From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan.blake@projectaon.org>
Date: Sun, 11 Feb 2018 21:12:54 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: correcting issues reported by gblint.pl
X-Git-Tag: 20180215~9
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correcting issues reported by gblint.pl


git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2689 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11
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diff --git a/en/xml/04wotw.xml b/en/xml/04wotw.xml
index 7dcd060..da955fb 100644
--- a/en/xml/04wotw.xml
+++ b/en/xml/04wotw.xml
@@ -122,11 +122,6 @@
           <line>Simon Osborne</line>
           <line>Timothy Pederick</line>
          </dd>
-<!--        <dt>PDF Layout</dt>
-         <dd>
-          <line>Jonathan Blake</line>
-          <line>Ingo Kl<ch.ouml/>cker</line>
-         </dd>-->
         <dt>Coordination</dt>
          <dd>
           <line>Jonathan Blake</line>
@@ -1189,7 +1184,7 @@
        </illustration>
        <p>The room fills with the sound of savage laughter, but it is not Shasarak who laughs. A familiar, slithering, deathly voice emanates from the wall of fire, and within the fire you see two slanted eyes: pools of absolute darkness. It is the Demonlord Agarash!</p>
        <p><quote>See, Shasarak. He has come, as I told you he would. He has come to slay you. Won<ch.apos/>t you accept my bargain?</quote></p>
-       <p><quote>NEVER!</quote> Shasarak hisses, his voice like the rush of broken stone scattering on the floor. <quote>He does not have the power to master me<ch.ellips/>as you have not, Demon.</quote></p>
+       <p><em><quote>Never!</quote></em> Shasarak hisses, his voice like the rush of broken stone scattering on the floor. <quote>He does not have the power to master me<ch.ellips/>as you have not, Demon.</quote></p>
        <p>Shasarak glares at you malevolently and raises a damaged hand. He is about to strike.</p>
        <choice idref="sect21">If you have 1 <typ class="attribute">WILLPOWER</typ> point and wish to raise the Moonstone against Shasarak, <link-text>turn to 21</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect92">If you wish to defend yourself with the Moonstone, <link-text>turn to 92</link-text>.</choice>
@@ -4724,8 +4719,6 @@
     </data>
    </section>
 
-   <!-- Backmatter -->
-
    <section class="backmatter" id="passing">
     <meta><title>The Passing of the Shianti</title></meta>
 
@@ -5282,7 +5275,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Replaced <quote>you. they</quote> with <quote>you. They</quote>. Replaced <quote>a pestle and mortar</quote> with <quote>a Pestle and Mortar</quote>. Replaced <quote>empty vial</quote> with <quote>empty Vial</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>saltpetre</quote> with <quote>Saltpetre</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>sulphur</quote> with <quote>Sulphur</quote>. Replaced <quote>The empty vials</quote> with <quote>The empty Vials</quote>. Replaced <quote>Zakutsk flower</quote> with <quote>Zakutsk Flower</quote>. Replaced <quote>Demeril root</quote> with <quote>Demeril Root</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pestle and Mortar are Backpack Items</quote> with <quote>Pestle and Mortar and the Tinderbox are Backpack Items,</quote>. Replaced <quote>the vials</quote> with <quote>the Vials</quote>. Replaced <quote>wil</quote> with <quote>will</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 Pestle and Mortar</quote> with <quote>Pestle and Mortar</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 Tinderbox</quote> with <quote>Tinderbox</quote>. Replaced <quote>together, then</quote> with <quote>together, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>neither you nor Tanith have</quote> with <quote>neither you nor Tanith has</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Replaced <quote>feet away. The home</quote> with <quote>feet away. <ch.lsquot/>The home</quote>. Replaced <quote>persectuion</quote> with <quote>persecution</quote>. Replaced <quote>dematerilize</quote> with <quote>dematerialize</quote>. Replaced <quote>warior</quote> with <quote>warrior</quote>. Replaced <quote>mightly</quote> with <quote>mighty</quote>. Replaced <quote>Ho there Dioka!</quote> with <quote>Ho there, Dioka!</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Replaced <quote>Demon Lord, Agarash</quote> with <quote>Demonlord Agarash</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you wish</quote> with <quote>If you have 1 <typ class="attribute">WILLPOWER</typ> point and wish</quote>. Replaced <quote>sightless and</quote> with <quote>sightless, and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Replaced <quote>Demon Lord, Agarash</quote> with <quote>Demonlord Agarash</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you wish</quote> with <quote>If you have 1 <typ class="attribute">WILLPOWER</typ> point and wish</quote>. Replaced <quote>sightless and</quote> with <quote>sightless, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>NEVER!</quote> with <quote><em>Never!</em></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Replaced <quote>Phinomel pods</quote> with <quote>Phinomel Pods</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect41">41</a>) Replaced <quote>the speed of your reactions and the fierceness of your gaze paralyses</quote> with <quote>the speed of your reactions and the fierceness of your gaze paralyse</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect42">42</a>) Replaced <quote>ceatures</quote> with <quote>creatures</quote>. Replaced <quote>despatching</quote> with <quote>dispatching</quote>.</p>