From: Simon Osborne <simon.osborne@projectaon.org>
Date: Sun, 23 Feb 2014 10:41:46 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: (er) 4: it -> its [typo in Bk 15, reported by Dave via forum]
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(er) 4: it -> its [typo in Bk 15, reported by Dave via forum]

git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2326 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11
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diff --git a/en/xml/15tdc.xml b/en/xml/15tdc.xml
index c8c3466..bbb9fff 100644
--- a/en/xml/15tdc.xml
+++ b/en/xml/15tdc.xml
@@ -912,7 +912,7 @@
      <data>
       <p>As the last of the trench-troopers falls lifelessly to the muddy floor of the dugout, Prarg appears by your side, sheathing his bloodstained sword.</p>
       <p><quote>Come, sire. We still have the advantage. We best use it before the Drakkarim discover what has happened here.</quote></p>
-      <p>Keen to maintain the element of surprise, you quickly leave the trench and rush across the remaining strip of open ground which separates you from the town<ch.apos/>s outlying dwellings. Prarg points ahead, to an alleyway that lies sandwiched between two burnt-out hovels, and immediately you follow as he rushes towards it shadowy entrance.</p>
+      <p>Keen to maintain the element of surprise, you quickly leave the trench and rush across the remaining strip of open ground which separates you from the town<ch.apos/>s outlying dwellings. Prarg points ahead, to an alleyway that lies sandwiched between two burnt-out hovels, and immediately you follow as he rushes towards its shadowy entrance.</p>
       <choice idref="sect178"><link-text>Turn to 178</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
@@ -5919,6 +5919,7 @@
       <p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>friend, then</quote> with <quote>friend, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>says, <ch.lsquot/>This</quote> with <quote>says, <ch.lsquot/>this</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect2">2</a>) Replaced <quote>Drakkar sword</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim sword</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect3">3</a>) Replaced <quote>guide, then</quote> with <quote>guide; then</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect4">4</a>) Replaced <quote>towards it shadowy</quote> with <quote>towards its shadowy</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) Replaced <quote>tunnel stalker</quote> with <quote>Tunnel Stalker</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect8">8</a>) Replaced <quote>pause, then</quote> with <quote>pause; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>suggests that he escorts</quote> with <quote>suggests that he escort</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>potions</quote> with <quote>Potions</quote>.</p>