Book 6 Section 26: eight points -> seven points [jc] [cf. Section 340]
authorSimon Osborne <simon.osborne@projectaon.org>
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committerSimon Osborne <simon.osborne@projectaon.org>
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-       <p>Your score qualifies you for a place in the final, for only one other archer has scored more than eight points. His name is Altan, a tall man with rugged features, a ranger from the mountains to the north. He wields a longbow of orange toa wood, and his skill with this weapon is formidable; it will be a difficult contest.</p>
+       <p>Your score qualifies you for a place in the final, for only one other archer has scored more than seven points. His name is Altan, a tall man with rugged features, a ranger from the mountains to the north. He wields a longbow of orange toa wood, and his skill with this weapon is formidable; it will be a difficult contest.</p>
 
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        <p>(<a idref="sect23">23</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect24">24</a>) Replaced <quote>puddles and</quote> with <quote>puddles, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>large shiny</quote> with <quote>large, shiny</quote>. Replaced <quote>rope you</quote> with <quote>rope, you</quote>. Moved the Nexus choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect25">25</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>guildhouse</quote> with <quote>guild-house</quote>. Replaced <quote>hand bells</quote> with <quote>hand-bells</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect26">26</a>) Replaced <quote>toa-wood</quote> with <quote>toa wood</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect26">26</a>) Replaced <quote>toa-wood</quote> with <quote>toa wood</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>more than eight points</quote> with <quote>more than seven points</quote> (cf. <a idref="sect340">Section 340</a>).</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect27">27</a>) Replaced <quote>open and</quote> with <quote>open, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect28">28</a>) Replaced <quote>surrounded and</quote> with <quote>surrounded, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>shortlived</quote> with <quote>short-lived</quote>. Replaced <quote>resistance and</quote> with <quote>resistance, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect29">29</a>) Replaced <quote>shock but</quote> with <quote>shock, but</quote>.</p>