From: Jonathan Blake Date: Sun, 11 Feb 2018 20:16:36 +0000 (+0000) Subject: correcting issues reported by gblint.pl X-Git-Tag: 20180215~15 X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?p=project-aon.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=40939e50ae5d66a739acd50a353959067c8aa02b;hp=1fa564f7013bb4571ac1912e478cc8b0ac5fbd77 correcting issues reported by gblint.pl git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2683 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- diff --git a/en/xml/02smr.xml b/en/xml/02smr.xml index 97a18ef..2dad73f 100644 --- a/en/xml/02smr.xml +++ b/en/xml/02smr.xml @@ -108,8 +108,6 @@ Timothy Pederick Iain Smith -
Coordination
Jonathan Blake
Special Thanks
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Coughing and popping, the roadster lurches to a halt in the middle of the highway. You try to restart the engine but it refuses to run smoothly for more than a few seconds at a time. You are running over all the possible faults that could have caused the breakdown when suddenly you remember the comp-aid digipad that Cutter fitted to the dashboard while you were in Big Spring. He had salvaged the unit from the wreck of a 99 Mercedes Malibu Coup and modified it so that you could use it to run an automatic systems check on your roadster. Hurriedly you tap in your access code and immediately the units LCD identifies the fault: FUEL FILTER

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Coughing and popping, the roadster lurches to a halt in the middle of the highway. You try to restart the engine but it refuses to run smoothly for more than a few seconds at a time. You are running over all the possible faults that could have caused the breakdown when suddenly you remember the comp-aid digipad that Cutter fitted to the dashboard while you were in Big Spring. He had salvaged the unit from the wreck of a 99 Mercedes Malibu Coup and modified it so that you could use it to run an automatic systems check on your roadster. Hurriedly you tap in your access code and immediately the units LCD identifies the fault: Fuel Filter

It takes you an hour to dismantle, clean, and replace the fuel filter, during which time you must take two Drinks or lose 3 ENDURANCE points per drink missed due to dehydration.

The fault rectified, the engine starts sweetly the first time you touch the ignition. You accelerate away but within a few minutes you see something in the distance that makes you slow to a snails pace.

It is a girder bridge that carries the highway across the North Concho River. The bridge is intact and passable, but you are worried by the sight of a lazy plume of wood smoke rising from a spot near its approach ramp.

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So concerted is the fire that you are both forced to cower in your armour-backed seats to avoid being hit. Then another sign appears on the road ahead, pointing to a winding dirt track that leads away to the left. It reads:

- TO THE CAVERNS OF SONORA + To the Caverns of Sonora

You are desperate to avoid the machine-gunning biker and so decide to take the track. At least its winding course will give him less opportunity to riddle the trunk with bullets.

Turn to 24. @@ -2911,7 +2909,7 @@

The rotten timbers are easily torn away from the front door and in minutes you have gained access to the building. In the middle of the lobby you discover a stainless steel replica of an oil derrick, standing twelve feet high, on which there is an inscription that reveals the former owners of the block:

- THE LONE STAR OIL GAS COMPANY + The Lone Star Oil Gas Company

In order to emerge somewhere inside the perimeter wall, you must discover an exit on the north side of this building, so you set off immediately in that direction. Beyond the lobby area you can see a row of elevator doors, and two corridors disappearing to the left and right.

If you wish to explore the right-hand corridor, turn to 215. If you wish to search the left-hand corridor, turn to 7. @@ -5677,7 +5675,7 @@

(127) Replaced gun fire with gunfire.

(130) Replaced Plastic tube with Plastic Tube. Replaced Four rounds of 12-gauge Shotgun shells with Four rounds of 12-gauge ammunition.

(132) Replaced driving, despite with driving despite.

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(133) Replaced Coupe with Coup. Replaced woodsmoke with wood smoke. Replaced clean and with clean, and. Replaced take 2 Drinks or lose 6 ENDURANCE points with take two Drinks or lose 3 ENDURANCE points per drink missed. Replaced If you possess Binoculars with If you possess Binoculars or a Telescope. Replaced If you do not possess this item with If you do not possess either of these items.

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(133) Replaced Coupe with Coup. Replaced woodsmoke with wood smoke. Replaced clean and with clean, and. Replaced take 2 Drinks or lose 6 ENDURANCE points with take two Drinks or lose 3 ENDURANCE points per drink missed. Replaced If you possess Binoculars with If you possess Binoculars or a Telescope. Replaced If you do not possess this item with If you do not possess either of these items. Replaced FUEL FILTER with Fuel Filter.

(138) Replaced Dagger [2] with Dagger (2). Replaced Freeway 87 with Highway 87.

(139) Replaced half-way with halfway.

(142) Replaced hesitates, then with hesitates, and then. Added (Remember to deduct six rounds of 9mm ammunition from your Ammo Pouch.). Replaced or choose with or if you choose.

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(176) Replaced mid-burst, then with mid-burst, and then. Replaced forward and with forward, and. Added Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch..

(177) Replaced If you do not possess a missile weapon, or have insufficient ammunition with If you do not possess a missile weapon, have insufficient ammunition, or do not wish to use it. Replaced weapon, and with weapon and.

(178) Replaced on to with onto. Replaced that lay strewn with that lie strewn.

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(179) Replaced (minimum equals one; maximum equals four) with (minimum: one round; maximum: four rounds).

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(179) Replaced (minimum equals one; maximum equals four) with (minimum: one round; maximum: four rounds). Replaced TO THE CAVERNS OF SONORA with To the Caverns of Sonora.

(181) Added (Remember to deduct a round of 12-gauge ammunition from your Ammo Pouch.).

(182) Replaced flame: death with flame; death.

(183) Replaced syphoned with siphoned. Replaced Crowbar [2] with Crowbar (2). Replaced Hammer [2] with Hammer (2).

(184) Replaced disappeared, then with disappeared, and then.

(187) Replaced Dagger [2] with Dagger (2). Replaced Freeway 87 with Highway 87. Added You may also retrieve the weapon that the clansman shot out of your hands. for clarity.

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(189) Replaced THE LONE STAR OIL GAS COMPANY with The Lone Star Oil Gas Company.

(190) Replaced at who with at whom. Replaced bang with bang.

(191) Replaced half-way with halfway.

(192) Replaced sky, then with sky, and then. Replaced the freeway with the highway.

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