From: Simon Osborne Date: Sat, 11 Jun 2016 08:34:05 +0000 (+0000) Subject: Changes to Books 15 and 16 X-Git-Tag: 20180215~164 X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?p=project-aon.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=393e28f5f203a97b981bd8128a4493fd57532572;hp=22940dde386747352dc8c238932b61ef4a431f06 Changes to Books 15 and 16 git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2534 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- diff --git a/en/xml/15tdc.xml b/en/xml/15tdc.xml index bf070d7..4fa62a8 100644 --- a/en/xml/15tdc.xml +++ b/en/xml/15tdc.xml @@ -1389,7 +1389,7 @@

The fight for control of Konozod is swift and bloody. Within the hour the town is under Lencian control, its Drakkarim garrison having been put mercilessly to the sword. However, not all of the enemy perish in the battle. To Captain Scheras dismay, several manage to escape across the river and flee to the west on horseback. He is anxious that they may return with reinforcements to retake the town.

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A food store is discovered and, whilst the starving Lencians satiate their hunger, you talk with Captain Schera about the events of the last few weeks which have led to this meeting. Your learn from him that after you were interred in the Temple of Antah, Warlord Magnaarn waged a major offensive against the Lencian army. Having reunited the Doomstone with the Nyras Sceptre, he has, as King Sarnac feared, forced the Nadziranim sorcerers of Kagorst and Akagazad to help him. Their combined skills have wrought great destruction. They attacked and drove through the Lencian lines like demons in an offensive which was swift and deadly. A week ago, Captain Schera and his regiment were cut off and captured in the fighting around Hokidat, after which they were marched here and imprisoned. He considers himself lucky to be alive, for the Drakkarim rarely take prisoners. Then you ask what news he has heard about the war since he came here.

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A food store is discovered and, whilst the starving Lencians satiate their hunger, you talk with Captain Schera about the events of the last few weeks which have led to this meeting. You learn from him that after you were interred in the Temple of Antah, Warlord Magnaarn waged a major offensive against the Lencian army. Having reunited the Doomstone with the Nyras Sceptre, he has, as King Sarnac feared, forced the Nadziranim sorcerers of Kagorst and Akagazad to help him. Their combined skills have wrought great destruction. They attacked and drove through the Lencian lines like demons in an offensive which was swift and deadly. A week ago, Captain Schera and his regiment were cut off and captured in the fighting around Hokidat, after which they were marched here and imprisoned. He considers himself lucky to be alive, for the Drakkarim rarely take prisoners. Then you ask what news he has heard about the war since he came here.

Theres much confusion, he says, wearily. Ive heard talk that most of the mercenaries in Sarnacs pay have deserted us. Some have even joined the enemy. The Drakkarim taunted us, saying that our army had been smashed. They said the remnants had been pushed into the Tentarias, but I dismissed this as lies. One thing is sure, though: Magnaarn intends to raise the siege of Darke. It has become his battle callOn to Darke! This cry was on the lips of his troops during the battle at Hokidat. I saw him during this battle. He was leading his army personally, and he was wielding his accursed sceptre, dealing death to all who tried to stand in his way. He possesses a great and terrible power, and I fear that we may now be unable to put an end to his evil ambitions.

If you wish to ask Schera if he knows anything about Captain Prarg, turn to 97. If you do not, turn to 236. @@ -1431,7 +1431,7 @@ Brian Williams - The Nadziranim sorcerer, taking on the visage of a great sniffling beast, creeps towards you. + The Nadziranim sorcerer, taking on the visage of a great snuffling beast, creeps towards you. @@ -5945,9 +5945,10 @@

(36) Replaced steps and, as with steps, and as. Replaced new-found with newfound. Replaced breath, then with breath, and then.

(37) Removed the quotation marks around crack.

(38) Replaced both occurrences of arrow with Arrow. Replaced arrow, then with Arrow; then. Replaced suspecting trickery, then slowly you relax; they with suspecting trickery. Then slowly you relax; they.

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(39) Replaced remnants have with remnants had. Replaced seige with siege.

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(39) Replaced remnants have with remnants had. Replaced seige with siege. Replaced Your learn from with You learn from.

(40) Replaced click, then with click; then.

(41) Replaced treeline with tree-line. Replaced psi-surge with Psi-surge. Replaced timberwolf with timber wolf.

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(42) Replaced great sniffling beast with great snuffling beast in the illustrations caption to mirror the section text.

(43) Replaced directions and, with with directions, and with. Replaced at worse with at worst.

(45) Replaced west and with west, and. Replaced Prarg and with Prarg, and. Replaced Antah and with Antah, and. Replaced agreement then with agreement; then. Replaced wagons and with wagons, and.

(47) Replaced silence, then with silence; then. Replaced not, or with not or.

diff --git a/en/xml/16tlov.xml b/en/xml/16tlov.xml index 39712a5..c421e13 100644 --- a/en/xml/16tlov.xml +++ b/en/xml/16tlov.xml @@ -154,7 +154,7 @@

Lord Rimoah fears that Naar is plotting to revive Vashna, the greatest of all the Darklords, whose spirit is trapped deep within the fathomless reaches of the Maakengorge. It has remained there, in uneasy entombment, ever since the day the Darklord was defeated in battle by King Ulnar I of Sommerlund. Vashnas body, along with those of his loathsome troops, was hurled into the abyss, hopefully never to be seen again. Legend has it that the Darklords body was destroyed but his spirit still lives on. He is said to be awaiting the day when he shall be made to rise, at the head of a vast army of undead warriors, and set loose to wreak his revenge upon Sommerlund and the house of Ulnar.

If it is Naars intention to resurrect Vashna and his army from the depths of the Maakengorge, said an anxious Lord Rimoah, as you and he discussed the situation in the secure privacy of your vault below the Kai Monastery, then no free realm upon the face of Magnamund will be safe. It has always been Sommerlunds misfortune that Ulnars victory over Vashna was never total. I have always feared that the legacy of the Maakengorge would one day awaken and confront usand I fear, unless we act swiftly, that that day is about to dawn.

For several hours, you and your learned advisor deliberated what could be done to prevent such a catastrophe. You decided that the exact nature of the threat had first to be determined if you were to combat it effectively. You were confident that your Grand Master Disciplines would enable you to unravel this mystery quickly, and so you volunteered to journey to northern Magador and investigate the strange incidents at first hand. After all, there could be a perfectly innocent explanation for them.

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Let us hope it is so, Grand Master, said Lord Rimoah, earnestly, but, nevertheless, do not forget what could confront you there. I shall pray to Kai and Ishir to watch over and guide you on the journey ahead, Lone Wolf, and bring you home, swiftly, safely, and victoriously.

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Let us hope it is so, Grand Master, said Lord Rimoah, earnestly, but, nevertheless, do not forget what could confront you there. I shall pray to Kai and Ishir to watch over and guide you on the journey ahead, Lone Wolf, and bring you home swiftly, safely, and victoriously.

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(Blurb) Replaced THE LEGACY OF VASHNA with The Legacy of Vashna.

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(The Story So Far) Replaced elite with lite. Replaced no Kai lord with no Kai Lord. Replaced strongholds fierce with strongholds, fierce. Replaced Right-Handed Magic with Right-handed magic. Replaced both occurrences of new-found with newfound. Replaced Dark God and with Dark God, and. Replaced vigilant for with vigilant, for. Replaced free-state with Freeland. Replaced body, and those with body, along with those. Replaced north-east with northeast. Replaced quickly and with quickly, and. Replaced monastery of the Kai with Monastery of the Kai. Replaced both occurrences of the Monastery with the monastery. Replaced Akagazad and with Akagazad, and. Replaced safely and with safely, and. Replaced comprised with were part of.

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(The Story So Far) Replaced elite with lite. Replaced no Kai lord with no Kai Lord. Replaced strongholds fierce with strongholds, fierce. Replaced Right-Handed Magic with Right-handed magic. Replaced both occurrences of new-found with newfound. Replaced Dark God and with Dark God, and. Replaced vigilant for with vigilant, for. Replaced free-state with Freeland. Replaced body, and those with body, along with those. Replaced north-east with northeast. Replaced quickly and with quickly, and. Replaced monastery of the Kai with Monastery of the Kai. Replaced both occurrences of the Monastery with the monastery. Replaced Akagazad and with Akagazad, and. Replaced safely and with safely, and. Replaced comprised with were part of. Replaced home, swiftly with home swiftly.

(The Game Rules) Removed that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages. Removed on the last page of this book. Replaced fall to zero with fall to zero or below. Replaced each occurrence of Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf when referring to the series. Replaced Chart (you with Chart. (You. Replaced Items). with Items.). Replaced on to with onto. Replaced each occurrence of Lone Wolf Kai with Lone Wolf Kai. Replaced each occurrence of Magnakai with Magnakai. Replaced Grand Master series with Lone Wolf Grand Master series. Replaced Lone Wolf Grand Master series with Lone Wolf Grand Master series. Added Silver Bracers and Korlinium Scabbard to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the Lone Wolf Kai and Lone Wolf Magnakai books in harmony with the Collectors Edition.