quote>you, he</quote>. Replaced <quote>emporiums</quote> with <quote>emporia</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect289">289</a>) Replaced <quote>have a Vial of Blue Pills</quote> with <quote>possess some Sabito</quote> since you are told to record the pills as Sabito in <a idref="sect29">Section 29</a>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect290">290</a>) Replaced <quote>arrest!</quote> with <quote>arrest,</quote>. Replaced <quote>spying.</quote> with <quote>spying!</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect291">291</a>) Replaced <quote>Curing, and have</quote> with <quote>Curing and have</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect293">293</a>) Replaced <quote>chase but</quote> with <quote>chase, but</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Vanta</quote> with <quote>Varta</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
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       <p>(<a idref="sect122">122</a>) Replaced <quote>co-ordinates</quote> with <quote>coordinates</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote>death cry</quote> with <quote>death-cry</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect125">125</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai</quote> with <quote>Magnakai</quote>. Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect126">126</a>) Added <quote>, or if you do not wish to use them,</quote> to the choice to go deeper into the fissure without the aid of the items mentioned.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect126">126</a>) Added <quote>, or do not wish to use them,</quote> to the choice to go deeper into the fissure without the aid of the items mentioned.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect127">127</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>your chest and</quote> with <quote>your chest, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect134">134</a>) Replaced <quote>beam it</quote> with <quote>beam, it</quote>. Replaced <quote>Rope, or</quote> with <quote>Rope or</quote>.</p>
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        <p>(<a idref="sect239">239</a>) Replaced <quote>men, then</quote> with <quote>men, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote> and reordered the first and last choices at the end of the section. Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Added <quote>This reduction is permanent.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect241">241</a>) Replaced <quote>early-morning</quote> with <quote>early morning</quote>. Replaced <quote>fog. A</quote> with <quote>fog, a</quote>. Replaced <quote>kuri-storm</quote> with <quote>Kuri-storm</quote>, as this presumably refers to sub-tropical storms found in the Kuri Sea to the south of Durenor.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect243">243</a>) Replaced <quote>Pathsmanship, and have</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship and have</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pathsmanship, and have</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship and have</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect245">245</a>) Replaced <quote>this weapon</quote> with <quote>this Weapon</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect246">246</a>) Replaced <quote>the dead Liganim</quote> with <quote>the dead Ligan</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect247">247</a>) Replaced <quote>Magician<ch.apos/>s Guild</quote> with <quote>Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild</quote>.</p>
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        <dt>Coordination</dt>
         <dd>Jonathan Blake</dd>
        <dt>Special Thanks</dt>
-        <dd>Boris Basic, Dan Carter, David Davis, Benjamin Krefetz, Ben Libert, Neil McGrory, Chris Neilson, Stelio Passaris, Timothy Pederick, Martin Ryland, Peter Smyth, Jason Thomas, Christopher Turner, Jaime Wawra, Arthur Yin</dd>
+        <dd>Boris Basic, Dan Carter, David Davis, Benjamin Krefetz, David Kubecka, Ben Libert, Neil McGrory, Chris Neilson, Stelio Passaris, Timothy Pederick, Martin Ryland, Peter Smyth, Jason Thomas, Christopher Turner, Jaime Wawra, Arthur Yin</dd>
       </dl>
      </data>
     </section>
       <p>After a while you notice long streamers of greasy yellow moss hanging from cracks in the tunnel roof. Between them are spread festering fungi of varying hues, all cankerous and vile to the eye. You are passing beneath these growths when suddenly, as if triggered by a silent command, they burst open and shower you with great clouds of sticky, mote-like spores.</p>
       <p>At once your body senses that the spores are highly poisonous and, as a subconscious reflex, your Magnakai Curing skills activate and counter the deadly toxins that have found their way into your lungs. Your chest is wracked with pain but you sustain no serious injury: lose 2 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
       <p>The sticky, foul-smelling spore cloud is so thick that you have difficulty moving forwards. It feels as if you are wading through a tunnel of mud. Your Kai skills have neutralized the poisonous spores, but there is now hardly any air left to breathe. Fear wells up in your stomach as you feel your strength beginning to ebb.</p>
-      <choice idref="sect277">If you possess some Baylon<ch.apos/>s Fungi, <link-text>turn to 277</link-text>.</choice>
+      <choice idref="sect277">If you possess some Baylon<ch.apos/>s Bough Fungi, <link-text>turn to 277</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect136">If you do not possess this item, <link-text>turn to 136</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
       <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>Cener<ch.apos/>s evil plan</quote> with <quote>Ceners<ch.apos/> evil plan</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Replaced <quote>semi-circular</quote> with <quote>semicircular</quote>. Replaced <quote>Ruel war-dogs</quote> with <quote>Ruel War-dogs</quote>. Replaced <quote>wag dogs</quote> with <quote>war-dogs</quote>. Replaced <quote>charge</quote> with <quote>charges</quote> in the illustrations caption.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Replaced <quote>arching</quote> with <quote>arcing</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect16">16</a>) Replaced <quote>sub-conscious</quote> with <quote>subconscious</quote>. Replaced <quote>curing</quote> with <quote>Curing</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect16">16</a>) Replaced <quote>sub-conscious</quote> with <quote>subconscious</quote>. Replaced <quote>curing</quote> with <quote>Curing</quote>. Replaced <quote>Baylon<ch.apos/>s Fungi</quote> with <quote>Baylon<ch.apos/>s Bough Fungi</quote> as this is how you are told to record it in (cf. <bookref series="lw" book="11tpot"><cite>The Prisoners of Time</cite></bookref> <bookref series="lw" book="11tpot" section="sect146">Section 146</bookref>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect17">17</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect18">18</a>) Replaced <quote>perpetuated</quote> with <quote>perpetrated</quote>. Replaced <quote>mid-air, then</quote> with <quote>mid-air, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Backpack item</quote> with <quote>Backpack Item</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect19">19</a>) Replaced <quote>another, then</quote> with <quote>another, and then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect116">116</a>) Replaced <quote>discoloration</quote> with <quote>discolouration</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect117">117</a>) Replaced <quote>divination</quote> with <quote>Divination</quote>. Replaced <quote>Cener druid</quote> with <quote>Cener Druid</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect119">119</a>) Replaced <quote>If you already possess Cener Robes</quote> with <quote>If you are already wearing a Cener Robe</quote> as all other references to the Cener Robe in this book are in the singular. Replaced <quote>one, or neither</quote> with <quote>one or neither</quote>.</p> 
-      <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Replaced <quote>tail, ridged</quote> with <quote>tail ridged</quote>.</p>
+<!--      <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Replaced <quote>tail, ridged</quote> with <quote>tail ridged</quote>.</p>-->
       <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Replaced <quote>pit agarashi<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Pit Agarashi<ch.apos/>s</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect122">122</a>) Replaced <quote>seek council</quote> with <quote>seek counsel</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines, or</quote> with <quote>Disciplines or</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>inlayed</quote> with <quote>inlaid</quote>. Replaced <quote>antechamber, however</quote> with <quote>antechamber; however</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect241">241</a>) Replaced <quote>breath, then</quote> with <quote>breath, and then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>ridge, then</quote> with <quote>ridge, and then</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect244">244</a>) Replaced <quote>hunch of maggoty</quote> with <quote>haunch of maggoty</quote>. Replaced <quote>shoulder, and</quote> with <quote>shoulder and</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect244">244</a>) Replaced <quote>hunch of maggoty</quote> with <quote>haunch of maggoty</quote>.</p>
+      <!--<p>(<a idref="sect244">244</a>) Replaced <quote>shoulder, and</quote> with <quote>shoulder and</quote>.</p>-->
       <p>(<a idref="sect247">247</a>) Replaced <quote>Sloat</quote> with <quote>sloat</quote>. Replaced <quote>ante-rooms</quote> with <quote>anterooms</quote>. Replaced <quote>ante-room</quote> with <quote>anteroom</quote>. Replaced <quote>exposed heart, then</quote> with <quote>exposed heart; then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect249">249</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect250">250</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>death cry</quote> with <quote>death-cry</quote>. Replaced <quote>steps, then</quote> with <quote>steps, and then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect273">273</a>) Replaced <quote>another, then</quote> with <quote>another, and then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect276">276</a>) Replaced <quote>use it</quote> with <quote>use them</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect277">277</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>stength</quote> with <quote>strength</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect284">284</a>) Split the choice about the two tunnels into two paragraphs, replaced <quote>you can investigate either the east tunnel (turn to 118)</quote> with <quote>you can investigate the east tunnel by turning to 118.</quote>, and replaced <quote>or the west tunnel (turn to 189)</quote> with <quote>Or you can investigate the west tunnel by turning to 189</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect284">284</a>) Split the choice about the two tunnels into two paragraphs, replaced <quote>you can investigate either the east tunnel (turn to 118)</quote> with <quote>you can investigate the east tunnel by <!--link-text-->turning to 118<!--/link-text-->.</quote>, and replaced <quote>or the west tunnel (turn to 189)</quote> with <quote>Or you can investigate the west tunnel by <!--link-text-->turning to 189<!--/link-text--></quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect285">285</a>) Replaced <quote>Sloat</quote> with <quote>sloat</quote>. Replaced <quote>spreadeagled</quote> with <quote>spread-eagled</quote>. Replaced <quote>Quarlen</quote> with <quote>Quarlen or the ruins of Maaken</quote> in the first choice. Replaced <quote>Quarlen</quote> with <quote>either of these locations</quote> in the second choice. Replaced <quote>jars and</quote> with <quote>jars, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect286">286</a>) Replaced <quote>Cener druid</quote> with <quote>Cener Druid</quote>. Replaced <quote>remember to record it on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> with <quote>remember to record it on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as a Backpack Item</quote> (cf. <a idref="sect18">Section 18</a>).</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect288">288</a>) Replaced <quote>Cener druid</quote> with <quote>Cener Druid</quote>. Replaced <quote>draw nearer, then</quote> with <quote>draw nearer; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
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         <dt>Coordination</dt>
          <dd>Jonathan Blake</dd>
         <dt>Special Thanks</dt>
-         <dd>Jan Charv<ch.aacute/>t, Benjamin Krefetz, Neil McGrory, Peter Smyth, Christopher Turner, Simon Williams</dd>
+         <dd>Jan Charv<ch.aacute/>t, Benjamin Krefetz, David Kubecka, Neil McGrory, Peter Smyth, Christopher Turner, Simon Williams</dd>
        </dl>
       </data>
      </section>
        <p><quote>Show this relic,</quote> commands the warrior to your right.</p>
        <p>Hesitantly you reach into the satchel and fumble with the buckle, stalling for time.</p>
        <p><quote>Be quick,</quote> warns the other guard, reaching for a dagger with his free hand, <quote>or I shall open it for you.</quote></p>
-       <choice idref="sect61">If you possess either a Statue of Sl<ch.ucirc/>tar, the Dagger of Vashna, or Helshezag, <link-text>turn to 61</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect61">If you possess either a Statuette of Sl<ch.ucirc/>tar, the Dagger of Vashna, or Helshezag, <link-text>turn to 61</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect137">If you do not possess any of these Special Items, <link-text>turn to 137</link-text>.</choice>
       </data>
      </section>
        <p>(<a idref="sect91">91</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect92">92</a>) Replaced <quote><!--link-text-->turn to 40<!--/link-text--></quote> with <quote><!--link-text-->turn to 40<!--/link-text-->.</quote>. Replaced <quote>approach, then</quote> with <quote>approach, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkarim handlers</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Handlers</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect94">94</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow in your quiver</quote> with <quote>Arrow in your Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>specially vulnerable</quote> with <quote>especially vulnerable</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lantern, a Torch, or a Tinderbox</quote> with <quote>Lantern, or a Torch <em>and</em> a Tinderbox</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect95">95</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect96">96</a>) Replaced <quote>Huntmastery, and have</quote> with <quote>Huntmastery and have</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect95">95</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Huntmastery, and have</quote> with <quote>Huntmastery and have</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect99">99</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Italicized the speech of the disembodied voice and removed the quotation marks. Replaced <quote>Zargarna</quote> with <quote>Zagarna</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect101">101</a>) Replaced <quote>your shoulders, then</quote> with <quote>your shoulders; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Replaced <quote>moments, then</quote> with <quote>moments, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons and</quote> with <quote>weapons, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>that once comprised</quote> with <quote>that were once part of</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect236">236</a>) Replaced <quote>irresistable</quote> with <quote>irresistible</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect238">238</a>) Replaced <quote>corpse, then</quote> with <quote>corpse; then</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect239">239</a>) Replaced <quote>the sword of Helshezag</quote> with <quote>Helshezag</quote>. Replaced <quote>conversation, then</quote> with <quote>conversation, and then</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect239">239</a>) Replaced <quote>the sword of Helshezag</quote> with <quote>Helshezag</quote>. Replaced <quote>conversation, then</quote> with <quote>conversation, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Statue of Sl<ch.ucirc/>tar</quote> with <quote>Statuette of Sl<ch.ucirc/>tar</quote> as everywhere else in this book (e.g. <a idref="sect176">Section 176</a>).</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-surge</quote> with <quote>Kai-screen</quote>. <a idref="sect184">Section 184</a> speaks of <quote>powerful mind defences</quote>. Replaced <quote>see nothing, then</quote> with <quote>see nothing; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect241">241</a>) Replaced <quote>wand-wielding liganim</quote> with <quote>wand-wielding Liganim</quote>. Replaced <quote>the escaping liganim</quote> with <quote>the escaping Ligan</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect243">243</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Emphasized <quote>inflammable</quote> to mirror <a idref="sect192">Section 192</a>. Replaced <quote>clear oily</quote> with <quote>clear, oily</quote>. Replaced <quote>clear oily <em>inflammable</em></quote> with <quote>clear, oily, <em>inflammable</em></quote>.</p>
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        <p>(<a idref="sect130">130</a>) Replaced <quote>Vasha</quote> with <quote>Vashna</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>) Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai Blast</quote> with <quote>Kai-blast</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect133">133</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Telegnosis, and</quote> with <quote>Telegnosis and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Discipline, or</quote> with <quote>Disipline or</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect133">133</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Telegnosis, and</quote> with <quote>Telegnosis and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Discipline, or</quote> with <quote>Discipline or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect134">134</a>) Replaced <quote>acolyte Elder</quote> with <quote>Elder</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect135">135</a>) Added <quote>Arch Druid Cadak is immune to Mindblast and Psi-surge, but he is vulnerable to Kai-surge.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect136">136</a>) Replaced <quote>invisibility</quote> with <quote>Invisibility</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Removed the quotation marks around <quote><spell>Mind Charm</spell></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect241">241</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>longer ,</quote> with <quote>longer,</quote>. Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Mind Charm</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect243">243</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect244">244</a>) Replaced <quote>metres</quote> with <quote>yards</quote> as per Joe Dever<ch.apos/>s original manuscript.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect246">246</a>) Replaced <quote>abate, then</quote> with <quote>abate; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sun Knight, add</quote> with <quote>Sun Knight or higher, add</quote>. Replaced <quote>Alchemy, and have</quote> with <quote>Alchemy and have</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect246">246</a>) Replaced <quote>abate, then</quote> with <quote>abate; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sun Knight, add</quote> with <quote>Sun Knight or higher, add</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and have</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and have</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect247">247</a>) Replaced <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>kilometres</quote> with <quote>miles</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect249">249</a>) Replaced <quote>animal control</quote> with <quote>Animal Control</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect250">250</a>) Replaced <quote>Then, as you round a knoll of rock, shaped</quote> with <quote>Then as you round a knoll of rock shaped</quote>. Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>. Replaced <quote>sky, then</quote> with <quote>sky; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>kilometres</quote> with <quote>miles</quote>. Replaced <quote>kilometre</quote> with <quote>mile</quote>.</p>
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        <p>You lasso the spur of rock on your first attempt and pull yourself out of the cloying mire barely seconds before the unseen creature, which is circling below the surface, moves in to attack your legs. On reaching the spur, you retrieve your rope and set out to climb the wall of this shaft.</p>
        <p>Above, the snickering horde of Chaos-creatures watch your ascent with eager anticipation. When you are within a few feet of the top, you unsheathe your weapon and get ready to fight your way out of the shaft one-handedly.</p>
        <combat><enemy>Chaos-horde</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">46</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">46</enemy-attribute></combat>
-       <p>Unless you have attained the Kai rank of Sun Lord, you must reduce your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> by 4 for the duration of this combat, due to your disadvantageous position. Unless you have Grand Weaponmastery and are a Sun Knight or higher, you may not use a two-handed weapon (i.e. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, and Spear) for this combat.</p>
+       <p>Unless you have attained the Kai rank of Sun Lord, you must reduce your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> by 4 for the duration of this combat, due to your disadvantageous position. Unless you have Grand Weaponmastery and are a Sun Knight or higher, you may not use a two-handed weapon (i.e. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, or Spear) for this combat.</p>
        <choice idref="sect82">If you win the combat, <link-text>turn to 82</link-text>.</choice>
       </data>
      </section>
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         <dt>Coordination</dt>
          <dd>Jonathan Blake</dd>
         <dt>Special Thanks</dt>
-         <dd>Benjamin Krefetz, Chris Neilson, Christopher Turner, Kolja Zanner</dd>
+         <dd>Benjamin Krefetz, David Kubecka, Chris Neilson, Christopher Turner, Kolja Zanner</dd>
        </dl>
       </data>
      </section>
        <li>Dagger</li>
        <li>Scroll</li>
        <li>Pouch containing 12 Gold Crowns</li>
-       <li>Pouch containing 2 Potions of Laumspur</li>
+       <li>Pouch containing 2 Potions of Laumspur (each restores 4 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points)</li>
        <li>Pouch of Tobacco</li>
        <li>Military Pass</li>
       </ul>
        <p>(<a idref="sect274">274</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Replaced <quote>ultra-violet</quote> with <quote>ultraviolet</quote>. Replaced <quote>Captain</quote> with <quote>captain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect275">275</a>) Replaced <quote>camp fire</quote> with <quote>campfire</quote>. Replaced <quote>lay awake</quote> with <quote>lie awake</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect276">276</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sun-Crystal</quote> with <quote>Sun-crystal</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Gate</quote> with <quote>the Shadow Gate</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect277">277</a>) Replaced <quote>Pouch of tobacco</quote> with <quote>Pouch of Tobacco</quote>. Replaced <quote>potions of Laumspur</quote> with <quote>Potions of Laumspur</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect277">277</a>) Replaced <quote>Pouch of tobacco</quote> with <quote>Pouch of Tobacco</quote>. Replaced <quote>potions of Laumspur</quote> with <quote>Potions of Laumspur</quote>. Added <quote>(each restores 4 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points)</quote> (cf. <bookref series="lw" book="15tdc"><cite>The Darke Crusade</cite></bookref> Sections <bookref series="lw" book="15tdc" section="sect10">10</bookref>, <bookref series="lw" book="15tdc" section="sect213">213</bookref>, <bookref series="lw" book="15tdc" section="sect344">344</bookref>).</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect278">278</a>) Replaced <quote>ambushers</quote> with <quote>Ambushers</quote>. Replaced <quote>emerge</quote> with <quote>emerges</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect279">279</a>) Replaced <quote>lording</quote> with <quote>lordling</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect280">280</a>) Replaced <quote>Alema trail</quote> with <quote>Alema Trail</quote>. Replaced <quote>treeline</quote> with <quote>tree-line</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>Ixia, or</quote> with <quote>Ixia or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Vorndarol, in</quote> with <quote>Vorndarol in</quote>.</p>
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      <data>
       <p>The once-grand doors of this hall no longer hang upon their hinges. They have been torn down and now lie twisted and rusted together, partially blocking the entrance. After checking to make sure that your adversary has not left any unwelcome surprises, you clamber over these ruined doors and begin a cautious exploration of the hall<ch.apos/>s gloomy interior.</p>
-      <p>The cavernous ground floor was long ago gutted by fire. All that remains of its contents now lie buried beneath blackened timbers and twisted iron beams. Metal chains hang in festoons from the buckled roof girders, dripping icicles of rust. They sway and squeal eerily in the wind, sending shivers coursing down your spine.</p>
+      <p>The cavernous ground floor was long ago gutted by fire. All that remains of its contents now lies buried beneath blackened timbers and twisted iron beams. Metal chains hang in festoons from the buckled roof girders, dripping icicles of rust. They sway and squeal eerily in the wind, sending shivers coursing down your spine.</p>
       <p>You detect nothing of interest in the debris and are about to abandon your search when suddenly you hear something unexpected<ch.emdash/>a dull <onomatopoeia>thump</onomatopoeia>. The sound came from below the ground. Drawing upon your Magnakai hunting skills, you peer through a hole in the ruined floor and detect something large and warm-blooded. It is moving away, towards the rear of the hall<ch.apos/>s cellar level.</p>
       <choice idref="sect168">If you wish to investigate your discovery further, <link-text>turn to 168</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect71">If you choose to abandon your search and leave the hall, <link-text>turn to 71</link-text>.</choice>
        <p>(<a idref="sect31">31</a>) Replaced <quote>one set belong</quote> with <quote>one set belongs</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Replaced <quote>battle armour</quote> with <quote>battle-armour</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>cavemouth</quote> with <quote>cave mouth</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>power word</quote> with <quote>power-word</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect37">37</a>) Replaced <quote>(ie sword, axe, or dagger etc)</quote> with <quote>(i.e. Sword, Short Sword, Broadsword, Axe, or Dagger)</quote>. Replaced <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced <quote>dagger etc)</quote> with <quote>or dagger)</quote>. Replaced <quote>or Special</quote> with <quote>or this Special</quote>. Replaced <quote>walls and</quote> with <quote>walls, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons or</quote> with <quote>Weapons, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>bladed weapon</quote> with <quote>bladed Weapon</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect37">37</a>) Replaced <quote>(ie sword, axe, or dagger etc)</quote> with <quote>(i.e. Sword, Short Sword, Broadsword, Axe, or Dagger)</quote>. Replaced <quote>or Special</quote> with <quote>or this Special</quote>. Replaced <quote>walls and</quote> with <quote>walls, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons or</quote> with <quote>Weapons, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>bladed weapon</quote> with <quote>bladed Weapon</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Replaced <quote>warriors, then</quote> with <quote>warriors; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Replaced <quote>impatiently, <ch.lsquot/>Naar</quote> with <quote>impatiently. <ch.lsquot/>Naar</quote>. Replaced <quote>reply, <ch.lsquot/>but</quote> with <quote>reply. <ch.lsquot/>But</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-screen, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-screen and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect145">145</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sun Thane, or higher</quote> with <quote>Sun Thane or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect146">146</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect147">147</a>) Replaced <quote>battle cry</quote> with <quote>battle-cry</quote>. Replaced <quote>Crypt Spawn horde</quote> with <quote>Crypt Spawn Horde</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect148">148</a>) Replaced <quote>thump</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>thump</onomatopoeia></quote>. Replaced <quote>All that remains of its contents</quote> with <quote>All that remain of its contents</quote>. Replaced <quote>All that remain</quote> with <quote>All that remains</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect148">148</a>) Replaced <quote>thump</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>thump</onomatopoeia></quote>. Replaced <quote>now lie buried</quote> with <quote>now lies buried</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect149">149</a>) Replaced <quote>Naptha</quote> with <quote>Naphtha</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect150">150</a>) Replaced <quote>psi-screen</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect152">152</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>.</p>
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      <data>
        <p>The number of guards and the frequency of the patrols make it too dangerous to attempt to gain entry to the stables from the square, and so you decide to search around the perimeter wall to see if there is an easier way. Karvas gets ready to move from behind the cart, but you tell him to stay here and wait for your signal.</p>
        <p><quote>Better I should go alone, my lord,</quote> you say. <quote>It will halve the risk of being seen. Wait here for my signal and be prepared to act quickly when you see it.</quote> The Prince nods his agreement and he wishes you good luck before you depart.</p>
-       <p>Using your Kai camouflage skills to keep yourself hidden from the watchful guards, you scurry away from the cart and skirt around the high perimeter wall. On the west side of the compound you discover that the wall is lower and the number of passing soldiers are fewer and less frequent. You run to the base of the wall and, as you look up at its spiked top, you ponder the best way you can reach the other side.</p>
+       <p>Using your Kai camouflage skills to keep yourself hidden from the watchful guards, you scurry away from the cart and skirt around the high perimeter wall. On the west side of the compound you discover that the wall is lower and the number of passing soldiers is fewer and less frequent. You run to the base of the wall and, as you look up at its spiked top, you ponder the best way you can reach the other side.</p>
        <choice idref="sect336">If you possess Kai-alchemy, <link-text>turn to 336</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect76">If you do not possess this skill, or if you choose not to use it, <link-text>turn to 76</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
        <p>(<a idref="sect128">128</a>) Replaced <quote>add 5 to</quote> with <quote>add 5 points to</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat skill</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote>. Replaced <quote>Cavalian bandits</quote> with <quote>Cavalian Bandits</quote>. Replaced <quote>six (or more) rounds</quote> with <quote>six rounds or more</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect130">130</a>) Replaced <quote>exclaims, <ch.lsquot/>he</quote> with <quote>exclaims. <ch.lsquot/>He</quote>. Added a paragraph break between <quote>Crown Prince Karvas!<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote> and <quote>Instantly the</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>prince</quote> with <quote>Prince</quote>. Replaced <quote>prince<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Prince<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>) Replaced <quote>confiscated weapons</quote> with <quote>confiscated Weapons</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>prince</quote> with <quote>Prince</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lodamos<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Lodamos<ch.apos/><ch.thinspace/></quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai weapon</quote> with <quote>Kai Weapon</quote>. Replaced <quote>two-storeyed</quote> with <quote>two-storey</quote>. Replaced <quote>pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>. Replaced <quote>skills have</quote> with <quote>skills, have</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>44 Ren</quote> with <quote>30 Ren</quote>. Replaced <quote>arm band</quote> with <quote>armband</quote>. Replaced <quote>prince</quote> with <quote>Prince</quote>. Replaced <quote>a patrol of armed guards who are marching</quote> with <quote>a patrol of armed guards which is marching</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and your innate Kai camouflage skills, have</quote> with <quote>darkness and your innate Kai camouflage skills have</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai weapon</quote> with <quote>Kai Weapon</quote>. Replaced <quote>two-storeyed</quote> with <quote>two-storey</quote>. Replaced <quote>pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>44 Ren</quote> with <quote>30 Ren</quote>. Replaced <quote>arm band</quote> with <quote>armband</quote>. Replaced <quote>prince</quote> with <quote>Prince</quote>. Replaced <quote>a patrol of armed guards who are marching</quote> with <quote>a patrol of armed guards which is marching</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and your innate Kai camouflage skills have</quote> with <quote>darkness and your innate Kai camouflage skills have</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect133">133</a>) Replaced <quote>two kilometres</quote> with <quote>2 miles</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect134">134</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai weapon</quote> with <quote>Kai Weapon</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect135">135</a>) Replaced <quote>bow shot</quote> with <quote>bowshot</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect321">321</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Reeve-sergeant</quote> with <quote>reeve-sergeant</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Replaced <quote>Tehda stables</quote> with <quote>Tehda Stables</quote>. Replaced <quote>100 metres</quote> with <quote>100 yards</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>prince</quote> with <quote>Prince</quote>. Replaced <quote>Karvas<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Karvas<ch.apos/><ch.thinspace/></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect324">324</a>) Replaced <quote>1 Bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>swordbelt</quote> with <quote>sword belt</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>your weapons</quote> with <quote>your Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>confiscated weapons</quote> with <quote>confiscated equipment</quote>. Replaced <quote>Karvas<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Karvas<ch.apos/><ch.thinspace/></quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect325">325</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai weapon</quote> with <quote>Kai Weapon</quote>. Replaced <quote>two-storeyed</quote> with <quote>two-storey</quote>. Replaced <quote>skills have</quote> with <quote>skills, have</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>arm band</quote> with <quote>armband</quote>. Replaced <quote>prince</quote> with <quote>Prince</quote>. Replaced <quote>a patrol of armed guards who are marching</quote> with <quote>a patrol of armed guards which is marching</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and your innate Kai camouflage skills, have</quote> with <quote>darkness and your innate Kai camouflage skills have</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect325">325</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai weapon</quote> with <quote>Kai Weapon</quote>. Replaced <quote>two-storeyed</quote> with <quote>two-storey</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>arm band</quote> with <quote>armband</quote>. Replaced <quote>prince</quote> with <quote>Prince</quote>. Replaced <quote>a patrol of armed guards who are marching</quote> with <quote>a patrol of armed guards which is marching</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and your innate Kai camouflage skills have</quote> with <quote>darkness and your innate Kai camouflage skills have</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Replaced <quote>prince</quote> with <quote>Prince</quote>. Replaced <quote>If your total score is now 0<ch.endash/>4, <!--link-text-->turn to 219<!--/link-text--></quote> with <quote>If it is 1<ch.endash/>5, <!--link-text-->turn to 333<!--/link-text--></quote>. Replaced <quote>If it is 6 or higher, <!--link-text-->turn to 333<!--/link-text--></quote> with <quote>If it is 6 or higher, <!--link-text-->turn to 219<!--/link-text--></quote>. Replaced <quote>If it is 5, <!--link-text-->turn to 225<!--/link-text--></quote> with <quote>If your total score is now 0, <!--link-text-->turn to 225<!--/link-text--></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect327">327</a>) Replaced <quote>A-ha! just as I</quote> with <quote>Aha! Just as I</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>prince</quote> with <quote>Prince</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect328">328</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>.</p>
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        <p>(<a idref="sect169">169</a>) Replaced <quote>Volzoc potion</quote> with <quote>Potion of Volzoc</quote>. Replaced <quote>clang</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>clang</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect170">170</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect172">172</a>) Replaced <quote>12 pistol balls</quote> with <quote>twelve pistol balls</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magnakai healing</quote> with <quote>Kai healing</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect174">174</a>) Replaced <quote>riverbank</quote> with <quote>river bank</quote>. Replaced <quote>Assimilance, and</quote> with <quote>Assimilance and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai rank of Grand</quote> with <quote>rank of Kai Grand</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Pathsmanship</quote>. Separated the last paragraph about having neither skill into two paragraphs before <quote>or you can</quote>. Replaced <quote>you can either fix</quote> with <quote>you can fix</quote>. Replaced <quote>(<!--link-text-->turn to 117<!--/link-text-->),</quote> with <quote>by <!--link-text-->turning to 117<!--/link-text-->.</quote>. Replaced <quote>or you can</quote> with <quote>Or you can</quote>. Replaced <quote>(turn to 185)</quote> with <quote>by turning to 185</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect174">174</a>) Replaced <quote>riverbank</quote> with <quote>river bank</quote>. Replaced <quote>Assimilance, and</quote> with <quote>Assimilance and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai rank of Grand</quote> with <quote>rank of Kai Grand</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Pathsmanship</quote>. Separated the last paragraph about having neither skill into two paragraphs before <quote>or you can</quote>. Replaced <quote>you can either fix</quote> with <quote>you can fix</quote>. Replaced <quote>(<!--link-text-->turn to 117<!--/link-text-->),</quote> with <quote>by <!--link-text-->turning to 117<!--/link-text-->.</quote>. Replaced <quote>or you can</quote> with <quote>Or you can</quote>. Replaced <quote>(turn to 185)</quote> with <quote>by <!--link-text-->turning to 185<!--/link-text--></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect175">175</a>) Replaced <quote>leaching</quote> with <quote>leeching</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Vial, and</quote> with <quote>Vial and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect178">178</a>) Replaced <quote>bellows, <ch.lsquot/>And</quote> with <quote>bellows. <ch.lsquot/>And</quote>. Added a paragraph break between <quote>alongside hers.</quote> and <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Stay</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect179">179</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Removed the dashes around <quote><spell>Mind Charm</spell></quote>.</p>