From: Jonathan Blake Date: Tue, 12 Jul 2005 14:20:28 +0000 (+0000) Subject: Made valid. Still needs Bonner's Powers illustrations, reorder small illustration... X-Git-Tag: 20121028~160 X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?p=project-aon.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=2edd94b37ac97e71ec420990ab3745ddff434d18 Made valid. Still needs Bonner's Powers illustrations, reorder small illustration list. git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@73 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- diff --git a/xml/02tfc.xml b/xml/02tfc.xml index 156119f..1ed86a4 100755 --- a/xml/02tfc.xml +++ b/xml/02tfc.xml @@ -20,6 +20,9 @@ $Id$ $Log$ +Revision 1.5 2005/07/12 14:20:28 jonathan.blake +Made valid. Still needs Bonner's Powers illustrations, reorder small illustration list. + Revision 1.4 2005/04/21 15:53:05 jonathan.blake jffdougan said: Added illustrations, implemented minor approved fixes @@ -106,7 +109,7 @@ small6: Deathgaunt head small7: vertical canyon walls small8: spellbook small9: equipment bundle -small10: ruined cityscape (looks very similar to small4 -- better scan of same?) +small10: ruined cityscape (looks very similar to small4 - better scan of same?) small11: sword, axe, & shield --> @@ -4417,54 +4420,54 @@ small11: sword, axe, & shield

(Title Page) Replaced THE FORBIDDEN CITY with The Forbidden City. Replaced Kleasa with Kleasá. Replaced magical powers with Magical Powers. Replaced THE WORLD OF LONE WOLF with The World of Lone Wolf.

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(Of the Coming of Grey Star) Replaced wizadry with wizardry. This was fixed in later editions of the book.

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(The Story So Far&ellips;) Added , at the end of the first line of the riddle. Replaced section 1 with Section 1.

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(Of the Coming of Grey Star) Replaced wizadry with wizardry. This was fixed in later editions of the book.

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(The Story So Far&ellips;) Added , at the end of the first line of the riddle. Replaced section 1 with Section 1.

(The Game Rules) Removed at the front of this book. If you run out of space, you can copy out the chart or have it photocopied and on the last page of this book. Replaced adventure and with adventure, and and all occurrences of eg with e.g.. Replaced GREY STAR THE WIZARD with Grey Star the Wizard. Replaced all occurrences of magical power with Magical Power.

(Magical Powers) Replaced all occurrences of ie with i.e., all occurrences of eg with e.g. and quarterstaff yet with quarterstaff, yet. Replaced alchemy with Alchemy. Replaced all occurrences of prophecy with Prophecy. Replaced all occurrences of lesser magicks with Lesser Magicks. Replaced all occurrences of five powers with five Powers. Replaced all occurrences of power with Power, except in the description of the Wizard's Staff.

(Equipment) Replaced sulphur with Sulphur, saltpetre with Saltpetre, vial with Vial within the Herb Pouch contents list, notes but with notes, but, Shakadine with Shadakine and Shianti and with Shianti, and.

(Rules for Combat) Removed on the inside back cover of the book. Replaced on the page after the Random Number Table with in the back of this book.

(Sage Advice) Removed at the front of this book.

(1) Replaced &lsquot; Stand back! with &lsquot;Stand back!. Replaced rain-water with rainwater. Replaced ahead, You with ahead. You.

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(6) Replaced special Item with Special Item.

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(7) Replaced elementals with Elementals. Replaced elemental with Elemental.

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(11) Replaced battle cry with battle-cry.

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(14) Replaced presence. hovering with presence, hovering.

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(20) Replaced less than 4 rounds with 4 rounds or less.

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(23) Replaced says. &lsquot;but with says, &lsquot;but.

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(29) Replaced staff's with Staff's.

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(34) Replaced lake and immediately, the with lake, and immediately the.

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(39) Replaced consumate with consummate. Replaced appearance, Suddenly with appearance. Suddenly.

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(42) Replaced hole on with hole in.

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(43) Replaced this power with this Power.

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(45) Replaced all occurrences of vial with Vial.

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(48) Replaced Guild it with Guild, it.

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(49) Replaced fortress but with fortress, but. Switched the section numbers given for the two choices, to avoid unreasonable consequences of high ENDURANCE and WILLPOWER scores.

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(55) Replaced 8 WILLPOWER with 8 ENDURANCE. Since there is a question of whether you have survived this section or not, and WILLPOWER loss cannot kill you, ENDURANCE was likely what was intended. Replaced points but with points, but. Replaced warriors the with warriors, the.

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(58) Replaced tremble.Great with tremble. Great.

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(59) Added and wish to use it to the last choice, as there is no reason why it should be mandatory to use an Azawood leaf.

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(60) Replaced purpose? with purpose!.

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(62) Replaced cry &lsquot;Samu!&rsquot; with cry: &lsquot;Samu!&rsquot;.

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(67) Replaced continue you with continue, you.

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(72) Replaced Wizard's staff with Wizard's Staff. Replaced Black Mountains of Morn with black Mountains of Morn.

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(76) Replaced of table with of the table.

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(78) Replaced below but with below, but.

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(83) Replaced immobile as with immobile, as.

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(87) Replaced counter-charge with countercharge.

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(90) Replaced fire but with fire, but. Replaced a cinder with cinders.

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(91) Replaced city fortress with city-fortress.

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(95) Replaced and as with and, as. Replaced under water with underwater.

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(96) Replaced robe you with robe, you.

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(102) Replaced Sadly you with Sadly, you.

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(108) Replaced king.&lsquot;Either with king. &lsquot;Either.

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(113) Replaced If you wish to attack the Kleasá with the Magical Power of Sorcery with If you have the Magical Power of Sorcery and with to use it to attack the Kleasá in the first choice. Added and wish to use them both against the Kleasá, in the second choice.

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(116) Replaced combat turn with combat, turn.

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(121) Replaced half light with half-light.

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(124) Replaced forward, you with forward. You.

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(125) Replaced Urik &lsquot;Very with Urik. &lsquot;Very.

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(126) Replaced this power with this Power.

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(129) Replaced sleep but with sleep, but.

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(131) Replaced this power with this Power.

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(132) Replaced however it with however, it.

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(6) Replaced special Item with Special Item.

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(7) Replaced elementals with Elementals. Replaced elemental with Elemental.

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(11) Replaced battle cry with battle-cry.

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(14) Replaced presence. hovering with presence, hovering.

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(20) Replaced less than 4 rounds with 4 rounds or less.

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(23) Replaced says. &lsquot;but with says, &lsquot;but.

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(29) Replaced staff's with Staff's.

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(34) Replaced lake and immediately, the with lake, and immediately the.

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(39) Replaced consumate with consummate. Replaced appearance, Suddenly with appearance. Suddenly.

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(42) Replaced hole on with hole in.

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(43) Replaced this power with this Power.

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(45) Replaced all occurrences of vial with Vial.

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(48) Replaced Guild it with Guild, it.

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(49) Replaced fortress but with fortress, but. Switched the section numbers given for the two choices, to avoid unreasonable consequences of high ENDURANCE and WILLPOWER scores.

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(55) Replaced 8 WILLPOWER with 8 ENDURANCE. Since there is a question of whether you have survived this section or not, and WILLPOWER loss cannot kill you, ENDURANCE was likely what was intended. Replaced points but with points, but. Replaced warriors the with warriors, the.

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(58) Replaced tremble.Great with tremble. Great.

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(59) Added and wish to use it to the last choice, as there is no reason why it should be mandatory to use an Azawood leaf.

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(60) Replaced purpose? with purpose!.

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(62) Replaced cry &lsquot;Samu!&rsquot; with cry: &lsquot;Samu!&rsquot;.

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(67) Replaced continue you with continue, you.

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(72) Replaced Wizard's staff with Wizard's Staff. Replaced Black Mountains of Morn with black Mountains of Morn.

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(76) Replaced of table with of the table.

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(78) Replaced below but with below, but.

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(83) Replaced immobile as with immobile, as.

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(87) Replaced counter-charge with countercharge.

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(90) Replaced fire but with fire, but. Replaced a cinder with cinders.

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(91) Replaced city fortress with city-fortress.

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(95) Replaced and as with and, as. Replaced under water with underwater.

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(96) Replaced robe you with robe, you.

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(102) Replaced Sadly you with Sadly, you.

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(108) Replaced king.&lsquot;Either with king. &lsquot;Either.

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(113) Replaced If you wish to attack the Kleasá with the Magical Power of Sorcery with If you have the Magical Power of Sorcery and with to use it to attack the Kleasá in the first choice. Added and wish to use them both against the Kleasá, in the second choice.

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(116) Replaced combat turn with combat, turn.

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(121) Replaced half light with half-light.

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(124) Replaced forward, you with forward. You.

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(125) Replaced Urik &lsquot;Very with Urik. &lsquot;Very.

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(126) Replaced this power with this Power.

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(129) Replaced sleep but with sleep, but.

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(131) Replaced this power with this Power.

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(132) Replaced however it with however, it.

(133) Replaced farewill with farewell. Replaced BIG with Big. Replaced the deadlands with &ldquot;the dead lands&rdquot;. Replaced all and with all, and. Replaced A Short Sword with Short Sword. Replaced A Backpack with Backpack. Replaced 2 potions of Laumspur with 2 Potions of Laumspur . Replaced swallowing 1 potion with swallowing one potion. Replaced A coil of Rope with Coil of Rope. Replaced all occurrences of Items with items.

(135) Replaced exhausted you with exhausted, you.

(140) Replaced asks with asks.. Replaced out-sized with outsized.

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(149) Replaced Kiro will with Kiro, will. Replaced eyebow with eyebrow.

(151) Replaced and as with and, as.

(153) Made the choice leading to Section 27 its own paragraph to better fit our format for the choices.

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(163) Replaced swordman with swordsman.

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(165) Replaced this power with this Power.

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(168) Replaced magical Power with Magical Power.

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(171) Replaced your Current with your current.

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(173) Replaced backpack with Backpack. Replaced one Item with one item.

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(174) Replaced Magical power with Magical Power.

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(180) Added possess the Magical Power of Sorcery, and in the second choice.

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(184) Changed the choice which led to Section 300 to lead to Section 302 instead. This section was unreachable in the original and fits well in the context of the story here.

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(185) Replaced out-run with outrun.

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(186) Replaced closely, After with closely. After.

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(163) Replaced swordman with swordsman.

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(165) Replaced this power with this Power.

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(168) Replaced magical Power with Magical Power.

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(171) Replaced your Current with your current.

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(173) Replaced backpack with Backpack. Replaced one Item with one item.

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(174) Replaced Magical power with Magical Power.

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(180) Added possess the Magical Power of Sorcery, and in the second choice.

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(184) Changed the choice which led to Section 300 to lead to Section 302 instead. This section was unreachable in the original and fits well in the context of the story here.

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(185) Replaced out-run with outrun.

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(186) Replaced closely, After with closely. After.

(189) Replaced right? he with right?&rsquot; he.

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(192) Replaced Shield of sorcery with Shield of Sorcery.

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(194) Replaced guagmire with quagmire.

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(196) Replaced giant. turn with giant, turn.

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(198) Replaced magical Item with magical item.

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(201) Replaced power of Prophecy with Power of Prophecy.

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(207) Replaced counter-attack with counterattack.

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(211) Replaced Masbalé with Masbaté. Replaced Lisson with Lissan.

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(212) Replaced all occurrences of luneday with Luneday.

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(213) Replaced menacingly as with menacingly, as.

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(215) Added or do not wish to use it, in the second choice.

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(216) Replaced six with eight. Replaced 257 with 257.. Replaced all occurrences of Items with items.

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(217) Replaced the dead lands with &lsquot;the dead lands&rsquot;.

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(219) Replaced 12 to 14 with 12&endash;14.

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(222) Replaced high pitched with high-pitched.

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(225) Replaced Toa-tree with toa tree.

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(226) Replaced Then suddenly a with Then, suddenly, a. Replaced you broad with you a broad.

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(230) Replaced all occurrences of your power with your Power.

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(231) Replaced side step with sidestep.

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(234) Changed the third choice which led to Section 289 to lead to Section 146 instead. This section fits better in the context of the story as it goes into particulars about how Enchantment is actually used.

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(235) Replaced Waist deep with Waist-deep. Replaced out-sized with outsized. Replaced wizard's Staff with Wizard's Staff.

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(237) Added or do not wish to use it, in the second choice.

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(247) Replaced purple, he with purple; he. Made Urik's quote from The Way of the Shianti a separate paragraph.

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(249) Replaced Toa tree with toa tree.

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(250) Replaced actions, prevents with actions prevents. Replaced &lsquot;You man!&rsquot; with &lsquot;You, man!&rsquot; . Replaced Sado, &lsquot;what with Sado, &lsquot;What.

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(253) Replaced life force with life-force. Replaced staff with Staff.

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(254) Replaced fight you with fight, you. Replaced completely turn with completely, turn.

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(255) Replaced Scree Wrym with Scree Wyrm. Replaced death throes with death-throes.

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(256) Replaced Shazarak with Shasarak.

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(257) Replaced day&rsquot;, dawn with day&rsquot; dawn.

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(258) Replaced Wizard's staff with Wizard's Staff.

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(260) Replaced you, however with you; however.

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(266) Replaced The Mind Gem may be placed in your Backpack where it will count as a Backpack Item, or it can be worn around your neck. with The Mind Gem is worn around your neck., in order to avoid rules ambiguities.

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(267) Replaced near.&rsquot; he with near,&rsquot; he.

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(268) Replaced Table with Table..

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(269) Replaced eyeless tormented with eyeless, tormented. Replaced magical Power with Magical Power.

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(272) Replaced say &lsquot;I with say. &lsquot;I.

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(275) Replaced guards falls with guards fall.

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(276) Replaced &lsquot;Stranger&rsquot; he with &lsquot;Stranger,&rsquot; he.

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(280) Replaced Kazim stone with Kazim Stone.

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(248) Changed the choice which led to Section 300 to lead to Section 302 instead. This section was unreachable in the original and fits well in the context of the story here.

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(286) Replaced Sado, &lsquot;Charge with Sado. &lsquot;Charge.

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(287) Replaced counter-attack with counterattack.

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(289) Replaced power of Enchantment with Power of Enchantment.

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(290) Replaced Huminoid with Humanoid.

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(291) Replaced Magical power with Magical Power.

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(292) Changed the third choice which led to Section 208 to lead to Section 234 instead. Section 208 is clearly inappropriate, and this change was made in some editions of the book.

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(299) Replaced Azawood leaves with Azawood leaf. Replaced You have two Azawood leaves remaining. with You have used one Azawood leaf., as you did not necessarily have three leaves to begin with.

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(303) Replaced staff with Staff.

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(305) Deleted or keep it in your Backpack where it will count as a Backpack Item, in order to avoid rules ambiguities.

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(307) Replaced all occurrences of staff with Staff. Replaced Samu, &lsquot;I've with Samu. &lsquot;I've.

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(309) Replaced elementals with Elementals.

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(192) Replaced Shield of sorcery with Shield of Sorcery.

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(194) Replaced guagmire with quagmire.

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(196) Replaced giant. turn with giant, turn.

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(198) Replaced magical Item with magical item.

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(201) Replaced power of Prophecy with Power of Prophecy.

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(207) Replaced counter-attack with counterattack.

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(211) Replaced Masbalé with Masbaté. Replaced Lisson with Lissan.

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(212) Replaced all occurrences of luneday with Luneday.

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(213) Replaced menacingly as with menacingly, as.

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(214) Replaced mountains of Morn with Mountains of Morn.

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(215) Added or do not wish to use it, in the second choice.

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(216) Replaced six with eight. Replaced 257 with 257.. Replaced all occurrences of Items with items.

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(217) Replaced the dead lands with &lsquot;the dead lands&rsquot;.

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(219) Replaced 12 to 14 with 12&endash;14.

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(222) Replaced high pitched with high-pitched.

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(225) Replaced Toa-tree with toa tree.

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(226) Replaced Then suddenly a with Then, suddenly, a. Replaced you broad with you a broad.

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(230) Replaced all occurrences of your power with your Power.

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(231) Replaced side step with sidestep.

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(234) Changed the third choice which led to Section 289 to lead to Section 146 instead. This section fits better in the context of the story as it goes into particulars about how Enchantment is actually used.

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(235) Replaced Waist deep with Waist-deep. Replaced out-sized with outsized. Replaced wizard's Staff with Wizard's Staff.

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(237) Added or do not wish to use it, in the second choice.

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(247) Replaced purple, he with purple; he. Made Urik's quote from The Way of the Shianti a separate paragraph.

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(249) Replaced Toa tree with toa tree.

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(250) Replaced actions, prevents with actions prevents. Replaced &lsquot;You man!&rsquot; with &lsquot;You, man!&rsquot; . Replaced Sado, &lsquot;what with Sado, &lsquot;What.

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(253) Replaced life force with life-force. Replaced staff with Staff.

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(254) Replaced fight you with fight, you. Replaced completely turn with completely, turn.

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(255) Replaced Scree Wrym with Scree Wyrm. Replaced death throes with death-throes.

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(256) Replaced Shazarak with Shasarak.

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(257) Replaced day&rsquot;, dawn with day&rsquot; dawn.

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(258) Replaced Wizard's staff with Wizard's Staff.

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(260) Replaced you, however with you; however.

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(266) Replaced The Mind Gem may be placed in your Backpack where it will count as a Backpack Item, or it can be worn around your neck. with The Mind Gem is worn around your neck., in order to avoid rules ambiguities.

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(267) Replaced near.&rsquot; he with near,&rsquot; he.

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(268) Replaced Table with Table..

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(269) Replaced eyeless tormented with eyeless, tormented. Replaced magical Power with Magical Power.

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(272) Replaced say &lsquot;I with say. &lsquot;I.

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(275) Replaced guards falls with guards fall.

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(276) Replaced &lsquot;Stranger&rsquot; he with &lsquot;Stranger,&rsquot; he.

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(280) Replaced Kazim stone with Kazim Stone.

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(248) Changed the choice which led to Section 300 to lead to Section 302 instead. This section was unreachable in the original and fits well in the context of the story here.

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(286) Replaced Sado, &lsquot;Charge with Sado. &lsquot;Charge.

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(287) Replaced counter-attack with counterattack.

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(289) Replaced power of Enchantment with Power of Enchantment.

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(290) Replaced Huminoid with Humanoid.

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(291) Replaced Magical power with Magical Power.

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(292) Changed the third choice which led to Section 208 to lead to Section 234 instead. Section 208 is clearly inappropriate, and this change was made in some editions of the book.

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(299) Replaced Azawood leaves with Azawood leaf. Replaced You have two Azawood leaves remaining. with You have used one Azawood leaf., as you did not necessarily have three leaves to begin with.

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(303) Replaced staff with Staff.

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(305) Deleted or keep it in your Backpack where it will count as a Backpack Item, in order to avoid rules ambiguities.

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(307) Replaced all occurrences of staff with Staff. Replaced Samu, &lsquot;I've with Samu. &lsquot;I've.

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(309) Replaced elementals with Elementals.

(310) Replaced Beyond The Shadow Gate with Beyond the Nightmare Gate. Replaced series entitled with series, entitled.

(Combat Rules Summary) Added a fourth step Pick a number from the Random Number Table. in the first step list. Replaced of chart with of the chart, to random with to the random and to 0 with 0 or below. Replaced to Combat with to the Combat. Replaced cross reference with cross-reference.

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