From: Simon Osborne Date: Fri, 28 Aug 2015 09:48:04 +0000 (+0000) Subject: Issues with FW Books 3&4 X-Git-Tag: 20150901~4 X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?p=project-aon.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=2b867d8dcaa1f9afc951ae0df310b5588b28968f Issues with FW Books 3&4 git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2475 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- diff --git a/en/xml/03toz.xml b/en/xml/03toz.xml index 760994d..03b9d32 100644 --- a/en/xml/03toz.xml +++ b/en/xml/03toz.xml @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
Coordination
Jonathan Blake
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If you have already completed any of the the previous Freeway Warrior adventures, it is unclear whether you may replenish your supplies before starting this adventure or whether you can only carry over the supplies you carried at the end of the previous adventure. It seems reasonable that you would be able to restock your supplies while in El Paso.

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If you have already completed any of the previous Freeway Warrior adventures, it is unclear whether you may replenish your supplies before starting this adventure or whether you can only carry over the supplies you carried at the end of the previous adventure. It seems reasonable that you would be able to restock your supplies while in El Paso.

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The incessant noise of the dogs is making your stomach churn. Then you catch sight of themtwo slack-jowled bloodhoundspadding their way across the Montana Road with two clansmen close behind. One of the men is carrying a machine pistol, the other a long-handled flashlight.

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The incessant noise of the dogs is making your stomach churn. Then you catch sight of themtwo slack-jowled bloodhoundspadding their way across Montana Avenue with two clansmen close behind. One of the men is carrying a machine pistol, the other a long-handled flashlight.

Run for it! you hiss, pointing towards the ruins. Knott turns and sprints away. As soon as he is clear of the ditch, the dogs begin to bark wildly, alerting their handlers to your position. You scramble out and follow your partner, praying that you will reach cover before the clansmen see you and open fire. Your prayers are answered. In his haste the clansman drops his flashlight, and before he can retrieve it and switch it on, you follow Knott through the open door of a derelict building.

We stand a better chance if we split up, you say, casting an anxious glance over your shoulder at the yellow light that is now streaming through the doorway. But remembermeet up at the bridge as planned.

The torchlight illuminates the interior sufficiently for you to be able to make out two possible exits: a carpeted staircase leading to the first floor, and another leading down to the basement.

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As the dust-blown stores and houses of the derelict Mexican town trail away behind the truck, it becomes obvious that the place is deserted. Knott arrives at the same conclusion and decreases speed as he prepares to turn off the main highway. The truck crosses a bridge then swings to the right and stops beside a store that lost its roof long ago.

Theyre still with us, captain, said Haskell, staring across the dry river bed at the group of headlights, as the bikers enter the town.

Not for long, Frankland growls, his voice harsh and determined. Spread out and find some cover. Well take em as they come over the bridge.

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Quickly you move away from the truck and scour the darkness, straining your eyes to find a place to hide that also has an unobstructed view of the bridge. You can see only two such places, both far from ideal. One is a gas pump, standing on the forecourt of a gas station directly opposite the bridge: the other is an industrial trash can, abandoned at the side of the bridges exit ramp.

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Quickly you move away from the truck and scour the darkness, straining your eyes to find a place to hide that also has an unobstructed view of the bridge. You can see only two such places, both far from ideal. One is a gas pump, standing on the forecourt of a gas station directly opposite the bridge; the other is an industrial trash can, abandoned at the side of the bridges exit ramp.

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OK, Cal, says the captain. Me and the sergeantll take the scenic route. Well go first. Give us time to clear the zone then wait five minutes before you and Knott make your move. Is that clear?

No problem, you reply, confidently. Well meet up at the toll bridge at 0100 hours.

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With bated breath you watch as the two soldiers slip over the perimeter wall and crawl away from the safety of Fort Bliss. Expertly they merge with the broken wasteland so that you soon find it impossible to track their path, leading to an elevated section of Highway 54. Fifteen minutes later, all is still as quiet as the grave. You are sure that they have made it across the zone by now, and so you motion to Marine Knott to follow as you lower yourself head-first over the rampart and propel yourself across the rocky ground using only your elbows and knees.

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The faint moonlight serves both to help and hinder your progress as you inch your way towards the Montana Road, a highway that runs 100 yards in front of, and parallel to, the clansmens position. Every move you make is slow and deliberate as though the ground were strewn with eggs, so urgent is the need to prevent dust from betraying your position. Eventually you reach a shallow ditch bordering the highway and you use it as cover as you advance towards a group of ruined buildings at the edge of the city. You are less than twenty yards from the ruins when you are frozen by the sound of howling dogs. They are clan bloodhounds and they have picked up your scent on the warm night air.

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With bated breath you watch as the two soldiers slip over the perimeter wall and crawl away from the safety of Fort Bliss. Expertly they merge with the broken wasteland so that you soon find it impossible to track their path, which leads to an elevated section of Highway 54. Fifteen minutes later, all is still as quiet as the grave. You are sure that they have made it across the zone by now, and so you motion to Marine Knott to follow as you lower yourself head-first over the rampart and propel yourself across the rocky ground using only your elbows and knees.

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The faint moonlight serves both to help and hinder your progress as you inch your way towards Montana Avenue, a highway that runs 100 yards in front of, and parallel to, the clansmens position. Every move you make is slow and deliberate as though the ground were strewn with eggs, so urgent is the need to prevent dust from betraying your position. Eventually you reach a shallow ditch bordering the highway and you use it as cover as you advance towards a group of ruined buildings at the edge of the city. You are less than twenty yards from the ruins when you are frozen by the sound of howling dogs. They are clan bloodhounds and they have picked up your scent on the warm night air.

With your pulse racing, you peer over the edge of the ditch, seeking to catch a clear view of the enemy. You cannot see them, but you can hear them approaching fast. You must act quickly if you are to avoid being caught by the hounds and their handlers.

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Nervously you glance over your shoulder as the howling grows louder. Then you catch sight of them, two slack-jowled bloodhounds, padding their way across the Montana Road with two clansmen close behind. One of the men is carrying a machine pistol, the other a long-handled flashlight.

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Nervously you glance over your shoulder as the howling grows louder. Then you catch sight of them, two slack-jowled bloodhounds, padding their way across Montana Avenue with two clansmen close behind. One of the men is carrying a machine pistol, the other a long-handled flashlight.

You are beginning to fear the worst when suddenly both dogs smell the meat and bound towards it. The clansmen curse them, but, before they can pull them away from their meal, you and Knott reach the open door of a derelict building and slip inside unseen. Although the interior is dark and dusty, you are able to discover an exit on the far side of the building and escape before the enemy has a chance to catch up.

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Coarse shouts and whooping screams of delight echo from behind the building: the clansmen have discovered the truck. The news is relayed to Mad Dog Michigan stirring him to a fearful rage. Theyre here, I know it! he screams, demonically. Find them! Find them! I want them dead!

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Coarse shouts and whooping screams of delight echo from behind the building: the clansmen have discovered the truck. The news is relayed to Mad Dog Michigan, stirring him to a fearful rage. Theyre here, I know it! he screams, demonically. Find them! Find them! I want them dead!

He paces the main street, shaking his fist at the buildings on either side, demanding that his men fulfil his lust for revenge. They storm the building on which you hide and at once you begin looking for a way out.

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The howling grows louder. Then you catch sight of them, two slack-jowled bloodhounds, padding their way across the Montana Road with two clansmen close behind. One of the men is carrying a machine pistol, the other a long-handled flashlight.

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The howling grows louder. Then you catch sight of them, two slack-jowled bloodhounds, padding their way across Montana Avenue with two clansmen close behind. One of the men is carrying a machine pistol, the other a long-handled flashlight.

One of the dogs smells the meat and bounds towards it, but the other ignores his brother and continues to lead his torch-wielding handler straight towards you. He sees you, and begins to bark wildly, alerting his handler to your presence.

Run for it! you hiss. Weve been seen!

Knott increases his speed and you follow him, praying that you will reach cover before the clansmen open fire. Your prayers are answered. In his haste, the clansman drops his flashlight, and before he can retrieve it and switch it on, you follow Knott through the open door of a derelict building.

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(86) Replaced brighter, then with brighter, and then. Replaced three, then with three, and then.

(87) Replaced overtake him on the left with overtake him on the right.

(88) Replaced If the fight lasts six rounds or more, with If the fight lasts to a sixth round. Replaced turn to 11 with turn immediately to 11.

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(89) Replaced pistol; the with pistol, the.

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(89) Replaced pistol; the with pistol, the. Replaced the Montana Road with Montana Avenue.

(92) Replaced syphoning with siphoning. Replaced syphon with siphon. Replaced Backpack items with Backpack Items.

(93) Replaced You are about to break into a run when suddenly you hear a noise behind you that makes you freeze: it is the sound of a pistol being cocked. Instinctively you reach for your gun as you spin around to face your potential attacker, but your fear quickly evaporates when you see the familiar face of Marine Knott peering at you from over the walkway wall.

Youre getting a touch careless, Cal, he says, as he holsters his pistol and clambers over the wall to join you.

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(144) Replaced What the with What the?.

(145) Replaced Backpack item with Backpack Item.

(148) Replaced (minimum equals one round; maximum equals eight rounds) with (minimum: one round; maximum: eight rounds. Remember to deduct this number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch). Replaced breach, then with breech; then.

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(149) Replaced bridge: the with bridge; the.

(150) Replaced gunsmoke with gun smoke. Replaced blood-stained with bloodstained. Replaced Knife [2] with Knife (2). Replaced HAVOC were with HAVOC was. Replaced eight years old with seven years old as Cal was born on Thanksgiving Day 2000, which is in November, so could not be eight years old on 1 May 2008. Added (Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.).

(152) Replaced Hunting Knife [2] with Hunting Knife (2). Replaced Bowie Knife [3] with Bowie Knife (3).

(153) Replaced half-way with halfway. Replaced It it is with If it is.

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(185) Replaced evilly, then with evilly, and then.

(188) Replaced noise, then with noise, and then. Replaced clansmen, and with clansmen and. Replaced or are with or if you are.

(189) Replaced pineclad with pine-clad. Replaced gnarled and with gnarled, and.

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(190) Replaced or do with or if you do. Replaced Freeway 54 with Highway 54.

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(190) Replaced or do with or if you do. Replaced Freeway 54 with Highway 54. Replaced the Montana Road with Montana Avenue. Replaced path, leading to with path, which leads to.

(192) Replaced Backpack items with Backpack Items. Replaced units or with units, or. Replaced Knife [2] with Knife (2). Replaced Hammer [2] with Hammer (2).

(193) Replaced neck and with neck, and.

(195) Replaced syphon with siphon. Replaced newly repaired with newly-repaired.

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(228) Replaced rebounds, then with rebounds, and then. Added (Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.).

(230) Replaced on to with onto.

(232) Replaced Knott, and with Knott and.

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(234) Replaced pistol; the with pistol, the.

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(234) Replaced pistol; the with pistol, the. Replaced the Montana Road with Montana Avenue.

(235) Replaced If, after this accident, you are still alive with If you are still alive after this accident.

(238) Replaced water canteen and with water canteen, and.

(241) Replaced binouclars with binoculars.

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(259) Replaced torchbeam with torchs beam.

(262) Replaced spins, then with spins, and then.

(263) Replaced your lenses with your magnifying device.

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(264) Replaced encumberance with encumbrance. Replaced Backpack items with Backpack Items.

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(265) Replaced pistol; the with pistol, the. Replaced alerting its handler with alerting his handler.

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(264) Replaced encumberance with encumbrance. Replaced Backpack items with Backpack Items. Replaced Michigan stirring him with Michigan, stirring him.

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(265) Replaced pistol; the with pistol, the. Replaced alerting its handler with alerting his handler. Replaced the Montana Road with Montana Avenue.

(266) Replaced spyhole with spy-hole. Replaced lock, and with lock and.

(267) Added (Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.).

(269) Replaced syphon with siphon.

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If you have already completed any of the the previous Freeway Warrior adventures, it is unclear whether you may replenish your supplies before starting this adventure or whether you can only carry over the supplies you carried at the end of the previous adventure. It seems reasonable that you would be able to restock your supplies while in Tucson.

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If you have already completed any of the previous Freeway Warrior adventures, it is unclear whether you may replenish your supplies before starting this adventure or whether you can only carry over the supplies you carried at the end of the previous adventure. It seems reasonable that you would be able to restock your supplies while in Tucson.