From: Simon Osborne Date: Thu, 5 Mar 2015 17:52:43 +0000 (+0000) Subject: Corrected "Pantano Wash" to "Pantona Wash" in FW3, FW4, and the Map for FW4 X-Git-Tag: 20150414~21 X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?p=project-aon.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=39f13da263070a9617d29798f280d19e2a2e53d5;hp=1c65989ac8b1b63534a0320c0db664b722fcfa9e Corrected "Pantano Wash" to "Pantona Wash" in FW3, FW4, and the Map for FW4 git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2424 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- diff --git a/en/png/fw/04cc/ill/williams/map.png b/en/png/fw/04cc/ill/williams/map.png index c1b238e..75ae7ad 100644 Binary files a/en/png/fw/04cc/ill/williams/map.png and b/en/png/fw/04cc/ill/williams/map.png differ diff --git a/en/xml/03toz.xml b/en/xml/03toz.xml index dcc57d5..4b7e7d1 100644 --- a/en/xml/03toz.xml +++ b/en/xml/03toz.xml @@ -605,7 +605,7 @@

Collision with the barrier has damaged Mad Dogs car: a section of the front fender is buckled against the wheel, slowing it considerably. In your deadly duel, his supercharged car no longer has the advantage of speed. However, even though it is damaged, it still possesses enough power to enable him to catch you.

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In the distance a bridge is fast approaching. It crosses a channelled drainageway, fed by the Pantona Wash. An Amcorp Landcruiser, one of the colonys vehicles, has broken down and been abandoned on its approach ramp. The bus blocks two lanes of the freeway, leaving just enough room for one vehicle to pass.

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In the distance a bridge is fast approaching. It crosses a channelled drainageway, fed by the Pantano Wash. An Amcorp Landcruiser, one of the colonys vehicles, has broken down and been abandoned on its approach ramp. The bus blocks two lanes of the freeway, leaving just enough room for one vehicle to pass.

The two of you speed towards this narrow gap, neck and neck, each determined to be the first to get across. Desperate to beat you, Mad Dog brings his speedster dangerously close. You are three seconds away from the gap when he rams your door.

Add your Driving skill total to your current ENDURANCE points score. Pick a number from the Random Number Table and add it to your total.

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You are five miles out of Benson when you notice in your driving mirror a cloud of dust rising in the distance. You tell Kate and she turns around to take a look.

Clan scouts, a pack of them, she reports. Looks like twenty bikes, but theyre not on their own. Theyre tailin a car. Well, I think its a carits got four wheels. She continues to stare into the distance for several minutes; then she says: I dont like the look of it, Cal. Lets not hang around to say hi to these dudes, OK?

You respond by flooring the gas pedal until the roadsters speedometer registers 100 miles an hour. The packs dropping back, shouts Kate, her voice barely audible above the noise of the rushing wind. But that car is gaining on us.

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You are speeding over a girder bridge, across a water-course known locally as the Pantona Wash, when you see the car in your mirror. It is black and bullet-shaped, with an enclosed drivers compartment and a roaring lions head emblazoned on the hood. It accelerates to within twenty yards of your trunk, and you catch sight of the drivers snarling face. A shiver runs down your spine when you recognize the manic features of Mad Dog Michigan.

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You are speeding over a girder bridge, across a water-course known locally as the Pantano Wash, when you see the car in your mirror. It is black and bullet-shaped, with an enclosed drivers compartment and a roaring lions head emblazoned on the hood. It accelerates to within twenty yards of your trunk, and you catch sight of the drivers snarling face. A shiver runs down your spine when you recognize the manic features of Mad Dog Michigan.

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You and Kate enter the Tucson stronghold to receive a heros welcome. The colony is overjoyed; they feared they would never see either of you alive again. They are saddened to hear your account of how Captain Frankland, Sergeant Haskell, and Marine Knott met their deaths, yet they draw comfort from the knowledge that their memory will live on in the hearts of the colonists. If it were not for their ultimate sacrifice, the colony would never have reached Tucson intact.

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After celebrating your successful return, the colony leaders set about planning the last stage of the journey to California, confident that now Mad Dog Michigan is no longer around, his army will be disinclined to continue the pursuit of the convoy. But a nagging doubt remains in your mind. Did Mad Dog Michigan really meet his doom at the Pantona Bridge?

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After celebrating your successful return, the colony leaders set about planning the last stage of the journey to California, confident that now Mad Dog Michigan is no longer around, his army will be disinclined to continue the pursuit of the convoy. But a nagging doubt remains in your mind. Did Mad Dog Michigan really meet his doom at the Pantano Bridge?

For you, Cal Phoenix, the answer to that questionand the final part of your exodus to Californiaawait you in book four of the Freeway Warrior series, entitled:

California Countdown

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(8) Replaced head over heals with head over heels.

(10) Replaced Backpack items with Backpack Items. Altered the brackets around Note: If your ENDURANCE score is low and you are heavily encumbered, it may be advisable to discard some of your Backpack Items in order to increase your Stealth skill level. to parentheses.

(11) Replaced antispetics with antiseptics. Replaced Backpack items with Backpack Items. Replaced units or with units, or. Replaced Knife [2] with Knife (2). Replaced Hammer [2] with Hammer (2).

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(12) Replaced Pantona Wash with Pantano Wash.

(13) Replaced nearby, then with nearby; then. Replaced If the fight lasts with If you win and the fight lasts.

(14) Replaced plateau, towards with plateau towards. Replaced plateau, under with plateau under.

(19) Replaced over, then with over, and then. Added (Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.).

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(241) Replaced binouclars with binoculars.

(242) Replaced flash, then with flash, and then.

(243) Replaced a handful of faded family photographs stands with a handful of faded family photographs stand.

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(252) Replaced machine gunfire with machine gun fire. Replaced minutes, then with minutes; then.

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(252) Replaced machine gunfire with machine gun fire. Replaced minutes, then with minutes; then. Replaced Pantona Wash with Pantano Wash.

(258) Replaced blood-stained with bloodstained.

(259) Replaced torchbeam with torchs beam.

(262) Replaced spins, then with spins, and then.

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(341) Replaced attack, then with attack, and then.

(345) Replaced commotion (erase with commotion. (Erase. Replaced fire). with fire.).

(346) Replaced come to a flight of stairs that descends to a fire exit with come to a fire exit as you can only reach this section by not climbing the stairs in Section 298. Added (Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.).

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(350) Replaced Haskell and with Haskell, and. Replaced CALIFORNIA COUNTDOWN with California Countdown. Replaced question, and the final part of your exodus to California, await with questionand the final part of your exodus to Californiaawait. Replaced colony are with colony is.

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(350) Replaced Haskell and with Haskell, and. Replaced CALIFORNIA COUNTDOWN with California Countdown. Replaced question, and the final part of your exodus to California, await with questionand the final part of your exodus to Californiaawait. Replaced colony are with colony is. Replaced Pantona Bridge with Pantano Bridge.

(Combat Rules Summary) Replaced cross-refer with cross-reference. Replaced Combat Results Table with Close Combat Results Table. Replaced zero ENDURANCE points, this with zero ENDURANCE points or below; this.

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Armed with contact mines, the four of you infiltrated Mad Dogs base and blew up the explosives shortly after they arrived there. The unexpected destruction of the base threw his clan army into confusion and enabled the colony to break out of Fort Bliss virtually unopposed. As the colony made its escape westwards towards Tucson, your team escaped from Ciudad Juarez in a hijacked truck and made its way along the Mexican border. The plan was for you to rendezvous with the colony the following day, but mechanical breakdowns and skirmishes with Mad Dogs scouts prevented an early reunion. Enraged by the sheer nerve of your attack and the damage inflicted upon his command, Mad Dog Michigan sent for Helmut Varken, the most ruthless of all his HAVOC assassins. Relentlessly Varken shadowed your team as you traversed the mountainous forests of southern Arizona and, one-by-one, he coldly murdered your comrades until only you remained.

In a fateful showdown in the town of Tombstone, you faced Varken and avenged your dead companions in the yard of the towns historic courthouse. Using the deceased assassins motorcycle, you reached Interstate 10 and followed tyre tracks that were made a day before by the convoy vehicles. They led you to the town of Benson, forty miles southeast of Tucson, where unexpectedly you met up with Kate Norton. When your team had failed to make the rendezvous, the colony had come to the reluctant conclusion that you had all perished at Ciudad Juarez. Only Kate clung to the belief that you were still alive and had persuaded the colony leaders, against their better judgement, to allow her to wait for you here.

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Driving your roadster, the two of you set off confidently on the final leg of your journey to Tucson. However, your confidence was soon shattered by the sudden appearance of another roadster, an armed and armoured racing machine driven by none other than your archenemy, Mad Dog Michigan. A vicious road duel ensued as you raced towards the sanctuary of the Tucson stronghold, a battle that culminated in a high-speed collision that sent your enemy careering off the freeway at over 100 miles per hour. The last you saw of the HAVOC leader was when his roadster plummeted into a deep drainage-way called the Pantona Wash.

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Driving your roadster, the two of you set off confidently on the final leg of your journey to Tucson. However, your confidence was soon shattered by the sudden appearance of another roadster, an armed and armoured racing machine driven by none other than your archenemy, Mad Dog Michigan. A vicious road duel ensued as you raced towards the sanctuary of the Tucson stronghold, a battle that culminated in a high-speed collision that sent your enemy careering off the freeway at over 100 miles per hour. The last you saw of the HAVOC leader was when his roadster plummeted into a deep drainage-way called the Pantano Wash.

You and Kate entered the Tucson stronghold to a heros welcome. The colony was overjoyed, for they feared that they would never see either of you again. They were saddened to hear of the deaths of your comrades, yet all drew some comfort from the knowledge that the memory of their sacrifice would never fade. Had it not been for their bravery, the convoy would never have reached Tucson intact.

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The day after your arrival sees the withdrawal of Mad Dog Michigans clan army from the vicinity of the Davis-Monthan air force base, stronghold of the Tucson colony. Scouts are sent to shadow the enemy and, later in the day, they return to report that the clansmen have pulled back to Nogales, a frontier town on the Mexican border. This hurried retreat reinforces the belief that Mad Dog perished when his speedster crashed into the Pantona Wash.

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The day after your arrival sees the withdrawal of Mad Dog Michigans clan army from the vicinity of the Davis-Monthan air force base, stronghold of the Tucson colony. Scouts are sent to shadow the enemy and, later in the day, they return to report that the clansmen have pulled back to Nogales, a frontier town on the Mexican border. This hurried retreat reinforces the belief that Mad Dog perished when his speedster crashed into the Pantano Wash.

Boosted by the arrival of your convoy, the Tucson colony now numbers over 130 men, women, and children. Supplies of food and water are adequate and, with the arrival of DC1s gasolene tanker, there is more than enough fuel to get you to California. Mike Gorgas, a former district attorney who is now the appointed leader of the Tucson colony, urges the other colony leaders to make preparations to leave the stronghold and head west without delay. The clan army may have suffered a setback but, sooner or later, prompted by a lack of supplies or a desire for revenge, they are sure to leave Nogales and attack the stronghold in force.

There is also the threat of an attack by the Outlaws, an exceptionally vicious clan that controls the city of Phoenix. Among their number are many criminals who have been expelled from California since The Day. Their leader, Shiloh, is one such outcast. He has been exiled into the Omega Zone (the name Californians have given to the ravaged territories east of their state line), for murder, looting, and other, lesser, crimes he and his gang perpetrated in Los Angeles. During the past few months he has often crossed swords with the Tucson colony, resulting in deaths on both sides.

When the time comes to plan the route to California, the colony agrees that they should try at all costs to avoid contact with Shilohs clan. Interstate 10 is the only highway out of Tucson capable of carrying the convoy at reasonable speed, yet it passes straight through the centre of Phoenix. The only alternative is to follow this highway as far as Arizona City and then switch to Interstate 8. The colony could then follow the freeway across southern Arizona to Yuma, traverse the Colorado River at this point, and continue, through the desert and mountains of southwest California, until finally reaching its goalthe city of San Diego.

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Stunned and deafened by the unexpected explosion, you drag yourself upright into a sitting position in time to see, through the acrid smoke, a figure approaching the open doorway. Blindly you feel for your gun but it is nowhere to hand. Then the high-pitched sound of a small engine pierces the incessant ringing in your ears, at once setting your nerves on edge.

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You reach for a close combat weapon as the figure steps into the lodge, and your blood runs cold when the maniacal features of Mad Dog Michigan swim into focus before your eyes. His crash into the Pantona Wash has cost him dearly. His face is a criss-cross of livid scars, many of them swollen around the stitches that are keeping the torn flesh together. He has lost his left hand, and one eye is hidden behind a patch of black cotton. It serves a practical purpose, hiding a now-empty socket, yet it also exaggerates the expression of hate and vengeance that fixes the clan leaders mouth.

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You reach for a close combat weapon as the figure steps into the lodge, and your blood runs cold when the maniacal features of Mad Dog Michigan swim into focus before your eyes. His crash into the Pantano Wash has cost him dearly. His face is a criss-cross of livid scars, many of them swollen around the stitches that are keeping the torn flesh together. He has lost his left hand, and one eye is hidden behind a patch of black cotton. It serves a practical purpose, hiding a now-empty socket, yet it also exaggerates the expression of hate and vengeance that fixes the clan leaders mouth.

Revenge is mine at lastPhoenix! he spits, and raises the motorized chainsaw that he grasps in his right hand. The motor screams as he slashes wildly at the air, and then he brings the buzzing, toothed blade down upon a table top and its surface explodes into splinters and dust. He laughs a madmans laugh as he steps slowly nearer to where you sit. With a final howl of glee, he raises the saw and screams, Now you die!

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(Dateline to Disaster) Replaced training and with training, and. Replaced both occurrences of USSR and with USSR, and. Replaced cable and with cable, and. Replaced destined with slated. Replaced declare emergency with declare an emergency. Replaced HAVOC attempt with HAVOC attempts. Replaced HAVOC hijack a WDL news satellite and broadcast a chilling ultimatum with HAVOC hijacks a WDL news satellite and broadcasts a chilling ultimatum. Replaced HAVOC refuse with HAVOC refuses. Replaced HAVOC repeat their demand and extend deadline with HAVOC repeats its demand and extends deadline. Replaced HAVOC enact their with HAVOC enacts its.

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(The Story So Far) Replaced re-establish with reestablish. Replaced syphon with siphon. Replaced fuel, food or water with fuel, food, or water. Replaced the Mavericks with the Mavericks. Replaced the Day with The Day. Replaced half-way with halfway. Replaced newly enlarged with newly-enlarged. Replaced Sierra Nevada Mountains with mountains of the Sierra Nevada. Replaced shelter and with shelter, and. Replaced posts and with posts, and. Replaced Mavericks and with Mavericks, and. Replaced EL Paso with El Paso. Replaced man alone, therefore with man alone; therefore. Replaced on 3 January 2012, that with on 3 January 2012 that. Replaced colony made their with colony made its. Replaced moment on every waking with moment on, every waking.

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(The Story So Far) Replaced re-establish with reestablish. Replaced syphon with siphon. Replaced fuel, food or water with fuel, food, or water. Replaced the Mavericks with the Mavericks. Replaced the Day with The Day. Replaced half-way with halfway. Replaced newly enlarged with newly-enlarged. Replaced Sierra Nevada Mountains with mountains of the Sierra Nevada. Replaced shelter and with shelter, and. Replaced posts and with posts, and. Replaced Mavericks and with Mavericks, and. Replaced EL Paso with El Paso. Replaced man alone, therefore with man alone; therefore. Replaced on 3 January 2012, that with on 3 January 2012 that. Replaced colony made their with colony made its. Replaced moment on every waking with moment on, every waking. Replaced Pantona Wash with Pantano Wash.

(The Game Rules) Replaced if you pick a O with if you pick a 0. Replaced On pages 6 and 7 you will find an Action Chart with An Action Chart has been supplied. Replaced the Random Number Table at the back of this book with the Random Number Table. Replaced zero with zero or below. Replaced survival skills with Survival Skills. Replaced adventure you with adventure, you. Removed For ease of use during play it is recommended that you photocopy these pages. Replaced on to with onto.

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(Close Combat Rules) Removed on the inside back cover of the book.

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(1) Replaced south-west with southwest. Replaced the Day with The Day. Replaced Colorado river with Colorado River. Replaced women and with women, and. Replaced looting and with looting, and. Replaced appoints you, and three others, as with appoints you and three others as.

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(1) Replaced south-west with southwest. Replaced the Day with The Day. Replaced Colorado river with Colorado River. Replaced women and with women, and. Replaced looting and with looting, and. Replaced appoints you, and three others, as with appoints you and three others as. Replaced Pantona Wash with Pantano Wash.

(2) Replaced the Day with The Day.

(3) Replaced sarcasm, But with sarcasm. But.

(4) Replaced shockwave with shock wave. Added (Remember to deduct six rounds of 9mm ammunition from your Ammo Pouch.).

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(279) Added (Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.).

(280) Replaced rolls, then with rolls, and then. Replaced pass, then with pass, and then. Replaced bang with bang.

(282) Removed duplicate seat.. Replaced holes, then with holes, and then. Replaced or choose with or if you choose.

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(283) Replaced air, then with air, and then. Replaced Michigan, in with Michigan in.

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(283) Replaced air, then with air, and then. Replaced Michigan, in with Michigan in. Replaced Pantona Wash with Pantano Wash.

(285) Replaced on to with onto. Added (Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.).

(290) Replaced distant poppings with distant popping. Replaced on to with onto. Replaced reassuringly, were with reassuringly. Were.

(291) Replaced on to with onto. Replaced scuttling scratching with scuttling, scratching.

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(349) Replaced on to with onto.

(350) Replaced message, then with message; then. Added a paragraph break after from his brow..

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(Map) Replaced San Christobel Wash with San Cristobel Wash.

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(Map) Replaced San Christobel Wash with San Cristobel Wash. Replaced Pantona Wash with Pantano Wash.

(Combat Rules Summary) Replaced cross-refer with cross-reference. Replaced Combat Results Table with Close Combat Results Table. Replaced zero ENDURANCE points, this with zero ENDURANCE points or below; this.