Footnote Removal (Book 22); Checkerrata issue (Book 24)

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diff --git a/en/xml/22tbos.xml b/en/xml/22tbos.xml
index 5092557..cee7763 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/22tbos.xml
+++ b/en/xml/22tbos.xml
@@ -2172,16 +2172,10 @@
     <section class="numbered" id="sect86">
      <meta><title>86</title></meta>
 
-      <footnotes>
-       <footnote id="sect86-1-foot" idref="sect86-1">
-        <p>As the Kholo is <quote>especially susceptible to <em>all</em> forms of psychic attack</quote>, it seems reasonable that you may double all bonuses conferred by the use of Mindblast as well.</p>
-       </footnote>
-      </footnotes>
-
      <data>
        <p>Suddenly the growling stops and you sense that the creatures are preparing to attack. Hurriedly you draw a weapon as two wolf-like animals come bounding towards you from the rear of the cave.</p>
        <combat><enemy>Kholo</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">40</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">28</enemy-attribute></combat>
-       <p>These creatures are especially susceptible to all forms of psychic attack: double all bonuses if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it.<footref id="sect86-1" idref="sect86-1-foot"/></p>
+       <p>These creatures are especially susceptible to all forms of psychic attack: double all bonuses to Kai-surge (or Mindblast) if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it.</p>
        <choice idref="sect101">If you win this combat, <link-text>turn to 101</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
@@ -4484,16 +4478,10 @@
     <section class="numbered" id="sect269">
      <meta><title>269</title></meta>
 
-      <footnotes>
-       <footnote id="sect269-1-foot" idref="sect269-1">
-        <p>As the Kholo is <quote>especially susceptible to <em>all</em> forms of psychic attack</quote>, it seems reasonable that you may double all bonuses conferred by the use of Mindblast as well.</p>
-       </footnote>
-      </footnotes>
-
      <data>
        <p>You take up your instrument and begin a soothing ballad that you hope will calm these hungry creatures. Unfortunately, the sound of your playing has an adverse effect upon them; they react in anger and immediately attack. Hurriedly you drop your instrument and draw a weapon as two wolf-like animals come bounding towards you from the rear of the cave.</p>
        <combat><enemy>Kholo</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">40</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">28</enemy-attribute></combat>
-       <p>These creatures are especially susceptible to all forms of psychic attack: double all bonuses if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it.<footref id="sect269-1" idref="sect269-1-foot"/></p>
+       <p>These creatures are especially susceptible to all forms of psychic attack: double all bonuses to Kai-surge (or Mindblast) if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it.</p>
        <choice idref="sect101">If you win this combat, <link-text>turn to 101</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
@@ -6114,6 +6102,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect83">83</a>) Replaced <quote>timber and leather</quote> with <quote>timber, and leather</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Nobels</quote> with <quote>Nobles</quote>. Replaced <quote>Nobel</quote> with <quote>Noble</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect84">84</a>) Replaced <quote>Lourdanian</quote> with <quote>Lourdenian</quote>. Replaced <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect85">85</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>first volley of arrows come</quote> with <quote>first volley of arrows comes</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect86">86</a>) Replaced <quote>double all bonuses if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it</quote> with <quote>double all bonuses to Kai-surge (or Mindblast) if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect87">87</a>) Replaced <quote>broad-leafed</quote> with <quote>broad-leaved</quote>. Replaced <quote>Bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Replaced <quote>or choose</quote> with <quote>or if you choose</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect90">90</a>) Replaced <quote>consciousness, then</quote> with <quote>consciousness; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>disorientated</quote> with <quote>disoriented</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-surge, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-surge and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect92">92</a>) Added a paragraph break between <quote>you retort.</quote> and <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>But<ch.ellips/></quote>. Added a paragraph break between <quote>the Captain.</quote> and <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>I<ch.apos/>ve no</quote>. Replaced <quote>kilometre</quote> with <quote>mile</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>.</p>
@@ -6251,6 +6240,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect266">266</a>) Replaced <quote>the creatures</quote> with <quote>the creature</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) Replaced <quote>Bow nor</quote> with <quote>Bow, nor</quote>. Replaced <quote>Bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Elementalism, and</quote> with <quote>Elementalism and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect268">268</a>) Replaced <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect269">269</a>) Replaced <quote>double all bonuses if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it</quote> with <quote>double all bonuses to Kai-surge (or Mindblast) if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect270">270</a>) Replaced <quote>to be indulged</quote> with <quote>to be indulged in</quote>. Added <quote>If the Kai Weapon you wield is <quote>Valiance</quote>, you may apply the bonus gained due to its unique properties.</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect271">271</a>) Replaced <quote>Item.</quote> with <quote>Item.)</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect272">272</a>) Replaced <quote>the Derby</quote> with <quote>the derby</quote>. Replaced <quote>he warns, <ch.lsquot/>he<ch.apos/>s ruthless</quote> with <quote>he warns. <ch.lsquot/>He<ch.apos/>s ruthless</quote>.</p>

diff --git a/en/xml/24rw.xml b/en/xml/24rw.xml
index 4cd55a0..8a67dd9 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/24rw.xml
+++ b/en/xml/24rw.xml
@@ -6368,7 +6368,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect169">169</a>) Replaced <quote>Volzoc potion</quote> with <quote>Potion of Volzoc</quote>. Replaced <quote>clang</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>clang</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect170">170</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect172">172</a>) Replaced <quote>12 pistol balls</quote> with <quote>twelve pistol balls</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magnakai healing</quote> with <quote>Kai healing</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect174">174</a>) Replaced <quote>riverbank</quote> with <quote>river bank</quote>. Replaced <quote>Assimilance, and</quote> with <quote>Assimilance and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai rank of Grand</quote> with <quote>rank of Kai Grand</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Pathsmanship</quote>. Separated the last paragraph about having neither skill into two paragraphs before <quote>or you can</quote>. Replaced <quote>you can either fix</quote> with <quote>you can fix</quote>. Replaced <quote>(<!--link-text-->turn to 117<!--/link-text-->),</quote> with <quote>by <!--link-text-->turning to 117<!--/link-text-->.</quote>. Replaced <quote>or you can</quote> with <quote>Or you can</quote>. Replaced <quote>(turn to 185)</quote> with <quote>by <!--link-text-->turning to 185<!--/link-text--></quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect174">174</a>) Replaced <quote>riverbank</quote> with <quote>river bank</quote>. Replaced <quote>Assimilance,</quote> with <quote>Assimilance</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai rank of Grand</quote> with <quote>rank of Kai Grand</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Pathsmanship</quote>. Separated the last paragraph about having neither skill into two paragraphs before <quote>or you can</quote>. Replaced <quote>you can either fix</quote> with <quote>you can fix</quote>. Replaced <quote>(<!--link-text-->turn to 117<!--/link-text-->),</quote> with <quote>by <!--link-text-->turning to 117<!--/link-text-->.</quote>. Replaced <quote>or you can</quote> with <quote>Or you can</quote>. Replaced <quote>(turn to 185)</quote> with <quote>by <!--link-text-->turning to 185<!--/link-text--></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect175">175</a>) Replaced <quote>leaching</quote> with <quote>leeching</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Vial, and</quote> with <quote>Vial and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect178">178</a>) Replaced <quote>bellows, <ch.lsquot/>And</quote> with <quote>bellows. <ch.lsquot/>And</quote>. Added a paragraph break between <quote>alongside hers.</quote> and <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Stay</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect179">179</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Removed the dashes around <quote><spell>Mind Charm</spell></quote>.</p>